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De beminde

(The Betrothed #1)

Kiera Cass (Goodreads Author)

2.94 · Rating details · 17,782 ratings · 3,673 reviews

Hollis Brite is opgegroeid in Keresken Castle, samen met de andere dochters van adel, in de hoop de aandacht van de toekomstige koning te trekken. De jonge koning Jameson van Coroa is eigenlijk nooit op zoek geweest naar een echtgenote, totdat hij Hollis ontmoet. Als Jameson haar de liefde verklaart, is Hollis dolblij. Maar terwijl hij haar het hof maakt, realiseert Hollis ...more

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Oct 20, 2019 Nenia ✨️ I yeet my books back and forth ✨️ Campbell marked it as will-read-if-cheap-or-freebie · review of another edition

They spelled THE SELECTION wrong

Also, the author could have named the heroine EUROPE and she didn't. Fail. ...more

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May 15, 2020 Hailey (Hailey in Bookland) rated it it was ok · review of another edition

Shelves: fantasy, owned, 2020-reads, 2020-releases

Probably closer to a 1.5*

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Sep 19, 2018 ✨ A ✨ rated it did not like it · review of another edition

Shelves: young-adult, two-stars, arcs-e-arcs-alcs, 2020-release, read-in-2020

I don't know what I was expecting... But it wasn't this.

What I liked:
*awkward silence* *crickets chirping* *tumble weed blows by*

What I disliked:
• the main character was annoying from the very first chapter. Thought she'd improve but big nope
• characters lacked personality
• this book was falsely being pitched as ‘steamy YA’. Well that was complete lies. There was probably only 5 very basic kissing scenes. But that's it. It's not that I'm upset about the lack of steam, I just don't like when thi ...more

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Feb 09, 2020 Lindsay rated it did not like it · review of another edition

Shelves: arcs, dissapointed

I'm not quite sure where to begin because this book was a mess. It's not that I hated it but that it was ridiculous.

Imagery - I hate too much detail and not enough dialogue, but this book did the opposite. The rooms in the castle were sometimes minimally described and 95% of the characters had zero description. Delia Grace? Not sure what she looks like. Nora? No clue. Hollis's parents? Can't tell you. The only characters that were described were Hollis, Jameson, Silas, and Silas's family. Silas I'm not quite sure where to begin because this book was a mess. It's not that I hated it but that it was ridiculous.

Imagery - I hate too much detail and not enough dialogue, but this book did the opposite. The rooms in the castle were sometimes minimally described and 95% of the characters had zero description. Delia Grace? Not sure what she looks like. Nora? No clue. Hollis's parents? Can't tell you. The only characters that were described were Hollis, Jameson, Silas, and Silas's family. Silas's family was described as having yellow hair and blue eyes. Silas had striking blue eyes and long blond hair. Jameson had honey drizzled eyes, bronze skin, and brown hair. Hollis had fine, blonde hair, was beautiful, and was short. These same descriptions were repeated whenever Jameson or Silas entered a room. It was tedious.

Characters - Everyone was flat. No background, depth or life was given to any character. Hollis acted like an 11 or 12 year old despite being 16/17/18. She was dull, naive, and had a personality of an elementary or middle schooler.

I cringed every time Jameson entered the picture because he uttered the most ridiculous and laughable phrases to Hollis like "You are the rising sun.", "I want to hire someone to walk behind us and ink down every single word you say.", and "I do have some beautiful things, though there is one gem in all of Coroa I am aching to call my own."

Then there was Silas who was not a major character in the book and interacted with Hollis a few meager times before they realized they were soul mates. Silas spoke to Hollis with the same ridiculous lines Jameson did and suddenly Hollis realized that Silas knew her perfectly while she was only a trinket to the king.

Hollis's parents only existed to bicker with Hollis and order her around. They would randomly burst into her room and lecture her every few chapters. We know nothing about them except that they love to argue, want Hollis to marry the king, wish she would distance herself from being glued to Delia Grace (I concur), and that she would stop acting immature (I also agree).

Next is Delia Grace who I abhorred from the first chapter. She also acted like an 11/12 year old and was somehow Hollis's best friend. Despite being BFFs, Hollis was obsessed with Delia Grace. That was all she talked about for 75% of the book. Despite being the future queen, all her thoughts circled around Delia Grace. Before she made a decision, she had to ask Delia Grace. If she wanted advice, she had to consult Delia Grace. If she wanted to go eat dinner with the king, Delia Grace had to be her shadow. Everything was about Delia Grace and her and Hollis were unhealthily stitched to one another. The readers even get unnecessary information on Delia Grace's background, family history, birth rights, royalty line, etc. Why? I'm not sure because it adds nothing to the story. From all the mentions of Delia Grace, Kiera Cass should have made her the main character.

Lastly, Nora. Nora's introduction is described as her glaring daggers at Hollis because Hollis has captured the king's attention. Then in the next interaction Nora is a sweet and cordial girl who adores Hollis and is ecstatic to be her second lady-in-waiting. So which Nora is the correct description? Because for the rest of the book Nora is diligent and not jealous of the king fawning over Hollis.

The only character I liked was Valentina, especially when I got to know more about her. Eradicating Hollis's story and replacing it with Valentina's would have created a stronger book.

Plot - What plot? The only plot was Hollis giggling over Jameson and then falling into instant love with Silas the moment they laid eyes on each other. It took not even 5 minutes of conversation spaced over two or three days for them to realize they loved each other. A few days later she was ready to ditch Jameson to marry Silas. That isn't love. That's lust mixed with mania (obsession). Hollis was thrilled over the idea of wanting something she couldn't have and Silas felt the same since he kept planting ideas into her head to run away with him. He was actually hurt after they kissed on day two (or three?) and Hollis broke away and was worried about Jameson finding out and ruining her reputation. Silas had the audacity to be offended over Hollis's initial rejection. He knew she was practically engaged to the king and yet still decided to kiss her.

I don't remember The Selection being this badly written and I'm positive the characters had more personality and description than all of The Betrothed characters combined. Will I read the next one? Probably. Why? I don't know. I guess to see where this ludicrous story goes.

Thank you Edelweiss for an ARC. ...more

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May 10, 2020 jessica rated it it was ok · review of another edition

i literally had zero expectations for this and somehow im still the slightest bit disappointed.

and its not that i hated it - i dont have any negative feelings about this story. im just left feeling a massive amount of indifference towards it, so much so that i feel guilty giving it the three stars i would usually give to books i find average.

theres just nothing about this that makes me want to pick up the next book. the characters are bland, there is no plot, and the ending just doesnt make an ...more

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Mar 07, 2020 Michelle rated it did not like it · review of another edition

Shelves: retellings, arc-2020, young-adult

This review has been hidden because it contains spoilers. To view it, click here. 1.5 stars. Thank you to Edelweiss and HarperTeen for the ARC of The Betrothed by Kiera Cass WARNING, I will be spoiling EVERYTHING.

I am cringing as I think about writing this review because I know it's going to be so negative. I don't understand what happened. I really enjoyed The Siren and was swept into the world of The Selection, which wasn't my favorite story, but boy did I need to know what happened!

And then we have The Betrothed....

What a caricature of a book. As I was thinking about it la ...more

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Oct 07, 2019 farith marked it as dnf · review of another edition

dnf 27%

i wasn’t even expecting anything and yet i still got let down.

***

The king has chosen her.
Her heart belongs to another.

Uhm, isn't this The Selection with another cast? ...more

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Jun 08, 2020 Nilufer Ozmekik rated it it was ok · review of another edition

I’m not happy right now😫 so I wanted to express my feelings by a book review with lots of emojis to cheer myself up!👩🏻‍💻

I heard the warning choo choos sound of disappointment train! I should have listened!🚞🚞🚞

I yawned too much, I took nap breaks at least 10 times, I tried to skip chapters. 😴😴😴🥱🥱

But nothing has changed because THERE IS NOTHING HAPPENING IN THIS BOOK! 🙇🏻‍♀️No action, no thrill, no tension , no cliffhanger! Nada. 🤷🏻‍♀️

And THAT FREAKING ENDING 😤😡😡, oh please, I need a ice cold drink ...more

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Feb 27, 2020 MischaS_ marked it as to-read · review of another edition

I believe I read like five chapters from Selection, neither the characters nor the story was interesting to me, and I just did not continue the book, sort of forgot that I was even reading it. I then when the rest of the series was published, I always just enjoyed the pretty covers but never felt like giving it another chance. (Which is surprising when you consider my obsession pretty dresses).

So, why do I keep going back to this book and I'm considering reading it? ...more

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May 28, 2020 Megan ❀ rated it did not like it · review of another edition

Shelves: ya-fantasy, young-adult, audiobook, library

This book is proof that Kiera Cass never left 2012.

Look, I didn't expect this book to be good. The Selection wasn't good. But to this day, The Selection trilogy remains one of my favorite guilty pleasure reads because of how entertaining it is. It's trashy and I love it. So that's about where my expectations for The Betrothed were - garbage but entertaining - and somehow it managed to be worse.

While I'll concede that Kiera Cass's world-building seems to have a bit more thought behind it than her This book is proof that Kiera Cass never left 2012.

Look, I didn't expect this book to be good. The Selection wasn't good. But to this day, The Selection trilogy remains one of my favorite guilty pleasure reads because of how entertaining it is. It's trashy and I love it. So that's about where my expectations for The Betrothed were - garbage but entertaining - and somehow it managed to be worse.

While I'll concede that Kiera Cass's world-building seems to have a bit more thought behind it than her previous works, that's pretty much where the praise ends. The world-building is still bare bones. The writing is extremely simplistic and clunky. The characters are one-dimensional, and the love triangle - I know, a love triangle in a 2020 YA book - is cringey. But I probably could've gotten past all the bad, like I did with The Selection, if the book wasn't so mind-numbingly boring.

I'm actually astounded by how boring this novel is. Nothing happens. Literally nothing. There are no stakes, no tension, no plot. It's just bland characters putting on pretty clothes and talking about the same things, over and over again, in slightly different settings. There is absolutely nothing compelling about this book.

And that ending? No spoilers, so all I can say is: what the fuck. I'm baffled, TRULY baffled, that someone read the ending, knowing the rest of the novel it was attached to, and thought it would be a good idea to publish it.

So we've already established that this book is bad. But no, it had to get even worse. Twice in the book, Cass uses the ethnic slur g*psy. One of these times, she uses it to refer to a group of murderers. And that's when I knew, definitively, that this was a 2012 trash fire. Because while that may have flown back when Cass was relevant, a white writer and her publishing team letting that appear in a YA book when novels like The Hate U Give exist and #ownvoices books are everywhere is just unacceptable. Publishing needs to do better.

So yeah. Literally what was the point of this book existing. ...more

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May 03, 2020 Katie rated it did not like it · review of another edition

I am not sure what I just read

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I so badly wanted to love this one. I always love a good historical drama and this one was posed to be positively titillating - a girl that is betothed to the king but falls in love with someone else once she finally manages to catch his eye? It is set up to be positively juicy. However, it was just so.........boring. There was no romantic tension in either of the pairings. The characters were all so.....flat. I really wish I could have lik ...more

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Feb 26, 2020 Grace rated it did not like it · review of another edition

Shelves: arc

Holy cow this is going to be a hard review to write.

The Selection is one of my favorite series. So, understandably, I was very much looking forward to this. And it truly does have one of the most beautiful covers I've ever seen. Unfortunately, the book was so bad (IN MY OPINION) that it may have knocked Kiera Cass off my list of favorite authors.

My spoiler-free explanation: Through most of the book, NOTHING HAPPENED. It was so boring and all the characters were flat and uninteresting. I read the Holy cow this is going to be a hard review to write.

The Selection is one of my favorite series. So, understandably, I was very much looking forward to this. And it truly does have one of the most beautiful covers I've ever seen. Unfortunately, the book was so bad (IN MY OPINION) that it may have knocked Kiera Cass off my list of favorite authors.

My spoiler-free explanation: Through most of the book, NOTHING HAPPENED. It was so boring and all the characters were flat and uninteresting. I read the first half one day and couldn't bring myself to finish until weeks later because I just did not want to pick it up again. Unfortunately, I did pick it up again, and it just got worse from there. It went from nothing happening, to one very important thing happening near the end that ruined it for me. It was going to be a 1.5-2 star for me, but by the end I was like, "holy cow, how did someone read this and go, 'yeah, let's publish this.'"

I hate writing such awful reviews, but this was just one of the most disappointing reads in a long time. It didn't just fall flat—it shattered my trust in Kiera Cass as an author. I hate hate hate to say that, but it's true.

Now for the spoilery explanation.

(view spoiler) ...more

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Jan 10, 2020 rachel ☾ rated it did not like it · review of another edition

Shelves: young-adult-lit, releases-2020, romance, fantasy, 1-star

dear god, that was the blandest thing i have ever read in my entire life

➸ Trigger warnings for (view spoiler).

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Oct 25, 2019 Candace Robinson added it · review of another edition

So the Selection books (first three) are part of my all-time favorite books! I was pretty ecstatic, to say the least, when I saw that Mrs. Cass would be having a new book out! And another lovely cover with a beautiful dress!

In the Betrothed, I feel as though the author’s writing has gotten even better with lush descriptions! The setting was a fun one too!

Now the bad news for me was that I couldn’t connect with these characters. I knew this story wouldn’t be the Selection, and I didn’t want anoth ...more

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Oct 27, 2017 Sophie_The_Jedi_Knight marked it as to-read · review of another edition

Shelves: i-need-more-than-air, owned

10/15/19:
A COVER AND TITLE AND SYNOPSIS

I'm so excited. I mean, I'm disappointed that the cover doesn't match her other ones, but it's still gorgeous and I am SO pumped to get my hands on this! And it's a series!!!!

Count. Me. In.

6/15/19:
Soooo..... is this ever happening? This is just strange. Did she say offhandedly at some point that she might write another book and this Goodreads page happened but she has no plans? What is Kiera Cass even doing right now? Her last two updates on her website are ...more

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Jul 31, 2020 Elle rated it did not like it · review of another edition

Shelves: 1-star, read-in-2020, disappointing

The first part of this review will be spoiler free, I will write when the spoilers begin

Let me introduce you to the main character. Her name is Hollis and she is the most annoying and stupid person ever. If you thought Tris from Divergent was annoying then boy you got a big storm coming. Reading about Hollis making stupid decisions made me lose my last three brain cells.

this book is just as shitty as everyone says it is, spare yourself the torture and just don’t read this

I can’t really tell yo ...more

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Jun 26, 2020 Trina (Between Chapters) rated it liked it · review of another edition

Shelves: 2020, audiobooks, fantasy, young-adult, romance

Definite Instalove. I felt no connection to the romance. I will read the sequel but this didn't capture the same feelings that The Selection did for me. ...more

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Oct 15, 2019 ♠ TABI⁷ ♠ rated it it was ok · review of another edition

Shelves: edelweiss

This book made even the worst Barbie movie look good.

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(no, The Princess and the Pauper isn't the worse movie. yes, I love Barbie movies with all their predictable plots, sparkly new outfit reveals, and fluffy plots bc they're still GOOD and HEARTWARMING and FUN)

I had no expectations when I started this because I knew, oh I knew, this was going to be nothing but mindless fluff to whittle away a few hours with. But then . . . BUT THEN it couldn't just be silly, happy fluff, no, it had to be STUP ...more

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Oct 15, 2019 demi. ♡ marked it as to-read · review of another edition

Shelves: 2020-release

OH MY FREAKING GODDDDDD. NEW BOOK FROM KIERA CASS? SIGN ME IN!

P.S. Good job! Your book covers never disappoint me. ♡

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Oct 11, 2019 Nia •ShadesOfPaper• rated it did not like it · review of another edition

Shelves: 2020-arcs, 2020-releases, arcs, books-read-in-2020, romance, young-adult

You can find this review on my blog Shades of Paper.

Ever since I heard Kiera Cass was coming out with a new book I knew I had to pick up as soon as possible, because even though The Selection series isn’t the best crafted piece of literature, it was such a fun and fast paced book to read, full of drama and romance, so after reading the synopsis of The Betrothed I was expecting something like that. However, I ended up really hating this book, sadly.

Though it had some similar features, like the ro ...more

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May 01, 2020 Cait (Caitsbooks) rated it it was ok · review of another edition

Shelves: disappointed, 2020-releases, arc, young-adult, fantasy, reviewed, high-fantasy

*All quotes are taken from the ARC and are subject to change*
Check out this review (and more) over on my blog!

Quick Stats:
Overall: 2/5 Stars
Characters: 2/5
Setting: 2/5
Writing: 2/5
Plot and Themes: 3/5
Awesomeness Factor: 2/5
Review in a Nutshell: This was… disappointing. Maybe my hopes were too high, maybe I wanted too much from it, but all I know is that I really wish it was better.

“If you wish to stand next to the first, by all means. You’re the one who’ll be burned.”

// Content Warning: Violence, ...more

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Oct 07, 2019 Sylvie marked it as to-read · review of another edition

Shelves: royalty

A new Kiera Cass book has finally been announced!!!!!

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May 26, 2020 Hannah ♡ rated it it was ok · review of another edition

i had high hopes for this book, but unfortunately it was so disappointing😭

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Mar 27, 2020 Jennifer rated it really liked it · review of another edition

Shelves: edelweiss

The Betrothed is the first book in a new Young Adult duology. It is a royal romance.

I really liked The Selection series so I was very excited to read a new book by this author.

The narrator is Hollis (1st person POV). It's not stated how old she is. But I'd guess maybe 18, since this is supposed to be a YA series.

I am honestly not sure what genre to classify this book as. In the author's note at the beginning it says that the story takes place in the 1500s. But that was not mentioned in the actua ...more

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Jun 18, 2020 human rated it did not like it · review of another edition

Shelves: drama-to-rival-my-mothers-soaps, love-webs, cover-love, never-judge-a-book-by-its-cover, read-in-2020, the-hype-is-strong-with-this-one, the-hype-was-a-lie, annoying-characters, better-repurposed-as-kindling, historical

The only reason I liked The Selection (well, the first three books) was because it was
a) fun
b) the characters were adorable
c) shit actually happened.
This book had none of the above. I was bored, bored to tears, bored out of my mind while reading this.

The characters were flat, boring, and basic. All the MC does during the entirety of this book is either laugh or giggle, mention how much of a disappointment she is but was still able to get the attention of the king, or fall in love with some fOrEi The only reason I liked The Selection (well, the first three books) was because it was
a) fun
b) the characters were adorable
c) shit actually happened.
This book had none of the above. I was bored, bored to tears, bored out of my mind while reading this.

The characters were flat, boring, and basic. All the MC does during the entirety of this book is either laugh or giggle, mention how much of a disappointment she is but was still able to get the attention of the king, or fall in love with some fOrEiGnEr she sees because they HaD a CoNnEcTiOn. Not to mention, she was horrible to the only friend she had, who, to be fair, was horrible right back. The only character I even remotely liked was Valentina, and that was more out of pity than anything.

Romance? What romance? Oh, you mean the staring into each others souls and letting the silence go beyond awkward? Yeah, not a big fan.

There was no plotline to speak of until more than halfway through the story, and even then, that was only mentioning that "dark things were happening in Isolte" yada yada yada, and that "her parents were hiding something" (view spoiler).

(view spoiler)

So yeah. Overall, I was more disappointed than I was expecting, and I certainly thought this was a waste of time. ~~I don't hate it so much that a better use for it would be setting it on fire and using it as a heat source during the apocalypse, but it's almost there.~~

Edit: actually, nvm, it most certainly is there. ...more

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Aug 21, 2020 Cesar rated it did not like it · review of another edition

1 star

I'm going to use my last three brain cells to try and write a cohesive review for The Betrothed. Which is hard because there's nothing cohesive about this story, the characters, or anything in it. If you looked at the rating, it's not well-liked and now after reading it, I can share in their sentiments. Keep in mind I'm not angry with hate. I'm more disappointed with Kiera Cass' attempt at writing a believable romance. If you could even call it a romance.

Before I begin my review, let me te ...more

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Apr 08, 2020 Kaya rated it liked it · review of another edition

Shelves: read-arcs, new-releases-2020, three-stars

Okay. So, I read the original Selection trilogy, and honestly? I enjoyed them! Were they literary masterpieces? No. Were they relatively entertaining? YES. So I was pretty hyped to hear that Kiera Cass was releasing a new royal romance series! And I do have um…thoughts.

You can definitely tell that Kiera Cass has improved her writing! It’s neither rich and lush nor bland and boring, but beautifully simple. I was able to easily envision the places and people she was describing without paragraphs o ...more

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Mar 14, 2020 Zemira (Kylo Ren fangirl) Warner rated it did not like it · review of another edition

Shelves: judging-you-for-liking-this, insta-love, edelweiss, those-poor-poor-trees, awful

I genuinely feel second hand embarrassment for everyone involved in the creation of this book. It's that bad.

Insta-love is obviously instant. There is no character depth. They are all shallow husks. It's as if someone hired The Selection fanfiction writer to do most of the work. ...more

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Oct 07, 2019 Claire ✨ rated it it was ok · review of another edition

Shelves: advanced-reader-copy, overhyped-and-underwhelming, genre-historical, age-ya, genre-fantasy, rated-2-star, reviewed

Lacklustre characters, setting and writing raises fears that THE SELECTION is a one-hit wonder. THE BETROTHED tries to be so many things: dramatically, romantically, and politically indulgent, and fails on all three accounts.

It's bad, folks.

What I expected? Not perfection, but something lighthearted and addictive and as charming as THE SELECTION.

What I got? A dull TV soap drama set in generic fantasy land with snooze-inducing characters.

I really liked THE SELECTION series even with all its flaw ...more

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Jun 15, 2020 Niki Hawkes - The Obsessive Bookseller rated it did not like it · review of another edition

[1.5/5 stars] A lot of people seem to be aboard the Kiera Cass hate train. I’m not one of them. Her writing is what it is, and that’s okay that it doesn’t work for some, but the projected disgust at a lot of her works seems a little over the top. It almost feels like shaming her books is what it takes to sit at the cool kids’ table. And if that’s the case, I’ll go sit outside by myself and read her books while I eat.

That said, The Betrothed was not a strong installment. I absolutely loved the Si [1.5/5 stars] A lot of people seem to be aboard the Kiera Cass hate train. I’m not one of them. Her writing is what it is, and that’s okay that it doesn’t work for some, but the projected disgust at a lot of her works seems a little over the top. It almost feels like shaming her books is what it takes to sit at the cool kids’ table. And if that’s the case, I’ll go sit outside by myself and read her books while I eat.

That said, The Betrothed was not a strong installment. I absolutely loved the Siren and the first two Selection books, but this one left a few key elements on the table.

Firstly, she didn’t take the time to establish the main character’s credibility. Her merit as the perfect candidate for the king was just a given, and I think it would’ve gone a long way to start the story earlier and SHOW how she’s different and what circumstances made her that way. As it stood, it was baffling enough to see how vastly opposite she was from her incompetent and overbearing parents, yet she miraculously knew how to perfectly navigate court life and the attentions of royalty. It just didn’t add up. So the only thing left to assume was that all of her success has been based on purely superficial things, which is very much not a satisfying thing to read about… unless it’s intentional and part of the character’s growth arc (it wasn’t). It was mentioned a couple of times that the lady was the only one to make the king laugh, and she wasn’t desperate for the throne or his love, so I suppose those are decent reasons for her to stand apart. But it wasn’t emphasized, the characters even going so far as to discuss how random the first encounter was and how it could’ve been anybody. None of it accounted for the how’s and why’s of it all. I wanted more development.

Second, the character didn’t have to struggle for anything. Wealthy, beautiful, witty – this character entered the picture with the world at her feet and only petty court ladies and her own questionable decision making as obstacles. Skill without having earned it in stories is unrelatable, unbelievable, and a bit of a snore. As conflict is inevitably what drives a story, a character plodding along without anything substantial to overcome was just meh. It was doubly annoying for the character to be given the world on a silver platter only to dash it to pieces without a care. She’d faced some trials by the very end of the book, but it was a bit too late to make up for the lack at the beginning.

Finally, the character didn’t exhibit a lot of emotion. If she didn’t appear to care, why should the reader? A king is fawning over you? Cool! We’ll see how long it lasts. That bitch over there is calling you names? Whatevs, I think I’ll just make friends with her. Your parents are trying to rule your life? Meh, I do what I want anyway. It all sounds rather cavalier, but in execution it led to a character that just appeared to be floating through life without any real drive or desire to contribute to her own future and well-being.

Recommendations: The Betrothed was not one of my favorites. It did not highlight the things Cass does well, and that’s unfortunate. If you’re going to try one of her books, pick either the Siren or the Selection series, but be warned that her works are incredibly polarizing. I, personally, have delighted in a few of her books and still plan on picking up future releases (aside from this series). It just missed the mark. For an adult, anyway. My observations are mostly craft-related and I don’t think my 13 yr old self would’ve cared about any of that, but rather just delighted in the loveliness of the setting, the clothes, the jewelry, and perhaps would’ve even been enamored with the love story. Tame enough for younger eyes, I think this one would be better suited for tweens and early teens.

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