Rating: minus 10 on a scale of minus 5 through plus 5.
My original review was a note to self to avoid this writer. My rewrites are now attempts
at more clarity and I write for a hypothetical audience.
Before I start, I must visit the YouTube. This was made possible by Doctor Who/Be Kind - Reality Genre Studios, NCMI, fig tree, Anark, Chris Norlund, Red Glasgow, AllShorts, LuckyBlackCat, Reese Waters, RevolutionarythOt, New Enlightenment with Ashley, Texas Paul, ATP Geopolitics, Strange Aeons, Keffals, Yanis Varoufakis, Miranda Mills, Welcome to Ukraine, Subha Reads, Brianna Puppet, Reads with Rachel, Fit 2B Read, Nerdy Kathi, Dungeons and Discourse, Players Aid, Reese Waters, No Justice, Canadian Dominion, Jay Exci, Shades of Orange, Monday through Friday, CTV News, Spacedock, OrangeRiver, Canadian Dominion, Heather Cox Richardson, Delamer, Tibees, Amie's Literary Empire, The Gaze, Emma Thorne, Fundie Fridays, Welcome to Ukraine, Tod Maffin, CBC News, Matriarchetype, Eva Schubert, Mary Trump, Cindy's Villa, Jason Jay Smart, Northern Narrowboaters, Your True Shelf, Dropkick Murphys, Haropones, Cruising Crafts, Winging it on a Budget, Nomadic Crobot, Roisin's Reading, Naughty Nana DUZ, FAFO, The Weary Researcher, Dan Davis History, PoliticsGirl, The Great War, Ministry of Miniatures, Sanna Vaara, Ancient Anericas, Portable Orange, Paul Warburg, Marsh Family, Garron, TallGirl6234, Shades of Orange, The Growth Path, Raw News and Politics, Zherro, Vidya Mitra, Ember Green, Ms Paints, Queen City Miniatures, Parkrose Permaculture, AllShorts, Agro Squirrel Narrates, May, Spacedock, Kyiv Post, Michael DuBois, Times Radio, Gingers are Black, Tori Talks, Life Priced, Farm to Faber, Professor Tim Wilson, Political CUSTARD, Godless Granny, The Confused Adipose.
I saw an idiot who whilst insulting an essayist whom I like, complain to her that I list channels with trans creators. The arrogant self-importance of the poorly socialised US male still on occasion amuses me.
A trigger warning then. The channels which I list include the economist, military historian, bi, Canadian, married, miniatures painter, intersex, tall, socialist, cosplayer, trans, redhaired, archaeologist, asexual, communist, Irish, astrophysicist, logician, lesbian, military miniatures gamer, WOC, queer, primatologist, Indian, model, literature critic, mathematician and others known as Women.
Almost as threatening to carefully nurtured ignorance are the channels hosted by anthropologist, other BIPOC, futurist, neurodivergent, Ukrainian, linguist, military board gamer, boater, lumber yard family, German, other LGBTQI+, chemist, zoologist, miniatures gamer, anarchist, boat builder, British, train modeller and other creators known by the healthily socialised as Human Beings.
If the voices persist, adopt a pet, learn to read, join the Church of England and/or repeat several times daily "I will not be a bellend today". My feelings towards these exemplars of brutish behaviour are best described as contempt. Elbows Up!
Onto the book. In what at first glance seems a departure from his other books, he writes a major character as woman. This is such a weird attempt. The "strong female" characters can not control their hormonal reactions to white males. The males are all carefully identified as latino, black (no Asians, if I remember correctly), so it is safe to assume that the others are white.
In all these spacey-space boom-boom books, the writers fail to create military characters as either sympathetic or human. The low end writers must actually think that soldiers are solely the poorly socialised, poorly educated, conscience lacking killer. It can only be that these writers have no knowledge of naval/military history or culture (which is a certainty among US writers) and their research consist of over-the-top videogames only.
Writing them as human has been done successfully by other writers. I am not surprised since all characters are in these books, first person game avatars or NPCs. That suggests that these Amazon writers either can not read or choose to not and thereby are unable to benefit from superior examples.
This book felt a failed attempt to describe female characters as three dimensional. Yet in the middle of a life and death situation, an alien female is jealous of a human female's legs. Another comment is that her rival (?) is intelligent, so the alien is not now jealous. The sensitive marine is flirting with a woman, whose husband was buried hours before. Is that normal for the men in the writer's circle? Do new widows normally recover from grief that quickly in the writer's experience?
Either the writer failed in his attempt to portray women as fully fleshed characters or the writer intentionally expressed his misogyny. In either case, exposure to actual women can not but benefit.
Besides toxic masculinity, misogynistic stereotypes and the rest, the plot suffers as much as the worldbuilding. The plot holes include bombs being positioned to surprise the heroes, when their was no knowledge of the targets' route.
The writer did as usual not think through the scenes, which is common to Amazon Unlimited titles. Editing does not just catch misspelling or incorrect punctuation, so I wonder if there was editing.
The world building is not spectacular, though incorporating quantum tunnelling and distinguishing between a quasi wormhole and black holes was cool. The series can not improve with the level of writing being applied.
Another visit to the YouTube have been earned. This next is courtesy of Doctor Who/Cruel or Cowardly - StoryScape Studios, NCMI, Anark, Honest Government Ads, Mia Mulder, Yanis Varoufakis, Monte Mader, The Gaze, Samantha Lux, Broken Peach. LetterKenny, Kazachka, Your True Shelf, Terrible Writing Advice, Noella Reacts, Purple Sweater, ScaredKetchup, Dark Seas, Dark Skies, Dark Brandon, FunkyFrogBait, Kozak Muzon, Aid Thompsin, Silicon Curtain, Interesting Times, Lee Francis, Ukraine Calling, Cimnanya, Dark Brandon, Viva La Dirt League, Anka Daily News, Riverboat Jack, Giant Freakin Robot, Kat Abughazaleh, AsiAm Ireland, Military Aviation History, Anna from Ukraine, Fall of Civilisations, Grace McGuire, Just in Time Worldbuilding, Tale Foundry, Jormungandr, JohnTheDuncan, Guard the Leaf, Jean's Thoughts, Valenti Videos, Cold Fusion, Zac Rios, What's Going on With Shipping, Central Crossing, Battle Order, Postmodern Jukebox, Kyiv Independent.
Consider treating this as a potentially hostile site. 🤔
Goodreads do not encourage discourse. As example, I wrote a short negative review of Powers of the Earth, poorly written, as are the writer's previous books, revealed by a scan of same. It is a sad imitation of "Atlas Shrugged" in a lunar setting, celebrating the MAGA lunatic or twisted January 6, 2021 hero.
This was the heroic tale of a newly rich twat enlisting the military to overthrow the US government in order that he not pay inheritance tax. This and similar storylines are the "libertarian" backbone of the Unlimited selections. I found the story as the rest, to be unhealthy and dangerous. These works were most effective in creating the 2025 USA, in which the poor violently defend governmental financial support of the wealthy and billionaires. Madness.
The writer, Travis Corcoran self-described as libertarian (now anarcho capitalist without portfolio?) and vigorous supporter of the return of chattel slavery (popular US stance with active legislative/policy support at federal and state levels), veteran, employee of an unnamed US agency and admirer of Putin (popular governmental policy among the MAGA).
He and six fellow patriots were outraged by my opinion and spent nearly a year with unhinged comments addressing my intelligence, my personality, the evils of Socialism and other issues not related to what they literally considered a modern masterpiece. I have had numerous times on this site which cause me to wish for a term meaning Irony to the 3rd power. I am certain that every other socialist or communist have encountered similar.
The final comment was delivered by Claes Rees Jr aka cgr710 now ka Clayton R Jesse Jr who after referencing the contents of my last message to a Goodreads friend, grandly declared that They had "won" (?).
I discovered that They had launched a year long campaign of vile sexual, racist, ableist and other comments against apparently every female creator of channels I mentioned, sometimes in my name. It continues still. Unsurprisingly They failed to charm the linguist, modeller, mathematician, boater or the many others.
Despite that setback, They did manage to increase the global overabundance of unpleasantness and They also delivered a painfully accurate self-portrait of the Snowflake (vicious, ignored, cowardly, much put upon US man-child) to a multinational audience. I imagine that on balance this was quite the Victory ??
Goodreads are certainly a splendid reader forum ?? Fortunately there are BookTubers to guide you to better reader sites.
Another visit to the YouTube earned. This last was made possible by Doctor Who "Where I Fall", fig tree, NCMI, Anne Applebaum, Dr Fatima, TransCrush, Amanda's Mild Takes, Captured in Words, Planet D, More Perfect Union, Wes O'Donnell, NFKRZ, Parkrose Permaculture, Lily Simpson, Purple Sweater, Megalithhunter, IMY2, Acollierastro, Kozak Siromaha, Guard the Leaf, Ukraine Matters, Brittany Page, Gutsick Gibbon, Irish Pagan School, Chloe Daniels, Tennessee Brando, Novara Media, Tom Nicholas, Kat Blacque, Dr Ben Miles, Viva La Dirt League, Anna Kallschmidt PhD, The Military Show, Ukraine News TV, CBC British Columbia, Verilybitchie, Paul Warburg, Anvil of Doom Miniatures, Sailing Melody, Ship Happens, Northern Narrowboaters, Leena Norms, Bernadette Banner, Karolina Zebrowska, Shannon Makes, Mia Mulder, The Leftist Cooks, More Perfect Union, Writing with Andrew, AuDHD, Cruising Crafts, Naughty Nana DUZ, Princess Weekes, Luminal Spaces, Write with Claire Fraise, According to Alina, Dr Becky, A French DW Fan, Harbo Wholmes, WhoCulture, Guard the Leaf, Russian Media Monitor, Doctor Who/The Last Time Lord -The Sherlock Studio, Delamer, Rogue Hobbies, Ninjon, Squidmar Miniatures, Zumikito, Lyla Mev.
Ominous music begins. 😊 The comment gangs are prevalent across this site. My bad experience began three months into my Unlimited membership and employee refusal to respond to my questions was begun. The comments were surprising but my reviews being blocked by Amazon was stunning.
These gangs operate in the speculative fiction and romance spaces. Their antics are hardly limited to comments, as demonstrated by the Powers review reaction. They had expanded Their activities to include doxxing, stalking, threats and the acceptable among US readers would seem to soon allow the Swatting. One star reviewer/members but also BookTubers were targeted. To my knowledge, Amazon have not acknowledged any incident, disciplined any member groups, punished any writer who organised a gang or dismissed any employee enabling Them.
My moment of enlightenment arrived after our friends at Amazon shared my limited message history with the mental. There followed a request through Pine Gap Centre of Australian Security that They interrogate the one friend whom I very occasionally messaged on Goodreads. The attempt at my personal history failed, though two outraged customers were created.
Amazon were unconcerned until we shared the event as widely as possible. They offered no apology, no explanation or even acknowledgement. The response was all visible harassment being undone or masked. Page formats were returned to the normal, page options restored, the many vicious comments and the half dozen or so normal were masked, even my notification history was oddly gutted and truncated. All lurkers whom I had not been Permitted to remove previously were disappeared, etc. Amazon customer service seems rubbish. 😊
A seventh ex-employee of EBay was sentenced for harassment of a couple whose small ecommerce channel was deemed unkind to EBay. The couple were awarded several millions and the ex-employee had been the EBay Chief of Global Security or some such.
Facebook was instrumental in at least two genocide attempts with no governmental consequences. After the Trump inauguration, Facebook now uses no monitoring. US data corporations are no longer retrained. These are things worthy of a think.
I recommend several precautions. Remove all personal information from profile and avoid the messaging app. Remove all Lurkers, those who never post. They are monitors for gangs or dummies for certain employees, not admirers. Given the cavalier approach of Amazon to customer safety, the screenshot of the odd, ugly and threatening are lifesaving. These should suffice.
Kindle present a more serious threat. Do Not use Files, Contacts, Calendar or Email. I confirmed that Amazon read customer email without notice or permission. Do Not "purchase" Amazon e-books, as you own only your device not downloads. Those may be deleted or altered at whim. All Silk searches should be innocuous and non-critical. There are BookTubers who discuss alternative ebook devices, publishers and book sources.
A Fox Host suggests that the Homeless should be forcibly euthanized and within a day or so, a homeless encampment was subjected to a mass shooting. Patriots suggest that any citizen who does not support the Republican Party should be killed. Husbands whose wives have been sent to The new US concentration camps, still on camera claim to support the current US government. None of the above was considered particularly newsworthy in US press.
The behaviour above demonstrates that certain members and employees would never ask "Are we the baddies?" but are US patriots. Ominous music ends. 😊
Be safe and may we all find good reading. 🤗
Some favourite channels.
NCMI, fig tree, Candlelit Tales, Guardian Australia, Queen Penguin, BookishDadReads, TizzyEnt, GenericArtDad, IMY2, Michael DuBois, What Vivi did Next, Lady Knight the Brave, Jessie Gender, The Bill Kelly Podcast, Bobbing Along, Cruising Alba, Ukraine News TV, V.Birchwood, Prime of Midlife, Lily Alexandre, Three Arrows, Shelby Exists and Makes Stuff, AllShorts, DW News, Jill Bearup, Oceanliner Designs, NerdForge, Real Vintage Dolls House, Brigitte Empire, Teacher Therapy, Claus Kellerman POV, Skip Intro, Sarah Millican, Nikki Carreon, Annamarie Forcino, Allison Talks Books, House of EL, KernowDamo, Isabel Svan, Jonathan Pie, Reese Waters, Crash Course, Deerstalker Pictures, Dominic Noble, Words in Time, Feral Historian, Lily Simpson, Aid Thompsin, Sabine Hossenfelder, Jungian Echoes, Verilybitchie, Irish Myths, Cambrian Chronicles, Red Viburnam Song, Some Ordinary Gamers, Writing with Jenna Moreci, Steve Shives, Nicole Chilaka-Ukpo, Grumpy Old Crone, Up and Atom, CBC News, Snappy Dragon, Nonsense-Free Editor, Abbie Emmons, Jared Henderson, Katie Halper, Jay Reed, Scallydandling About the Books, Solo Second Half, Cruising Crafts, Cruising The Cut, Canada Pressroom, Tom Powell Jr, Stanzi, SPOKANKI, TLDR News EU, Unreal Affairs, France 24, Biz, Unlearning Economics, Dark Brandon, RFU News, Jason Jay Smart, The Gaze, League of Steam, Saga Lore AI, JammiDodger, Activist Witch, Diary of a Ditch Witch, Dreamloop Cinema, Aurora Trek, Bookworm, Lena Down Under, Slaggy Book Club, Emilie's Literary Corner, Science Fiction with Damien Walter, Lady Knight the Brave, History of Everything, Isaac Arthur, No Justice, Way Out of Line, Cult College, The War at Home, Amie's Literary Empire, Books and Things, A Very Casual Librarian, Lady of the Library, Rengade Cut, Cimnanya, Book Furnace, Underground News Reboot, Physics Girl, Tale Foundry, Jared Henderson, ScaredKetchup, Underthedesknews, Bryony Claire, Lonely Reader, Sons of Liberty, Esther Natukunda, Main Street Report, Dasia Sade, Times Radio, Fredda, Kings and Generals, Rogue Hobbies, Jess Owens, Military Rated, Fun Size Reader, Starbound Extra, Drunk on Tea, Star Wreck, Guard the Leaf, Knitting Cult Lady, Valentin E32, The Leftist Cooks, Mr Newberger's AI Funnies, The Great War.
I wish you a glorious morning, an exciting afternoon, a restful evening, a stellar night and may we all continue learning.
Fear hones the mind, rather than paralyses.