DNF @ 74% I rated it because I read so much of it.
Warning: This review is going to be a mess. It will be kind of like bullet points and me expanding on them.
Yet another book that lies in the synopsis.
A heist, "a pair of reluctant heroes who take on a world-ending prophecy, a malicious royal plot, and most of all, their feelings for each other" is what I was offered. But where is it?
The book starts off pretty well actually. While I didn't think the idea was especially original, I liked it, and since I've decided to give a chance to some YA books whose premise I find interesting, I decided to read it. To be clear, I listened to the audiobook because this is what gets me through YA as I'm not especially fond of this age category but I still believe the ideas are good.
What I love about YA, in particular, is that it's faster-paced than adult fantasy books which makes me read it way faster than said adult SFF. The book starts off immediately with the action and throughs you right into the story which is what I liked. However, the counter-argument to this could be that it doesn't give you time to get to know the main character, Rags, but don't worry, you won't learn much about the others either.
I actually didn't have any problems with the book per se up until the halfway point when I realized what the pattern is and when I realized that this book...isn't really a heist story, nor would it have a group of reluctant heroes who are also friends, nor would it have the gay romance I was promised. Also, the title doesn't make any sense to me.
Now granted, I did DNF at 74% (which I decided to do after writing the paragraph above) so maybe it will be revealed what it means in the last 26%.
Here's why I think it doesn't make sense: Cab, the master of one in question doesn't even have that many chapters dedicated to him. He is the so-called master of one, but he's barely in the story. Also, I feel like it should've been titled with something that makes more sense but in the end, they might end up merging all of the things they are masters of into one and therefore become the master of one, or maybe one of them would be this sole master at the end but frankly? I couldn't care less.
The POV pattern: I mentioned that I noticed the pattern in the book and here's the thing, I usually don't care about POV switch patterns, you do what works for you and I'll complain about it because I find dedicating individual chapters to different characters extremely limiting. Like, you are telling a story in the 3rd person, which is one of the freest ways of telling a story, you can literally have a POV about a stone but you choose to limit yourself to chapters dedicated to a specific character when you should be able to switch between POVs at any point. But I digress, that's just my preferred method of storytelling.
My problem here is the way it's done. It starts off with Rags, one of the main characters and we have not one, not 2, not 3, not even 10, not even 15 chapters in a row about Rags. We have TWENTY chapters in a row about Rags and chapter 21 is when the authors do the first POV switch. Now granted, this is their way of setting up the story, introducing us to the splot and two of the characters, but this could've easily been done by introducing us to the other 5 characters early on instead of adding them as the story progresses. I can see why they thought this was a good idea. In the book, after Rags woke up Shining Talon (honestly, IDK how anybody can take themselves seriously with a name like that in a YA novel but I'll talk about this later) it was revealed that Rags is master of five and Shining Talon boi is master of six but before they are able to activate their whatever they have to do it in order, so that's how we get to Cab, who's master of One. Ironically, his is not the first POV we get after Rags, instead, it's the master of three's POV but NVM.
So after the master of one has awakened his lizard-looking animal companion, he gets an idea (in some profound spiritual way) of where to find the master of two. That's when we get this person's POV and this is how the story progresses and here's the POV pattern I was talking about. With the introduction of the new masters, we get a new POV... However, this pattern doesn't make that much sense because the second POV was Somhairle's, who's master of 3, and Rag's supposedly master of 5, but he's the main character, so I guess it doesn't matter? I don't even know if this makes any sense.
My point is, this type of character introduction is very risky and very limited for a standalone because it doesn't give us enough time in the characters' heads before they get to do their thing.?. I wasn't excited or worried about any of them this entire time because: I didn't know them and I knew they'd do their things and nobody would risk killing them. Basically, even though the main conflict is painted to be this big thing and the characters have these shards planted in their hearts by this old evil wizard, there are no real stakes against them.
Why's that? Glad you asked because this is my next point.
Character ages don't make sense: The reason I said that they aren't afraid they're gonna be killed off is that in order for them to find their animal companion to be a master of, they have to be of age. However, it is never specified what that age is. Rags is about 16, I'm pretty sure Inis is anywhere between 15 and 20, Cab is a deserter, so he's either 18 or older but he reads like a child, Somhairle is 18 but he reads like a child as well and as I said, it's never specified what is coming of age for this book. Does it mean that they get to activate their powers when they come of age, or do they get to do it after they've come of age, at whatever age they are at? This is what I find confusing the most. Granted, this weapon (the thing with the animal companions and them being masters of these animals is an actual weapon, I know, confusing and I'm not doing it justice either) was sealed off for centuries but it still doesn't say what's coming of age. But basically, the characters don't have to be afraid of being killed because nobody wants to wait until their coming of age. Given how vague this "coming of age" is I'm not surprised. They'd either have to wait for another 16 years or maybe even 70.
This book is the authors' YA debut and from what I saw, they've had adult fantasy books previously but I actually thought they had written middle grade instead because Master of One reads like a book that doesn't quite fit in YA but it doesn't fit in middle grade either. IDK about you but I signed in for YA and I wanted YA. This is more like middle-grade with older characters. Also, having a character named Shining Talon (which is the SHORT version of his name) doesn't help. Some people might find this funny and adorable, but I feel like it's just mocking the fae. If you wanted a cool name, you should've made up something. Do a keyboard smash and make the character shorten it to George or something. Especially since Shining Talon doesn't have any talons. Also, a great missed opportunity about a talon joke as well.
Additionally, IDK if this is just an audiobook thing or what but Somhairle (who's a boy) is 18 years old but the narrator makes him sound like a child. Him having a disability makes that worse. I feel like she intentionally makes her voice higher when she's reading his chapters and IDK how to feel about that. Also, I've no idea why they chose a female narrator (or a feminine voice) for a book whose cast is predominantly male.
Characters don't know each other: I kind of expected to see some kind of friendship between the characters but I didn't. They don't know each other and they are also supposed to be these reluctant heroes, but honestly?, the only reason they are "reluctnat" is because they're literally blackmailed into it.
Where is my gay romance? At the end. I was promised some of that and there's barely any. Besides, they make it sound like it's gonna be dramatic and it's not. I know that holding hands with an old fae prince could be sooooooo exciting and cute but Rags (who's 16) and Shining Talon boi(who was young when he was sealed off for 700 years) barely talk to each other so it just came out of nowhere and it was at the 70% mark as well.
I know there are other characters I could talk about but Rags is the most prominent and memorable one, not because he has a personality or an especially interesting role but because he has the most chapters and I feel like his chapters were the most interesting and most relevant ones. If this book was written just in Rags' POV we wouldn't have lost anything from it. I feel like the authors started writing it that way and then after the first 20 chapters, they decided to add 5 more POVs.
I also skimmed quickly to the end and it doesn't seem to be a standalone as I initially thought which defeats the point of the argument I forgot to make. Which was supposed to be the fact that for a standalone, nothing was developed well enough so let's hope, if there is indeed a sequel, it will be.
Also, the famous heist happened in the first 100 pages or so and I found it to be the most interesting thing about the book, and yet kind of stupid as well.
Thank you to Harper360YA for sending me this review copy.