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really liked it 4.00  ·  Rating details ·  405 ratings  ·  98 reviews
You go through your day on autopilot.
Day after day, the same routine. The days meld together, years bleed into the next, molding the life you live.
A life you once dreamt would be epic, but instead you fall into the rut we call life.
There are days you sit and wonder is the grass really greener on the other side? Does the sun shine brighter? Do the flowers smell sweeter?
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Published September 17th 2019 (first published September 6th 2019)
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Natalie ✩★ The Biblioholic ★✩
This story should come with a HUGE warning label: a shitton of tissues required! While I didn't actually cry, I had to overcome strange lumps that appeared in my throat at certain points in this book. It was difficult to swallow at times. I even suffered from some sort of allergic reaction that had my eyes watering and a pain in my chest. Yeah... allergies.

Incomplete was a bitter yet romantic story that dared to answer the age old question of whether or not the grass is truly greener
Yeah, this one was creepy and not in a good way. I'm not kidding about the last line of my review, creepy doesn't begin to scratch the surface.

"They both had just needed the reminder" They ripped two peoples (they supposedly loved) hearts through their mouths to be "reminded".

This was truly distasteful. For me, emotional cheating is far, far, far more insidious and painful than physical cheating. One is just the body given in base lust, the other is like being broken open and your heart an
Oct 22, 2019 rated it it was ok
The title says it all...I felt it left me incomplete and unsatisfied. I loved it then hated it then was meh with the epilogue. The first half was great. I really liked both Gage and Tilly and the ending was not what I expected and sadly really dropped my enjoyment for this story down to nothing. I really didn’t like the spouses as they were portrayed and both MCs did deserve more and I am not in favor of affairs but I understand how they were both forgotten and felt incomplete. Just peeves me th ...more
Catherine  Wright (Cat's Guilty Pleasure)
Good grief, what an amazing story. This is one of those books that will make you think long and hard about your life. Throughout the whole book I was an emotional mess, the heartbreak and love in this book will pull at your heartstrings. I was sucked in from the beginning and just couldn't put it down. These two authors have a way of writing and pulling you into the story and not letting you go until the end. This is a must read. ...more
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I liked this one. A lot, actually. Though I don't normally come on board the cheating genre, my BFF told me this was one I wouldn't be able to put down. She was right! I enjoyed the characters. I both hated and loved the story. The writing was superb.

I felt for Gage and Tillie. Both of them were in situations that weren't ideal for their happiness. Their partners weren't invested in their relationships anymore, and it lead th
Apr 15, 2020 rated it it was amazing

4.5 stars Ughhhh not how I wanted the story to end at all and not super satisfied with it. Why give it 5 stars well bc it not ending quite how I wanted it to doesn’t take away from the fact that this was really well written and brought out all of the emotions. I’m married and totally can understand some of the feelings the h and H went through with their spouses but for eff sake you went through all of that just for some “self discovery bs” like you destroyed your lives and didn’t eve
Sep 21, 2019 rated it liked it  ·  review of another edition
I don’t usually read books like this but I wanted to give it a go. It wasn’t bad considering I knew right off the bat the whole premise of the story. However, I did not like that ending at all. I was expecting something way different.
If the ending would have been a different way I could’ve given this 4 stars or even 4 1/2.
Tricia Hamlett
24 hours later & I still don’t know how I feel about this story. I loved it. I hated it. I wish I hadn’t read the epilogue. I would actually like to rewrite the epilogue. Ugh.
Sep 27, 2019 rated it it was amazing  ·  review of another edition
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WHOA NELLY! That's the first 2 words I have after reading this book. I kind of don't know what to do with myself now. This book COMPLETELY consumed me. I knew it was wrong, but this book was so right. I didn't condone the actions of Tilly and Gage, but yet I couldn't look away or put this book down. I intended to read a little bit before bed, but yeahhhhh, that didn't happen. I devoured this book and didn't stop until it was over. I FELT everything this book had to offer. I can't get enough of L ...more
Maria Angie Mendoza
The brilliance of this story is based on how emotional it was, and how it evoked love and hateful feelings about the characters and the story.
Thought provoking, compelling and complex story of love.
This highly emotional story is an unconventional romance that’s not for everybody. However, once I started reading despite the pauses, it was so gripping, I couldn’t not stop reading it and discover the end result.
Tillie and Gage were flawlessly developed and each exercised their right to live the wa
Julia Leonard
Sep 20, 2019 rated it it was amazing
Not your typical love story

It all began when two neglected married people discovered a new game.
They become friends, the more they chat, the more they realise they have a lot in common.
Gage's wife is always working and never there for her family.
Tilly is in the same situation.
Their story will hit home for some.
Will Gage and Tilly find happiness or will their lives come crashing down around them?
I highly recommend this amazing story.
Cynthia Carpenter
I'm sitting here after finishing this book without any idea of how to put into words the emotions and feelings this one pulled out me.
It's raw, heartbreaking, beautiful, romantic, steamy, and everything in between rolled into a book that will pull at your heart and make you feel everything they are. The age old question Is The Grass Greener on the other side? Tilly and Gage will have you wonder if is . Amazing read can't wait to read more from these two
Sissy's Romance Book Review
Incomplete by L.A. Fiore and Anthony Dwayne is a book that hits truer to true life then some stories. Gage and Tilly stories here do crossover to some theme of cheating when they both are in a marriage that they feel the other person is not there for them. Gage and Tilly are friends but it starts to cross over into something else.
Enjoyed this different type of story.
Sep 26, 2019 rated it it was amazing
Bittersweet 💔

Just WOW!!!! summarizes what I felt after I finished, I cried, I was angry I laughed it was so much more then I expected. Anthony Dwayne & L.A. Fiore make word magic together, I cant wait to see what more they have in store for us readers. Highly recommend this book.
Jenny B
Oct 03, 2019 rated it it was amazing  ·  review of another edition
I found this to be one of the most difficult but rewarding books to read in ages. This book brought what I feel to be real life situations and experiences through two characters who were so easy to relate with. This book perfected the banter between friends, the development of a friendship, some incredible steam and just the whole package was delivered into this story.
This book can never be unread and the words will forever be in my thoughts. It made me rethink EVERYTHING! There is no right or wrong anymore. The lines completely blurred with tears and I cant quite pick myself off the floor to make the hurt and relief go into full affect.

Tracy Reads
This was a good story but there was a lot about the word game app and every time I got into the story it switched back to the app which kept throwing my focus, for me, it became more about the game than the story itself it wasn't bad just did not sit right and I felt i couldn't fully enjoy it ...more
Nov 12, 2019 rated it really liked it

There is a wealth of truth and lessons in this book. Real life bleeds through every chapter that only those who have had similar experiences can truly appreciate. This could have had three endings, the one I wished for, the one that is the epilogue and the one I lived.
Joyce Dobson
Sep 28, 2019 rated it it was amazing
Loved this book and managed not to cry till the very last page.
Gina Burkart
Oct 05, 2019 rated it it was amazing  ·  review of another edition
This is a amazing ride of roller coaster ride of emotions that will have you thinking these can happen in real life. But how can it be handle. This is a ride throughout the book.
Mar 09, 2020 rated it really liked it
Angsty and heartfelt

I really enjoyed this story. I know that some people have issues with cheating in books. Well this is one of them. It was written just like something that could happen in real life. Tilly is a housewife, doing anything and everything for her family, while getting nothing in return. Her husband is hardly home, working late nights. Gage is experiencing the same thing. They find the attention that they were seeking in each other. I have seen this happen in my own family. I know
Mar 25, 2020 rated it really liked it
This was not a book I wanted to like. The subject matter is controversial. I hated what the characters were doing the whole time but I couldn’t stop reading. The writing was so superbly done that I was feeling the emotions right along with the characters. I feel like I’ve been through a roller coaster of emotions after. It felt similar to the feelings you get from Bridges of Madison County. That is truly great writing to me when you feel with the characters. The epilogue felt slightly lacking to ...more
Tina Lemond
Jul 24, 2020 rated it it was amazing
Still crying

Where do I start! This book is beautifully written on a taboo subject. I felt the passion, love, pain, loneliness, and guilt of the main characters. As for their spouses, I was angry that they took these loving people for granted. But this is what real life is all about. Is the grass really greener?
Jul 29, 2020 rated it really liked it
Almost every marriage story

Well written, taking on the depth of why people stray. I could relate, as many of us can. What I loved? Was that an affair here, helped both marriages, often we are so eager to throw it away instead of fighting or rediscovering our spouses - getting stuck in the mundane tasks of life, live people! Just live . great book
No. Fuck no.
I refuse to accept this ending

It's like the author gave us an amazing and beautiful story filled with so much emotion and love and in the end she went like "lol just kidding"
God I'm so furious!

I loved them together
Their love and their selfishness
All of it.

Incomplete indeed
Lucinda Jordan
Aug 10, 2020 rated it it was amazing
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Dec 09, 2020 rated it really liked it

In still unsure if I liked the outcome or didn't but either way the ending was well written. That little but where Heather hands Gage the tablet broke me. Despite the author splitting Tillie and Gage's points if view into sections,there was still a bit of annoying head hopping going on that was rather frustrating but on the whole this was seen entertaining read.
Bridget Hickey
Feb 02, 2020 rated it really liked it
Well this story with get your emotions all over the place.It really has you wondering is the grass greener on the other side.Cage and Tilly shared a special love and walked away for unselfish reason other people they loved.I really expected and hoped for a different ending.
Amber Urey
Mar 24, 2020 rated it really liked it
Really good!

I was happy when I stumbled upon this book, it definitely sucked me in and kept me reading until the end.
I was really rooting for Gage and Tilly and didn’t love the ending
Kristin Shambaugh
Sep 28, 2020 rated it it was amazing

Jesus. This book gave me so many feels. It tugged at my heart strings and should not have been something I read during work breaks because trying to hold in the tears is awful. What a beautifully written story.
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