I'm usually a huge fan of Martin McDonagh's writing, but after seeing Three Billboards Outside Ebbing, Missouri twice, and reading his screenplay, the flaws really start to come out. Here's just a few things that popped out to me upon revisiting this story several times that I can't stand about this story:
- James (played by Peter Dinklage in the film) serves no purpose in this story, other than maybe to show that Mildred might not just be vengeful, but also sort of an awful person - which we should've gotten without the addition of this unnecessary character.
- There's no need AT ALL for the guy from Idaho who might be Mildred's daughter's killer. Like James, he's just sort of reinforcing ideas that have already been made.
- There's no reason why we should sympathize with Willoughby. I did the first time I saw the film, but c'mon, the guy let an officer brutally attack a man who was in custody, and still keep him on the streets.
- In a film largely about a character with racial prejudice, why are there no minority characters with any substance?
- On that note, why does Mildred's coworker go to jail for almost no reason, only for Mildred and no one else to care about what happened to her, despite her disappearing for the majority of the film.
- What exactly is the point of the priest scene? My only answer is that Martin McDonagh wanted to shit on Catholics, but had no other means to do it.
- Why does absolutely no one care that Mildred's ex-husband used to beat her - including her own children, and not even his current girlfriend?
- The scene with Mildred and the deer is stolen directly from The Queen, and again, adds nothing to the story.
- The story terribly uses words like the n word, "retard," "midget," and "faggot" as laugh lines. The joke is that people are using these words. Ok...that just makes them shitty people.
- The scene where Red goes "hey Mildred you owe me $5000,"
*Red's secretary walks in*
"here's $5000 someone just brought in for you!"
That scene is atrociously stupid and completely useless.
- Why the fuck would Willoughby leave his daughters playing by a river by themselves, when there is a known rapist and murderer on the loose??
So much of what I liked about Three Billboards comes from the performances, but all of my problems with Three Billboards comes from the script, which creates entire characters and scenes that serve no purpose, and McDonagh doesn't know how to make multilayered characters that make sense. I swear, so many characters here change entirely depending on what the scene needs from them. I'm usually a huge fan of McDonagh, and I was a fan of this film at first. But in the months since seeing this film and now reading it, the flaws have become overwhelming to me, and I think it might be his weakest film by far.