Received ARC for Honest Review.
I Give this Book a 2.5ish/5, Listing as 2 Stars.
Cliffhanger: Yes
I Love Dark, Dark Romance & Bully Books, Put them all together and I’m a happy camper!
This Book, I know this is supposed to be dark, but it’s not even near the dark level I was expecting it to reach, and the Bullying was very basic(?)
I knew what was going to happen, literally in Chapter one.
I can’t even put my rating list up after reading this, cause if I did I usually would put it into consideration for my final rating, but I can’t with this one.
I DID not go in with negative thoughts, heck I didn’t even look this book up, I went on how it sounded.
I’m surprised at all the bad reviews, but I guess mine isn’t better...
There is a lot of drama, I usually list it, but in this book I was just underwhelmed? It was pretty obvious where majority of the book was going, and then there were sections where you were just doused with convenient info that just seems over the top, especially at the Cliffhanger..
There are a lot of repeated mannerisms, one in particular is ‘cocked an eyebrow’.
The pacing of this book was odd, it was a continuous stop and go, it would be fast one second then dragging and then fast again, it was kind of mind boggling.
The heat scenes..super short and fast, and archaic sounding and personally i wasn’t impressed.
The typical words a for ‘male genitalia’ has been overall avoided, and C*ck was only mentioned I think 3 times, Penis (0), Dick (0). And has been mainly described in other ways, in case you were wondering.
And I got it..Bella is/was a virgin and also that condoms were used in this book, point was made.
Please note Bella seems to ‘scream’ a lot in this book.
Overall the book seemed very.. high school?
I mean I know it’s High School based, but it doesn’t need to be written like one. The odd choice of wording, very young sounding dialogue that seemed over the top, the simplicity of other things reminded me of well..Twilight, her name ‘Bella’ and her being super naive didn’t help much either.
The book was very and literally ‘Over Dramatic’ and extremely Stilted, way too many dramatic type pauses.
I don’t mind reading Young Adult and/or Teen Fiction, but I was expecting much more than what I got.
I am curious to see what happens, but the overall characters just didn’t click with me. Plus Susan really annoyed & bugged me, she was too involved in the book and what was up with that info dump at the end and the odd wording & suspense she did that was practically unpalatable?
Would I read more from this Author? I don’t know.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.