These two books should never have been paired
First of all, let me say I’m an avid reader. I’ve read many of Jack Hunt’s books but this was my first from J.S. Donovan. It seems a bit unjust that I have to rate and review these two books together. I initially gave a rating of one star, but in all honesty, if I rated them separately, Aftermath would have received four stars and Storm Surge one star.
Aftermath was written in Hunt’s usual style. The story was mostly believable and well edited. Storm Surge started out ok but then the story took a serious downward spiral. Scenes were not allowed to fully develop and seemed rushed. In one scene with Roy and Maxine, the character went from being Roy to suddenly being Owen! This scene occurred while Owen was missing.
Every writer has spell check. There are too many misspellings to list. Surely there was an editor involved. I probably could have continued to struggle through to the end but when the writer decided that Maxine, 38 year old mother of twin teenagers could suddenly breastfeed an orphaned newborn, I absolutely had to put it down! Seriously? You could ask any woman and be told that this doesn’t happen. A woman’s breast doesn’t always have milk.
I can’t recommend Storm Surge and likely won’t be giving J.S. Donovan a second chance.