*big sigh* Where do I even begin?
Okay, this book was filled with sooooooo damn many holes and fell to sooooo many tropes, that I almost couldn't deal. I started this book when it first came out, but the elementary and uncomfortable cast dialogue made it a DNF for me. However, I came back to it to try again, after book 2 was released, and I wish that I had left it as a DNF. Seriously. I would not be pounding my head against my kitchen table at this very moment if I had just listened and trusted my first instincts on this one.
ASIDE from the fact that the book has a very flimsy storyline and subpar character development, the H in this book is absolutely ridiculous and extremely hate worthy. Within the first few pages, we are led to believe that she is an amazing technician, and I say this because she is working on the engine of a vehicle as a technician, but those first few glimpses of her play NOT A FUCKING SINGLE role in who she ends up being in the story. I really question why the author chose to introduce us to the H that way. I mean, if you are smart enough and strong enough to be able to physically work on car engines at the age of 17...you are probably pretty bad ass, right? LOL.....NOT IN THIS CASE. It's almost as if the author does not know--or does not expect any of us to know--the amount of skill, strength, and intelligence that it is involved with actually doing engine work. Either way, introducing us to the H in such a way, I believe that she was trying to portray some sort of "bad ass" image of the H for the reader and set up the reader to expect some really kick ass things, but we don't get ANY of that. NOTHING. We are given an H that is childish, weak, annoying, and naive AF!!
So, I'm supposed to believe that a character is smart enough, and dexterous enough, to know how to "do an engine job" on a vehicle (think about it, if it was THAT easy, wouldn't we all do our own engine work? Hell, most of us don't even change our own vehicle's oil because we don't know what the hell we are doing...much LESS fucking with the engines of our vehicles), is not smart enough to KNOW when being fucked over and can't walk without tripping over her own shadow??? Yeah, I think not.
If you are going to start this book off with giving me a main character that is smart enough and bold enough to do mechanical work on a car, then please follow that shit up. Don't give a main character that can do engine work, but then does not know how to navigate high school. It does not make sense. Nor does it make sense to have a character "SAY YES" to a binding a mark, because it OBVIOUSLY (per the book) has to be accepted, but then turns around and gets super pissed off for being forced "against her will" into a binding mark. BITCH PLEASE! You OBVIOUSLY don't understand what "against one's will" means. If you think that saying "yes" to something "without all the facts" is being forced "against your will", then you have another think coming. No..that's called being manipulated. I suggest you get your wording, definitions, and indignation right before you get all huffy and puffy about saying something was "against your will".
I have SO MUCH MORE I could say about this book (such as the H being a stripper--or "dancer" rather--and supposed clairvoyant, and the inconsistencies following these ridiculous claims too) and why it wasn't for me, but I honestly don't want to spend more time on this book. With the RH genre still being a bit new, I would encourage anyone to read it, but if you are anything like me, then I suggest taking a few tylenol before hand, because the H in this one is migraine inducing.