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Proper English

(England World #1)

4.07  ·  Rating details ·  2,338 ratings  ·  497 reviews
A shooting party at the Earl of Witton’s remote country house is a high treat for champion shot Patricia Merton—until unexpected guests turn the social atmosphere dangerously sour.

That’s not Pat’s biggest problem. She’s visiting her old friend, the Earl’s heir Jimmy Yoxall—but she wants to spend a lot more time with Jimmy’s fiancée. The irrepressible Miss Fenella Carruth,
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Published May 8th 2019 by KJC Books
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K.J. Charles
Mar 13, 2019 added it  ·  (Review from the author)
Pat Merton and Fenella Carruth first appeared in my book Think of England and I have wanted to write their origin story ever since. Here it is.

It takes place two years before the events of Think of England (so, obviously, it's a standalone), and, as is only fitting for these ladies, it is a full-on Edwardian Country House Murder. I had total fun with it and I hope readers do too.

NB: As should be clear from the blurb, it's set at a shooting party (for partridge). Proceed accordingly!
persephone ☾
with all due respect (which is none) this book was ass.

[dnf @71 % because i can't take it anymore]
Apr 08, 2019 rated it really liked it
“How many country house murders do you think we’re likely to encounter?” OH FEN, MY SWEET SUMMER CHILD.

I received an ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review, and I can honestly say I love these gun-toting lesbians with my whole heart. (Also, going along with this whole “honesty” deal, I read the book and wrote this review on an 18-hour travel day so please forgive any delirium typos.)

This book is a prequel of sorts to Think of England, so anyone who enjoyed that particular brand of Dr
Ms. Smartarse
Patricia (Pat) Merton is about to embark on a new phase of her life. Though no one is kicking her out, with her oldest brother just married, she'd rather make use of her household running skills elsewhere. But first, she gets to enjoy a small hunting party. Or so she was hoping, until she realizes that far too many uninvited guests have also crashed said party.

Armed with her absolute worst premonitions, our heroine nevertheless finds herself reluctantly charmed by one Miss Fenella (Fen) Carruth,
May 16, 2019 rated it did not like it
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This reminded me of an Agatha Christie style mystery with a sapphic twist. Many guests who've never met each other before are trapped in a castle-like estate in the middle of nowhere as adversarial tensions build between them that ultimately result in a murder.

The first 2/3 of the book focus on the relationships of the guests and the growing romance between our leads while seeds of mystery are dropped. The last 1/3 deals with the murder and resolving who did it.

Overall, the writing was well done
gloria ୨୧
➥ 1 Star *:・゚✧ dnf @ 60%

“If one had enough to do, one could carry on doing it indefinitely without looking up from one’s tasks to take a wider view.”

━━━━━━━━━━━ ♡ ━━━━━━━━━━━

I agree with sephie, this book was ass . I think I'm cursed, everytime I choose to buddy read something with someone, it ends up being terrible.

➥ Patricia Merton (h) got on my last nerve. We are mainly in her perspective and she's just insufferable. She thinks she's not like other girls because she has zero remorse for sh
A gloriously fun Agatha-Christie-style historical country-house murder mystery, sparkling with wit and full of great characters, including a really lovely romance between two equally fabulous heroines. I started reading my ARC in post-surgery recovery, when I could have felt really grim, and the sheer joy of this book really saved me. A total delight!
Apr 29, 2019 rated it really liked it
3.75 stars rounded up

Old-time readers / fans of K.J. Charles who have read Think of England might remember Patricia Merton and Fenella Carruth; two secondary characters from the book. Proper English is the prequel, set two years before the event in Think of England, that tells how Patricia and Fenella first met: Patricia attends a shooting party while visiting her old friend, Jimmy Yoxall, who is recently engaged with Fenella.

If I can use one word to describe this story, I will use DELIGHTFU
Talia Hibbert
May 30, 2019 rated it it was amazing
I have screamed about this book so constantly that I actually thought I'd reviewed it weeks ago. But no - all my reviews have been verbal, in the form of friendly harassment, i.e. "READ THIS F***KING BOOK OR ELSE". Yes, I am a fun person to know.

Before I get into exactly why this historical f/f murder mystery romance is so great (if you need more than that description, I mean), it seems only fair to mention that this book is dedicated to me. I don't think I am biased because I read this book ear
Psst ... here's an embarrassing secret: this is my first FF and my first K.J. Charles. *hangs head in shame* KJC is one of those authors that for a host of reasons I've known I'm going to like or even love, in fact I own quite a number of her books, but keep postponing the reading of them. It's mystifying and it ends now.

I loved this story and the audio by Bella Lowe is aces. In a way it was return to basics for me:

*An Edwardian Country House Party

*Secrets and otherwise uncomfortable facts are
I wasn't sure what to expect from KJ Charles' first venture into f/f romance. But she's an auto-buy author for me, so much so that I've even read her m/f romance, Gilded Cage (and enjoyed it!). If she writes it, I'm going to read it, because I trust her to entertain, amuse, and move me, and she almost always delivers.

She delivered here, with this country house murder mystery set in 1902 England. If you've read Think of England, set two years later (but written first), you might remember the scra
Kaje Harper
May 25, 2019 rated it really liked it
I was looking forward to this prequel story with Pat and Fen from Think of England and I really enjoyed seeing these two women meet. Pat is intelligent, self-contained and practical, raised along with her brothers enough to have the expectation that a woman should be just as capable as a man. She's a champion shot, and is used to running a household, but with the marriage of her oldest brother she's suddenly at loose ends, no longer mistress of his home.

She decides a brief holiday with an old f
This is getting really annoying, Goodreads. To say I finished a book before I actually have. I would never throw a book unrated and without a review into the world. Ugh!

So I will get back to this space as soon as I finish it. Which will be later today.

So this was simply fantastic and all things delightful even though we are talking about a murder mystery. KJ Charles normally writes m/m and therefore she was (to me at least) an unknown author. Apparently our two mains Patri
Helen Kord
Apr 09, 2019 rated it it was amazing
Oh this was absolutely magnificent. The f/f histrom of my dreams!!!!!!!! I loved it so much. Full review to come later but OH MY GOD KJ DID IT AGAIN, BUT THIS TIME WITH LESBIANS

Edit: Okay usually I just delete the old gushy review and replace it with the actual review, but I find this one hilarious so I'm keeping it :D Here's my full review:

Proper English made me think of all the Hercule Poirot stories I grew up on. There’s a hunting party full of colourful snarky characters, hilarious banter, m
May 07, 2019 rated it really liked it
4.5 stars/B+

K.J. Charles’ latest book is a companion piece to Think of England, in which readers were first introduced to Pat Morton and Fenella (Fen) Carruth, a pair of formidable ladies who seem already to be rather adept at solving mysteries. Proper English takes place a couple of years before those events, and is their origin story, if you will.  It’s a witty, sharply observed, sweetly romantic and clever country house murder-mystery; in short, everything you’d expect from K.J. Charles (incl
Sam (AMNReader)

Sometimes I don't like suspense plots with my romance. This was one of those times. And, unfortunately, it felt a bit like Think of England for me. I thought the characters were cute and sweet to each other...but the pacing was off. It was probably hard to go back and create this, I don't know, and make them who they were (scene-stealers) in ToE, but it is what it is. What it was for me was barely satisfying. Both pieces were sorely lacking the tension that can make KJC books so incredible.

If yo
Linda ~ they got the mustard out! ~
This book should have been shorter, because there was some redundancy that seemed to be there only to show us how truly horrible a certain character is, (view spoiler) and it mired down the story a bit. Also, I can't call this a mystery since that part didn't even kick in until the last third of the book, though once it did kick in it was fairly interesting - if also a bit too long. There was too much of everyone gett ...more
Joyfully Jay
May 08, 2019 rated it it was amazing
Shelves: jay
A Joyfully Jay review.

5 stars

Oh, this story was such a delight! I was completely captivated and could barely put it down. Proper English develops a wonderful relationship between Pat and Fen, and then adds to it the drama of a remote country house party filled with interesting (and abhorrent) characters, along with a murder mystery twist. K.J. Charles just excels at wonderful character development and excellent historical elements and both are showcased perfectly in this story.

Pat is our POV ch
Freya Marske
May 12, 2019 rated it it was amazing
Literally everything I hoped for, this book provided. Murder! A house party full of awful people! Ladies bonding! Two of those ladies falling in love and having a lot of sex! The narrator being a thoroughly sensible person who is also a gay disaster! K.J. Charles just keeps getting better and better.
Laura (thebookcorps)
Thank you very much to KJ Charles for providing an advance reading copy of her novel.

I’ve been a fan of KJ Charles’ work since (checks Goodreads) 2014 when I read the first book in her A Charm of Magpies series, The Magpie Lord. I’ve read all of her books since that first one and have been patiently waiting for Charles to release a full-length f/f romance novel … and the book gods delivered!

Proper English is a wonderfully fun and still pretty violent Agatha-Christie-type murder mystery (because,
This review is the definition of grading on a curve: KJC is a genius and I really love Think of England, which I've just finished in audio [sequel K.J.? Sequel. SE-QUEL].

Consequently, my expectations for this were sky high. I felt so, so sure KJC would be the one to deliver in my, so far, somewhat fruitless quest for great historical f/f.

Alas, this didn’t really deliver as I hoped. Ultimately it all felt, pfffft, *shrugs*: underpowered.

There is real promise here - Fen and Pat seemingly being su
Reread July 17, 2020.
I've finished a book and it is a good one. I mention this as I've been turned off of the usual ff romances lately as being somewhat formulaic. "Proper English" does not feel formulaic in the slightest and it is one of my favorites of the genre. This is a story of Pat, an intelligent bold woman living in a man's world of early 1900s Britain. She's supremely confident in her abilities, quite opinionated and a marvelous shot with her guns and hunting fowl in the English countr
Oct 10, 2019 rated it it was ok
Shelves: fellow-fat-folk, dnf
Dang, I think I'm going to have to DNF this because I'm halfway through and there is nary a drop of tension, whether dramatic or romantic or sexual, even though tension is normally K.J. Charles' main wheelhouse.

I'm just so frustrated with how many f/f romances seem to act as though women are all nice and forgiving and placid all the time. Like too often they seem to be ruled by the need to avoid having their female characters do anything that will tip off the reader's internalized misogyny- lik
May 09, 2019 rated it really liked it
3.5 stars rounded up

It was really nice seeing how Fen and Pat from Think of England started. And to think they met at yet another house party that turns into a good old-fashioned country house party murder mystery. Well. Not that old-fashioned. It's K.J. Charles, after all.
Jen (mrs-machino)
Aug 13, 2021 rated it really liked it
This was fun and I was excited when my theory panned out. Fen and Pat were such a great couple, they complimented each other well.
Lexxi Kitty
“Murder is ill-mannered”

The previous book I read I expected to be a murder mystery type of book - turned out to be a slice of life/legal thriller type book. Which I mention specifically because I entered this book here somewhat excited to read a lesbian fiction book that fell into the historical fiction genre. I like reading lesbian fiction; I like reading historical fiction; rarely do I find and read historical fiction starring lesbians. So, again, somewhat excited to read this book here (o
Hart_D (ajibooks)
May 10, 2019 rated it it was amazing
Shelves: favorites
I don't think I can really review this book right now in any way that will be helpful to other readers, because I loved it so much. When it comes out in paperback, I'll probably buy a copy just so I can literally draw hearts in the margins.

I was in a major book slump before I started this. For the past few months, I've been rereading all my old favorites, while picking up a lot of new books, then eventually setting them aside. But I couldn't tear myself away from this. It's just what I needed.
Apr 10, 2019 rated it really liked it
Shelves: queer-romance
Yeah, I was pretty much guaranteed to enjoy this - I love KJ Charles's writing and I already had crushes on Pat and Fen from their appearances in Think of England. Getting a chance to see the beginning of their relationship was just wonderfully fun. I'm pretty indifferent to murder mystery plots, but I do love the cozy/creepy closed house mystery atmosphere. ...more
A group of friends got together for a Partridges shooting party and one of them was our lead, Patricia 'Pat' Merton. Pat attended the gathering as a Gun. Yup, as a Gun, thanks to her All-England Ladies’ Champion title + knowledge/reputation with weapons/ammo. So everyone was excited to show off their skills but the news of some unwelcome guests dampened their spirits a bit. However, when Pat met the one of a kind Ms.Carruth, she was intrigued by her personality and her rather large bosom. All th ...more
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