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Dungeon Master #3
Dungeon Master 3
What would you do if the ruler of the frozen north land kingdom tried to make one of your faithful minions marry someone else? Would you that happen? Or would you use your dungeon deity powers to dig under his land, invade his castle with your horde of monsters, and warm your soul with the sounds of his dying screams? Come on. It’s the third book. We all know what you would do.
442 pages, Kindle Edition
Published January 20, 2019
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Eric Vall
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February 17, 2019
Good book
Good book I can't wait to read the next book in the series I would recommend this book to anyone
Good book I can't wait to read the next book in the series I would recommend this book to anyone
December 29, 2019
Root of All Evil
Rebel leader Makar takes over the throne in kingdom conquered in the last book.
Boat ride to Tamarisch, land of the bear soldiers and colder climate. And the throne that Annalise’s father sits on.
Crew starts off getting ready for voyage across ocean too continue conquering dungeons in Tamarisch. Stop over on sad island in the perpetual fog—Jallah. Fortune teller that charges a bit of soul. Fancy winter clothing for everyone.
Dungeon with status that come to life. Combat is better described and more detailed. Ice Demons, lots of Ice Demons. Rana runs the gauntlet through the ice-trap reminiscent of laser-sensor traps in many movies. Its pretty well described. Sea monsters on an underground frigid lake with ice bergs. 50 foot tall dungeon god, Master uses new power from previously defeated gods to defeat him easily. Annalise scores a augmentation stone for her sword.
Implausible tunneling between dungeons. The next dungeon is a crystalline white catacomb of porosity. Find three monsters of legend frozen in ice. Of course they come to life / reanimate, and then the minions defeat them. Leads to the dungeon’s masters (Twins), who share the powers of control over monsters, and the ability to take monsters forms onto themselves. Rana gets a force ring.
Master, Carmedy and Rana go to town. The town, towns people, shops, and general environment are vividly described. The Steaming Spring Inn had some cool ideas in its architecture.
Tunnel to another dungeon. Weather control by the dungeon god, who is a god that Master had sparred with in his previous life. He is victorious again, using a couple of his powers against him. Best battle with an enemy god so far. Morrigon gets a magic elfish bow. Rana gets another sacred object.
Master teleports back to his dungeon to fight off attackers sent by Tuzakeur.
I do appreciate that as the story develops and the minions gain wealth and power, they definitely stop and smell the roses from time to time.
The Evil Wizard Tuzakeur starts to take a more central roll. He is apparently behind everything bad in the world, not just Rana’s family being held hostage, but also is corrupting Annalise’s father, and also attacking Master’s home dungeon.
Annalise’s father has to be slain for someone else to become ruler, will it be Annalise or Master that has the honors. There is a siege, and they win by sneaking in underground, with lots and lots of ice demons and other creatures that Master can create or summon in seemingly unlimited quantities. Annalise does fight and best her father, decent battle.
Ends with dancing wedding ceremony. Somehow killing her father resolved all of her concerns about Master.
Rebel leader Makar takes over the throne in kingdom conquered in the last book.
Boat ride to Tamarisch, land of the bear soldiers and colder climate. And the throne that Annalise’s father sits on.
Crew starts off getting ready for voyage across ocean too continue conquering dungeons in Tamarisch. Stop over on sad island in the perpetual fog—Jallah. Fortune teller that charges a bit of soul. Fancy winter clothing for everyone.
Dungeon with status that come to life. Combat is better described and more detailed. Ice Demons, lots of Ice Demons. Rana runs the gauntlet through the ice-trap reminiscent of laser-sensor traps in many movies. Its pretty well described. Sea monsters on an underground frigid lake with ice bergs. 50 foot tall dungeon god, Master uses new power from previously defeated gods to defeat him easily. Annalise scores a augmentation stone for her sword.
Implausible tunneling between dungeons. The next dungeon is a crystalline white catacomb of porosity. Find three monsters of legend frozen in ice. Of course they come to life / reanimate, and then the minions defeat them. Leads to the dungeon’s masters (Twins), who share the powers of control over monsters, and the ability to take monsters forms onto themselves. Rana gets a force ring.
Master, Carmedy and Rana go to town. The town, towns people, shops, and general environment are vividly described. The Steaming Spring Inn had some cool ideas in its architecture.
Tunnel to another dungeon. Weather control by the dungeon god, who is a god that Master had sparred with in his previous life. He is victorious again, using a couple of his powers against him. Best battle with an enemy god so far. Morrigon gets a magic elfish bow. Rana gets another sacred object.
Master teleports back to his dungeon to fight off attackers sent by Tuzakeur.
I do appreciate that as the story develops and the minions gain wealth and power, they definitely stop and smell the roses from time to time.
The Evil Wizard Tuzakeur starts to take a more central roll. He is apparently behind everything bad in the world, not just Rana’s family being held hostage, but also is corrupting Annalise’s father, and also attacking Master’s home dungeon.
Annalise’s father has to be slain for someone else to become ruler, will it be Annalise or Master that has the honors. There is a siege, and they win by sneaking in underground, with lots and lots of ice demons and other creatures that Master can create or summon in seemingly unlimited quantities. Annalise does fight and best her father, decent battle.
Ends with dancing wedding ceremony. Somehow killing her father resolved all of her concerns about Master.
April 30, 2019
Another good book in the series
I chose four stars because the plot moved well, no gaps, and the characters were well written. It would be nice to see things from the female characters perspective once in a while though. I normally reserve 5 stars for books written this well that are also emotionally evocative. So while this was a well written story, and I enjoyed it quite a bit, it did not have that effect for me.
I chose four stars because the plot moved well, no gaps, and the characters were well written. It would be nice to see things from the female characters perspective once in a while though. I normally reserve 5 stars for books written this well that are also emotionally evocative. So while this was a well written story, and I enjoyed it quite a bit, it did not have that effect for me.
November 8, 2019
Just Rewards
Battles fought and won with purpose is a waste, but battles with purpose are fought with honor. God's fight with gods, but here amongst those battles, human fights especially between a father whose a High King and a daughter trying to prove herself in her father's eyes can make or break a kingdom.
This was quite enjoyable and I am looking forward to seeing where this is going.
Battles fought and won with purpose is a waste, but battles with purpose are fought with honor. God's fight with gods, but here amongst those battles, human fights especially between a father whose a High King and a daughter trying to prove herself in her father's eyes can make or break a kingdom.
This was quite enjoyable and I am looking forward to seeing where this is going.
January 22, 2019
I love the direction this series is going, and it's good to see Mr. Vall improving as he releases more books. This is -by far- the best book in this series. If you read the first two and were kinda 'meh' on the series, I'd recommend giving this one a try and see if it brings you around. It's a 110% improvement.
January 27, 2019
A very good book.
I enjoy reading this series. The author has done a good job of just giving a few more hints each book about the fallen god. The characters continue to be entertaining and engaging in the story. The MC is very powerful and fun to read about. Overall another good book.
I enjoy reading this series. The author has done a good job of just giving a few more hints each book about the fallen god. The characters continue to be entertaining and engaging in the story. The MC is very powerful and fun to read about. Overall another good book.
February 6, 2019
Dungeon Master gets even better
Really enjoyed this book, I think it was the best in the series so far, the relationships between the main characters is expanded and strengthened while a few more clues of the ‘Dark Ones’ history is revealed (and his first real challenge in battle).
Really enjoyed this book, I think it was the best in the series so far, the relationships between the main characters is expanded and strengthened while a few more clues of the ‘Dark Ones’ history is revealed (and his first real challenge in battle).
January 28, 2019
More goodness
This book continues the series nicely, if you enjoyed the previous books them you will love this. The characters are progressing nicely and I look forward to the next installment.
This book continues the series nicely, if you enjoyed the previous books them you will love this. The characters are progressing nicely and I look forward to the next installment.
February 21, 2019
A big improvement over the previous 2 as there now actually seems to be a little bit more of a plot. My biggest gripe is that they have still only come across 1 goddess, their first, and there was barely any battle at all.
April 1, 2019
Great Fun
This book in the series is set with a calmer and more sedate story and pace - until the end, that is. Still true to the characters and storyline, still full of action, humor, passion, magic, and mystery. Well worth reading!
This book in the series is set with a calmer and more sedate story and pace - until the end, that is. Still true to the characters and storyline, still full of action, humor, passion, magic, and mystery. Well worth reading!
May 5, 2019
Great book
They are just so much fun to read. The way that the main characters interact together is just great. You never know what they’re gonna say or do next. At times it is so funny and others lots of action. I highly recommend this book.
They are just so much fun to read. The way that the main characters interact together is just great. You never know what they’re gonna say or do next. At times it is so funny and others lots of action. I highly recommend this book.
January 23, 2019
Loved it
Can’t wait for book four to come out.The story flows really good together and the characters are great to follow
Can’t wait for book four to come out.The story flows really good together and the characters are great to follow
January 23, 2019
Always fun
Always fun. Look forward to the next book in the series.
Interesting adventures and wondering where the group will be off to next
Always fun. Look forward to the next book in the series.
Interesting adventures and wondering where the group will be off to next
January 28, 2019
Well Done!
A very well written third book in this series. Props to Eric Vall for continuing to tell a great story in this series!
A very well written third book in this series. Props to Eric Vall for continuing to tell a great story in this series!
February 3, 2019
A good, but not great story
This 3rd book was a little too easy for the main characters, with few real challenges. Hopefully the 4th book restores the series.
This 3rd book was a little too easy for the main characters, with few real challenges. Hopefully the 4th book restores the series.
February 15, 2019
Great series!
Very interesting concept for a series of books. Characters are very likable and the story flows very well. Can't wait for 4!
Very interesting concept for a series of books. Characters are very likable and the story flows very well. Can't wait for 4!
March 18, 2019
Read this series
This is a good book. You should read it. I like the story. The characters are fun. Enjoy the growing family.
This is a good book. You should read it. I like the story. The characters are fun. Enjoy the growing family.
May 4, 2019
Awesome
This was a great addition. The story is getting better and better. I can only imagine how the next book will add to the story.
This was a great addition. The story is getting better and better. I can only imagine how the next book will add to the story.
May 9, 2019
Awesome series
Awesome story cool characters. Backstory of characters are great. Can't wait to read the next book in the series. The main character is Awesome
Awesome story cool characters. Backstory of characters are great. Can't wait to read the next book in the series. The main character is Awesome
July 15, 2019
Sexist rubbish - I love it!
The most blatant sexist self brandishing rubbish I have ever read.
Cant put it down - Help!
No doubt i will be reading the rest of Eric Vall's books!
The most blatant sexist self brandishing rubbish I have ever read.
Cant put it down - Help!
No doubt i will be reading the rest of Eric Vall's books!
August 22, 2019
Boo Yah!!
This was an amazing book, and I feel bad for taking so long to get to it. Looking forward to the next book in the series from a great author.
This was an amazing book, and I feel bad for taking so long to get to it. Looking forward to the next book in the series from a great author.
October 15, 2019
Great 3rd book
Well, the third step into this series was great.
The cast was still great and Annalíse’s character event was interesting.
Going to read the fourth book.
Well, the third step into this series was great.
The cast was still great and Annalíse’s character event was interesting.
Going to read the fourth book.
February 16, 2020
Passionate and thrilling
So amazing! I love the thrill of this one and the passion that builds between all of them. Onto the next!!
So amazing! I love the thrill of this one and the passion that builds between all of them. Onto the next!!
February 6, 2021
Excellent!
I have been binge reading this series for the past week or so and have enjoyed every minute of reading.
I'm already looking forward to the next book!
I have been binge reading this series for the past week or so and have enjoyed every minute of reading.
I'm already looking forward to the next book!
November 9, 2022
Great
This was a great addition to the series about time that all the ladies are part of his harem it took long enough lol great read simple yet alluring all the same
This was a great addition to the series about time that all the ladies are part of his harem it took long enough lol great read simple yet alluring all the same
August 7, 2025
Good story
Really enjoyed the series and story! Can't wait to dive into the next one! The characters are so fun and interesting to read. What new adventure await?
Really enjoyed the series and story! Can't wait to dive into the next one! The characters are so fun and interesting to read. What new adventure await?
February 1, 2019
Loved it
A great book from this great series. I always love this MC and his Harem of adventurers. Can't wait to read the next one.
A great book from this great series. I always love this MC and his Harem of adventurers. Can't wait to read the next one.
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