To be honest, I wanted to read the newest book in the series more, but I got this first one for free, so decided to just dive in from the start.
I must admit, it's probably not the most ridiculous book I've ever read, bit it comes damn close. The writing itself wasn't bad, but the story?! My god, what happened to this story?!
I don't have any problem with how the book started (spoiler: with a hero having a foreplay with a woman, while our heroine called him to ask for his security service). See, they used to be lovers 12 years ago, but the heroine broke up with the hero back then. Now they just apparently hated each other. Her: because of WHY she left; him: because of HOW she left. Even though we didn't get to know the WHY just yet, it came later.
A cute (and a bit kinky) setting for a second chance, but also an enemies-to-lovers romance?
No.
It was supposed to be an action packed romance (or erotica) or whatever. Well, it did get a bit suspenseful, yet the execution was so bad, I felt like the author was a very young person, who kinda got an idea of how security, hacking and chasing should work, but then slammed all possible clichès in together and hoped for the best.
I think I've never read a more amateurish use of tech slang! Ever.
The main suspenseful event? Sorry, it was the dumbest thing ever and I'm not even gonna mention it (but read updates if you are really curious).
The characters went from hating to loving so fast, I could only shake my head. 12 years of resentment? Puff! Gone! Because they just got that magical CONNECTION, people. And don't get me started on the lackluster and lukewarm sex, ugh...
For whatever reason, every other side character was playing Dr. Phil here and was being very understanding, talkative and insightful (even the super badass ex-military and ex-special-force guys).
"You want to talk about it?"
"I made a mistake, I absolutely get it now!!"
"You are a wonderful man!"
"She probably did it out of love and loyalty."
Yeah.
By the way, the title was not once mentioned in the book.
I still want to read the one with a hacker, but damn, I'm just afraid it's going to be lost time again... I'm not rating this one, because I got it for free and don't want to be hateful, but if I'd bought it, it'd be somewhere around 2 stars for me.