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His Mate and His Mistress: Book 1

(His Mate and His Mistress #1)

3.65  ·  Rating details ·  1,779 ratings  ·  157 reviews
Alpha Demitrey Jackson felt on top of the world. He was Alpha of one of the Largest wolf Packs In North America, he was wealthy, and had a beautiful mistress. Yes, a mistress, not a mate, he never wanted one. No one knew why, yet no one questioned his decision. When a smaller pack was being threatened by rogues, he was asked to help, and so a peace treaty was signed ...more
Kindle Edition, 420 pages
Published May 13th 2018

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Richa Dagar
Nov 03, 2018 rated it did not like it
Shelves: erotica, werewolves
It's the first time I am leaving a review, I have never done it before for any book. The reason being the disappointment of buying and reading this book. I never paid such a high price for any book, ever. It's an immature writing. It's like reading different stories within a book itself. There is no flow in the story. No proper reasoning is given behind most of the main turnarounds in the book. I am never going to read any book written by this author, ever. The book is definitely not worth the ...more
Madelynn Smith
Nov 26, 2018 rated it did not like it
Awful

I found this book via Facebook advertising.
The blurb seemed interesting and I eventually tracked it down via Amazon/Kindle to avoid installing a book app I neither wanted or trusted.
I never write reviews. This time I felt compelled to save someone the trouble of reading it.
It was seriously the worst book I’ve ever read. Poorly written, unnecessary back and forth drama, plot twist that a child could see coming and so unbelievable as to be laughable.
There were a few elements that could
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Brandi
The overall concept for the book is relatively interesting, which is the only reason I'm willing to give it two stars (instead of just one). The parts that I'm not comfortable with (and, in fact, hate) are where Demitrey abuses Adelina. I don't care what his reasons were (which are addressed later in the book); he could've been cold and standoffish towards her instead of physically (and verbally) abusing her.

Despite the description on Amazon stating that "this book has been revised and edited,"
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Gam
Aug 13, 2018 rated it really liked it
Book is not finished

I thought the book would have finished the story but paying 5.99 for a book that is only part of the story is not for me. When I start reading a book I like to complete it. It should have been indicated on amazon that this book is the first part of a series or something.
Tammy Krause
Dec 27, 2018 rated it liked it
Big highs, big lows.

First off, I want to give kudos
to the author. Not only is the storyline quite good, there is an obvious amount of thought that went into this book. There are some obvious cliches, but the thing about cliches is that they exist because they work.
However, there is no way that this book is worth the price. The best way to describe it is that it feels like a rough draft. The book has potential, but it seems like it was never proofread. It needs serious polishing, rewording, and
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Courtney Payne
Sep 10, 2018 rated it did not like it
To read my full review please go to https://opinionatedbw.blogspot.com/
I took a chance, spent $8 on this book (which is expensive for an ebook, usually I get two for this price!) and was beyond disappointed.
Bela
Sep 22, 2018 rated it it was ok
Shelves: did-not-finish
Burb got me hooked, but it was wrong. It was like super small part of the book. Maybe 30% and then endless drama and round-and-round we go. End with cliffhanger but no second book. Bad quality and expensive. Not worth the money
Trishia
Good plot, terrible execution. Not worth the money.
Chetna Patil
Aug 26, 2018 rated it it was amazing
Shelves: chetu
Very nice book
Tina
Jan 21, 2019 rated it really liked it
Good book

The storyline is a really good one. I normally do not pay for books because of kindle unlimited. I was not happy about the price of the book considering there are a lot of mispelled words.
Zhed Ventura
Sep 06, 2018 rated it liked it
I want to read this book but can’t read it. How can i read it
Aruna Mahadeo
Jan 18, 2019 rated it it was ok
Omg... really?

I found this book on an app called Dreame but then I decided to waste $5.99 to buy it because I thought it was great. What I didn't know at the time is the editing is horrifying as well as the layout of the book. Also, it is so contradictory. The author couldn't make up her mind and didn't think certain things through. For instance, the Luna is 5'2 and I am assuming the Alpha is a huge guys about 6 feet or more. Yet the Luna was able to pin the alpha down and blah blah blah. I
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Caitlin
May 14, 2019 rated it did not like it
Horrible

Full of abuse ( physical, emotional, and sexual) horrible writting, bad world building, lots of tell not show (info dumps galore)and POV changes marked with "so and so's 1st person POV" . I've read much better fan fiction than this crap, it never should have seen the light of day.
claire
Oct 03, 2018 rated it it was amazing
A must read

Oh wow i couldn't out my kindle down, such a great story would definitely recommend everyone to reading this book
Cydney
Dec 09, 2019 rated it it was ok
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Em
Nov 29, 2018 rated it did not like it
Don’t.

Even reading the few reviews that were posted, I decided that the book interested me enough to give it a try. I thought, how bad can it be? I can ignore spelling and grammar mistakes as long as the book is interesting. Well I was wrong. Apparently if there are enough errors, it will pull you out of the story.

Now the story itself had potential. Unfortunately the further I read the more I realized it felt like a teenager was writing her first novel. Everything was unrealistic, from
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Jo Hartley
Dec 12, 2019 rated it did not like it
I don't know who credited this book with good ratings, but clearly they were folks who didn't pay attention in English class. This is perhaps one of the worst books I've read, based on the butchering of the English language alone. If English is her second or third language I will give her a pass, but add that she has no business writing in the language. She clearly doesn't have a qualified critique partner, nor an editor. If I can teach anything in this short time, I would beseech her to learn ...more
Andrea Thompson
I kept seeing teasers for this story and wanted to see what it was about. It sounded like it was something I would enjoy. I stuck with it because I have a hard time DNF anything, and less than great reviews are also really difficult for me because there's a real person who wrote this. But this was genuinely hard to read.

There's potential here, but so much just needs revised, polished, tweaked. The editing is lacking in huge ways. The dialogue is rough. The characters come off very juvenile and
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Whitney Morgan
May 22, 2019 rated it did not like it
Terrible

Literally couldn't make it half way into the book. First, the whole story line is rushed and is written in a sloppy, unorganized way. When this book came up in my recommended reads, I was intrigued with the story line and decided to give it a read. It continually switches point of views, literally in the middle of a chapter numerous times and reads as if it's the first draft instead of a published book. I would recommend that the author take time to develop each character and time to
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June
Jan 17, 2019 rated it did not like it
It has potential

This could of been a great story but there was so may mistakes it not worth the money i had to pay for it. If only this author got someone to proof read it. The last part of the book just kept going round and round in circles (so annoying). Another thing why did Kat end up hating her? There was no reason behind it other then you need another spy. I hope you read this Irtania Adrien please get a couple of your friends to proof read your work then you don't have to pay someone to
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Katie
Jul 18, 2019 rated it did not like it
Proof Read Definitely Required

This story has the potential to be so so good! Unfortunately, the bad spelling, grammar and flip-flopping between the characters human name and wolf name ruin it. Details were not thought through properly, for instance how would Adelina know about the special tea at The Spot if it was her first visit! How many times is one girl going to be betrayed by those closest to her? I did read it all because I wanted to see how it ended and I’m glad I didn’t pay for it. Not
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Chloe
Apr 10, 2019 rated it did not like it
Omg. Why couldn’t I put this down? It was literally like a train wreck that I couldn’t help but watch out of morbid curiousity. In all fairness I didn’t hate the characters, or the plot but it was so horribly told that I laughed at the pure ridiculousness of it on more than one occasion.

It has the perfect set up for a fave.. but like I said it was so horribly told... like I honestly think she had a few big things she outlined to happen then added random words in between each.

Kudos to this
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Tiana
Feb 27, 2019 rated it it was ok
Dude, no.
Not even my bipolar moods could keep up with this book, there were so many times i started to almost like this only to be kicked in the vag by frustration.
I'm not implying that it's a bad book (though it did have its moments), it's just seriously what the hell man, got me over here angry crying bad because i'm so frustrated with this book... AND I CANT DO SHIT ABOUT IT!! except vent it out on here right now without trying to be extremely offensive. Soooo yeah, other than that the book
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Danielle Wassell
Jan 13, 2020 rated it did not like it
Just no

Where do I even begin? I wouldn’t give it a whole star if possible. The glaringly obvious lack of editing in this book made it very difficult to read. Then there’s Adelina, who is portrayed as someone much younger and extremely immature. That alone was off putting. Add in constant bickering between Demitrey and Adelina and the result is a book with a predictable and worn out plot. I’ve never felt compelled to skip a whole chapter in a book, except for this one. And not just one chapter. I
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Shemeka Mitchell
Aug 16, 2019 rated it really liked it
Moon Goddess

I started reading this book on a reading app that only unlocks one chapter a day. The beginning was good and it had my complete attention. So, I found it on Amazon and bought it. Tthe first half was interesting, but then the story became repetitive quite a bit. I really liked the Alpha's character. The Luna's character started pussing me off quite a bit towards the end. I want to know what happens next in the story, but I'm not willing to buy it. This one wasn't worth the amount I
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Morgan Viars
Jul 20, 2019 rated it liked it
Predictable but still a good read

I would have given this book 4 stars if it didn’t have so many typos. The story at times is predictable, but still keeps you interested because of the undeniable chemistry between mates. If you enjoy a werewolf romance with a little bit of romance and just a pinch of sex, you’ll enjoy this book (even with all the grammar and spelling errors). I’m planning on reading the second installment and crossing my fingers that the author invested in a program with grammar
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Susan Cook
May 14, 2019 rated it it was ok
Needs a lot of editing and a singular perspective.

The story could have been good but the constant change from narrative perspective, jumping from first to third person greatly reduced readability. The chapter separation should have been better marked. Having the story edited and beta tested before publishing in the future would greatly help the writer. This is not to dishearten the story teller but hopefully this is just some suggestions to help in a long and successful career.
Natalie Peters
Aug 19, 2019 rated it did not like it
My pnt. of view

I’ve never read a book quite like this. At the start and sometimes several times mid chapter the book tells you who’s point of view you are now in and it jumps from first to third person. Sorry but if you need to explain it’s not written well enough. It doesn’t help that in one chapter it says third person POV then starts with “I ....”. The characters thought process is all over the place and tedious to read.

Abandoned half way.

There is so much effort been put into this book but
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Alicia Castillo
May 24, 2019 rated it it was amazing
OMG. What a awesome book.

I'm going crazy with all the twist and turns in Adelinas's life. Our poor girl deserves a break, but Fate Karl's playing games with her and Demitri's life. Wow I was devastated when Peter turn to be the bad guy, I really like him and Clarissa uurg! She's the villain the no one was expecting to be.A t dirt I really hate Demitri's guts because he was a big, jerk Alhpa's wolf that it seems to enjoy hurting Adelina, but our girl is a fighter and she never give up. Let's see
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Alexandra
Dec 20, 2019 rated it did not like it
Manipulative, abusive, controlling ... “alpha males” like the main love interest end up killing their women in domestic violence. This is not loving, not romantic, and not sexy. This is the sort of book I’d hope no young impressionable person would read thinking it loving.

Dads raping daughters - but her sisters are sluts bc they allow it but she fights back? That’s not a spoiler it’s just some random added detail in the first chapter about her tragic life. No. Just no. Any victim of incest is
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