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EDITED FOR ERRORS
Sophia Briar is a lone wolf. On her own since her parents died at age fourteen, Sophia isn't used to being around other shifters. In fact, the one time she did run into a pack, she met her mate - and he rebuffed her. Sophia's fended for herself all these years, and now, in Michigan, she's desperate to create a new life for herself. The only problem? It
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Kindle Edition, 367 pages
Published March 7th 2018
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♡Tonya♡
An "alpha" who not only rejects his mate, but sleeps around until he finds her again? Get out of here with that
Ana Laura
May 05, 2018 rated it did not like it
ANYONE F*KING STAR FOR THIS S*IT!!! This book is a GARBAGE! I can not understand how women can describe guys like this as being the hero of the story !!!! I do not even have where to start to say how much I hated this liar, weak, stupid. misogynist piece of s*it, that can't be called a man! I read thinking that there would be a change, but all I saw was him treating her like trash and the fool holding on to everything and STILL FEELING GUILTY AND ASKING FOR EXCUSES !!!! There is no other word ...more
Fre06 Begum
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Sam~OTT Alpha Male Addict~
Oct 21, 2018 rated it did not like it
Lord knows I tried with this one...but Hero is just a douche...
I couldn’t even finish it, sorry to say...
If mates are God’s gift, why would you not claim yours and leave her to suffer alone for years? And you continue to fck around? With your secretary?

heroine should just have ended up with the Hero’s brother, at least HE knew what a treasure she was upon meeting her
 ♡♡~Cyborg-Scifi-Lover~♡♡
It was okay.
At some point I thought (view spoiler)
לירון דרורי
Apr 12, 2018 rated it really liked it
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CeCe
The MCs met 5 years earlier when the heroine was 14 and the hero was much older. The heroine knew that the hero was her mate, but he ignored her and went off with his girlfriend, Roxanne. 5 years later, the heroine and the hero meet again. The hero at this point tries to prove to the heroine that he made a mistake. During the 5 year separation he was with OW and his "girlfriend" Roxanne. This did not bother me as much as the hero's wishy washy behavior at time.

This was an okay read. Yes, Mase
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Angela Dudley
Apr 19, 2018 rated it it was amazing
Read in one day

I couldn't get enough, and I'm sad it ended. I will say that I'll be trying some of these scenes with my sweetheart.
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Kayleigh Lewis
Aug 19, 2018 rated it liked it
I have to start with this;
In the description it states the ebook has been edited for errors, if that is the case then I dread to think how many errors were in it before. In the epilogue alone we had a hoofed animal & a seaman. I'm pretty sure neither were actually meant, considering it was their mating ceremony & Sophia was in heat. There is also a mathematical word used, in a situation which had absolutely nothing to do with maths! The amount of typos was pretty terrible too! I don't
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Liliana
Mar 18, 2018 rated it it was amazing
Story is interesting and sweet ,really enjoyed it and I'm looking forward to read next book from Albany!
BookPauper
May 11, 2019 rated it did not like it
Spoilery ramble ahead








Sophia was a good character, until I realized she was always going to a bit of a doormat to her spitwad of a mate. Then I only pitied her because she has a mate bond with a turdwaffle. Seriously, he runs into his mate and walks away. Yes she was underage and I’m not saying anything sexual should have happened but, he KNOWS she’s his mate. He walks away and just leaves her. Doesn’t keep tabs on her. Assumes she’ll be there later when she’s of age (which she wasn’t). In the
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Jo Adams
Feb 20, 2019 rated it liked it
Ok

Needs a good edit again as a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes still.
Lots of hot scenes,maybe to much,never fully find out stuff which bugged me!
Louise
Dec 24, 2019 rated it did not like it
This is not good. So many errors in the text that the reading spell gets removed from you all the damn time, zipping you back into reality with a thud. Commas are thrown in where they shouldn’t be and missing from key sentences. Even if we set aside the fact that there are spelling and grammar mistakes littered throughout this book - although my favourite was ‘I didn’t have any numbers mesmerised’ and calling rogues ‘rouges’ hahahahhahaha - the author seems to tick through everything expected in ...more
Jennifer Clark
Mar 09, 2018 rated it liked it
It was alright.

This is the first story I read by this author, whom I'm assuming is new to the scene. While there was nothing spectacular about this particular book, it's definitely worth reading if you like rejection/second change stories. The MC was way to understanding and forgiving in my opinion after what she went through. Masen had believable reasoning that wasn't the cliche "I'm not ready" or "I just don't want you" excuse. I wish we had learned more about what exactly had happened with
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S
Aug 03, 2019 rated it liked it
Shelves: ku-loans, 2019
Hmm, I Don't Know

This book was somewhat different from other wolf shifter books. Sophia was a child (just turned fourteen) that hasn't gone through her first shift when she realized Masen was her mate. He was a grown man and walked away to give her time to grow and be with her family before she had to become an Alpha mate. She watched him walk out of a pub, but never connected that her age was the reason he left her. There's a lot of emphasis placed on her Alpha-like behavior. There are no
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Egle Stiklakyte
May 06, 2018 rated it it was amazing
Absolutely love this book. The characters are very interesting, each with their own minds and opinions. Also the main characters Sophia and Masen! She is so cool and friendly and cute! But can stand up for herself and wont let anyone walk over her head...and Masen, well he will definitely make you feel torn between loving him and wanting give him a good kick in the behind, but i still couldn't help but fall in love with him too!
The best part is that this book has it all that all romantics want
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JadeShea
Becoming His begins when the heroine finds her mate, however, she's very young and doesn't understand a few things. Then tragedy strikes, and she's forced to come to terms with being on her own. Many years later she ends up running into him again, these two must figure things out before it is too late for her.

I liked this book, and I thought it was overall good. However, I really thought the hero was a selfish asshole at times, and I hated the other woman drama as well. Other than that, I
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Michele
Mar 10, 2018 rated it it was amazing
Good book

I liked this book it's a good read. Loved Sofie an Mason. And of course sniffer. Paranormal readers would love this.
I. Elaine
Jun 21, 2019 rated it it was amazing
Shifter

This was my first time reading this kind of book. I enjoyed it and will be reading more like it .
Lynn's books
Jan 18, 2020 rated it liked it
Scratching my head on this one...

I love fierce wolves and how they react to finding their mates. I thought this sounded really intriguing when I read the synopsis so I dove in. When we meet Masen the alpha, he is a powerfully written character. Tough and fierce...just the way I like them. I hate weak alphas. Sophia is almost 14 years old so he walks away from the shock of knowing his mate is a child. Hmm.? Interesting and almost noble since she is so young. She's devastated though as you would
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Kita Morrigan
Apr 25, 2019 rated it liked it
I Don’t Know...

This book seemed very promising but I really can’t make up my mind if I hated it or liked it. Sophia was a very interesting character and she was the reason I even finished the book.
This book started off great... and then Masen has to ruin it. He was the worst male character I think I’ve ever read. I mean I’ve read a lot of werewolf and fantasy stories, and most of them have a dominant male. But, come on! He’s got to be the most controlling and annoying werewolf EVER!!!
The second
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Shavonna
Jan 13, 2020 rated it it was ok
Two stars, only because I like the author

First off, I'd like to say that I absolutely ADORE this author and would recommend reading some of her other book to anyone, she can really draw you into a book and keep you hooked from start to finish.

However this book was not for me. I had a really hard time connecting or even sympathizing with the MCs in this book. Our H was more of an cheating alphahole than anything. He deliberately cheats on out MFC because how dare she be underaged when he finds
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Sandy Newman
May 13, 2019 rated it really liked it
You dont see many books like this.

Sophia's 14th birthday she finds her mate but he rejects her. Just a few short weeks later she loses both of her loving parents. As an orphan with no other family she is placed in foster care and moved from one home to another. She is now of age and a lone wolf trying to make her way in life. She moves to Michigan to attend college. She ends up meeting 2 other wolves. She is super nervous cuz her parents never gave her much info about packs and pack rules. She
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Victoria
Sep 25, 2018 rated it liked it
Good read

This was a good read. Not my favorite. There was a lot of errors, and it says it has been edited again so whoever edited missed a lot. Besides spelling some sentences didn’t make any sense. It still had a good storyline so I read past that.

What I didn’t like is that nothing happened to the rogue. They just forgot about him. Which felt empty. There’s no way he would just let what that guy did go and make sure he didn’t do it to another person. Also at the end there was a part where they
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Kereana
Aug 20, 2018 rated it liked it
Thought it was just ok

Sophia was a lone wolf, her parents died when she was 13 or 14. It was a couple weeks after she met her mate. Masen is Sophie mate, because she was only young he walked away from her. This kinda made Sophia feel a little rejected, spose anyone wld feel that way. Anyways years later she meets back up with her mate. I actually really liked the story rite up to this part. I knew Sophia was special and it's even mentioned that a lot in the book but the book doesn't actually
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lauren
Apr 30, 2019 rated it really liked it
Kinda enjoyed it

Ok ok, yes I read the reviews, yes this needs a proofreader badly, misspelled words like crazy!!! But all in all I loved this book, truly I did, I had an issues with the the misleading of our heroine as a alpha, she might have been different and spunky, but I wouldn't call her an alpha in anyway. I also thought she forgave this guy way to much, he had his jerk moments, a lot, and what he did for them 5 years, I don't know if I could have forgave him, man whore is putting it very
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Ari Reavis
2.5 star's

This story could have been better had it been for one thing.... The heroine having some damn backbone. She's so hurt and mad and 1 paragraph later she's forgiving and understanding, no matter what the 'hero' does. And he was major asshole. Major. I did like the mystery of the other pack moving in and wanting her for whatever reason, but the ending wasn't executed very well and really had no solution for this part. Lots of parts weren't explained fully and that really annoyed me.
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Cheronda G.
Aug 18, 2018 rated it it was amazing
Actually a good read

I almost didn't read this book because of the reviews and that would have sucked because it was actually a pretty good book. Yea Mason made some mistakes but who doesn't. He didnt treat her like shit because he was an asshole he juat sucked at handling the new emotions that came with their relationship. Sofia was strong and never let him get away with treating her badly she just didnt jold a grudge when he proved he understood his fuck ups. Not spoiling- his past ducked and
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Jess
Nov 29, 2018 rated it liked it
Good, easy read

The book was easy enough to read. I liked it but just felt like there was more to be said. They kept mentioning she was a white wolf which seemed significant but they never explained why. There also wasn't much conflict, and if so it was resolved pretty quickly so there was never those moments of "oh my gosh I have to keep reading". It just went through her day to day life which was kind of boring at some parts. Several typos and it was a little too mushy for my taste as well.
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HilZie
Feb 15, 2020 rated it liked it
What a story

There are werewolves fated mate stories and then there are werewolves fated mate stories with plot twist you don't see coming. This story has a lot of backstory that is pretty important to understanding the characters and their decisions, thought processes. The another does a good job incorporating that into the present plot. I did, however, think she left other parts hanging (odd characters). For example differing rogue statements not matching up being alluding possibly meaning
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