Don't Take This Sinner

by hexmionegranger

Hermione Granger couldn’t help but think that no matter how difficult they had all figured rebuilding their society would be, no one was expecting anything quite like this. It was another stark reminder that just when things were finally starting to level out, they would never truly have peace and stability. Her entire life in the magical world had been full of shocks and stumbles, and this one seemed like the biggest of them all.

A post-war Dramione marriage law fic... with a twist!

Genres: Fan Fiction, Fantasy

ebook

Reviews

[Hayden Hamby · Rating 4 out of 5]

4.25 stars. I really liked this marriage law trope with a difficult twist. I wish they had given us a little bit more of the law twist they found out, but overall it was really good.

[Tee · Rating 4 out of 5]

Marriage law but with a really fascinating twist. As soon as the twist came, I was hooked. I’ve personally never read marriage law done like this before and it added a bit of spice to a trope I already enjoy

[Ilona Haku · Rating 5 out of 5]

Wow, this was really...REALLY good. Loved how the author used quotes from the classics in dialogues between Hermione and Draco, especially the quotes from Jane Austin´s books.
I must say that some parts of the book got me pretty excited and giddy, some parts made me giggling like a teenage girl. It was a book that made sacrifice sleep after a long time. The writing style was a style of intelectual person who is pretty good with processing and conveying emotions. I dont really know how to describe it, but it was a writing style that got me into the reading "zone" when I was only focused on words running on the page, when I was deep in the story and felt strongly what was happening.

I dint expect anything superb, I thought it would be only one of the fanfics using marriage law trop, but I was so wrong. The twist Draco being matched with Ginny at the beginning was something that stole my breath and made me thrilled to read more. I also appreciated it that it tried to look into some things closer to the realistic situation - here the magic matching the wizards could fail, the matching wasnt finding a soulmate, it was matching based on some criterias of officials, here the matching had flaws and Hermione was trying to overturn it which added another layer to the story. I mean it was focused only on the romance.
And the ending? WOOOOW Draco giving his sear in Wizengamot so she could change and make new laws. /spoiler>And the confessions and their wedding promises? It was like living a dream! So perefect and damn romantic! I was almost tearing.

The only thing that I felt was a little bit out of place was Draco´s alcohol problem which could have been looked into more. Happy that there was part where Hermione took care of Draco who collapsed after drinking too much after his fathers death.

I was a little bit worried by the beginning when Draco and Hermione were fighting with words, but fortunately besides that one occassion they interaction wasnt anything crazy. I also liked how Draco behaved towards Ginny. It was great to see a mature and a kind man in Draco. The smut was very, very good!
But how come this author doesnt have another long completed Dramione fanfic? D: D: D:

[Deljah · Rating 3 out of 5]

I enjoyed the story overall. It was cute. The story had Draco and Hermione quoting poetry and literature to each other throughout. There were 2 plot points i had questions about (floo and how the wedding rings worked for everyone). Hermione had dark skin in this one and was a descendant of slaves, as referenced in the text. Like me I guess.

[Ceilidhchaos · Rating 4 out of 5]

It's a Marriage Law AU, but different. The first several chapters are sloooooowww burn and I almost DNF before the Dramione kicks off, but once it gets going it is hot and good and the quote pride and prejudice and vonnegut and Lao tzu and Kahlil Gibran to each other. Also I love anything where Draco gets tattoos (extra plus for the language of flowers). GUEST STARS: Lunsy and Deamus!

[Kate · Rating 5 out of 5]

4.75 Stars!!
My first fanfic and it had me hooked! Read in 2 days and the only thing I would change would be the ending....just seemed a little too easy/sweet. But the beginning and plot were top notch! And overall I really enjoyed the relationships, plot, spics and HEA! ♥️

[steph_readssometimes · Rating 3 out of 5]

Marriage law fic with a twist. It was a good read, but i didn't love it. I'd still recommend it tho

[Alex · Rating 3 out of 5]

A different take on a marriage law fic. It could’ve been a little shorter, but overall it was just okay for me.

[Sarang Yadav · Rating 4 out of 5]

3.75stars

A good story. A sort of short story. Loved the characters and its development.

[Sarah · Rating 3 out of 5]

Cute. Enjoyable but not amazing.

[Bárbara · Rating 2 out of 5]

I love Draco on this but the pacing was a bit off in my opinion

[Kathrin · Rating 3 out of 5]

Marriage law with a twist. Like with most of the other Fics I could have done without the last chapter. I guess I'm just not one for epilogues... 😅

[K Wheeler · Rating 3 out of 5]

Fun if you’re stuck in a marriage law phase

[Hannah • So Obsessed With · Rating 4 out of 5]

3.5 stars

[Sam Sarsfield]

DNF

[Ashley · Rating 2 out of 5]

2.5