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184 pages, Kindle Edition
First published June 1, 2008
"In the silence, I sense rather than see his lips draw on the smoky pleasure, tingling tar and need wafting into his waiting lungs.
"When I’m naked, I gaze at my image for a long time, trying to see myself as if I’m someone else. There are many things here that Dominic would remember: my face, thin and narrow, a throwback to my paternal grandfather; green eyes framed by short, almost black hair— a wolf on the hunt so another lover told me once; a long body, dark wavy chest hair leading down to strong, muscular legs; an average cock, not too small, thank God, though I’ve always wished it larger. Don’t we all?
"And five years, ten months, and five days in my job...
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I’d be seeing him again— at his request— in five days’ time for an initial opinion meeting. In five days, four hours and…
Subtracting one star for present tense. Authors, don't do this! It throws me out of the story every single time.
I understand that Paul is an unreliable narrator, but part of the pleasure of reading a mystery is that the author gives me the same clues that the narrator sees so that I can solve the mystery. I didn't even know what the mystery was, much less how to solve it, until Paul flat-out told me. I found this very frustrating.
I seriously doubt I'll pick up the second in the series, though I would really like to know what happened to Paul's sister.