Green Valley was once known for its fertile farming, picturesque mountains, and abundant wildlife. Now snow and ice cover all but the tallest homes. The only sounds are Maverick’s boots clumping through the snowdrifts and the frigid wind hissing down the mountain. Even the beasts in the woods have gone utterly silent.
But the path forward is clear, especially for one emboldened by optimism. So Maverick keeps moving, trudging through the abandoned town toward the desolate tundra beyond the forest, marring the snow with his bloody footprints.
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The reader meets the narrator, Maverick, in the middle of a snowstorm. His cabin is in an isolated location, he’s growing weaker by the day, and he’s made the decision to leave the home he once shared with his wife, Christy. It’s evident as the story continues on that Christy did not die of natural causes and Maverick is paranoid about someone or something following him.
This is a short story with a bleak tone and is 99% inner monologue. I liked this author’s writing style but the ending was confusing. May re-read at another time.
I received this book as a proofreader. It is an easy read. Good when you are short on time, yet want a gripping read. The rich descriptions of the cold and snow will make you feel a chill to your bones! Sometimes we can't run away, no matter how hard we try!
All rather depressing. The descriptive passages were there in abundance to demonstrate that the author is very intelligent. Which was a shame, because the bleak imagery might have suited a more spartan writing style. Sometimes less is more, especially if you're trying to get a message across. It wasn't the wood that got in the way, it was the words.
I could feel the cold from this story deep in my own bones. O'Flynn did a superb job of making me wonder what the central character was running from. Someone? Something? Himself?? This is one of those stories that makes you second-guess yourself so that you have to go back and read it again.
Crimson Snow is a dystopian short story by Meghan O’Flynn that I liked especially for several passages of description. Here is one example that occurs in the first few pages and led me to say “Wow, I wonder if she continues this type of writing throughout the story?”
“Hidden behind clouds, the rising sun bleached the heavens a pale, sickly gray and turned every barren tree into a slash of black against the dusty sky, as if a bear had torn the tapestry of the horizon with razor-sharp claws.” (Kindle Locations 32-34).
Maverick was a survivor. An ex-military type who had survived many dangerous missions and situations, he was left with a negative perspective on many things when he thought about them. But he didn’t think about them. Maverick relied on instinct. His “philosophy” might vary in words but it boiled down to “No thoughts. Only action. Action was his only hope.” (Kindle Locations 285-286). His wife, Cristy, had a different viewpoint. No matter the action, there was something good in everything. She may have been right, but she was also dead. Maverick was left alone to survive in a severely altered world.
Maverick wasn’t sure what had happened or what was carrying the sickness that killed everyone in the town of Green alley. As far as he knew, Maverick was the last resident left. He, Cristy and Cristy’s brother Larry had moved to the semi-isolated area to become one with the land. That same quality of remoteness now made Maverick a kind of prisoner. He might make it to the next town of Crystal Bluff; he might find some food, or he might be captured or killed by the soldiers responsible for keeping the infected people inside a quarantine area
It was time to lock the door to his house (checking the lock twice) get his few possessions together and begin the eight-hour trek to Crystal Bluff. He would succeed as he always had if only he didn’t stop to think about it.
No thoughts. Only action.
This is an interesting short story that left me with a question. Does the ending of the story reflect Meghan O’Flynn’s view of life? I will be sure to read more of her work while I wonder how much of this is pure creative fiction and how much of it is an author’s point of view. I gave this four Amazon stars plus because of the powerful descriptive terms used when painting pictures of nature.
After reading It by Stephen King I needed something short to wind down. So short story time! I found this for free on Amazon and decided to give it a try.
Like in any short story there is of course no room for proper character development and world building and usually this doesn't really bother me, but here there just seemed to be something lacking. Sure there probably is a war going on and I don't need to know what kind of war. But there also seems to be a major natural catastrophe where entire villages are snowed in? And then there is the main character's weird realtionship with his brother in law... I don't know, there just seemed to be something missing in order for me to really enjoy it.
This short (very short) little niblet was good, and I loved how everything wasn't just told to me - left a little mystery about the main character's situation. The writing is also good - flowed well, great narrative, crazy character. Honestly just wished it was longer. Overall I liked it for the little read that it was.
Once an area of abundant farming and mountainous beauty, Green Valley has succumbed to copious amount of snow and ice, ushering in a pervasive quiet and emptiness. Despite the struggles and sacrifices that were needed to have been made, Maverick keeps moving forward, trying to find a temporary refuge in the kindness of the few remaining inhabitants for a place to warm up and eat. Both leaving and staying on the mountain spells danger for continued living and the trend is that no one leaves alive.
This short story sets up what could be a dark and interesting premise; however, the brief introduction to Maverick and the situation leaves too much unanswered, specifically as to how the world came to this point and just why people are so frightened to leave their homes or help others. Descriptive language made the cold, bleak setting come to life and while aspects to the story were presented in a manner that builds suspense there was a lack of context to help situate characters and events into the larger narrative, which could benefit from some further development.
This is an exciting short story about a soldier trying to survive in the frozen wilds of the mountains. He only encounters a few other humans but tries t0 avoid them as he hides from bands of other soldiers. The descriptions of his coldness are well written as are his mental gyrations. This is a decent short read.
I know this is a short story, but while the middle was super enthralling, the beginning was odd and the ending left me totally hanging. The bulk of the story, though, was really great and suspenseful. Overall, a great short read if you're limited on time or just want something to go through quickly.
Waste of time and effort. No storyline no ending. I'm just glad I didn't pay for it. Really and truly don't bother. I sometimes say about books I've read and not enjoyed - read it and make your own decision. I simply cannot recommend this short "story" in any shape or form....
I didn't enjoy this one as much as I did Rearview. Simply for the fact that this one felt more disjointed. It took entirely too long to even surmise what was going on. And it felt vaguely overdone. I gave it 3 stars simply for the writing style. I do like the author's descriptiveness. The imagery is very well done.
The story has the potential of being a good, post-apocalyptic story. The descriptions of the scenery are mesmerizing, but it falls flat because there is not a whole lot of character or story development.
This story was fantastic! I had no idea what to expect when I started it but, as usual, Meg took me on a dark and twisty path. It left me begging for more! I would love to see additional stories fleshed out in this post-apocalyptic world.
A short story of survival in a world gone crazy after an infection takes most people. Dark story dealing with the choices one must take as the end draws near. For those who read about the world after a catastrophe occurs.
A short story that leaves the Reader wondering what caused the contagen that quarantined this township and it's people. Happy reading..................Annemarie I received a free copy from the author and have chosen to leave a review.
What a waste of time... Story makes no sense whatsoever. Kept reading expecting some twist to happen. Those who are giving this 5 stars and calling it 'gripping' is really lost or heavily biased for some unknown reasons.
I loved the descriptions in this story, I was sucked in shivering, it is so well written. The suspense was never ending, I was turning pages like crazy. I loved Maverick and his story. This was an absolute triumph of a read.