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Commando
Screw the rules, I’m screwing her. Ava is off limits.
As the new bartender at The Lucky Lady, she’s protected by a Club rule I freaking hate.
Don’t hook up with the help.
But I can’t keep my eyes off of her.
And my hands? Well, they said I couldn’t sleep with her.
I’ll make sure we never sleep.
She has to feel the rumble of my bike between her legs.
And get off, again and again.
But if the Club finds out, she’s out of a job, and I’m as good as dead.
The President’s son, breaking the rules?
For her.
Anything.
Commando is a super steamy motorcycle romance. It has a HEA and NO Cliffhanger. There are a few bonus books for your reading pleasure (Including an EXCLUSIVE Book, Deep). Enjoy!
As the new bartender at The Lucky Lady, she’s protected by a Club rule I freaking hate.
Don’t hook up with the help.
But I can’t keep my eyes off of her.
And my hands? Well, they said I couldn’t sleep with her.
I’ll make sure we never sleep.
She has to feel the rumble of my bike between her legs.
And get off, again and again.
But if the Club finds out, she’s out of a job, and I’m as good as dead.
The President’s son, breaking the rules?
For her.
Anything.
Commando is a super steamy motorcycle romance. It has a HEA and NO Cliffhanger. There are a few bonus books for your reading pleasure (Including an EXCLUSIVE Book, Deep). Enjoy!
155 pages, Kindle Edition
Published July 19, 2017
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Nicole Elliot
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USA Today Bestselling Author, Nicole Elliot, is a superhero who writes steamy romance on the side.
Okay so maybe not totally true. But she does write romance, lots of it. And she loves every second of it.
She finally created a fan group on Facebook, she does post a lot of pictures of cats, you've been warned. https://www.facebook.com/groups/ybbki...
You can also join her Newsletter!
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August 3, 2017
Mc romance
He's the son of the mc president and she's the new hire at the bar. And he knows she's his -hot mc romance
He's the son of the mc president and she's the new hire at the bar. And he knows she's his -hot mc romance
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Blurb:
Screw the rules, I’m screwing her. Ava is off limits.
As the new bartender at The Lucky Lady, she’s protected by a Club rule I freaking hate.
Don’t hook up with the help.
But I can’t keep my eyes off of her.
And my hands? Well, they said I couldn’t sleep with her.
I’ll make sure we never sleep.
She has to feel the rumble of my bike between her legs.
And get off, again and again.
But if the Club finds out, she’s out of a job, and I’m as good as dead.
The President’s son, breaking the rules?
For her.
Anything.
Blurb:
Screw the rules, I’m screwing her. Ava is off limits.
As the new bartender at The Lucky Lady, she’s protected by a Club rule I freaking hate.
Don’t hook up with the help.
But I can’t keep my eyes off of her.
And my hands? Well, they said I couldn’t sleep with her.
I’ll make sure we never sleep.
She has to feel the rumble of my bike between her legs.
And get off, again and again.
But if the Club finds out, she’s out of a job, and I’m as good as dead.
The President’s son, breaking the rules?
For her.
Anything.
July 23, 2017
I loved this book. It was a very entertaining and sweet read, with a side of drama, action and hot loving. I'm overly picky when it comes to MC reads, but this was a book I really enjoyed reading. So definitely two thumbs up for this book.
April 2, 2018
3.25 STARS
July 27, 2017
Review Rating: 4.0 out of 5 stars.
A nice, quick & sexy read.
I received an Advance Reader Copy for Commando written by Nicole Elliot and Ellie Wild and voluntarily reviewed this book. “Commando” has been groomed his whole life to be ready when he steps up as the next leader of his MC. Power, respect, the bike, women. That was his whole world in a nutshell, taught at his father’s knee, the President of the Rogue Rebels. He steps into The Lucky Lady one day and spots a new girl tending bar, Ava. As soon as he saw her, he knew he felt differently about this one. But, unfortunately, Club rules are even stricter for him to follow and he is not allowed to have her like a regular groupie.
Ava was in hiding from an abusive now-ex-boyfriend, hiding out at her best friend’s place, studying and trying to make enough money at her new job to pay her way through Vet Tech. It was clear that there was interest in Commando’s eyes for her, but he always kept his distance from her…that is, until he notices some bruises left on her arm, left by her ex who found her and wanted something back from her.
With a serious club issue ramping up and finding out Ava’s ex knew her whereabouts, Commando offers his home to keep her safe and then all bets are off that he is able to keep his hands off her on his own turf and away from prying eyes.
Good MC story. Liked how Commando wanted different things with the woman he loved than what he had observed for his parents’ relationship.
A nice, quick & sexy read.
I received an Advance Reader Copy for Commando written by Nicole Elliot and Ellie Wild and voluntarily reviewed this book. “Commando” has been groomed his whole life to be ready when he steps up as the next leader of his MC. Power, respect, the bike, women. That was his whole world in a nutshell, taught at his father’s knee, the President of the Rogue Rebels. He steps into The Lucky Lady one day and spots a new girl tending bar, Ava. As soon as he saw her, he knew he felt differently about this one. But, unfortunately, Club rules are even stricter for him to follow and he is not allowed to have her like a regular groupie.
Ava was in hiding from an abusive now-ex-boyfriend, hiding out at her best friend’s place, studying and trying to make enough money at her new job to pay her way through Vet Tech. It was clear that there was interest in Commando’s eyes for her, but he always kept his distance from her…that is, until he notices some bruises left on her arm, left by her ex who found her and wanted something back from her.
With a serious club issue ramping up and finding out Ava’s ex knew her whereabouts, Commando offers his home to keep her safe and then all bets are off that he is able to keep his hands off her on his own turf and away from prying eyes.
Good MC story. Liked how Commando wanted different things with the woman he loved than what he had observed for his parents’ relationship.
July 26, 2017
This is a great MC romance story! Commando is one hot sexy muscular bike who is next in line to be president. Ava is a bit younger and coming out of a bad relationship. Once Ava finds a job bartendering at the Lucky bar that the MC owns does she see Commando and they can not keep their eyes off one another. Once Commando gets a taste of Ava her can not walk away, following rules was never his thing! Ava's past comes back and a rival gang both cause some issues but Commando takes Ava and keeps her safe and treats her like gold. It was wonderful to see how such a toughen Bike can give and show love to the one that holds his heart. Some really great books after to enjoy! I voluntarily received an Advanced Reader Copy of this book.
July 21, 2017
A must read for all lovers of romance not just the MC genre:
A fast paced, suspenseful, action filled plot that makes for an exceptional non-stop, page turning MC read. When the hardcore heir to the Rogue Rebels MC, Commando sees the sweet and abused Ava, sparks fly and their scorching chemistry and graphic scenes will have you reaching for a tall glass of ice water. And when Ava is in danger, the protective, dominant Commando will do anything to keep her safe. I highly recommend you add this book to your library as you will want to read it a second or maybe a third time.
I voluntarily reviewed an Advanced Reader Copy of this book.
A fast paced, suspenseful, action filled plot that makes for an exceptional non-stop, page turning MC read. When the hardcore heir to the Rogue Rebels MC, Commando sees the sweet and abused Ava, sparks fly and their scorching chemistry and graphic scenes will have you reaching for a tall glass of ice water. And when Ava is in danger, the protective, dominant Commando will do anything to keep her safe. I highly recommend you add this book to your library as you will want to read it a second or maybe a third time.
I voluntarily reviewed an Advanced Reader Copy of this book.
July 24, 2017
SHORT! This story was so short, nothing really exciting happened. They met, she started working for the clubs bar, they slept together, he told his father (who did nothing), HEA. I was not excited about anything in this story and was disappointed. This had so many great reviews. The writing was well done with only a couple if editing errors but tge story was so flat...oh and it ended at 20% in. I read it in less then a hour. The book is packed with extras from other stories to fill what I expected to be a full length story. It is not! So bummed most likely will not read these authors again unless I am sure what I am getting. I feel dooped all round with this story.
July 25, 2017
Had the privilege of reading an arc copy. Commando is the next in line to be president of his MC. He never expected to find a woman he would ever want to spend any amount of time with other than a couple hours at night. Ava was just getting out of a bad relationship and never wanted to see another man. But as soon as Commando walked into the bar she had just gotten a job at. She couldn't stop staring at him. He couldn't believe that such a beautiful woman existed. They both stared at each other and couldn't get away from it. They found a way to be together and not break any rules. Love is strong no matter how much you try to ignore it.
July 31, 2017
🔥👍🔥 Really 3.5 stars - Sorry
Constructive criticism only - Commando was a little different MC romance that I'm normally use to. I have really tried to think what the problem is with this book & the only things that I can state is that the tone / atmosphere / setting was just weird & not well defined. It was difficult to really feel that this was an MC romance, but more of a bar romance. If this is going to continue as a series, the author really needs to better describe the location like if this is in a big city, which country, as well as the MC lifestyle.
There were other books included that I totally enjoyed & recommend which is why I gave this a 4 star review.
Constructive criticism only - Commando was a little different MC romance that I'm normally use to. I have really tried to think what the problem is with this book & the only things that I can state is that the tone / atmosphere / setting was just weird & not well defined. It was difficult to really feel that this was an MC romance, but more of a bar romance. If this is going to continue as a series, the author really needs to better describe the location like if this is in a big city, which country, as well as the MC lifestyle.
There were other books included that I totally enjoyed & recommend which is why I gave this a 4 star review.
July 26, 2017
Ava is in a rough spot in her life, so she will take just about any job she can to survive. Commando is the President's son for the biker club that meets at Lucky Lady. They have one strict rule, no sleeping with the hired help. But when he sees her, he knows he has to have her. Then trouble starts with her ex-boyfriend and a war starts with a rival club. Can he keep her safe from her ex, and stop the war while keeping himself safe. I loved the dynamics and feelings from these two. I voluntarily read an Advanced Reader Copy of this book.
August 1, 2017
I voluntarily reviewed an advanced reader copy of this book. This is my honest opinion.
This book is a very short but well written story. The story pulled me in immediately and I couldn't stop reading till the end. Thank god it was a short book. This is a forbidden romance based on the rules of the MC. The story is swift moving with action, steam, and many tough and memorable characters. I would recommend this book to anyone who enjoys romance with lots of action and who has a love for MC books.
This book is a very short but well written story. The story pulled me in immediately and I couldn't stop reading till the end. Thank god it was a short book. This is a forbidden romance based on the rules of the MC. The story is swift moving with action, steam, and many tough and memorable characters. I would recommend this book to anyone who enjoys romance with lots of action and who has a love for MC books.
July 27, 2017
She lived with her boyfriend for many years. One day he hits her. She moves in with a friend and then gets a job at a bar. She meets him but he is the son of the motorcycles leader. He tries to stay away but these two have too much chemistry together. This is exciting, suspenseful, fun and so much more. I highly recommend it. This is well written. I received a review copy and voluntarily review it.
July 22, 2017
Commando by Nicole Elliot is a great read. Commando and Ava are a hot and sexy couple. The instant the see one another sparks fly. This attraction is totally forbidden do to club rules. But you know what they say, "Rules are made to be broken". I am posting an honest review of an ARC copy of this book.
July 26, 2017
A very short but well written story. It follows the usual theme; boy meets girl and they have HEA.
So there are not that much surprise in the story, but it is absolutely a good and short read.
Lots of chemistry and some hot scenes. They have to find out how to be together without breaking rules and that is the story.
I received an ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review.
So there are not that much surprise in the story, but it is absolutely a good and short read.
Lots of chemistry and some hot scenes. They have to find out how to be together without breaking rules and that is the story.
I received an ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review.
September 10, 2017
Loved this book, a good MC story with a romance, ahhhh love at first sight 😍 Loved how the saw each other 😊 Preferred when she called him Kelley, wished she'd done it more because Commando is a bit of a mouth full and not the best mc name I've heard, but really enjoyed this book 😊 Moving straight onto to King 😊
July 23, 2017
This is an awesome love story between Commando and Ava. He's the son of the captain of a MC and she's struggling to make it on her own after a very bad relationship. It kept me captivated from beginning to end. A great read! I voluntarily read and reviewed an Advance Reader Copy of this book.
July 27, 2017
Hot!!
Commando and Ava's story is solid. Love the characters and the action. Very nice that bonus content was included - because who doesn't love free stuff and it was good reads so even better. Great job ladies!!
Commando and Ava's story is solid. Love the characters and the action. Very nice that bonus content was included - because who doesn't love free stuff and it was good reads so even better. Great job ladies!!
July 28, 2017
♡Darkly Delicious ♡
Drama, intrigues, action, and plenty of salacious heat...definitely not left wanting. Great characters carry the twisty plot. Commando and Ava have fiery chemistry and the best HEA ever. Lurve MC romance, and this one kicks a@@!!!
Drama, intrigues, action, and plenty of salacious heat...definitely not left wanting. Great characters carry the twisty plot. Commando and Ava have fiery chemistry and the best HEA ever. Lurve MC romance, and this one kicks a@@!!!
July 28, 2017
I received an Advance Reader Copy of this book.
I really enjoyed this book. It was written well and there was action and romance. Some MC books concentrate on the romance but this book had a little MC action too, which I loved.
For Book 1 a great start and I will be looking for more!
I really enjoyed this book. It was written well and there was action and romance. Some MC books concentrate on the romance but this book had a little MC action too, which I loved.
For Book 1 a great start and I will be looking for more!
August 19, 2017
Just loved it
I just loved this story, Commando and Ava aren't so of the most mismatched people but the author made them fit into each other's lives. I couldn't put it down read it straight through. Please Nicole keep the good work coming!
I just loved this story, Commando and Ava aren't so of the most mismatched people but the author made them fit into each other's lives. I couldn't put it down read it straight through. Please Nicole keep the good work coming!
October 15, 2017
The abused girl gets a job at the MC's bar catches the playboy VP's eye they fall instantly in lust and the rest is history. Or in this case it's no story, the fact that it's not even a book but a short story is a blessing!
November 15, 2017
A great MC romance. Protective, tatted and sexy as sin man. Sweet fairly innocent woman. I enjoyed the storyline as well.
I was gifted an ARC copy from the author in exchange for an honest review. Thanks :)
I was gifted an ARC copy from the author in exchange for an honest review. Thanks :)
January 1, 2020
Such a great story! I loved it! I just wish it would have been long enough to find out what happens with Ava and Commander, I had to buy the complete series just to find out. But it was still a great book. Totally worth it.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
July 28, 2017
Loved it
Loved the story and the characters, but book was to short wanted more. Going to read one of the other's.
Loved the story and the characters, but book was to short wanted more. Going to read one of the other's.
August 9, 2017
Short story and it could have had a little more action/danger. It was there but I wouldn't have minded more. Lol. Good story.
August 20, 2017
Wow...
Enjoyed every word. Really hard book to put down. Action, suspense and love put together perfectly for a great story.
Enjoyed every word. Really hard book to put down. Action, suspense and love put together perfectly for a great story.
November 8, 2017
Good start... kinda short, but still enjoyed this book.
January 28, 2019
Ok read
April 20, 2019
Kniha je super a přesně dle mého jen mu vadily krátké kapitoly díky kterým jsem měla pocit že děj se hrne až moc rychle dopředu
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