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Dubious (The Loan Shark Duet #1)

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How far will a man go to get the woman he wants?

I’m a loan shark. Breaking people runs in my blood. The Haynes’ were supposed to be a straightforward job. Go in and pull the trigger twice. One bullet for Charlie, one for his sister. But when I saw Valentina, I wanted her. Only, in our world those who owe us don’t get second chances. No way in hell will my mother let her li
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ebook, 305 pages
Published October 10th 2017
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Eve Recinella (Between The Bookends)
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descriptionA pretty good cover on this one. Good representation of the characters. It has good composition. Not a HUGE fav of the title work but I have seen worse.description

descriptionWell, color me blown away. I've never read anything by this author before and I went into this one totally blind. I really wasn't sure what to expect, to be honest. What I got was a fantastically well written and paced book with a plot that kept me turning the pages like a mad woman. I loved that it was set in South Africa. It gave the book a rea
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Sophia Triad
Excellent book!

Can I just say that it is one of the best books that I have read this year?
Can I just also say that I loved the fact that Gabriel is ugly? Really ugly with a body and face full of scars. With an almost destroyed leg with a limp.
And Valentina finds him ugly:

“He moves with a limp, his right leg stiff. Gabriel is even uglier up close.”

But she does not care after a while. At all!
Even if Gabriel believes himself undeserving of love:

For now, I don’t care that I’m property. I don’t
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Natalie The Biblioholic
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My heart was wrecked right from the start. Valentina was surviving by the skin of her teeth. She was living in the worst part of town and was responsible for her big brother, who, after an accident, suffered from an intellectual disability. He was vulnerable whenever she went to school or to work and the neighbor she trusted to watch him while she was gone got her brother into trouble. Big trouble. He now owed 400,000 rand to the most notorious
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Deborah
Jul 21, 2017 rated it really liked it
4.5*


Firstly this is a cliffhanger but since both books are being released back to back it didn't present the usual wait which is the part I struggle with.

The book paints a desolate picture, it's set in Johannesburg in what has become known as drug valley, everyone with money moved leaving the area for the drug dealers, Mafia and gangs.
It's safe to say Valentina is struggling, after losing both her parents she looks after her brain damaged brother, Charlie. She's trying her best to give them a fu
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Bex (Beckie Bookworm)
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🌟🌟🌟🌟STARS.
Dubious (The Loan Shark Duet, #1) was a delight to read and once I started there was no stopping me, I was on a mission to finish this.
So the low-down on Dubious was that Valentina Haynes a young veterinary student manages to get on the wrong side of the Louw family courtesy of her car thief neighbour, who while watching her disabled brother Charlie lets him run up gambling debt's at a local club.
Sent in on a kill order Gabriel Louw wanting Valentina for himself offers her an out, com
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Mindy Lou's Book Review
You know, I read some glowing reviews before reading this. I read where this was an unexpected read and yet I’m still kind of shocked with how much this story affected me.

Valentina just breaks my heart. The unfairness of everything she has had to endure and still comes out fighting. Most people would have broken long before. But the biggest surprise? Gabriel. The fact that this author took an evil man who does unspeakable things to people and made me care about him just astounds me. The obsessi
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Wynne Katherine
Feb 09, 2018 rated it liked it
Shelves: dnf
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Do you know how many books I have read this week? 6. Do you know how many I have DNF-ed? 4.

At this point, I'm so fucking sick of it that I'm too fucking lazy to give a review.

It's always the same stuff. Underdeveloped characters and feelings that grow too fast .

This book started off good, really good , but then it flopped. Gabriel was supposed to be the big bad twisted wolf who takes whatever he wants without mercy. He sticks to that for about 50 pages, then gradually turn into a big teddy be
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Olga therebelreader
The plot has tension, suspense and passion that can't be denied as the excellent story unfolds. It comes highly recommended.

I received an e-arc via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
Madeline ❤️ Romance Bibliophile ❤️
♥♥ 5 Dubious Stars ♥♥

This gave me all of my recent cravings all rolled into one intense book. There's servitude to repay a debt, dubious consent/forced seduction, and mob/mafia influence. Set to release this October, it's definitely one to put on your tbr shelf. 

Valentina is a vet student who takes care of her brother after he suffered serious brain damage in a car accident. Set in Johannesburg, there's a lot of poverty and paying people off for protection. Val finds her brother gambling one nig
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Snow
Nov 21, 2017 rated it liked it
I have mixed feelings about this one...

It started deviously alluring - a loan shark/killer/bad man and an ugly SOB (literally) Gabriel Louw collects Valentina Haynes as a debt payment for nine year up front (cause of the debt her mentally challnged brother Charlie made in his establishment), instead of killing them both off
I saw her, I wanted her. I took her. Yeah, it's that simple.

and that's where the story kicks off...
Yeah, it's that simple...
She becomes his sex toy, literally...and then
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Chris  C - A Midlife Wife
A story of possession that's ends in a cliffy. Can't wait till part two!
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When I read the blurb and synopsis for this book I was expecting a dark story. While this had plenty of issues with possession and other dark urges, the story itself did not read as depraved. In fact, I could almost see why Val ended up accepting her fate. Gabriel is over the moon for her...

The author did a great job conceiving this story and the writing flowed easily. It was tough to put down mainly bec
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~IreneOust~

One night, while laying in bed scanning Instagram, I came across an ad for an author/book I've never heard of before. I don't know what exactly got my attention in that ad [it might have been the cover image actually] but off I went to Amazon to see if the book was available for sale, ended up one-clicking it then stayed up till almost 2am reading because I simply couldn't put it down!

That's the story of how I found and fell in love with Charmaine Pauls' Loan Shark Duet. I still can't put my fi
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Sheharzad ⚘
WHAT THE EVER LIVING FUCK?!!!

brb i needa sort out my damn feels. wtf charmaine pauls why would you make me care so much 🔪💔💔

rtc when i'm revived from the dead!!!

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omg i'm in an annoying streak where i'm craving all the dark romances 😭😭 can I please enjoy the 3 other fantasy novels on my CR??? it's like whenever i pick up anything that isn't dark, my mind's like wth is this?? bish you need to feed your dark side NOW
Dana aka ♥Belladonna♥
Set in a poor, crime-ridden neighborhood of South Africa, the beginning of this book is uniquely unvarnished, raw, and gritty. You won't find glamorized, model beautiful characters everywhere you look. Instead, they are scarred, troubled, insecure people on a collision course with disaster.

It's the setting and characters—the way the author doesn't pull punches and lets the heroine meet her fate a time or two without the hero magically catching her at the brink—that really had me falling in love
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Sharron E.
Picked this up because i received an arc for its follow up book and suffice to say i thank my lucky stars I got that arc. Because, hot damn.
Meg (booksandwinewithmeg.blog)
I received a copy via Net Galley for an honest review…
3.5 – I am so effed up Stars
I am wrecked… this book wrecked me

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SERIOUSLY THOUGH, THIS BOOK!
I have a love hate relationship with mafia and drug lord books, and this one was no exception.
The main character Valentina is a hardworking girl who is taking care of her brain-damaged brother juggling school and making ends meet. She is not someone who needs fancy things, just enough to get by. She is a very humble character considering all she is goi
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Carvanz
Some of my GR friends had read and given rave reviews for this book. I’d been eyeing it a little distrustfully up until that point. Initially, when I first met Gabriel, I thought my friends had surely lost all their marbles. This guy is in this apartment to kill two people. And one of them is the heroine, Valentina. Well, okay, I knew he wasn’t going to outright kill her…the story would be over very quickly if that were the case.

He’s one tough and hard anti-hero. He is not a good guy. Until you
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Mg ♥ The Bookishmedialite
Oct 15, 2017 rated it it was amazing
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5 "She's no longer my captive. I'm hers." Stars

Talk about messing with my head and heart...

I finished Dubious three nights ago. The next day, I got drunk... because of cliffhangers and shit. While reading Gabriel & Valentina's journey I found myself hooked, the author's writing, the characters, and the flow of the story made it utterly unputdownable. Once I started reading, there was no stopping me!

I'm a dark romance lover. There's something truly special about this genre that has the powe
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Michaelene
5 Dubious Stars!

I’m not a made monster. I was born one.

Charmaine Pauls’ Dubious completely took me by surprise. It’s a blending of morally gray actions in murky situations with this diabolical eroticism that sweeps you right in. I need the conclusion to this...pronto!

Gabriel is a loan shark in an area where crime rules the day. He’s one of the top dogs and his assignment? Take out a woman and her brother who owe his family money. But one look at the woman in question has Gabriel defying his fami
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Ashi- A hopeless romantic girl :D
Book-1= 4.5 stars
Book-2= 4 stars

First of all, Thnkyou Fei for rec me this book. I really enjoyed it...❤❤❤❤

Now on the review- not gonna do a detailed review because i doubt that my rational mind will agree on rating with my PMS mind . so no to that but might like to state those facts which i am sure both my rational and PMS mind would agree with-

1- The type of struggles and torture h was going through was too much..
( infact my lazy self was sure it was humanly immpossible)

2- The book sure hol
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Kizzle Kay Books Reviews
Sep 08, 2017 rated it it was amazing
ARC Provided for Honest Review


What the hell did I just read?!?!?!?! Holy 5 *s!


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What a crazy ride this book is!! I had to grin and bear the first 25%, it's written in a way where it confused the hell out of me. I was at the 5% I had to do some research to make sure this was the 1st book, they were referencing things that I had already happened as if it was in a previous book. Nope, this is the 1st book and its just the way it's written in the first few chapters.


At 30% it picked up steam and the
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Dirty Dayna
Jul 11, 2017 rated it it was amazing
4.5 “you’re my property “ stars
Gabriel Louw is a marked, scarred and tortured Loan Shark who was sent to take out Valentina and her brother for not paying their debt. Instead Gabriel spares them and forces Valentina into slavery for 9 years to pay off her debt.
The story takes place in South Africa using the Rand currency which is about 75C American Dollars for every 1 Rand.
This story is both a back plot that is sexually based and one that is all character development. We hate the characters w
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Nicole
Jul 10, 2017 rated it it was amazing
Shelves: my-favourite, arcs
Steamy, Intense, Emotional...

These words are not enough to describe how amazing this story is, I devoured it and I fell in love with the plot and the characters from the first page.



I don't wanna spoil anything, so I'll stick with the things that made me keep reading without being able to take my eyes away from the book.

*Twists and secrets are two things that will definitely draw you deep and will surprise you many times!

*Steamy, hot scenes with "dirty" sexy dialogues that are going to wet m
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Jessica
Wow! I didn't know what to expect with this book where I've never read this author before. I was blown away! This book was dark, twisted, sexy, emotional, sweet, steamy, kickass charterers & a plot that kept me wanting more! It's been a long time since a book has kept me up ALL night long because I couldn't put it down! I was so invested in this book that I felt like I was right there inside the pages! Not only can't I wait to start the next book in this duet, I'm excited to read more from t ...more
Buffyanna
Sep 20, 2017 rated it it was amazing
In Dubious, Valentina Haynes is a lovely soul with a heart of gold and a backbone of steel. She has captivated the interest of local gangster Gabriel Louws, an evil violent predatory alpha who dominates the not-so-secret criminal underworld of Johannesburg, South Africa by showing no mercy to his victims.

I mean NO MERCY! The manner in which Valentina becomes indebted to the ruthless loan shark is so innocent and ludicrous that it only serves to illustrate his evil, arbitrary and powerful nature.
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Jamie (TheRebelliousReader)
Arc provided in exchange for honest review from Netgalley

5 stars. This was super freaking addicting! Right from the very beginning I was drawn in and hooked on to the story and I was dreading come to the end. This could’ve easily been 2x longer than what it is and I would’ve been perfectly happy.

I knew this was going to be a dark read but this was brutal at times! It was intense and just an overall very heavy book which honestly, if I’m going to read adult romantic suspense novels, the darker th
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Mamacita wants a Bedtime Story
2.75 "Pissed Me the Fuck Off" Stars

Now to start off, I'll warn y'all. I've been Bitchy this week. Like really Bitchy.



The Best thing about this book is that I got to BR it w/ my Bestie! it started out horrible w/ (view spoiler) Now, That's my hard limit. We're talking chapter 1 folks. But, I had committed to a BR & it was @least gonna be a good time chatting. So I thought, give it a chance. Then it got good. Like, really good. Let's all say this next part
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Danielle Hardgrave
Jul 27, 2017 rated it it was amazing
Yaaaas.

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I have been looking for a book like this for a long time. I've always been drawn to darker heroes and darker stories, but I feel their stories have to be told with a great deal of care in order to work. This story works. It works like a house on fire. It will draw you in and pull you down into the darkness, and trust me—that's where you want to go.

The thing I loved most about this story is how both MCs were flawed so perfectly that they fit together like two puzzle pieces. Gabriel is the
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SansaReads
Oh my damn! First ever read by this author and I have to say it definitely will be binging on her books.

Dubious was the perfect semi dark sexy blackmail romance. From the beginning this kept my attention. The story flows beautifully as you see Gabriel and Valentina’s relationship slowly progress.

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Life hasn’t been easy Valentina, and it’s about to get a lot worse with Gabriel entering her life. She is incredibly smart and resilient and tries her best to maintain herself with loan shark alpha, Ga
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Melanie A.
Oct 10, 2017 rated it really liked it
Shelves: 2017-favorites
Dark, twisted, and completely engrossing!

A few months ago Charmaine Pauls was a new-to-me author who blew me away with Loving the Enemy. Now, after reading Dubious, she's become one of my favorite authors!

I flew through the pages of this one. The writing sucked me in and didn't let me go until the last page - and after reading all day, I would have continued if the sequel was out already!

The story kicks off with loan sharks coming to collect on a massive debt racked up by Valentina's mentally h
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Charmaine Pauls was born in Bloemfontein, South Africa. She obtained a degree in Communication at the University of Potchestroom, and followed a diverse career path in journalism, public relations, advertising, communications, photography, graphic design, and brand marketing. Her writing has always been an integral part of her professions.

After relocating to Chile with her French husband, she ful
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