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3.77  ·  Rating details ·  1,416 ratings  ·  234 reviews
"YouTube Mastermind" Orion Carloto turns raw emotion into powerful, digestible verse in her debut collection of poetry.
 

Flux is a somber narrative, an ode to change, a collection of poetry and prose written from the many states of grief over a broken heart.  With original illustrations by artist Katie Roberts, Orion Carloto creates a dream world for the brokenhearted and p
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Paperback, 192 pages
Published October 24th 2017 by Andrews McMeel Publishing
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Nat
Oct 13, 2017 rated it liked it
Shelves: poetry, arc
I discovered Orion Carloto’s writing this past summer in the Local Wolves magazine, which is just an all-around spectacular piece of work full of feminism and girl power. So when I later came upon the news online that Orion was releasing her debut poetry collection, it felt meant to be.

Orion-- bookspoils
“Read every word, experience every moment, and take in all the sorrows and revival that girls just like you have gone through. You aren’t alone.”

(Above quote and illustration from issue 43.)

Pulling inspiration fr
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Charles
Oct 27, 2017 rated it did not like it
Shelves: poetry
Celebrity does miraculous things. Banal high school journal scribblings can suddenly become works of art for a 226k-subscriber YouTube star. I’m trying hard to not fault Carloto’s intentions here: heartbreak, loss, extreme emotion – these things can be the BEGINNING of inspiration but they are NOT in of themselves special. Or unique. Or particularly interesting when prosaically stated, page after page (“GET OVER YOURSELF already!” I cried out several times reading). No, the trouble is that when ...more
Whitney Atkinson
Nov 04, 2017 rated it it was ok
2.5

ok i guess. i'm not in the right mood to read something this dark, so i skimmed the last few poems.

most of these poems employed far too many cliché turns of phrase. there's very little creative imagery, and it reads soooo conversational. the language was so plain in some poems that it began to read like diary entries of a high schooler rather than a poem.

only some were haunting and gorgeous and gave me chills, like this one:

"But while she’s sleeping in your arms at midnight,
I hope you look ou
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[Shai] Bibliophage
Feb 15, 2018 rated it really liked it
Flux contains relatable sentimental one-liner quotes, poems and prose wrote by Orion Carloto. This collection shows grieving for a lost love and self-pityingly because of it. There are several poems that are I think the best ones, and these are: Delusional, Flesh and Bone, Moonlight, Haiku, Mirror Talk, Healing, Chronology, Wildflowers, Dream On, and Melancholy.
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As for one-liner quote, the remarkable one for me is, "You are a dream and I don't want to wake up." Vultures, on the other, i
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Siena Mirabella
Oct 26, 2017 rated it it was amazing
I absolutely adore this
Janelle Samuel
Nov 02, 2017 rated it did not like it
I really had high hopes for it but I couldn't make it beyond 15 pages in. I like Orion, her style and energy, but I didn't enjoy this at all. I don't want to bash it like others have so I will just leave it at that.

But hey- as writers sometimes we don't knock it out of the park on our first try. With growth and maturity, maybe her writing will evolve as well. I'm hopeful.
Samantha
May 22, 2018 rated it really liked it
Truthfully, I really liked this a lot. Orion has always been someone I loved from social media being she is very open and relatable. When I first found out she was releasing this gem, I was so excited! She would always post excerpts of poems she wrote and such, and I would always screenshot it because I loved it and didn't want to forget it. Now that she's released this collection, I have them with me to refer to whenever!

There were some poems and writings that I didn't quite relate to, but a m
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el
Mar 31, 2018 rated it really liked it
Closer to three and a half stars

I just want to take a moment to appreciate the gorgeous cover on this?? I'm lov? Also, the even more beautiful art featured throughout?? Adored that.

I love Orion’s youtube, and her Instagram is like, god-tier level excellent, so it was exciting to then read something of hers that, like most art, is as personal a thing as poetry.
And so I've found another thing of hers to love – her writing; it's very atmospheric, and she creates some enchanting visuals. I read th
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Evie Carpenter
Jan 13, 2018 rated it did not like it
If you have read Baudelaire, Atwood, Shakespeare, Keats, Homer etc. and loved them, please don't read this book.

This is as low as poetry can ever get; journal entries aren't poetry. Sentences without any lyricism aren't poetry. Poetry is getting lower and lower these days.
This is Rupi Kaur, Michael Faudet and Lang Leav poorly combined together. If you're a fan of those three, prepare to read the same in Flux, but more self-centered and petty. This is all about the author's ex boyfriend and how
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Julia Sapphire
TW: Abuse and Self-Harm

2.5 stars

Most of these poems were nothing special in my opinion, but my favorites included:
Crashing Cosmos, Flesh and Bone, Your Girl, Character Development and Russian Roulette.

"Progress is dancing to the same song I used to cry to"

"He was always 5 steps ahead of me,
dreaming of the next place he could be.
And while I tried running as fast
as I could to catch up,
hanging on to the little breath I had,
I always stayed behind
rag in hand,
cleaning up the blood


The rest of
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Ally
3/5

Personally, I was a huge fan of Rupi Kaur's milk and honey, and I hoped that Flux would fall into that category of simple, raw poetry. And Carloto does format some of her poems the way that Kaur does:

where it is
formatted like
- this

However Flux didn't have the same emotional effect on me as other works of poetry. A lot of the poems (as well as the prose, this book contains both) rang hollow. I felt as though they didn't bring anything new to the table, or they didn't awake in me a previous
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Maida
Jan 16, 2018 rated it liked it
“Gray Matter

I’ve gone mad.
It’s been 26 days since you’ve said goodbye, yet you continue to lurk
within every existing corner of my mind. I tried convincing myself
that with each passing day it would become easier, but at no chance
has it ever. It’s been 26 days without hearing your voice; you haven’t
even called to check up. I’ve ripped at my hair, drove my palms deep
into the sockets of my eyes, thrashed my temples
     over
    and over
    and over
    again
and you’re still there.



Skin now embedd
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Luna Valentine
going into reading this from the reviews i expected something more generic. a pale tumblr blog in book form but reading this i learned that no matter how embedded your image is into the worlds of youtube and tumblr if your heart is true, so are your words and orion's words are a whole other brand of strange magic.
Sophia Michelle
Feb 10, 2018 rated it liked it
With the mindset of reading this as poetry book -which is what it’s claimed to be- I was pretty let down. It has no structure and is more of a diary entry. By looking at it as if I had discovered someone’s diary and dared to read it, I enjoyed it much more. Most of the time I loved the vulnerability of it. It felt like I was intruding in the deepest parts of her experiences and heart. In that sense, it was interesting and captivating. Though my expectations were not met, I thoroughly enjoyed rel ...more
Marty :} (thecursedbooks)
Oct 15, 2017 rated it it was ok
Shelves: poetry
I want to thank Netgalley and the publisher for granting my request to read this book. This hadn't influenced my review/rating in any way.
I think this is a case of 'it's not you, it's me'. This book reminds me a lot of Lang Leav's books, but it's not as good, it lacks originality and it didn't make me feel anything. For a reason or another, I didn't connect at all with the feelings the author was trying to inspire. I didn't feel the intensity of the grief over losing an important relationship
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mér
Jun 07, 2018 rated it it was ok
uh the illustrations were nice i guess
Megan Gloeckler
Mar 16, 2018 rated it it was amazing
Orion Carlitos first book ever is a collection of her poetry throughout the last three years all in one. Flux was a mix of thoughts, emotions, and love she has felt throughout her journey of heartbreaks and relationships. Orion is a creative writer who wanted to publish a book for years and once she was able to get her hands on a popular publishing company for poetry books, it made her dream come true. Her poems are mostly about her life with her past relationship and how she feels before, durin ...more
ellie
if i had to describe this book in one word, it would be fluxrgettable.
Thomas
May 23, 2018 rated it it was ok
actual rating: 2.5/5 (but felt more like a 2)
flux by orion carloto | short book review for a short poetry book

I've read this poetry book written by Orion Carloto last night in one sitting and I really thought I would be enjoying it but it turns out I wasn't a complete fan of it.

This poetry book deals with separation, breaking up, grieving for a lost love and all the thoughts and emotions that are related to it.
Overall, it was a good reading, I was probably just expecting more of it. I really lik
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rheanne ☽
Dec 04, 2017 rated it did not like it
Hmm, maybe if I read it with a warm cup of coffee it would've been a better read..

I feel like this "poetry" book was made purely with the intentions of getting back at her ex, except nothing went well. Instead of publishing her journal entries, jambled thoughts and "poems" - she should've just sent the dude her writings because they are suited towards him, kinda like asking him "what happened with our love?", making the reader feel distant, since I don't know their story. I couldn't connect to
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Kristy K
Nov 19, 2017 rated it it was ok
Shelves: 2017, arc, poetry, netgalley
Last night,
I was drunk
on your
words.

This morning,
I am hungover
on your
silence.


Flux is a mix of traditional poetry and Instagram poetry with some diary-like entries thrown in. Carloto writes of a broken heart and the discourse that follows when someone leaves you.

I didn’t care much for the one sentence poems that seem so popular these days, but I did appreciate a few of the more traditional pieces. I can see this striking a chord with the younger crowd; it very much reads like the experience of a
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Chloe (thelastcolour)
Nov 13, 2017 rated it really liked it
Shelves: 2017-releases, poetry
i was expecting the typical modern poetry where sentences are merely broken up but i was pleasantly surprised by some of them! orion has been through so much pain and that is clear by her words and i am glad she has come through fighting. i have dog eared a few favourites but i find a lot of them difficult to relate to purely because i have never been in love but that is not a fault on orion's part. sometimes i thought about the characters in my book that i'm writing and found a few poems that r ...more
Carolina
If you're looking for a poetry book about heartbreak that you can read under 30 minutes, this fits the spot. I really enjoyed the writing, however, I must point out one thing: when people end relationships, it is so very important to be able to understand that if someone doesn't want to be with you, whichever their reason may be, that is okay, and they're not at fault because of it. If you read this book and are going through a similar situation, please don't get engulfed in the resentment it re ...more
Patty
Jan 03, 2018 rated it really liked it
Shelves: poetry
Source: NetGalley
Her Messy Head
Nov 12, 2017 rated it it was amazing
unlike any other poetry book I've read, Flux is the one I mostly relate to. I had to put down the book many times in order to take a deep breath, wipe off my tears and check if her words were not actually extracted from my own journal. Being a very emotional person, dealing with mental health issues, having had a few breakups in life that devastated me for the longest time, this poetry book has been challenging to read.

«We are young, so fucking young, and I truly and earnestly believe that you a
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Ayah
Oct 26, 2017 rated it really liked it
Flux is a collection of poetry, prose, and beautiful sketches. I really liked how some pages were added straight from Orion’s journal, literally. Some pages were basically a scanned image from her diary.

The author shares her grieve and broken heart through out the entire book, but with every new piece of writing, she uses a different approach of vivid imagery.

I really enjoyed the majority of this book. I highly recommend it if you enjoyed reading The Princess Saves Herself in this One by Amanda
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Demi Ev.
Jan 04, 2018 rated it liked it
I love Orion, and it was a pleasure reading through her book; it was raw and honest, and made me realize how cruel a heartbreak can be. however I felt like someone watching from afar, I couldn’t relate to any of the poems, and even though I liked quite a few most of them didn’t really speak to me. It was more like a book of personal experiences than something the reader could relate to. I hope that her second book will cover a different subject and I’m sure that in time she’ll grow as a poet.
Jessica Ciarcz
Nov 10, 2017 rated it it was amazing
Shelves: highly-reccomend
I’ve always been a fan of Orion’s work and this is no exception. She is amazing and so so talented. I loved the emotion she put into this book and all the honesty in her words. ...more
lotte
Jun 23, 2018 rated it really liked it
4 stars! I really enjoyed this book. The longer parts of it were really good and I hope Orion will publish more in the future!
Deepika Ramesh
Oct 19, 2017 rated it liked it
I am a sucker for maudlin poetry and the neo-poems on loss, life, breakups, mental health... Orion Carloto's 'Flux' is all that but it fails to connect with me. It could be because I OD'd on poems like that, written by Rupi Kaur, Nikita Gill, Lang Leav, and Amanda Lovelace, that I have finally become weary. 'Flux', despite seeming honest, doesn't create a deep impact.
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