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The Legend of the Great Horse #1
Eclipsed By Shadow
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"Eclipsed by Shadow" is the first volume of the new trilogy, The Legend of the Great Horse, which explores the ages of mankind when horses were everyday companions in work, war, sport and spectacle. The story is told as an adventure through the eyes of a young woman, a horse-crazy teenager traveling through time with knowledge of 21st century horsemanship as her only defense.
"Eclipsed by Shadow" is the first volume of the new trilogy, The Legend of the Great Horse, which explores the ages of mankind when horses were everyday companions in work, war, sport and spectacle. The story is told as an adventure through the eyes of a young woman, a horse-crazy teenager traveling through time with knowledge of 21st century horsemanship as her only defense.
292 pages, Paperback
First published January 1, 2008
About the author
John Allen Royce Jr.
4 books35 followersJohn Allen Royce is an American author and horseman. His debut title, Eclipsed by Shadow, won national honors including the 2009 Eric Hoffer Book Award for Best Young Adult Fiction. Born in California and growing up in Texas, the author has lived ‘from sea to shining sea’ in his native America, and now resides in Boston, Massachusetts.
Horses and history have intertwined in Mr. Royce’s life since his youth, twin passions which led to his authoring of The Legend of the Great Horse, an award-winning time-travel trilogy about a modern rider taken back into history. In addition to the national Eric Hoffer Award, Royce’s writing honors include the Mom’s Choice Award (Gold) for best family-friendly Young Adult Fantasy and a Reader Views Literary Award for Fantasy, and inclusion in the award-winning anthology Best New Writing. Mr. Royce’s recently-published 2nd title, The Golden Spark (April 2011) was named an Independent Publisher Highlighted Title for Summer 2011 and won the 2012 Written Arts Award for best Science Fiction/Fantasy
Horses and history have intertwined in Mr. Royce’s life since his youth, twin passions which led to his authoring of The Legend of the Great Horse, an award-winning time-travel trilogy about a modern rider taken back into history. In addition to the national Eric Hoffer Award, Royce’s writing honors include the Mom’s Choice Award (Gold) for best family-friendly Young Adult Fantasy and a Reader Views Literary Award for Fantasy, and inclusion in the award-winning anthology Best New Writing. Mr. Royce’s recently-published 2nd title, The Golden Spark (April 2011) was named an Independent Publisher Highlighted Title for Summer 2011 and won the 2012 Written Arts Award for best Science Fiction/Fantasy
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October 27, 2008
This is a historical fiction of horses as seen through the eyes of a 15 year old girl named Meagan Roberts. Meagan spends the first half of the book confused and the other on horse back just trying to stay alive.
Though the begging og the book is a little dry and slow, once her horse Promise comes home the story picks up and then is hard to put down.
Not a great lover of horses myself didn't stop me from thoroughly enjoying this book and recommending this book to everyone over the age of 12. I can't wait for the next installment which is due to hit shelves in the Summer of 2009.
Though the begging og the book is a little dry and slow, once her horse Promise comes home the story picks up and then is hard to put down.
Not a great lover of horses myself didn't stop me from thoroughly enjoying this book and recommending this book to everyone over the age of 12. I can't wait for the next installment which is due to hit shelves in the Summer of 2009.
July 2, 2009
I won an early reviewer's copy from Library Thing . . .
There are elements of this book that I really like and others that I believe make this a very flawed attempt.
Firstly, the story is written in two distinct parts. The transition between the parts is not smooth so that they read as separate stories rather than one continuous tale. If this is a young adult novel, as it says it is, the purpose for the hero to begin his/her quest must be clear to the reader at the very beginning. We must want to go on the journey with him/her. Because we are not clear why this quest/journey must happen (or not happen as the book warns) the motivation to read on is slim.
Secondly, the author is a lover of horses and clearly wishes to share his knowledge of history with his readership. The problem with this motivation for writing a story is that often (and it is the case here) the historical facts disrupt the story and have no importance to or seamless weaving into the plot. Because of that, the history becomes preachy and especially for young adult readers, the reader often loses interest.
I wonder at the author's choice of a female hero. While I understand that perhaps he wanted to promote some women's lib here, his choice of companion characters--mostly men who one way or another fall in "love" with her--really illustrate the opposite.
I do like the information about horses that is given. I find the descriptions within the "horse museum" to be fascinating and a lost opportunity to forward the plot. The characters have potential to be interesting but need further development. The best segment of the story is the last where the hero is sent to the Dark Ages. Much time is spent developing these characters and the story is interesting. However, what is portrayed in this section will appeal to an older reader not a teenager.
The ending is a disaster! It ends mid-story with the pathetic explanation that the "saga" will continue in book 2. All good book series contain distinct stories within each installment. JK Rowling would NEVER leave a cliff hanger. It is just poor story-telling.
What author John Royce needs is a good editor. Micron Press should know better. With a good editor this story can be made into a really good piece. As is, I cannot see it picking up any following. Certainly not for a series of installments.
A real missed opportunity.
There are elements of this book that I really like and others that I believe make this a very flawed attempt.
Firstly, the story is written in two distinct parts. The transition between the parts is not smooth so that they read as separate stories rather than one continuous tale. If this is a young adult novel, as it says it is, the purpose for the hero to begin his/her quest must be clear to the reader at the very beginning. We must want to go on the journey with him/her. Because we are not clear why this quest/journey must happen (or not happen as the book warns) the motivation to read on is slim.
Secondly, the author is a lover of horses and clearly wishes to share his knowledge of history with his readership. The problem with this motivation for writing a story is that often (and it is the case here) the historical facts disrupt the story and have no importance to or seamless weaving into the plot. Because of that, the history becomes preachy and especially for young adult readers, the reader often loses interest.
I wonder at the author's choice of a female hero. While I understand that perhaps he wanted to promote some women's lib here, his choice of companion characters--mostly men who one way or another fall in "love" with her--really illustrate the opposite.
I do like the information about horses that is given. I find the descriptions within the "horse museum" to be fascinating and a lost opportunity to forward the plot. The characters have potential to be interesting but need further development. The best segment of the story is the last where the hero is sent to the Dark Ages. Much time is spent developing these characters and the story is interesting. However, what is portrayed in this section will appeal to an older reader not a teenager.
The ending is a disaster! It ends mid-story with the pathetic explanation that the "saga" will continue in book 2. All good book series contain distinct stories within each installment. JK Rowling would NEVER leave a cliff hanger. It is just poor story-telling.
What author John Royce needs is a good editor. Micron Press should know better. With a good editor this story can be made into a really good piece. As is, I cannot see it picking up any following. Certainly not for a series of installments.
A real missed opportunity.
July 15, 2009
Eclipsed by Shadow: The Legend of the Great Horse
BY: John Royce
COVER ARTWORK: Marti Adrian
PUBLISHED BY: Micron Press
PUBLISHED IN: 2008
ISBN-13: 978-0-9724121-3-1
Ages: Young Adult & Up
I was very impressed by this book, reading it in only two nights. The author, John Royce, has beautifully written a wonderful epic that combines fantasy with history, a mix between Harry Potter, the Lord of the Rings and the Time Machine. He uses his great knowledge of the history of horses to give us the first adventure of the Legend of the Great Horse. The dialogue and descriptions are cleverly written to entertain and educate both young adults and adults.
The main character is a teenager named Meagan, and she is a horse lover. Being an animal lover myself, I was instantly connected to her. You are hooked within the first few pages, as Meagan loses a loved one and gains a new friend, a palomino foal that she name’s Promise. But Promise isn’t like other horses, she is the Great Horse - a fallen angel from the time of Adam & Eve. Due to financial reasons, the Foal is sent to live on a pasture until she is old enough to be ridden. During this time, Meagan meets the mysterious Mrs. Bridgestone. Mrs. Bridgestone tells Meagan about the legend of the great horse and that she believes Promise is the great horse. Mrs. Bridgestone wants the horse for her own. Three years passes by and Meagan rides Promise for the first time. Magical, long white wings stretch out of Promise, flying Meagan back in time where she meets cavemen, Romans, monks, knights and other life-threatening dangers.
Eclipsed By Shadow is a fast, action-packed adventure from start to the heart pounding cliffhanger. The author did a marvelous job blending history and fantasy together in this first book of the trilogy. Fans of horse books and fantasy adventures will enjoy reading this. Once you finish reading the final page, you’ll be longing for the next installment.
BY: John Royce
COVER ARTWORK: Marti Adrian
PUBLISHED BY: Micron Press
PUBLISHED IN: 2008
ISBN-13: 978-0-9724121-3-1
Ages: Young Adult & Up
I was very impressed by this book, reading it in only two nights. The author, John Royce, has beautifully written a wonderful epic that combines fantasy with history, a mix between Harry Potter, the Lord of the Rings and the Time Machine. He uses his great knowledge of the history of horses to give us the first adventure of the Legend of the Great Horse. The dialogue and descriptions are cleverly written to entertain and educate both young adults and adults.
The main character is a teenager named Meagan, and she is a horse lover. Being an animal lover myself, I was instantly connected to her. You are hooked within the first few pages, as Meagan loses a loved one and gains a new friend, a palomino foal that she name’s Promise. But Promise isn’t like other horses, she is the Great Horse - a fallen angel from the time of Adam & Eve. Due to financial reasons, the Foal is sent to live on a pasture until she is old enough to be ridden. During this time, Meagan meets the mysterious Mrs. Bridgestone. Mrs. Bridgestone tells Meagan about the legend of the great horse and that she believes Promise is the great horse. Mrs. Bridgestone wants the horse for her own. Three years passes by and Meagan rides Promise for the first time. Magical, long white wings stretch out of Promise, flying Meagan back in time where she meets cavemen, Romans, monks, knights and other life-threatening dangers.
Eclipsed By Shadow is a fast, action-packed adventure from start to the heart pounding cliffhanger. The author did a marvelous job blending history and fantasy together in this first book of the trilogy. Fans of horse books and fantasy adventures will enjoy reading this. Once you finish reading the final page, you’ll be longing for the next installment.
July 3, 2009
I received this book as one of the good reads giveaways, and I enjoyed reading it. There is a lot of promise in the story and because of it I hate to say much bad about it, but it almost seems as if it's a rough draft, waiting to be edited.
The facts about horses and the way the author describes them is beautiful. It shines through the author's writing that he loves horses. The historical facts were also wonderful. The writing in the first part of the story, before Meagan starts her journey is almost a completely different story. The writing is satisfactory. Once the journey begins, the author finds his element and it is a completely different story. The details pour off the pages and it becomes a difficult book to put down.
The characters do not seem fully developed. The reader finally gets to learn a bit more of the main character and her motivations in the end, but until that point it's difficult to decipher. The beginning of the story, going through so many years, changes the character and by the time she makes it to the adventure, it's difficult to tell what she is truly like. I would have liked to have seen more in the adventure and less in the beginning. The beginning attempts to explain what is going on, but I do not think it was even done so sufficiently.
The ending of the book was the most disappointing. It might have ended adaquately if the character returned back home, but it was not an actual ending to a story. I found this book captivating and so many details interesting, but I was hoping for more. I know this story could be much better. I did think it was worth the read, I was just hoping for a bit more from it.
The facts about horses and the way the author describes them is beautiful. It shines through the author's writing that he loves horses. The historical facts were also wonderful. The writing in the first part of the story, before Meagan starts her journey is almost a completely different story. The writing is satisfactory. Once the journey begins, the author finds his element and it is a completely different story. The details pour off the pages and it becomes a difficult book to put down.
The characters do not seem fully developed. The reader finally gets to learn a bit more of the main character and her motivations in the end, but until that point it's difficult to decipher. The beginning of the story, going through so many years, changes the character and by the time she makes it to the adventure, it's difficult to tell what she is truly like. I would have liked to have seen more in the adventure and less in the beginning. The beginning attempts to explain what is going on, but I do not think it was even done so sufficiently.
The ending of the book was the most disappointing. It might have ended adaquately if the character returned back home, but it was not an actual ending to a story. I found this book captivating and so many details interesting, but I was hoping for more. I know this story could be much better. I did think it was worth the read, I was just hoping for a bit more from it.
July 7, 2009
I won this book through one of the GoodReads giveaways.
This young adult book combined two of my favorite things, horses and history! As the first in a trilogy, I was hoping that it would entice me to read the other two. As a young adult novel, I was hoping that it had something different to bring to the genre. It succeeded in both ways. After a slow start, the book became more and more difficult to put down. The protagonist is a young girl/woman (age 15) who is taken on a strange journey through time. There is a great deal of action, a little romance, some strong female traits (which I love in a YA book), and best of all, some awesome horses. The author follows the Legend of the Great Horse throughout time, and the heroine spends time with Romans and Mongols as well as a few less civilized groups. The language will not challenge advanced readers, but will not disappoint either. This book would be a great choice for introducing the genre of historical fiction to a new reader.
This young adult book combined two of my favorite things, horses and history! As the first in a trilogy, I was hoping that it would entice me to read the other two. As a young adult novel, I was hoping that it had something different to bring to the genre. It succeeded in both ways. After a slow start, the book became more and more difficult to put down. The protagonist is a young girl/woman (age 15) who is taken on a strange journey through time. There is a great deal of action, a little romance, some strong female traits (which I love in a YA book), and best of all, some awesome horses. The author follows the Legend of the Great Horse throughout time, and the heroine spends time with Romans and Mongols as well as a few less civilized groups. The language will not challenge advanced readers, but will not disappoint either. This book would be a great choice for introducing the genre of historical fiction to a new reader.
July 12, 2009
This is a must read book, I am 50 years old and it held my interest all the way to the end. You don't have to be a youth to enjoy this book. As I was reading Eclipsed By Shadow, I flet as though I was there, the wording is so descriptive, that I could visulize the characters, like I was right in the book seeing the story live.
I found that there was quite a bit of history with the different times, things I did not know, with and without horses.
I am looking forward so much to the sequel, as the first book leaves you wondering, I believe the second book will pick up from the 1st book, and more adventures and learning awaits the reader.
A very very good read John, keep that pen writing as I miss megan :>)
I found that there was quite a bit of history with the different times, things I did not know, with and without horses.
I am looking forward so much to the sequel, as the first book leaves you wondering, I believe the second book will pick up from the 1st book, and more adventures and learning awaits the reader.
A very very good read John, keep that pen writing as I miss megan :>)
June 27, 2009
I learned a lot from this book, both about history and horses. I couldn't put it down, and I can't wait to read the sequel. It's a fascinating and realistically written story, and it's definitely one to read over and over again.
November 16, 2010
This book is a history packed gem. The detail in both the history and equine aspects are right on. LOVE THIS BOOK!
December 18, 2010
I don't know if I will have enough adjectives to describe just how much I LOVE THIS BOOK! Although I would like to apologize to the author John Royce first. I've had this book for quite a while and have just now got a chance to share my review ~ it's one that was worth the wait though! And just in time to TOP my GIFT-WORTHY list..
Horse-crazy teenager Meagan Roberts is the proud owner of an amazingly rare Palomino Thoroughbred filly (girl horse) named "Promise". As Meagan dreams of the future and waits for Promise to grow enough to start training, many strange people start showing up and trying to buy the unusual filly from the Roberts family. The prices they offer are both staggering and suspicious. A strange old woman also comes to visit after the filly is born at dawn on June 21st ~ the summer solstice. She makes some odd comments before going on her way. There is a lot of interest in this "backyard" foal.
Meagan receives an intriguing invitation for her and a guardian to luncheon at a mansion nearby. The mysterious hostess is Mrs. Bridgestone, the strange old lady who had come to see Promise. The reason for her interest becomes clear as she reveals that she believes Promise to be one of the legendary "Great Horses". These horses are those who were prominent in history, making their own marks along with humans and gods. Meagan believes Mrs. Bridgestone and wonders about the warning she gives her to not ride Promise. She feels this could bring darkness according to a hundred year old letter and verse written by the beloved horseman Chief Joseph of the Nez Perce :
A hundred years hence on this westmost shore,
The Great Horse comes to men once more.
History lights the future's course,
With lessons learned from the Horse;
So born of loss and mother's grief,
The Great Horse takes a might leap.
Eclipsed by shadow, the golden spark
Shall wing her rider into the dark.
Meagan's mother Jennifer doesn't believe the legend, even though almost every line seems to be referring to Promise. Jennifer won't let Meagan see Mrs. Bridgestone after the visit because she thinks the old lady is crazy. I won't go too much into detail as to what occurs next, but Promise and Meagan start on a journey where they visit other 'Great Horses' and make their own mark on the past of both humans and equines.
The author is obviously a horseman himself. He writes about horses, their care and behaviour with the authority of one who has lived with them. His writing is very clear and very engaging. I saw myself in Meagan as I was one of those kids who would spend 10 hours cleaning the barn before I'd spend 1 hour helping in the house. (I'm still that way I'm afraid.) She is an endearing and very likable guide on this horseback ride through time.
History, fantasy, myth, adventure and proper equine care all shine brightly in this first book in the trilogy. Royce weaves all of these elements together beautifully and young readers probably won't even notice that they are learning about history and horse care while on this great ride back through time. I learned quite a bit myself and I grew up on a horse ranch with horses always in my life. This was a "can't put down" book for me.
There is a very small bit of violence (as there always is when war is involved) but I HIGHLY recommend this book for anyone over about 10 or 11. Especially horselovers or adventurers. Young horsemen and horsewomen will see themselves as I did in the bond that is shared by Meagan and Promise and that which Jennifer had shared with Moose ~ Promise's dam. (Dam is what the mare is called when she gives birth or foals.)
This is definitely a book that adults and kids can both read and discuss. There is a thorough glossary in the back that would be an extremely useful tool for all. On the learning side, I think this would be a fantastic series for riding instructors and first time horse owners as well. For the adventure and fantasy lovers, some other readers have compared this to an equine version of the "Harry Potter" series. It's a fun and engrossing story that has just begun and none of us will want to end!
Horse-crazy teenager Meagan Roberts is the proud owner of an amazingly rare Palomino Thoroughbred filly (girl horse) named "Promise". As Meagan dreams of the future and waits for Promise to grow enough to start training, many strange people start showing up and trying to buy the unusual filly from the Roberts family. The prices they offer are both staggering and suspicious. A strange old woman also comes to visit after the filly is born at dawn on June 21st ~ the summer solstice. She makes some odd comments before going on her way. There is a lot of interest in this "backyard" foal.
Meagan receives an intriguing invitation for her and a guardian to luncheon at a mansion nearby. The mysterious hostess is Mrs. Bridgestone, the strange old lady who had come to see Promise. The reason for her interest becomes clear as she reveals that she believes Promise to be one of the legendary "Great Horses". These horses are those who were prominent in history, making their own marks along with humans and gods. Meagan believes Mrs. Bridgestone and wonders about the warning she gives her to not ride Promise. She feels this could bring darkness according to a hundred year old letter and verse written by the beloved horseman Chief Joseph of the Nez Perce :
A hundred years hence on this westmost shore,
The Great Horse comes to men once more.
History lights the future's course,
With lessons learned from the Horse;
So born of loss and mother's grief,
The Great Horse takes a might leap.
Eclipsed by shadow, the golden spark
Shall wing her rider into the dark.
Meagan's mother Jennifer doesn't believe the legend, even though almost every line seems to be referring to Promise. Jennifer won't let Meagan see Mrs. Bridgestone after the visit because she thinks the old lady is crazy. I won't go too much into detail as to what occurs next, but Promise and Meagan start on a journey where they visit other 'Great Horses' and make their own mark on the past of both humans and equines.
The author is obviously a horseman himself. He writes about horses, their care and behaviour with the authority of one who has lived with them. His writing is very clear and very engaging. I saw myself in Meagan as I was one of those kids who would spend 10 hours cleaning the barn before I'd spend 1 hour helping in the house. (I'm still that way I'm afraid.) She is an endearing and very likable guide on this horseback ride through time.
History, fantasy, myth, adventure and proper equine care all shine brightly in this first book in the trilogy. Royce weaves all of these elements together beautifully and young readers probably won't even notice that they are learning about history and horse care while on this great ride back through time. I learned quite a bit myself and I grew up on a horse ranch with horses always in my life. This was a "can't put down" book for me.
There is a very small bit of violence (as there always is when war is involved) but I HIGHLY recommend this book for anyone over about 10 or 11. Especially horselovers or adventurers. Young horsemen and horsewomen will see themselves as I did in the bond that is shared by Meagan and Promise and that which Jennifer had shared with Moose ~ Promise's dam. (Dam is what the mare is called when she gives birth or foals.)
This is definitely a book that adults and kids can both read and discuss. There is a thorough glossary in the back that would be an extremely useful tool for all. On the learning side, I think this would be a fantastic series for riding instructors and first time horse owners as well. For the adventure and fantasy lovers, some other readers have compared this to an equine version of the "Harry Potter" series. It's a fun and engrossing story that has just begun and none of us will want to end!
December 18, 2010
I don't know if I will have enough adjectives to describe just how much I LOVE THIS BOOK!
Although I would like to apologize to the author John Royce first. I've had this book for quite a while and have just now got a chance to share my review ~ it's one that was worth the wait though! And just in time to TOP my GIFT-WORTHY list..
Horse-crazy teenager Meagan Roberts is the proud owner of an amazingly rare Palomino Thoroughbred filly (girl horse) named "Promise". As Meagan dreams of the future and waits for Promise to grow enough to start training, many strange people start showing up and trying to buy the unusual filly from the Roberts family. The prices they offer are both staggering and suspicious. A strange old woman also comes to visit after the filly is born at dawn on June 21st ~ the summer solstice. She makes some odd comments before going on her way. There is a lot of interest in this "backyard" foal.
Meagan receives an intriguing invitation for her and a guardian to luncheon at a mansion nearby. The mysterious hostess is Mrs. Bridgestone, the strange old lady who had come to see Promise. The reason for her interest becomes clear as she reveals that she believes Promise to be one of the legendary "Great Horses". These horses are those who were prominent in history, making their own marks along with humans and gods. Meagan believes Mrs. Bridgestone and wonders about the warning she gives her to not ride Promise. She feels this could bring darkness according to a hundred year old letter and verse written by the beloved horseman Chief Joseph of the Nez Perce :
A hundred years hence on this westmost shore,
The Great Horse comes to men once more.
History lights the future's course,
With lessons learned from the Horse;
So born of loss and mother's grief,
The Great Horse takes a might leap.
Eclipsed by shadow, the golden spark
Shall wing her rider into the dark.
Meagan's mother Jennifer doesn't believe the legend, even though almost every line seems to be referring to Promise. Jennifer won't let Meagan see Mrs. Bridgestone after the visit because she thinks the old lady is crazy. I won't go too much into detail as to what occurs next, but Promise and Meagan start on a journey where they visit other 'Great Horses' and make their own mark on the past of both humans and equines.
The author is obviously a horseman himself. He writes about horses, their care and behaviour with the authority of one who has lived with them. His writing is very clear and very engaging. I saw myself in Meagan as I was one of those kids who would spend 10 hours cleaning the barn before I'd spend 1 hour helping in the house. (I'm still that way I'm afraid.) She is an endearing and very likable guide on this horseback ride through time.
History, fantasy, myth, adventure and proper equine care all shine brightly in this first book in the trilogy. Royce weaves all of these elements together beautifully and young readers probably won't even notice that they are learning about history and horse care while on this great ride back through time. I learned quite a bit myself and I grew up on a horse ranch with horses always in my life. This was a "can't put down" book for me.
There is a very small bit of violence (as there always is when war is involved) but I HIGHLY recommend this book for anyone over about 10 or 11. Especially horselovers or adventurers. Young horsemen and horsewomen will see themselves as I did in the bond that is shared by Meagan and Promise and that which Jennifer had shared with Moose ~ Promise's dam. (Dam is what the mare is called when she gives birth or foals.)
This is definitely a book that adults and kids can both read and discuss. There is a thorough glossary in the back that would be an extremely useful tool for all. On the learning side, I think this would be a fantastic series for riding instructors and first time horse owners as well. For the adventure and fantasy lovers, some other readers have compared this to an equine version of the "Harry Potter" series. It's a fun and engrossing story that has just begun and none of us will want to end!
Although I would like to apologize to the author John Royce first. I've had this book for quite a while and have just now got a chance to share my review ~ it's one that was worth the wait though! And just in time to TOP my GIFT-WORTHY list..
Horse-crazy teenager Meagan Roberts is the proud owner of an amazingly rare Palomino Thoroughbred filly (girl horse) named "Promise". As Meagan dreams of the future and waits for Promise to grow enough to start training, many strange people start showing up and trying to buy the unusual filly from the Roberts family. The prices they offer are both staggering and suspicious. A strange old woman also comes to visit after the filly is born at dawn on June 21st ~ the summer solstice. She makes some odd comments before going on her way. There is a lot of interest in this "backyard" foal.
Meagan receives an intriguing invitation for her and a guardian to luncheon at a mansion nearby. The mysterious hostess is Mrs. Bridgestone, the strange old lady who had come to see Promise. The reason for her interest becomes clear as she reveals that she believes Promise to be one of the legendary "Great Horses". These horses are those who were prominent in history, making their own marks along with humans and gods. Meagan believes Mrs. Bridgestone and wonders about the warning she gives her to not ride Promise. She feels this could bring darkness according to a hundred year old letter and verse written by the beloved horseman Chief Joseph of the Nez Perce :
A hundred years hence on this westmost shore,
The Great Horse comes to men once more.
History lights the future's course,
With lessons learned from the Horse;
So born of loss and mother's grief,
The Great Horse takes a might leap.
Eclipsed by shadow, the golden spark
Shall wing her rider into the dark.
Meagan's mother Jennifer doesn't believe the legend, even though almost every line seems to be referring to Promise. Jennifer won't let Meagan see Mrs. Bridgestone after the visit because she thinks the old lady is crazy. I won't go too much into detail as to what occurs next, but Promise and Meagan start on a journey where they visit other 'Great Horses' and make their own mark on the past of both humans and equines.
The author is obviously a horseman himself. He writes about horses, their care and behaviour with the authority of one who has lived with them. His writing is very clear and very engaging. I saw myself in Meagan as I was one of those kids who would spend 10 hours cleaning the barn before I'd spend 1 hour helping in the house. (I'm still that way I'm afraid.) She is an endearing and very likable guide on this horseback ride through time.
History, fantasy, myth, adventure and proper equine care all shine brightly in this first book in the trilogy. Royce weaves all of these elements together beautifully and young readers probably won't even notice that they are learning about history and horse care while on this great ride back through time. I learned quite a bit myself and I grew up on a horse ranch with horses always in my life. This was a "can't put down" book for me.
There is a very small bit of violence (as there always is when war is involved) but I HIGHLY recommend this book for anyone over about 10 or 11. Especially horselovers or adventurers. Young horsemen and horsewomen will see themselves as I did in the bond that is shared by Meagan and Promise and that which Jennifer had shared with Moose ~ Promise's dam. (Dam is what the mare is called when she gives birth or foals.)
This is definitely a book that adults and kids can both read and discuss. There is a thorough glossary in the back that would be an extremely useful tool for all. On the learning side, I think this would be a fantastic series for riding instructors and first time horse owners as well. For the adventure and fantasy lovers, some other readers have compared this to an equine version of the "Harry Potter" series. It's a fun and engrossing story that has just begun and none of us will want to end!
October 1, 2009
Reviewed July 13,2008 at Allison's Attic
John Royce brings to life the story of a young, horse crazed teenager named Meagan and her horse named Promise. Even as the summer solstice brings happiness in the birth of Promise, mystery surrounds her from that day forward. People start coming around Meagan’s house asking questions about Promise and wanting to purchase her. An older lady in particular talks to Meagan and her mom about the history of “The Great Horse.” She feels that Promise may be that horse, but of the ‘dark’ variety. The only way to know is for the owner to ride the horse. Meagan and her family don’t know whether to believe this woman or not, but one night some men try and steal Promise. Meagan takes it upon herself to save Promise, but the only way to do so is to ride her. You can only imagine the look on her face when Promise sprouts wings and takes Meagan on the ride of her life. This is where the story really begins.
Her adventure takes her from the time of the caveman to Ancient Rome to Genghis Khan to the Crusades. As time and history goes by, she sees how the horse has gone from something eaten for food to being used as weapons in attacks. She realizes that she must use her equestrian knowledge to help her survive these different periods in history. Each time, she waits for Promise to come back to take her home.
“Eclipsed by Shadow” is an adventure about the love of horses that young and old will love to read. The history of the horse is only part of the book. Meagan’s interaction with the people of each era is amazing to read. The intertwining of horse history with the fantasy of winged horses makes for a book you can enjoy and learn from at the same time. The book will pull you in to the darkness of history and not let you stop reading until you get to the end. I can’t wait for the next book to come out!
This is the first book of “The Legend of the Great Horse” trilogy.
More information can be found at the website: http://www.thegreathorse.com
John Royce brings to life the story of a young, horse crazed teenager named Meagan and her horse named Promise. Even as the summer solstice brings happiness in the birth of Promise, mystery surrounds her from that day forward. People start coming around Meagan’s house asking questions about Promise and wanting to purchase her. An older lady in particular talks to Meagan and her mom about the history of “The Great Horse.” She feels that Promise may be that horse, but of the ‘dark’ variety. The only way to know is for the owner to ride the horse. Meagan and her family don’t know whether to believe this woman or not, but one night some men try and steal Promise. Meagan takes it upon herself to save Promise, but the only way to do so is to ride her. You can only imagine the look on her face when Promise sprouts wings and takes Meagan on the ride of her life. This is where the story really begins.
Her adventure takes her from the time of the caveman to Ancient Rome to Genghis Khan to the Crusades. As time and history goes by, she sees how the horse has gone from something eaten for food to being used as weapons in attacks. She realizes that she must use her equestrian knowledge to help her survive these different periods in history. Each time, she waits for Promise to come back to take her home.
“Eclipsed by Shadow” is an adventure about the love of horses that young and old will love to read. The history of the horse is only part of the book. Meagan’s interaction with the people of each era is amazing to read. The intertwining of horse history with the fantasy of winged horses makes for a book you can enjoy and learn from at the same time. The book will pull you in to the darkness of history and not let you stop reading until you get to the end. I can’t wait for the next book to come out!
This is the first book of “The Legend of the Great Horse” trilogy.
More information can be found at the website: http://www.thegreathorse.com
August 11, 2017
The beginning of the book is a bit of a prelude. The reader learns about Meagan and her family as well as their horse(s). Meagan is presented as a born horse lover. This part of the book is a bit slow but builds necessary tension. Once promise comes home, the story starts moving fast.
This book reads a bit like horse historical fiction. I was elated to discover this. “Eclipsed by Shadow” is emotional, educational and entertaining all at the same time. Which is really what I love most about historical fiction.
While we travel throughout the ages with Meagan we get to experience an intimate corner of each period while Meagan searches for the time periods Great Horse. This was very educational for me as well as entertaining. Although I am a horse lover, I won’t pretend I know anything about their history. Having a story that basically centers around the animals plight in each time period was fascinating and exhilarating.
John Royce pulls few punches as he details a horses and humans life in each time period. This is some of the most honest adaptions of history that I have read. Certainly it is the most detailed I’ve read about the horses. It will no doubt pull at your heart strings and open your mind further to the cruelty humanity is capable of.
The story flows steadily and lingers just long enough in each time period to pull the reader in emotionally without one period consuming the entire story. I would love to see John Royce build off these ideas and write entire books that focus on a singular period. His writing style is entrancing and I thoroughly enjoyed every word I read.
Few people have the skill to adequately weave a fictional story with factual history in a believable fashion. John Royce undoubtedly posses this skill.
To see my full review, check out my blog AlliesOpinions on Wordpress!
This book reads a bit like horse historical fiction. I was elated to discover this. “Eclipsed by Shadow” is emotional, educational and entertaining all at the same time. Which is really what I love most about historical fiction.
While we travel throughout the ages with Meagan we get to experience an intimate corner of each period while Meagan searches for the time periods Great Horse. This was very educational for me as well as entertaining. Although I am a horse lover, I won’t pretend I know anything about their history. Having a story that basically centers around the animals plight in each time period was fascinating and exhilarating.
John Royce pulls few punches as he details a horses and humans life in each time period. This is some of the most honest adaptions of history that I have read. Certainly it is the most detailed I’ve read about the horses. It will no doubt pull at your heart strings and open your mind further to the cruelty humanity is capable of.
The story flows steadily and lingers just long enough in each time period to pull the reader in emotionally without one period consuming the entire story. I would love to see John Royce build off these ideas and write entire books that focus on a singular period. His writing style is entrancing and I thoroughly enjoyed every word I read.
Few people have the skill to adequately weave a fictional story with factual history in a believable fashion. John Royce undoubtedly posses this skill.
To see my full review, check out my blog AlliesOpinions on Wordpress!
December 23, 2011
I received this book from Librarything member giveaway in exchange for an honest review.
Overall, I enjoyed reading this novel. There are a lot of strengths to this novel. It's engaging, especially for anyone who has ever been enthralled by horses (I definitely was!). It is very well researched- I was fascinated by the history of horses and how different cultures interacted and thought of them. I really enjoyed the elderly lady that took interest in the Legend of the great horse. And for the time travel, I thought that her time in Rome and her time in Asia, were exceptionally well done. I loved her interactions with Father Bartholemew and the kind gladiator in Rome. Finally, the book is well written.
There are some downsides to this book, but this should not be an issue with the following novels in the trilogy. The problem was mainly Meagan going to time periods where A) it was so far in the past that language had not been developed yet or B) she did not speak the language (like in the Genghis Khan section). The lack of connection with other characters made it fall flat during this time, which is an issue that doesn't really have an easy solution. The author minimized this issue by making those sections much shorter, which was a very good idea. Again, I think that as Meagan gets closer to her own time, this will no longer be an issue.
This novel is definitely a worthwhile read, and I'm looking forward to the next installment!
Overall, I enjoyed reading this novel. There are a lot of strengths to this novel. It's engaging, especially for anyone who has ever been enthralled by horses (I definitely was!). It is very well researched- I was fascinated by the history of horses and how different cultures interacted and thought of them. I really enjoyed the elderly lady that took interest in the Legend of the great horse. And for the time travel, I thought that her time in Rome and her time in Asia, were exceptionally well done. I loved her interactions with Father Bartholemew and the kind gladiator in Rome. Finally, the book is well written.
There are some downsides to this book, but this should not be an issue with the following novels in the trilogy. The problem was mainly Meagan going to time periods where A) it was so far in the past that language had not been developed yet or B) she did not speak the language (like in the Genghis Khan section). The lack of connection with other characters made it fall flat during this time, which is an issue that doesn't really have an easy solution. The author minimized this issue by making those sections much shorter, which was a very good idea. Again, I think that as Meagan gets closer to her own time, this will no longer be an issue.
This novel is definitely a worthwhile read, and I'm looking forward to the next installment!
November 30, 2010
"Eclipsed by Shadow", the first book in the trilogy, "The Legend of the Great Horse" describes the adventures of the young girl, Meagan, and the spectacular mare, Promise, as they travel back in time. After introductory chapters in present day California, Promise brings Meagan back to 20,000 BC. After a brief sojourn with the earliest horses, Meagan moves back forward through history born on the back of each period’s incarnation of the Great Horse. She stops briefly at the Black Sea in 700 BC and then rides on to Rome at the peak power of the ancient empire. Here the story really takes hold as Meagan is challenged to discover which horse is to be hers. After a surprising chariot race, she wonders how she will be rescued, only to find herself riding into an equally threatening medieval adventure.
John Royce is to be congratulated for suspenseful tales with well-researched historical details. The concept of envisioning the role of the horse at different periods of time through the eyes of a compelling twenty-first century protagonist is fascinating. The end of Book I leaves the reader eagerly awaiting the second book in the trilogy with great anticipation.
John Royce is to be congratulated for suspenseful tales with well-researched historical details. The concept of envisioning the role of the horse at different periods of time through the eyes of a compelling twenty-first century protagonist is fascinating. The end of Book I leaves the reader eagerly awaiting the second book in the trilogy with great anticipation.
December 17, 2010
I was excited to win and looked forward to reading this young adult book. I am a retired elementary teacher and volunteer at the middle school library so I do read my fair share of books for kids! And because I am an historical fiction junkie, and like some fantasy as well, "Eclipsed By Shadow" was a win/win for me.
It was obvious from the beginning of this book that the author has a love for and great knowledge of horses and my interest was piqued throughout by that particular information as well as the use of horses in history. There were a couple of places in the book that felt a little disjointed as though the information that I was reading would have importance later and it was a little disconcerting to find that wasn't the case. Since this is the first in a trilogy, perhaps those stories will have some meaning in the sequels, but having read only the first book, they seem extraneous.
However, I was engaged throughout the novel and I will be looking forward to reading the other two books to see what happens to the main character and her horse.
It was obvious from the beginning of this book that the author has a love for and great knowledge of horses and my interest was piqued throughout by that particular information as well as the use of horses in history. There were a couple of places in the book that felt a little disjointed as though the information that I was reading would have importance later and it was a little disconcerting to find that wasn't the case. Since this is the first in a trilogy, perhaps those stories will have some meaning in the sequels, but having read only the first book, they seem extraneous.
However, I was engaged throughout the novel and I will be looking forward to reading the other two books to see what happens to the main character and her horse.
June 11, 2011
I really enjoyed this book. I went into it with the mindset of a middle school female reading this book. If you did not know much about the care of horses, it explains all the care that goes into horses. If you have had horses in the past, it brings back wonderful memories of the magnificent animal.
I loved how this book presented fascinating history in an exciting and suspenseful way. I am not a fan of reading history but Royce brought history to life with this book. I will remember many of the details in this book longer than I have ever remember any of the history books I read in school.
The only complaints I have of this book is that I did not really understand the importance of the short section Royce title "Escort" and I felt like Royce could have made the ending more of a cliff hanger in preparation of the second book.
Overall, I would definitely recommend this book to pre-teen girls. I think they would find it entertaining and learn something at the same time.
I loved how this book presented fascinating history in an exciting and suspenseful way. I am not a fan of reading history but Royce brought history to life with this book. I will remember many of the details in this book longer than I have ever remember any of the history books I read in school.
The only complaints I have of this book is that I did not really understand the importance of the short section Royce title "Escort" and I felt like Royce could have made the ending more of a cliff hanger in preparation of the second book.
Overall, I would definitely recommend this book to pre-teen girls. I think they would find it entertaining and learn something at the same time.
June 21, 2012
John Royce has introduced us to a young girl that is a tomboy at heart Megan Roberts, who loves horses. Through out the story we the readers learn exactly how horses have been used throughout history. It is a great book with the addition of the facts and even places that are real. The places that are described in the book are real.
Megan found Promise a great horse or so she is told. You can follow her on her journey as they learn about each other and the world. Megan tries to help other understand her great love for Promise and all horses.
Ecliped by shadow is well worth owning. I love the terms in the back of the book if you dont know much about horses. I can not wait to read The legend of the great horse. I recommend this book to everyone, you wont be disappointed.
July 13, 2009
For a person who feels great anxiety around horses because of all that power and strength, I have found John Royce's book, Eclipsed By Shadow, to be riveting and unpredictable. It's truly amazing to enjoy a well written novel and come away with new knowledge. This book is about a young girl who's love of horses is her only defense against the treatment of horses through the ages. Meagan travels through time to meet the "Greats" of the past and tries to survive all that she encounters. This is the first book in the trilogy and I can't wait to read the second.
May 17, 2011
“Eclipsed by Shadow” was a magical horse story that is suitable for both teenagers and adults alike. The equine and world history aspects were fascinating and well researched by the author. Some facts that I did not know were that horses existed back in 20,000 B.C. or when stirrups, saddles, and horseshoes were discovered. The ending left me breathless wanting to find out what time period Promise was taking Meagan to next.
December 2, 2010
The beginning seemed a bit slow, but after that the book was very interesting. I particularly liked the idea of the plot, that a teenage girl travels through time, and the bits of history about horses added information that I have never seen in other historical fiction books.
Book received through LibraryThing Member Giveaway; original review posted on LibraryThing.
Book received through LibraryThing Member Giveaway; original review posted on LibraryThing.
January 3, 2012
This book has a lot of interesting facts about horses. Through out history there has been memorable horses. This book shows the lives of these Great Horses and the effect that they had in history. Meagan is lucky enough to have one of these Great Horses. With this Great Horse, she is transported through these times to see the lives of these amazing animals.
July 19, 2009
I really enjoyed this book. I thought it was original, informative, and interesting. I just felt some of the facts were just thrown in instead of actually party of the story. Other than that I thought it was great and I look forward to reading the next two.
March 8, 2012
Very Good Book! I like horses, but this book really goes into alot of depth. Personally this was not an easy read for me as I kept having to go back and re-read sections. However If you like Horses this book would be one I highly recommend reading.
April 25, 2016
I am not big on books that have historical connotations, but this was a fun read. I am looking forward to reading the rest of the series!
I was given this book in exchange for an honest review via LibraryThing.
I was given this book in exchange for an honest review via LibraryThing.
March 18, 2011
It was okay, but not something I would read again or recommend highly. I don't intend to purchase books 2 or 3 in the series. And I don't understand the high ratings given by Goodreads members.
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