Goodreads helps you keep track of books you want to read.
Start by marking “Creeg (The Tellox, #1)” as Want to Read:
Creeg (The Tellox, #1)
Enlarge cover
Rate this book
Clear rating
Open Preview


(The Tellox #1)

3.77  ·  Rating details ·  1,238 ratings  ·  107 reviews
They were created, betrayed and nearly eradicated as a species.
The rest they did to themselves.
The Tellox are known as the finest warriors in every known galaxy, animalistic, powerful and infinitely hard to kill. They heal from nearly any wound and do not age. But they have no females left, and with the destruction of their bloodmates so long ago, nothing worth fighting
Kindle Edition, 122 pages
Published January 21st 2017 by KLM
More Details... edit details

Friend Reviews

To see what your friends thought of this book, please sign up.

Community Reviews

Showing 1-30
3.77  · 
Rating details
 ·  1,238 ratings  ·  107 reviews

More filters
Sort order
4.25 stars

I really enjoyed this quite a bit! Thank you Susani for the recommendation!! :D

The only thing I didn't like was that the h and H were sometimes kind of rough with each other during sex, including scratching and biting and drawing blood. It fit their animal natures for sure, but it didn't appeal to me personally.

The heroine did push the hero away for a bit, but I really couldn't blame her considering the circumstances.

I am really looking forward to the next book in the series, and ho
Feb 03, 2017 rated it it was amazing
I'm not sure if I would rate this one a 4 1/2 or a 5 but for the simple fact that this one got my out of book funk this one deserves a 5. I didn't skip or want to skip anything in this book. I loved the world building and the main characters and I can't wait to see what will happen in book 2. There are so many characters in this book that I am waiting for their own books. the hero was great, possessive, demanding, and willing to do whatever to get the woman he wanted. I really really liked this ...more
This was a solid book. Completely safe with a virgin hero!
But enough with the damn heroines who act like crazy bitches! I do not at all understand why when heroines are faced with a jerk/manwhore they literally faint with intense desire for them but when it comes to honorable/non-manwhore/completely devoted heros they could give less of a shit and push them away at nasuem.
This was a good start to what will be a great new and SAFE series. All the heros are confirmed virgins.
~ 2.5 stars~

I'm always up for a good alien romance so I was eager to check this one out. Here's my breakdown:

The pros:
* Hero was a virgin - no manwhore here
* Offered as a kindleunlimited
* Plenty of action (and not just in the bedroom)

The cons:
* I didn’t like the hero on this one - he was very inconsiderate and never seemed to put the heroines needs above his own. He was consistently selfish and showed no compassion towards the heroine. He just took her from her world and never seemed to express
Monty Cupcake ☠ Queen of Bloodshed ☠
Eh. Needs editing. I think this is self published, but there were a few continuity errors - her sisters changed to her cousins, Rygan changed to Rylan, etc.

The story was ok. It wasn't romance as much as alien biology getting into the human biology and making them all hot to mate. That's not romance, that's just going into heat and nature telling the animals to procreate.

The plot on the Tellox planet was stunted. It should've been longer to better explain and flesh it out. I know there's anothe
2.5 stars
Has all the earmarks of a story I would normally love but just didn't enjoy it. Hero was a selfish dick who seems to not care at all about heroines pain, choice or wants. He forced his his bite on her to begin changing her DNA without her consent. Kidnaps her despite her protests. Her heartache was merely irritation.
He breaks his vow not to force sex until they reach his planet. (She's a virgin)

Exposes her to even more trouble by taking her to his world as the only woman. Then endanger
This review has been hidden because it contains spoilers. To view it, click here.
Feb 13, 2017 rated it really liked it
Shelves: sci-fi
Well, I was warned! The synopsis did say that although each book presents a new romance, the story will continue throughout the series. I just never thought that Ms. Lucille would ever have me wanting to chunk my ipad at a wall when the story ended but didn’t. In other words, I was left hanging in a huge way. Huge enough that I’ll be waiting for some more releases to happen before I dive back into this story. This in no way means I didn’t enjoy Creeg. It was heartbreaking and exciting, especiall ...more
Gail Koger
Jan 30, 2017 rated it really liked it
Good read

I really enjoyed this book. Loved the characters. Lots of action. I would recommend this book. A nice short read
Feb 19, 2017 rated it did not like it
yeahhh... this was kind of rape-y... Just because you can "smell" desire, does not mean it is ok to act on it when the lady is screaming no....
Cliffhanger Warning!
Available in Kindle Unlimited

Good start to a new series. I will read the next part of the story when it's released.
Mar 11, 2017 rated it did not like it

DNF at 45%
I found this book immensely uncomfortable and rapey, and I've read romances where there are actual rapes (I didn't like those either).

While the heroine does kind of give permission (eventually), it's definitely in a forced seduction kind of way. In fact, I feel this book needs a trigger warning. There are times when the heroine clearly says stop or no and the "hero", Creeg (a name I kept rolling my eyes at and thinking about Arnold Schwarzenegger), keeps manhandling her. One part
Feb 04, 2017 rated it liked it
Shelves: alien, typos
Loved it but it was difficult to read

This alien romance was right up my alley (fated mates, sexyness, and danger) but the writing was confusing.

"She pulled out into the transport lanes and vehicles that were making use of it."

Immediately I thought she was in a car accident. But no, this sentence structure was continued throughout the story. I had to reread so many compound sentences to understand what was meant. There were a couple grammatical errors as well.

But I'm excited for the next book! Th
Jul 31, 2017 rated it did not like it
Shelves: scifi-romance
I haven't read a book so awful in a while. There will be spoiler ahead so be warned! Books like this give bad name of the gender honestly. The main hero kidnaps the female rapes her and then in the end she suffers from Stockholm syndrome and doesn't care that the same thing will happen to others. I have read many books with similar premise but this is the worst by a mile. I recommend to everyone who thinks to read this book to go find something else!
Coyora Dokusho
Quick read! I felt uncomfortable at times because of the dub con but... I feel like it managed to stay on the decent side of the line. Looking forward to the rest of the series!
Mar 13, 2018 rated it liked it
For all the people who reviewed this saying that the heroine was annoying, eff that. I was prepared to find her annoying not crying a big fat angry tear for all the injustice she suffered. She is kidnapped, bitten and turned into an alien race, forced into a mating heat, all while her mate has ZERO empathy for her and why she is upset. He finally gets her to have sex with him then uses it to FORCE her to admit she is his, i.e. submit. I'm sorry, but how is that romantic? Why is her hating that s ...more
Nov 06, 2017 rated it liked it
The heroine was resistant to the mating for far too long. Although I cannot fault her, it just irritated me as I wanted more romance. It’s a good start to a series and the hero is hot! I liked that the hero was not this super powerful alien even though he was a Tellox general and he acknowledges that some other Tellox are stronger than him. He failed to kill the crazy king so that added a bit of grounding to the story.
Bethyboo ღ The Book Addict ღ
I don't usually have a issue with the whole life mate/blood mate/ fated mate (whatever you want to call it) thing. Honestly i actually love it, but sadly not this time. It just felt weird with Sara fighting against it the whole time and then suddenly from one page to the next she loves Creeg oh so much and doesn't want to live without him. I felt like there was no inner transition from hating to loving and it bugged me. Don't even get me started on the King because he's just crazy and i hate him ...more
Jan 31, 2017 rated it really liked it
I enjoyed this book a lot my only complaint and also keeping me from giving a 5 star is the pushing away that Sara does. I can understand some of it but it really started to get Annoying.
Full of steam that sometimes got a little rough,almost animalistic at times but then again you are reading about an alien who has an inner-beast that is all alpha and possessive.
Definitely recommend!!!
Aug 17, 2018 rated it liked it
Shelves: scifi, 2018, 2017, aliens
A interesting start, can't wait to see where it goes.
Mar 06, 2017 rated it it was ok

I can't say I was a big fan of this book. It definitely leaned towards no and at times questionable consent. I just didn't like that. The premise was interesting but the romance wasn't well developed. It was I hate you, I hate you, I love you. I couldn't get into it. I wanted to like the story but forcing the issue made me dislike it.
Feb 22, 2017 rated it liked it
book 6 of Weekend Book Slump

This book was slightly better than my other 5 face palms, but comparing it to books I actually liked, prob should truly get 2 stars. I have been on an alien kick as of recent and this one intrigued me just as much as the series I read. This one was less fleshed out though. I would have liked to see a bit more world building. The humans know about the aliens in this series and that right there could have been 2 chapters just to explain how the hell that happened. I am
Feb 25, 2017 rated it really liked it

I really enjoyed this book and look forward to more. This looks like a promising start to a new series. Creeg and Sarah were interesting and I want to see what happens with the mad king and Sarah's sisters. I want to see what happens with earth and the rest of the Tellox.
Feb 26, 2017 rated it really liked it
a good read

the reasons why I choose this rating because it was a good read but to much agitation and forceful action in the wrong way.
Izzie d
Mar 20, 2017 rated it really liked it
I thought this was an excellent start to what I hope is going to be a series.
Sara is 'stolen' from earth by Commander Creeg of the Tellox as he feels a 'pull' towards her, then he discovers she is his blood mate.
Sara fought him tooth and nail although she feels the 'pull' too, she doesn't just give in as soon as he touches her in fact she makes this difficult for him.
There were a group of warriors on board with them who add to the story and will provide future stories, i hope.
Mar 13, 2017 rated it did not like it
Not enough emotional payout for this non/dub con mating. Not impressed with Creeg. He was so feral he couldn't rationalize nor sympathize. Sex was bad. Cliffhanger ending. Writing was choppy and abrupt.
Dec 28, 2018 rated it it was ok
Extremely frustrated!

I wanted to love this series so much, but ughhhhh!!! There are SO MANY holes and missing details that the flow is bumpy and very irritating. For starters, at the beginning I hated Sara and her dumb stubbornness. If she would have used some common sense and approached things logically she could have communicated and made decisions to make things A LOT easier on herself. For example, PACK A BAG when he tells you too repeatedly. He warned her if she didn’t she wouldn’t have any
Caitlyn Coral
Apr 24, 2019 rated it did not like it
Shelves: dnf
This review has been hidden because it contains spoilers. To view it, click here.
Aug 04, 2017 rated it liked it
Shelves: sci-fi, aliens
First of all, I want to say that I actually like it when a book manages to coax strong emotions from me. Whether they are bad or good, at least it means that I was engaged in the story enough to feel strongly about it. So, even if I may sound really angry, it's not necessary a bad thing. Now to the actual book.
So, I picked it up expecting a guilty pleasure read, you know? Who knew that I would actually be so pissed throughout most of it.
Nothing new, really. An alien saw a human girl and felt a
« previous 1 3 4 next »
There are no discussion topics on this book yet. Be the first to start one »

Readers also enjoyed

  • Princess SOS (The Ravager Chronicles, #1)
  • Lips Like Ice
  • Savior (The Inteli #1)
  • Sarazen's Claim (Sarazen Saga, #1)
  • UnBonded (Ruth & Gron, #3)
  • Arena Station (Champions of Terra, #1)
  • Morgan's Choice (Morgan Selwood, #1)
  • My One
  • Captured by the Cyborg (Cy-Ops #3)
  • Stoan (Mated to the Alien, #3)
  • Aydan (The Azziarin, #6)
  • Venomous Craving (Eok Warriors, #1)
  • The Lion's Woman (Interstellar Visitors)
  • The Claiming of Moira Shine
  • Earth Files: Book 1 (Dark Planet Warriors, #8.1)
  • Thief of Hearts (The Pruxnae, #1)
  • The Alien's Prize (Warriors of Luxiria, #1)
  • Antidote (Love and War, #1)
See similar books…
Kelly Lucille is the author of paranormal and fantasy romance.
She has a B.A. Degree in Creative Writing and Literature from Naropa University.
Her first book "Keeping Her" published in July of 2013.

On a more personal note- I read my first romance novel: "Shanna" by Kathleen E. Woodiwiss when I was 13 years old. I still read it every year or so just to remember how amazing a really good romance nove

Other books in the series

The Tellox (3 books)
  • Morax (The Tellox, #2)
  • Brax (The Tellox, #3)