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Unknown Binding
Published April 4, 2017
*characters thinking something, then saying the exact same thing aloudAll of which could have been solved with some basic editing.
*the retelling of events that the reader already knew about in detail
*repetitive plot recapping
*characters spontaneously blurting secrets without provocation to further the plot
*a lot of misused words
*repetitive phrasing, IE: "Just come inside." He gestured for me to walk inside.
*the 'conflict' being resolved with ridiculous ease