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Before a Fall: A Pride and Prejudice Reimagining
When Mr. Collins makes his awful proposal, Elizabeth runs away - straight into a confrontation between none other than George Wickham and Georgiana Darcy. Elizabeth wants to escape Mr. Collins clutches; Georgiana wants a confidante who understands what she has been through. The friendship that springs up between the two and the resulting events change the course of Jane Austen's best-loved novel. And of course, there is always the question of how a certain stern gentleman will react to his sister's new acquaintance... Beginning the day after the Netherfield Ball, Before a Fall examines what could have happened in Pride and Prejudice if several key events were tweaked slightly. Will Mr. Wickham get his comeuppance? Will Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy find their happily ever after? One thing is certain - pride cometh before a fall.
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February 6, 2017
“Every challenge you encounter in life is a fork in the road. You have the choice to choose which way to go – backward, forward, breakdown or breakthrough.” Ifeanyi Enoch Onuoha, Overcoming the Challenges of Life
I had a very hard time liking this Elizabeth. She was bold, brash, brazen, and thoroughly modern in her thinking and in her attitude. It was to the point that every time she opened her mouth… or we were allowed into her thoughts, I cringed. She treated Mr. Darcy terribly and never had a kind word for him. They completely misunderstand each other at every turn and could not be in each other’s company without causing offense. Every word from Mr. Darcy’s mouth, she twisted it into something completely negative and totally different from his meaning. She was constantly thinking the worst of him.
Then, circumstances forced them to marry before they had worked out their strained relationship. That went over like a rock through plate-glass. It was horrible. Where was Elizabeth’s determination to rise in the face of intimidation? Yeah, she may have stood toe-to-toe with Lady Catherine… [oh, and… it’s not Lady de Bourgh, by the way], but when they arrived at Pemberley, things went completely downhill. Elizabeth became a cowering wimp, and I soon grew tired and weary of her critical self-deprecating attitude. She was intimidated by Mrs. Reynolds, disheartened by the gossip she overheard from the maids, and struggled with the disrespect and glares from the servants. I really struggled with this one. To see Mr. Darcy dress down beloved Mrs. Reynolds, regarding her behavior [and that of the other servants], toward Elizabeth, was difficult.
There is a fine line that an author has to walk in order to bring Austen’s characters to life in a variation. Elizabeth’s character is especially difficult as there is a big difference between brash and spontaneous, teasing and cutting/cruelty, and snarky and witty comments. In this story, I’m not sure our author accomplished that with Elizabeth. Readers of JAFF and variations want to like Elizabeth. We anticipate gleefully her swordplay with Darcy… but don’t want him wounded by her drawing first blood. We expect Darcy to love Elizabeth, in spite of her connections, fortune, interest and relations, but not regret her due to her bad attitude and behavior. To do so is unconscionable.
This author reached into canon and pulled out bits and pieces of conversations, statements and expressions and attempted to incorporate them into a story that was different than the average JAFF. I can appreciate that; however, there are standards that readers expect. Somehow this story turned dark and negative. I grew weary as I continued to read. I knew the tide had to turn. If I could just hold on long enough, it had to get better. Didn’t it? Just to relieve your anxiety…it did get better; however, I had to wait a long time for it.
Rating: PG-17, there were scenes of a sensual, intimate nature between a newly married couple. However, they were not graphic or explicit.
EPILOGUE:
“Every challenge you face today makes you stronger tomorrow. The challenge of life is intended to make you better, not bitter.” Roy T. Bennett, The Light in the Heart
The epilogue was several years later and there had been many changes within the family. There were a few surprises that I did not expect and a few questions that I felt were not answered… hinted at perhaps, but not clarified. I think a little explanation would have helped a lot.
I had a very hard time liking this Elizabeth. She was bold, brash, brazen, and thoroughly modern in her thinking and in her attitude. It was to the point that every time she opened her mouth… or we were allowed into her thoughts, I cringed. She treated Mr. Darcy terribly and never had a kind word for him. They completely misunderstand each other at every turn and could not be in each other’s company without causing offense. Every word from Mr. Darcy’s mouth, she twisted it into something completely negative and totally different from his meaning. She was constantly thinking the worst of him.
Then, circumstances forced them to marry before they had worked out their strained relationship. That went over like a rock through plate-glass. It was horrible. Where was Elizabeth’s determination to rise in the face of intimidation? Yeah, she may have stood toe-to-toe with Lady Catherine… [oh, and… it’s not Lady de Bourgh, by the way], but when they arrived at Pemberley, things went completely downhill. Elizabeth became a cowering wimp, and I soon grew tired and weary of her critical self-deprecating attitude. She was intimidated by Mrs. Reynolds, disheartened by the gossip she overheard from the maids, and struggled with the disrespect and glares from the servants. I really struggled with this one. To see Mr. Darcy dress down beloved Mrs. Reynolds, regarding her behavior [and that of the other servants], toward Elizabeth, was difficult.
There is a fine line that an author has to walk in order to bring Austen’s characters to life in a variation. Elizabeth’s character is especially difficult as there is a big difference between brash and spontaneous, teasing and cutting/cruelty, and snarky and witty comments. In this story, I’m not sure our author accomplished that with Elizabeth. Readers of JAFF and variations want to like Elizabeth. We anticipate gleefully her swordplay with Darcy… but don’t want him wounded by her drawing first blood. We expect Darcy to love Elizabeth, in spite of her connections, fortune, interest and relations, but not regret her due to her bad attitude and behavior. To do so is unconscionable.
This author reached into canon and pulled out bits and pieces of conversations, statements and expressions and attempted to incorporate them into a story that was different than the average JAFF. I can appreciate that; however, there are standards that readers expect. Somehow this story turned dark and negative. I grew weary as I continued to read. I knew the tide had to turn. If I could just hold on long enough, it had to get better. Didn’t it? Just to relieve your anxiety…it did get better; however, I had to wait a long time for it.
Rating: PG-17, there were scenes of a sensual, intimate nature between a newly married couple. However, they were not graphic or explicit.
EPILOGUE:
“Every challenge you face today makes you stronger tomorrow. The challenge of life is intended to make you better, not bitter.” Roy T. Bennett, The Light in the Heart
The epilogue was several years later and there had been many changes within the family. There were a few surprises that I did not expect and a few questions that I felt were not answered… hinted at perhaps, but not clarified. I think a little explanation would have helped a lot.
February 6, 2017
4.5 rounded up to 5 stars
This Pride and Prejudice variation begins after the Netherfield ball. Elizabeth has escaped Longbourn and her mother's harassment over refusing Mr. Collins' marriage proposal and takes a long walk. She stumbles across Mr. Wickham manhandling a struggling Georgiana Darcy, who has just arrived at Netherfield, and Elizabeth drives him away by throwing rocks at him. The two girls, both shaken from the experience, quickly form a strong bond and exchange confidences.
Thus, when Mr. Darcy finds them, he and Georgiana are happy to offer Elizabeth a ride to London. He wants to get Georgiana away from the vicinity of Wickham, while Elizabeth wants to visit her Aunt and Uncle Gardiner for a while, hopefully until her mother's anger at her abates.
Although Elizabeth now realizes that Wickham's stories were all lies and she admires Darcy's care for his sister, she still finds him haughty and distant. She continues to dislike him and does not understand him at all. This is the central thread throughout the entire story. The plot moves forward with some familiar-sounding (yet different) plot elements, but all surround this central negative impression that Elizabeth has of Darcy and her firm belief that he dislikes her.
Lydia runs away much earlier in this imagining, and Elizabeth is actively involved in finding and retrieving her sister. The circumstances precipitate another scandal which DOES become public, causing a forced wedding scenario between Elizabeth and Darcy.
The scenes at Pemberley are the most unique I've ever read, and they do make perfect sense due to the premise. It is not a warm, welcoming environment to Elizabeth, despite the tastefulness of the decor and beauty of the surrounding estate. The tension builds to a climax that is somewhat predictable, but it is well executed.
I find the writing engaging, although it definitely has a modern rather than a Regency tone in both narration and dialogue. (I don't think "okay" would have been in anyone's vocabulary back then!) This doesn't bug me as much as it might some readers. The grammar/spelling doesn't have many distracting errors that I notice, and that's more important to me than period authenticity. I also like the characterizations and feel that actions in these situations are plausible... with the exceptions of Georgiana walking the Netherfield grounds alone and Elizabeth visiting Darcy House in London without her aunt or a proper companion accompanying her. However, I do think the premise and twists on canon otherwise are nicely thought out.
I don't know if this would be considered a completely "chaste" story since there are a couple of sensual scenes with kissing and disrobement in the bedchamber. I thought they were lovely indications of Darcy's true feelings about Elizabeth. They only suggest what follows.
Overall, this is a book that I really enjoyed.
This Pride and Prejudice variation begins after the Netherfield ball. Elizabeth has escaped Longbourn and her mother's harassment over refusing Mr. Collins' marriage proposal and takes a long walk. She stumbles across Mr. Wickham manhandling a struggling Georgiana Darcy, who has just arrived at Netherfield, and Elizabeth drives him away by throwing rocks at him. The two girls, both shaken from the experience, quickly form a strong bond and exchange confidences.
Thus, when Mr. Darcy finds them, he and Georgiana are happy to offer Elizabeth a ride to London. He wants to get Georgiana away from the vicinity of Wickham, while Elizabeth wants to visit her Aunt and Uncle Gardiner for a while, hopefully until her mother's anger at her abates.
Although Elizabeth now realizes that Wickham's stories were all lies and she admires Darcy's care for his sister, she still finds him haughty and distant. She continues to dislike him and does not understand him at all. This is the central thread throughout the entire story. The plot moves forward with some familiar-sounding (yet different) plot elements, but all surround this central negative impression that Elizabeth has of Darcy and her firm belief that he dislikes her.
Lydia runs away much earlier in this imagining, and Elizabeth is actively involved in finding and retrieving her sister. The circumstances precipitate another scandal which DOES become public, causing a forced wedding scenario between Elizabeth and Darcy.
The scenes at Pemberley are the most unique I've ever read, and they do make perfect sense due to the premise. It is not a warm, welcoming environment to Elizabeth, despite the tastefulness of the decor and beauty of the surrounding estate. The tension builds to a climax that is somewhat predictable, but it is well executed.
I find the writing engaging, although it definitely has a modern rather than a Regency tone in both narration and dialogue. (I don't think "okay" would have been in anyone's vocabulary back then!) This doesn't bug me as much as it might some readers. The grammar/spelling doesn't have many distracting errors that I notice, and that's more important to me than period authenticity. I also like the characterizations and feel that actions in these situations are plausible... with the exceptions of Georgiana walking the Netherfield grounds alone and Elizabeth visiting Darcy House in London without her aunt or a proper companion accompanying her. However, I do think the premise and twists on canon otherwise are nicely thought out.
I don't know if this would be considered a completely "chaste" story since there are a couple of sensual scenes with kissing and disrobement in the bedchamber. I thought they were lovely indications of Darcy's true feelings about Elizabeth. They only suggest what follows.
Overall, this is a book that I really enjoyed.
February 7, 2017
I have to say that one of my biggest disappointments in this story is that we never read of Lizzy saying, “I love you.” to Darcy.
Yes, she is quite a modern woman in her complaints on the first page and later about how hard it is to be a woman. Even the dress code is restrictive. Running out of the house as Collins continues to drone on about how she is following the practice of young ladies to further excite the expectations of the men they intend to marry,…blah, blah, blah, she does come across Wickham who is threatening to do the worst to Georgiana. But Elizabeth has practiced the art of stone throwing and Wickham is gone. Darcy comes upon them and with Lizzy's cut hand and torn dress he and his sister insist she must come into Netherfield and be attended to. And then upon discussing why she was running away from her home, the offer is made to take her with them into London: her to the Gardiners and them to their home as G. cannot stay at Netherfield if W. is around.
Elizabeth becomes a true friend to Georgiana and the relationship is witnessed and compliments upon by Darcy. But the Elizabeth in this book is not going to give him any chance to redeem himself. She misinterprets words and actions.
Lydia and Wickham do it again and somehow, someone spreads the worst sort of gossip to the newspapers and it is not that couple who are in print. Darcy does the honorable thing and they then travel back to Pemberley alone. Time is needed for her to become accustomed to her role as the mistress without reference to Georgiana’s previous position in that role.
Now here I had some trouble liking the plot. The marriage is consummated but the relationship is cool at best. We hear no tender words although he is gentle and concerned that first night. They are rarely together other than at dinner and when first retiring for the night. And then there are the attitudes of the servants! This is not a Mrs. Reynolds we all know and love. And gossiping between maidservants – we are used to reading of this being forbidden at Darcy’s estates. And then there is the matter of neglect to upgrading Elizabeth’s wardrobe. Not a word or thought given to that. No introductions to neighbors with invites or visits?
So things seem to come to a head when a crisis occurs. William and Elizabeth finally open up and share some thoughts. But I was not a happy reader with some omissions. I wanted to hear words that included LOVE from Elizabeth.
The Epilogue does give us a nice wrap up and I was not really surprised by the one lady’s fate. This was a quick read and did have some captivating moments.
Yes, she is quite a modern woman in her complaints on the first page and later about how hard it is to be a woman. Even the dress code is restrictive. Running out of the house as Collins continues to drone on about how she is following the practice of young ladies to further excite the expectations of the men they intend to marry,…blah, blah, blah, she does come across Wickham who is threatening to do the worst to Georgiana. But Elizabeth has practiced the art of stone throwing and Wickham is gone. Darcy comes upon them and with Lizzy's cut hand and torn dress he and his sister insist she must come into Netherfield and be attended to. And then upon discussing why she was running away from her home, the offer is made to take her with them into London: her to the Gardiners and them to their home as G. cannot stay at Netherfield if W. is around.
Elizabeth becomes a true friend to Georgiana and the relationship is witnessed and compliments upon by Darcy. But the Elizabeth in this book is not going to give him any chance to redeem himself. She misinterprets words and actions.
Lydia and Wickham do it again and somehow, someone spreads the worst sort of gossip to the newspapers and it is not that couple who are in print. Darcy does the honorable thing and they then travel back to Pemberley alone. Time is needed for her to become accustomed to her role as the mistress without reference to Georgiana’s previous position in that role.
Now here I had some trouble liking the plot. The marriage is consummated but the relationship is cool at best. We hear no tender words although he is gentle and concerned that first night. They are rarely together other than at dinner and when first retiring for the night. And then there are the attitudes of the servants! This is not a Mrs. Reynolds we all know and love. And gossiping between maidservants – we are used to reading of this being forbidden at Darcy’s estates. And then there is the matter of neglect to upgrading Elizabeth’s wardrobe. Not a word or thought given to that. No introductions to neighbors with invites or visits?
So things seem to come to a head when a crisis occurs. William and Elizabeth finally open up and share some thoughts. But I was not a happy reader with some omissions. I wanted to hear words that included LOVE from Elizabeth.
The Epilogue does give us a nice wrap up and I was not really surprised by the one lady’s fate. This was a quick read and did have some captivating moments.
February 7, 2017
This is a different P&P what if- where upon her proposal from Mr. Collins Lizzy runs off into he woods and encounters a young woman being opportuned by Mr. Wickham. [Not to be confused with the book I am currently reading Mr Darcy's Resolve: A Pride & Prejudice Variation https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/3... where Lizzy runs off after her proposal from Mr. Collins and runs into Mr. Darcy (yes my life is starting to feel bizarre)]
Luckily there are some rocks nearby and Lizzy uses them to drive Mr. Wickham away. The young lady she has rescued is none other than Georgiana Darcy who is quickly found by her brother. Since Lizzy's hand is bleeding from a sharp rock they take her back to Netherfield. As she shares her story they offer to take her to London with them the next day so she can avoid her mother's wrath.
This leads to a period of Lizzy in London having a bizarre relationship with the Darcy's where she seems to constantly fight and spite with Mr. Darcy and spends her time despising him for despising her despite her behaving badly. And wandering around London without a suitable escort. Then she can't return to Longbourn because of her family's illness.
Then Lydia runs off with Wickham and suddenly she and Darcy are forced to work together which leads to a rumor which leads to a deranged Lady Catherine which leads to Lizzy having to marry Darcy and immediately flee to Pemberley.
And now the book solely concentrates on ODC who are both silent and brooding and Lizzy has an unexpected enemy in the house. Can she and Darcy admit their feeling?
Luckily there are some rocks nearby and Lizzy uses them to drive Mr. Wickham away. The young lady she has rescued is none other than Georgiana Darcy who is quickly found by her brother. Since Lizzy's hand is bleeding from a sharp rock they take her back to Netherfield. As she shares her story they offer to take her to London with them the next day so she can avoid her mother's wrath.
This leads to a period of Lizzy in London having a bizarre relationship with the Darcy's where she seems to constantly fight and spite with Mr. Darcy and spends her time despising him for despising her despite her behaving badly. And wandering around London without a suitable escort. Then she can't return to Longbourn because of her family's illness.
Then Lydia runs off with Wickham and suddenly she and Darcy are forced to work together which leads to a rumor which leads to a deranged Lady Catherine which leads to Lizzy having to marry Darcy and immediately flee to Pemberley.
And now the book solely concentrates on ODC who are both silent and brooding and Lizzy has an unexpected enemy in the house. Can she and Darcy admit their feeling?
March 5, 2023
I absolutely loved this story. It is a reread as I had forgot to review the first time I read it and it held up just as well the second time around.
Fast paced from page one, my favourite part of the book is the beginning.
Elizabeth was running blindly away from mr Collins proposal when she happened upon Georgiana and Wickham in the woods.
Loved how this scene played out, cannot divulge much without spoiling your read but I will reveal that if anyone was a bit "badass" in this story, it was Elizabeth... Loved her strength.
Darcy comes off as a bit cold but we all now it is not so underneath his publicly worn mask and he will reveal himself in due time.
Elizabeth was offered a lift to London with Georgiana and the two are forming a friendship when disaster hits the Bennet family.
Really liked that Elizabeth was allowed to be part of the solution, as in this story, but there was consequences and marriage became necessary.
ODC's road to HEA did not contain any major dramatic events but their relationship developed rather naturally. Loved the incident that lead to them reach an ultimate understanding. Tender, romantic moment with a lot of quotes, worthy of highlighting.
Ends in a short epilogue, 5 years later.
Heartily recommend this book!
Fast paced from page one, my favourite part of the book is the beginning.
Elizabeth was running blindly away from mr Collins proposal when she happened upon Georgiana and Wickham in the woods.
Loved how this scene played out, cannot divulge much without spoiling your read but I will reveal that if anyone was a bit "badass" in this story, it was Elizabeth... Loved her strength.
Darcy comes off as a bit cold but we all now it is not so underneath his publicly worn mask and he will reveal himself in due time.
Elizabeth was offered a lift to London with Georgiana and the two are forming a friendship when disaster hits the Bennet family.
Really liked that Elizabeth was allowed to be part of the solution, as in this story, but there was consequences and marriage became necessary.
ODC's road to HEA did not contain any major dramatic events but their relationship developed rather naturally. Loved the incident that lead to them reach an ultimate understanding. Tender, romantic moment with a lot of quotes, worthy of highlighting.
Ends in a short epilogue, 5 years later.
Heartily recommend this book!
February 9, 2017
I gave this book 4 stars because the first half and second half of it are not seamless. It is like reading two separate stories. If only there was a better transition shown for E's dislike to acceptance, I would have given it a better rating. Of the two halves, I loved the first part but not so much the second. The writer is obviously talented. I loved Mrs Reynold's attitude.
For me, there was really no happy ending as E was never shown to become the true Mistress of Pemberley. Part of E's allure, to me, is her natural ability to conquer all before her despite her upbringing. She seemed to remain a country miss with little talents to show and never to triumph. Her characterization worked in the first part but there was no transformation in the second part for her higher self to shine through to charm all.
For me, there was really no happy ending as E was never shown to become the true Mistress of Pemberley. Part of E's allure, to me, is her natural ability to conquer all before her despite her upbringing. She seemed to remain a country miss with little talents to show and never to triumph. Her characterization worked in the first part but there was no transformation in the second part for her higher self to shine through to charm all.
October 8, 2024
Status: Read February 27-March 21, 2017
Rating: ⭐⭐⭐
Edition Read:
Before a Fall: A Pride and Prejudice Reimagining
by Jennifer Kay
Kindle Edition, 294 pages
Published February 2017 (first published January 10, 2017)
ASIN: B01N6PPEXP
[ kindle unlimited ]
Librarian Note: Alternate/new cover edition for ASIN: B01N6PPEXP.
When Mr. Collins makes his awful proposal, Elizabeth runs away - straight into a confrontation between none other than George Wickham and Georgiana Darcy. Elizabeth wants to escape Mr. Collins clutches; Georgiana wants a confidante who understands what she has been through. The friendship that springs up between the two and the resulting events change the course of Jane Austen's best-loved novel. And of course, there is always the question of how a certain stern gentleman will react to his sister's new acquaintance...
Beginning the day after the Netherfield Ball, Before a Fall examines what could have happened in Pride and Prejudice if several key events were tweaked slightly. Will Mr. Wickham get his comeuppance? Will Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy find their happily ever after? One thing is certain - pride cometh before a fall.
Rating: ⭐⭐⭐
Edition Read:
Before a Fall: A Pride and Prejudice Reimagining
by Jennifer Kay
Kindle Edition, 294 pages
Published February 2017 (first published January 10, 2017)
ASIN: B01N6PPEXP
[ kindle unlimited ]
Librarian Note: Alternate/new cover edition for ASIN: B01N6PPEXP.
When Mr. Collins makes his awful proposal, Elizabeth runs away - straight into a confrontation between none other than George Wickham and Georgiana Darcy. Elizabeth wants to escape Mr. Collins clutches; Georgiana wants a confidante who understands what she has been through. The friendship that springs up between the two and the resulting events change the course of Jane Austen's best-loved novel. And of course, there is always the question of how a certain stern gentleman will react to his sister's new acquaintance...
Beginning the day after the Netherfield Ball, Before a Fall examines what could have happened in Pride and Prejudice if several key events were tweaked slightly. Will Mr. Wickham get his comeuppance? Will Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy find their happily ever after? One thing is certain - pride cometh before a fall.
November 22, 2021
Maybe its the FMS that has me annoyed. I'm not a huge fan of 2 Bennet daughters marrying because of "scandal". Or maybe it's the fact that Elizabeth's courage is not rising to every freaking occasion. Or that Darcy does not contradict anything negative Elizabeth has to say about their situation - he's given PLENTY of opportunity. Or maybe that Mrs. R is painted as gossip and witch with a "B".
I've been doing a re-read of this authors work this Thanksgiving week and I'm not all that impressed with this one.
I've been doing a re-read of this authors work this Thanksgiving week and I'm not all that impressed with this one.
June 20, 2024
Loved this book. The author did well to keep Darcy and Elizabeth's characters true to the canon and at the same time develop the story that they could start understanding each other. Elizabeth's time at Pemberley was a bit angsty but then the resolution was sweet. I also liked how Wickham and Lydia's story was handled.
June 4, 2021
2.5 rounded up. This book almost felt like two completely different stories. The first half is centered around Elizabeth and Georgiana forming a bond through a traumatic experience they had shared involving Wickham and then the Wickham/Lydia fiasco.
The second half shifted gears and focused on D&E now that they find themselves in a marriage not of their own making. They are at Pemberley with only the servants, and have to learn to adjust to married life. The servants are not as welcoming as one would expect and cause some problems for the Darcy’s, especially the new Mrs. Darcy. It is these problems that open a door to some much needed communication, so maybe it is for the best.
This book was just okay IMO. It was strange to me that Elizabeth flees from Longbourn after the Collin’s proposal and kind of forgets the rest of her family forever. She never goes back or gives them much thought until scandal ensues. I also had trouble reconciling myself with the Darcy’s behavior, or lack of it in the first scene at Netherfield.
The biggest detractor of my enjoyment, however, was Elizabeth Bennet. We were given access not only to her words and actions, but also her thoughts and boy did she have a chip on her shoulder. She is always looking for the very worst in Darcy and takes offense at anything and everything, even after he proves time and time again that maybe he isn’t the proud and hateful man she once thought. She is rude and not likable and it’s hard to imagine Darcy becoming bewitched with this particular EB. She even goes so far as to berate Mr. Darcy in his own home and in front of his sister and his servant. I don’t care how right or wrong Darcy was, that kind of behavior would never be acceptable to the Mr. Darcy I know.
J.W. Garrett’s review of this book was spot on and my favorite quote from her review says,
“There is a fine line that an author has to walk in order to bring Austen’s characters to life in a variation. Elizabeth’s character is especially difficult as there is a big difference between brash and spontaneous, teasing and cutting/cruelty, and snarky and witty comments. In this story, I’m not sure our author accomplished that with Elizabeth. Readers of JAFF and variations want to like Elizabeth.”
Well said and a resounding AMEN!
There were things to like in this variation, but I’m not sure it was enough to offset the struggles that I experienced.
The second half shifted gears and focused on D&E now that they find themselves in a marriage not of their own making. They are at Pemberley with only the servants, and have to learn to adjust to married life. The servants are not as welcoming as one would expect and cause some problems for the Darcy’s, especially the new Mrs. Darcy. It is these problems that open a door to some much needed communication, so maybe it is for the best.
This book was just okay IMO. It was strange to me that Elizabeth flees from Longbourn after the Collin’s proposal and kind of forgets the rest of her family forever. She never goes back or gives them much thought until scandal ensues. I also had trouble reconciling myself with the Darcy’s behavior, or lack of it in the first scene at Netherfield.
The biggest detractor of my enjoyment, however, was Elizabeth Bennet. We were given access not only to her words and actions, but also her thoughts and boy did she have a chip on her shoulder. She is always looking for the very worst in Darcy and takes offense at anything and everything, even after he proves time and time again that maybe he isn’t the proud and hateful man she once thought. She is rude and not likable and it’s hard to imagine Darcy becoming bewitched with this particular EB. She even goes so far as to berate Mr. Darcy in his own home and in front of his sister and his servant. I don’t care how right or wrong Darcy was, that kind of behavior would never be acceptable to the Mr. Darcy I know.
J.W. Garrett’s review of this book was spot on and my favorite quote from her review says,
“There is a fine line that an author has to walk in order to bring Austen’s characters to life in a variation. Elizabeth’s character is especially difficult as there is a big difference between brash and spontaneous, teasing and cutting/cruelty, and snarky and witty comments. In this story, I’m not sure our author accomplished that with Elizabeth. Readers of JAFF and variations want to like Elizabeth.”
Well said and a resounding AMEN!
There were things to like in this variation, but I’m not sure it was enough to offset the struggles that I experienced.
December 18, 2018
I think this is a 3.5 stars for me... it starts with Elizabeth running away from Mr Collins and into a situation with Georgiana and Wickham. She ends up travelling to London with Darcy and Georgiana where she has a complicated relationship with him but good friendship with her.
Lots of elements of this story are familiar but were enjoyable nonetheless. It covers quite a long period of time too which is unusual for a book that is not particularly long. The language wasn't quite right at times and although we get to hear about Darcy's feelings, we never really get any insight into Elizabeth's journey with regards to how her feelings changed. I also got the sense that this author didn't know what to call Mr Darcy... I understood the difficulty with Elizabeth having to learn to call him William - but I don't understand why he was called Darcy in the Epilogue. I hate Epilogues.
I read this really quickly. I was interested, enjoyed it and liked the story but there were so many things that I feel dissatisfied with. A quick read though and low angst.
Lots of elements of this story are familiar but were enjoyable nonetheless. It covers quite a long period of time too which is unusual for a book that is not particularly long. The language wasn't quite right at times and although we get to hear about Darcy's feelings, we never really get any insight into Elizabeth's journey with regards to how her feelings changed. I also got the sense that this author didn't know what to call Mr Darcy... I understood the difficulty with Elizabeth having to learn to call him William - but I don't understand why he was called Darcy in the Epilogue. I hate Epilogues.
I read this really quickly. I was interested, enjoyed it and liked the story but there were so many things that I feel dissatisfied with. A quick read though and low angst.
May 8, 2021
3.5 stars rounded up!
Escaping from Mr. Collins unwanted proposal, Elizabeth runs into Wickham accosting Miss Darcy and she immediately steps in to help. After chasing him away, she confides in Miss Darcy of the unwanted proposal and her need to escape to London. Thus, while the Darcy’s help take her to the Gardiners in London - Lizzy and Miss Darcy form a friendship that puts Lizzy in Darcy’s path many times.
While I enjoyed the story, Elizabeth’s demeanor when she married Darcy was very disappointing, especially her reaction to how she was treated! A few not-so-kind comments makes her run away and cry? Where is the witty and courageous woman who puts up with Miss Bingleys acerbic comments and even wittily puts her in her place? The one who stood up to Lady Catherine and wouldn’t show fear?
Mrs. Reynolds attitude and demeanor towards Elizabeth were awful and I did not enjoy this version of her. Even if her feelings are warranted, it was handled very poorly... especially since her actions will reflect how rest of staff will act and behave!! It could have at least been done in a more... subtle way? Idk, just didn’t like her character at all!
Escaping from Mr. Collins unwanted proposal, Elizabeth runs into Wickham accosting Miss Darcy and she immediately steps in to help. After chasing him away, she confides in Miss Darcy of the unwanted proposal and her need to escape to London. Thus, while the Darcy’s help take her to the Gardiners in London - Lizzy and Miss Darcy form a friendship that puts Lizzy in Darcy’s path many times.
While I enjoyed the story, Elizabeth’s demeanor when she married Darcy was very disappointing, especially her reaction to how she was treated! A few not-so-kind comments makes her run away and cry? Where is the witty and courageous woman who puts up with Miss Bingleys acerbic comments and even wittily puts her in her place? The one who stood up to Lady Catherine and wouldn’t show fear?
Mrs. Reynolds attitude and demeanor towards Elizabeth were awful and I did not enjoy this version of her. Even if her feelings are warranted, it was handled very poorly... especially since her actions will reflect how rest of staff will act and behave!! It could have at least been done in a more... subtle way? Idk, just didn’t like her character at all!
May 25, 2021
This FMS had the servants being cruel to Elizabeth rather than a family member or two. A switch up for a change... We don't actually get a falling in love process, feels more 'all of a sudden'.
March 22, 2021
I absolutely adore this book. Her family is trying to make her marry Mr. Collins and Elizabeth travels to London with the Darcys. Eventually Lydia does what Lydia does best, and Darcy and Elizabeth collaborate trying to find her, causing a scandal and a half-forced marriage. She is rather lonely at Pemberley and the servants gossip about her. It takes a fright for the couple to find each other properly.
August 15, 2023
Adored this one; only wish we could have seen more of their marriage (and that Elizabeth had said the L word!)
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October 30, 2019
Jennifer Kay rarely disappoints, and this book is no different. It was definitely enjoyable. I have no complaints regarding prose or dialogue. The story was captivating and heavy on the angst like so many other Pride and Prejudice variation novels. The ending provided closure and all of Darcy and Elizabeth's misunderstandings and confusion were wrapped up nicely. The plot was a forced marriage scenario, but provided enough originality that it did not feel stale in a market rife with them. *spoilers* The scene where Darcy holds a gun up to Wickham in defense of Elizabeth? Swoon. Just, swoon. The scene where Darcy finds Elizabeth in the cabin? Also, swoon.
So, why did I not give it 5 stars? It was a combination of things. Part of it was because so much of the conflict centered around ODC just not talking to each other. Another part was because Elizabeth was so meek at times...she kept silently assuming the worst in everything he said and did for so long (her overhearing Darcy's conversation with Uncle Gardiner was especially fruatrating). I expected them to come to blows sooner. Another part was because of some forced plot elements...like why did Darcy not bring a chaperone when they went to confront Wickham? They undoubtedly have some loyal servants they could have trusted.
Or perhaps, it was just because Mrs. Reynolds was not portrayed as a super nice housekeeper like she usually is. :) I am not sure. Nothing stuck out egregiously. Nothing made me cringe. I really really liked the book. I enjoyed reading it the entire time. But I did not absolutely love it.
So, why did I not give it 5 stars? It was a combination of things. Part of it was because so much of the conflict centered around ODC just not talking to each other. Another part was because Elizabeth was so meek at times...she kept silently assuming the worst in everything he said and did for so long (her overhearing Darcy's conversation with Uncle Gardiner was especially fruatrating). I expected them to come to blows sooner. Another part was because of some forced plot elements...like why did Darcy not bring a chaperone when they went to confront Wickham? They undoubtedly have some loyal servants they could have trusted.
Or perhaps, it was just because Mrs. Reynolds was not portrayed as a super nice housekeeper like she usually is. :) I am not sure. Nothing stuck out egregiously. Nothing made me cringe. I really really liked the book. I enjoyed reading it the entire time. But I did not absolutely love it.
July 9, 2018
Now that its not after 11pm and I have had my morning coffee, I can properly review this book.
Spoilers ahead
Things I liked -
- Georgiana and Elizabeth's friendship. I'm a sucker for seeing them become the friends I always thought they would be.
- This was a super quick read. I started at like 8:30 and was done just under 3hrs later.
- The way Lydia's story ended.
- Darcys defense to his aunt.
Things I did not like -
- Wickham and the use of sexual assault as a plot point. I know that is quite common in literature but I like to avoid it when possible.
- WTF Darcy? Seriously, at the beginning with Wickham and Georgiana and you did nothing??? That is soooooo OOC for Darcy. Plus, he didn't even thank Elizabeth for her rescue.
- Elizabeth being so damn selfish running away to London and giving not one care about her family at Longbourn, especially Jane. And the pathetic one line warning about Wickham and no follow through just does not work for me.
- And as far as I remember, Elizabeth never says "I love you" to Darcy.
Spoilers ahead
Things I liked -
- Georgiana and Elizabeth's friendship. I'm a sucker for seeing them become the friends I always thought they would be.
- This was a super quick read. I started at like 8:30 and was done just under 3hrs later.
- The way Lydia's story ended.
- Darcys defense to his aunt.
Things I did not like -
- Wickham and the use of sexual assault as a plot point. I know that is quite common in literature but I like to avoid it when possible.
- WTF Darcy? Seriously, at the beginning with Wickham and Georgiana and you did nothing??? That is soooooo OOC for Darcy. Plus, he didn't even thank Elizabeth for her rescue.
- Elizabeth being so damn selfish running away to London and giving not one care about her family at Longbourn, especially Jane. And the pathetic one line warning about Wickham and no follow through just does not work for me.
- And as far as I remember, Elizabeth never says "I love you" to Darcy.
February 27, 2017
I loved this variation. The turns and twists kept me on the edge of my seat, and kept me guessing as well. Well written characters, good plot and pace. Quite a lot of angst, but HEA at the end. Highly recommended.
December 16, 2021
Actually 2.5 stars. Enjoyed the reread.
December 9, 2018
In some ways it is an enjoyable light read. However, it has some problems as a P&P variation.
The grammar & spelling are modern American, and certain words and phrases are very jarring from English characters, especially of the time period. There are also some editing issues, though this isn’t unusual for kindle-only publications.
Darcy is originally very harsh, even accounting for possible misunderstandings. I seriously doubt he would bring Elizabeth to Lydia alone, though that could be forgiven as a plot point. There is no explanation or transition between E hating D and agreeing to marry him, and she acquiesces too easily. Once D agrees to marry her, especially as he is responsible for the scandal, I would have expected he would at least get her new clothes as befitting Mrs Darcy. Also, I can imagine Mrs Reynolds night behave coldly but professionally; I do not think she would feel free to be quite so blunt about E to D. Once he confesses his love, E accepts it much too easily, neither does she say she loves him, yet they immediately slip into a more relaxed manner as if they’d had a true heart to heart.
It is her first novel and therefore the lack of depth is somewhat understandable. If you don’t mind the anachronistic language then it’s worth the couple of hours it takes to read.
The grammar & spelling are modern American, and certain words and phrases are very jarring from English characters, especially of the time period. There are also some editing issues, though this isn’t unusual for kindle-only publications.
Darcy is originally very harsh, even accounting for possible misunderstandings. I seriously doubt he would bring Elizabeth to Lydia alone, though that could be forgiven as a plot point. There is no explanation or transition between E hating D and agreeing to marry him, and she acquiesces too easily. Once D agrees to marry her, especially as he is responsible for the scandal, I would have expected he would at least get her new clothes as befitting Mrs Darcy. Also, I can imagine Mrs Reynolds night behave coldly but professionally; I do not think she would feel free to be quite so blunt about E to D. Once he confesses his love, E accepts it much too easily, neither does she say she loves him, yet they immediately slip into a more relaxed manner as if they’d had a true heart to heart.
It is her first novel and therefore the lack of depth is somewhat understandable. If you don’t mind the anachronistic language then it’s worth the couple of hours it takes to read.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
September 10, 2020
Determined to Misinterpret
3.5 stars rounded up
Escaping Longbourn after refusing Mr. Collins, Elizabeth is put in the path of Georgiana, Wickham and Darcy. It seems no matter what Darcy says or does, Elizabeth is determined to interpret things in a way in which she feels he is only finding fault with her. Their relationship takes a turn when Lydia elopes with Wickham. We all know that story, but things change when circumstances force our dear couple to come together.
I very much enjoyed this book. The storyline takes a few unexpected twists and turns which keeps the reader absorbed throughout. One thing I kept waiting for, but didn’t happen.... Lizzy never tells Darcy she loves him! First variation I’ve read without those magic words. That was disappointing and the reason I didn’t give this book a definite 4 stars. Otherwise, well done.
3.5 stars rounded up
Escaping Longbourn after refusing Mr. Collins, Elizabeth is put in the path of Georgiana, Wickham and Darcy. It seems no matter what Darcy says or does, Elizabeth is determined to interpret things in a way in which she feels he is only finding fault with her. Their relationship takes a turn when Lydia elopes with Wickham. We all know that story, but things change when circumstances force our dear couple to come together.
I very much enjoyed this book. The storyline takes a few unexpected twists and turns which keeps the reader absorbed throughout. One thing I kept waiting for, but didn’t happen.... Lizzy never tells Darcy she loves him! First variation I’ve read without those magic words. That was disappointing and the reason I didn’t give this book a definite 4 stars. Otherwise, well done.
November 14, 2018
I really enjoyed this. An easy read and well developed characters.
However, there are quite a few modern words and phrases used that threw me out of the story.
I also found the switch from Lizzy not liking Darcy to suddenly being happy with him a bit of a jolt. For the amount of time Lizzy spends thinking about how she dislikes him (for about 75% of the book) I don’t think she actually comes to the realisation that she loves him, which is actually quite odd.
Overall though really enjoyable, would read again.
However, there are quite a few modern words and phrases used that threw me out of the story.
I also found the switch from Lizzy not liking Darcy to suddenly being happy with him a bit of a jolt. For the amount of time Lizzy spends thinking about how she dislikes him (for about 75% of the book) I don’t think she actually comes to the realisation that she loves him, which is actually quite odd.
Overall though really enjoyable, would read again.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
August 30, 2024
Interesting emotional intriguing
Looking for an adventure with little twist and plots, look no farther you found it. I found this to be so intriguing and interesting that I could not put down. I found humor in how the marriage of Darcy and Elizabeth came about. Their relationship is very emotional. Wickham is horrible, but I LOVED his ending. I actually clapped with how Lady C was handled.
On the cleaner side, extremely well written with lots of detail, and recommended to more mature readers
Looking for an adventure with little twist and plots, look no farther you found it. I found this to be so intriguing and interesting that I could not put down. I found humor in how the marriage of Darcy and Elizabeth came about. Their relationship is very emotional. Wickham is horrible, but I LOVED his ending. I actually clapped with how Lady C was handled.
On the cleaner side, extremely well written with lots of detail, and recommended to more mature readers
January 12, 2025
I almost quit at 60%. The story develops through Elizabeth POV and I rapidly felt frustrated by her (wrong) interpretation of Darcy's actions and remarks. She is heavily prejudiced against him, even after the rescue of Lydia. She is unpleasant and one cannot help wondering why Darcy falls in love with her. She is also deeply insecure. I am glad I read this variation until the end because the reconciliation is kind of sweet. This book is worth a read (the writing is good) but nothing out of the ordinary.
April 20, 2024
Entertaining
Well written variation with a good storyline to keep the reader interested. I will say, if I was a first-time reader to P&P variations, and didn't know the original story so well, I would be disappointed with this variation because the author refers to events that happened in the original, but not in a way that I would understand what actually happened -- example: reference to 'tolerable'. Enjoy!
Well written variation with a good storyline to keep the reader interested. I will say, if I was a first-time reader to P&P variations, and didn't know the original story so well, I would be disappointed with this variation because the author refers to events that happened in the original, but not in a way that I would understand what actually happened -- example: reference to 'tolerable'. Enjoy!
April 23, 2020
I enjoyed this takeoff on Pride and Prejudice. It is a fast read and provides the reader with a slightly different Mr. Darcy. Since it is the author’s first published book I forgive her the silly final pages. The transformation of Lydia was hard to swallow. I have read Ms. Kay’s second retelling of the story we all love. She improves with experience.
June 3, 2017
Really mediocre book full of plot holes.
- The book uses sexual violence as a plot device.
- Elizabeth saves Georgiana from Wickham and she doesn't even get a thank you from Darcy.
- Whickam tries to assault Georgiana and Darcy does absolutely nothing. He is not even angry. He has no reaction whatsoever.
- Elizabeth who has witnessed the assault, does nothing either besides vaguely warning Jane not to trust Wickham.
- The day after the Ball Elizabeth is off the London. Lizzie is too self-involved to spare a thought for heartbroken Jane.
- The book uses sexual violence as a plot device.
- Elizabeth saves Georgiana from Wickham and she doesn't even get a thank you from Darcy.
- Whickam tries to assault Georgiana and Darcy does absolutely nothing. He is not even angry. He has no reaction whatsoever.
- Elizabeth who has witnessed the assault, does nothing either besides vaguely warning Jane not to trust Wickham.
- The day after the Ball Elizabeth is off the London. Lizzie is too self-involved to spare a thought for heartbroken Jane.
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October 9, 2018
Refreshingly different and very well done
I don’t know how many variations I have read, but this one is quite excellent, probably in the top 10; great story. I will read it again, so it is a keeper.
I don’t know how many variations I have read, but this one is quite excellent, probably in the top 10; great story. I will read it again, so it is a keeper.
December 18, 2020
I enjoyed the book. In this version Elizabeth and Darcy were forced to get married and it took a while for them to reach the HEA. The take on Mrs. Reynolds was also different and I appreciated the variation.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 18, 2023
It's long, but the time flies.
I liked the action and especially the dialogs. Good dialogue trumps description every time. The only disappointment was that Mrs Bennet did not get a rousing comeuppance. Oh! And neither did Lady "Do you know who I am?" Catherine.
I liked the action and especially the dialogs. Good dialogue trumps description every time. The only disappointment was that Mrs Bennet did not get a rousing comeuppance. Oh! And neither did Lady "Do you know who I am?" Catherine.
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