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Eric Olafson : Space Pirate

( Eric Olafson Series )

Vanessa Ravencroft (Goodreads Author)

4.13 · Rating details · 131 ratings · 25 reviews

It's the year 5021 and the Milky Way Galaxy is teeming with life and exotic species. The majority of the known civilisations have formed a multi-cultural mega organization called the United Stars of Galaxies. This Union is protected by the brave men and women of the United Stars Space fleet against external threats.

Eric Olafson, born and raised under harsh conditions of th ...more

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Mar 15, 2017 Sally rated it it was ok

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I really, really wanted to like this. To understand why, let me share with you the following quote from the original cover blurb:

"Eric Olafson, struggling with a secret desire to be female, leaves the traditional and inward looking society of Nilfeheim to fulfil his dreams of becoming a Starship captain."

A transgender starship captain! That sounds pretty awesome, am I right? Sadly, for some reason, the publisher has removed all reference to that fact from the current cover blurb, which is a sham I really, really wanted to like this. To understand why, let me share with you the following quote from the original cover blurb:

"Eric Olafson, struggling with a secret desire to be female, leaves the traditional and inward looking society of Nilfeheim to fulfil his dreams of becoming a Starship captain."

A transgender starship captain! That sounds pretty awesome, am I right? Sadly, for some reason, the publisher has removed all reference to that fact from the current cover blurb, which is a shame as I would not have read it otherwise.

Although I did not realize it at the time, Eric Olafson, Space Pirate was originally self-published by Vanessa Ravencroft about 6 years ago. According to the FictionPress website, it is actually the 9th book in her Galactic Chronicles and the 5th book in her Olafson Saga, which explains some of my confusion with things it felt as if we are already expected to know, but which adds a whole other element of confusion regarding the writing. I did finish this (it took me a while), and I did have some fun with it, but I did not find it to be particularly well-written or well-edited. Not to be overly critical but I would expect a little more refinement in style over 9 books, and I do hope a professional editor gets their hands on it before finished copies hit the shelves. I am sorry, but this was sometimes painful to read.

As a Young Adult B-grade homage to the days of pulp science fiction, this was an alright story, even if I suspect it may not have been intended as such. The story is light on detail, with dialogue that borders between juvenile and cheesy, and names that are even worse (Moistpromise and Wetmouth immediately come to mind). As for Eric, he is an awkward character, a man with a feminine side (named Freya) who never actually comes across as either transvestite or transsexual. Gender-fluid, perhaps, but the question of gender is never explored deeply enough to give it meaning. I wanted to love him, and wanted his struggle to mean more, but it felt more like a plot device than a genuine expression of the transgender experience - which is a shame, because I have see YA novels tackle the issue beautifully.

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Mar 15, 2017 Kay Kuever rated it it was ok

I have to admit, I had an extremely hard time getting into Eric Olafson, Space Pirate. It was clear from the start of the book that I was entering an already well-established world and storyline in the very middle. I was immediately overwhelmed by a tirade of different characters by name and possibly their species without much description and foreign objects with names that seemed like they were spelled by typing with my nose. Because of this, I found the beginning of the story extremely hard to I have to admit, I had an extremely hard time getting into Eric Olafson, Space Pirate. It was clear from the start of the book that I was entering an already well-established world and storyline in the very middle. I was immediately overwhelmed by a tirade of different characters by name and possibly their species without much description and foreign objects with names that seemed like they were spelled by typing with my nose. Because of this, I found the beginning of the story extremely hard to grasp. I felt like I was standing outside of an inside joke in a way. While I'm a big fan of series, I think it's helpful or even important, especially when there is time between the publications of books or if a book within the series can be read as a standalone, that there be a bit more of an introduction or reintroduction to the story. There was a brief prologue to Eric Olafson's past, but not much when it came to the immediate danger he found himself in from page one.

While I'm a big fan of series, I think it's helpful or even important, especially when there is time between the publications of books or if a book within the series can be read as a standalone, that there be a bit more of an introduction or reintroduction to the story. There was a brief prologue to Eric Olafson's past, but not much when it came to the immediate danger he found himself in from page one.

It was very hard to conjure any attachment to the many characters in this book. The transitions between characters were somewhat sloppy and I found myself have to read the same paragraph over and over to make sure I knew exactly who or what was being talked about. It was also difficult to picture many of these characters, even after finding out who or what they were; sort of like being told a story by a friend who constantly uses the name of someone you've never met, but only know through second-hand tellings. Really, what I needed was a illustrated roster so I knew who everyone was.

The most difficult thing for me while reading was the constant naming of places, organizations, objects and other things not normally found in my every day Tucsonan life that I just couldn't figure out. I was unsure about a lot of the things there were mentioned since they just weren't described at all, but this could also just stem from the fact that I haven't read anything previous to this book where I'm sure the answer to all of my issues lies. However, even with my lack of knowledge, my mind slowly pieced together this science fiction world, even if I didn't fully understand it. It was clear to me that there was a complexity this world.

What I did find interesting was Eric's alter ego of Freya, his ultra-feminine side that can apparently out strut me in high heels. I had a hard time deciphering if this was a true attempt at a transgender character or merely added for shock value. To me, Eric's Freya came off as more or a persona or character, maybe trying to toe the lines of androgyny or gender fluidity, than resulting from any real internal struggle other than a need to be different. I would have loved to have seen this developed more.

All of this being said, the action of this book with fast paced and interesting, definitely leaving no dull moment when danger is near. Eric also proves himself to be a headstrong character with lofty, ambitious goals. Also, as a fan of Norse mythology, I enjoyed the references made that acted as a moving device throughout the plot. ...more

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Mar 09, 2017 James Grieme rated it really liked it

When I received my copy of this book, I was wondering if I would be at a supreme disadvantage because this book subtitles itself as Galactic Chronicles Book IX.

I had no problems whatsoever following the story.

This story begins in a unique and for me, far differently from any previous science fiction or fantasy book I have read. Yet even though there was a momentary off-putting because of the unusual nature of this story’s beginning, the plot unfolds into an extremely complex character who is obv When I received my copy of this book, I was wondering if I would be at a supreme disadvantage because this book subtitles itself as Galactic Chronicles Book IX.

I had no problems whatsoever following the story.

This story begins in a unique and for me, far differently from any previous science fiction or fantasy book I have read. Yet even though there was a momentary off-putting because of the unusual nature of this story’s beginning, the plot unfolds into an extremely complex character who is obviously struggling to understand his place in his world.

It is the world in which Olafson exists that is extremely astounding. The complexity of the universe which the main character Eric lives is an intricately constructed, meticulously detailed existence. Even though I had no experience with this book’s series, Ravencroft’s skills as the creator of both Eric and his existence is demonstrated admirably.

The story begins—after a prologue which grants the reader a context on which to hand this story—in media res. While many writers exercise this tool to speed up the introduction of characters and situation, Ravencroft uses this tool with phenomenal expertise. The main character is placed in an unenviable situation yet conducts himself in an admittedly melodramatic bravado—yet the reader actually likes it!

Space Pirate moves rapidly through an odyssey which at first seems to be a continual illustration of moving “from the fry pan into the fire.” Too many authors either rush this, and in the process creating a very flat story with no tension and pacing, or they unnecessarily elongate this process and emotionally exhaust the reader. Yet somehow Ravencroft walks the very fine line necessary that holds the reader’s leash taught yet doesn’t allow them to choke themselves in frustration.

The story is not, however, without flaws. The main character discovers there exists some internal emotional and psychological struggles, which in themselves are incredibly substantial, yet they are concluded too easily. True, this is a work of fiction. Within the pages of this story the reader gladly suspends disbelief; willingly so. Still, there is a limit to which disbelief can be deferred.

While Ravencroft demonstrates incredible skill as a writer in knowing what the reader can countenance and what the limits of their attention and their imaginations are, I believe she committed a critical faux pas. Far too often the temptation to design a reality which usurps the reality in which we all live, ends up causing the reader’s cessation of disbelief to unceremoniously disintegrate.

Even though I found the resolution of the main character’s struggle somewhat objectionable, I do not believe most readers would find it so. While I believe the conditions of the plot to be so far outside of a realistic expectation as to approach fantasy, I do not desire to disparage the talents of the writer or the grandeur of this story.

Eric Olafson: Space Pirate is a complex, fast-moving story with incredible detail of the surroundings; both Eric’s universe and the characters who are his friends. While there exists a short period about two-thirds the way through the book where the pacing becomes lethargic, this story rapidly improves and by its end, the reader finds no reason to taste anything unsavory.

Great read. Be sure to allow time to consume it. While it’s a good book, it is certainly not a short one!
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Mar 16, 2017 Martha rated it it was amazing

This is great sci fi with wonderful world building, fascinating characters and plenty of action! My Rating 4.75.

Eric Olafson is a creative midshipman who has always longed to become a Starship captain in the Union fleet that protects the numerous allies against unfriendly threats. Right now Eric is hoping to pass graduation in a few weeks – if he can stay out of trouble and live that long! It seems that trouble follows Eric… or he finds it. Fortunately, he has an unusual group of classmates who This is great sci fi with wonderful world building, fascinating characters and plenty of action! My Rating 4.75.

Eric Olafson is a creative midshipman who has always longed to become a Starship captain in the Union fleet that protects the numerous allies against unfriendly threats. Right now Eric is hoping to pass graduation in a few weeks – if he can stay out of trouble and live that long! It seems that trouble follows Eric… or he finds it. Fortunately, he has an unusual group of classmates who are usually nearby to help him face trouble with their remarkable skills. As one of the Admirals explains to Eric midway through the book: “You and your friends are not the average cadets and midshipman.”

Har-Hi is an extreme fighter – that’s what he loves. Wetmouth is a science whiz. Krabbel is an arachnoid (spider) who loves hugging and is ‘handy’ to have around. Narth is a from a planet of psi-mind readers who used to keep to themselves. But he has developed a bond with Eric and is determined to stay by his side and learn and share all the feelings humans have. Cirruit is a cyberunit who adds his own techno skills and subtle humor to the group. He is longing for the upgrade that will allow him to experience things like taste and other senses. The friends repeat, on more than one occasion, how important their friendship is and how their lives are enriched by knowing each other. They fear being separated when given their new assignments.

The first third of the book focuses on Eric as he is kidnapped and forced to escape and survive on a hostile planet. Eric has to dodge hostiles until he is aided by Mother Superior, a leader of a society of women who are shape shifters, extreme courtesans and sometimes spies. Eric is the first male allowed to enter their community, learn many of their secrets and train under the master teaching of the leader.

Eventually Eric is reconnected with his ship and warmly welcomed by his companions. After a short R&R they are sent on special assignment on a distant station base. It appears that nothing is going on and that prior accidents have been due to extreme boredom. But we know how appearances can be wrong! Once again, the action picks up as Eric and friends attempt to stop pirates from accessing supplies on the base.

The pattern of the story runs with fast paced action and a short R&R before the “Olafson team” faces another unexpected assignment. I love the "team" and how they contribute their talents to face the enemies. Now you might question why the titles says “Space Pirate” – what does that mean? It’s creative and lots of fun with a few horrorific situations. The world building is wonderful with a great variety of characters and surprises all along the way. There are some social points made by the author through the story and I also appreciated that the story has minimal rough language.

This is apparently part of a series and alludes to prior adventures. This one works as a stand-alone but makes me interested in reading the back stories to discover more about Eric’s meeting and becoming friends with these many alien creatures. I strongly recommend this to readers who enjoy science fiction with detailed world building, creative characters and lots of action.

I received an ARC from Inkitt for an honest review.

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Mar 14, 2017 Valerie Roberson rated it it was amazing

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If I could give this book 10 stars, I would. This is a 5 star book in my opinion and anybody who loves a good Sci-Fi, would love this book. There are many factors that make this a 5 star book in my standards. First, the author starts you out at the Forward, giving you background and up to date information on the book. Since it is the ninth book in the Galactic Chronicles and fifth in the Olafson Saga, you are coming in right smack in the middle of a series. This filled me in so much, that when If I could give this book 10 stars, I would. This is a 5 star book in my opinion and anybody who loves a good Sci-Fi, would love this book. There are many factors that make this a 5 star book in my standards. First, the author starts you out at the Forward, giving you background and up to date information on the book. Since it is the ninth book in the Galactic Chronicles and fifth in the Olafson Saga, you are coming in right smack in the middle of a series. This filled me in so much, that when I started the first chapter, I did not feel like I was out in left field and not knowing what was going on. This right here earned a star from me. Being that I haven't read the rest of the series, it was nice to have some background. This also sucked me into the book and I was hooked.
Second point that earned the 5 stars is the Prologue. This explained that the person telling the story was the author and these were accounts that really happened in his life. I had to stop and remind myself that this was fictional and not real. At the end of the Prologue, I was so deep into this book, that I read until my eyes went blurry.
Third point that earned this book 5 stars, is the storyline. Fabulous! If you take Star Track, War of the Worlds, Star Wars and a little of Space Balls mixed in, then this just about gives you an idea of what this book is like. It doesn't exactly live up to it's name. Yes it is all about Eric Olafson and his adventures and yes it is kissed with space pirate, but it is so much more. You will see what I mean when you read it.
And that brings me to my fourth point that earned this book 5 stars. The history that Eric learned along the way. It was so fascinating and I loved every word of it! Mother Superior told the history of each planet as they landed. It was a history class that was way more fun then in High School. I found that each planet, some how over the thousands of years, all connected together. Fascinating! I think that was my favorite part of the book.
Now this brings me to my fifth reason I would give this book 5 stars. The characters are amazing! Never would I have thought that all these aliens being brought together would work. You are talking about humans, robots, spiders, giants and so many more. But the author did phenomenal job with that. Eric's secret was handled with love and care, not something you expect in a pirate story. How his friends became so close to him and respected him to no end and how they all knew his secret before he had the guts to say anything and stood by him when he did. Each character was so different in it's own species way, but added so much to the story. Eric and his main friends blew me out of the water and made me wish people here in real life would do the same as his friends, maybe there would be less bullying.
Now you know my reasons for giving this book 5 stars. It lived up to many standards, that it deserves at least 10 stars.
Vanessa Ravencroft is a new author to me and I'm so honored to be asked to give an honest review. I enjoyed the story way more than I thought I would. Vanessa is a very talented author. She sucked me in and held me there to the end, which the Epilogue prepares you for the next book in the series. She wrote this as a series, but this book could've been a stand alone book. Now I have to get the next book to see what happens and you will want to also. ...more

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Mar 19, 2017 Aoife rated it it was ok

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I received a free copy of this book from Inkitt Press in exchange for an honest review.

Eric Olafson is about to graduate from space academy when he is abducted and almost killed. What follows is a sci-fi space adventure where Olafson has to don a number of different disguises, battle slave traders, man his own crew and just try and keep himself alive.

This book was pitched to me as a stand alone novel but it's actually the fifth book in the Eric Olafson series. Despite this, I did find myself alm I received a free copy of this book from Inkitt Press in exchange for an honest review.

Eric Olafson is about to graduate from space academy when he is abducted and almost killed. What follows is a sci-fi space adventure where Olafson has to don a number of different disguises, battle slave traders, man his own crew and just try and keep himself alive.

This book was pitched to me as a stand alone novel but it's actually the fifth book in the Eric Olafson series. Despite this, I did find myself almost able to keep up with everything though tehre were definite things mentioned such as past events and characters that the reader was evidently suppose to already know about and I didn't.

I have to be honest here, and it's a shame I feel this way because this book was kindly sent to me for review. This book is not good. It's badly edited and even more badly written. The book, in my opinion, needs several more rounds of editing before it's even fit to be read by a wider audience and while I expect some mistakes in proof copies (I'm not even sure if the copy I have is a proof as it doesn't state on it) but this was jam-packed full of grammatical, spelling and punctuation errors that had me cringing. But not even all the editing in the world could fix what is, in the end, a badly written story - most sentence structure was off, the conversations didn't seem realistic and neither did a lot of character reaction.

However, DESPITE ALL THE BAD, kept reading this book until the end and that says something. This is a book I would normally DNF after a few chapters given the state of the writing and the more than a little confusing world and I probably would have DNF'd if it was a Kindle book but there was something about the story that kept my interest peaked and I wasn't ready to let go of it yet. So I read it all. Even though the writing in this book is terrible, I think the bones of the story are actually full of potential. It just needs a lot, a lot , of work.

Eric Olafson is one of these characters I hate and love at the same time. He's brave, loyal and kind and I have to love that but he's one these characters that always has something happen to them but always miracuously gets out of it and is the best at everything while doing it. And that gets a bit boring after a while. There was also a lot of mentions of Eric's dual sexuality. He seems to struggle a bit in the book and keeps mentioning this female side that comes to the forefront when, in several points during the book, he has to disguise himself in a female body. I'm not sure if this was a play on transgender issues, or gender fluidity and while I like that it was touched on, I don't think it was developed enough and just left me feeling a bit confused about the whole thing. There was also something a bit misogynistic said at one point in the book - I think by a female character - that had me feeling all sorts of wrong. "Sadly, ninety-nine percent of all women can't separate their emotion from their rational thoughts and that's why women still struggle for equality in terms of perception even in the 51st Century." What?

At the end of the day, unfortunately this is a book I cannot recommend to anyone. The only reason this is a two-star instead of a one-star is the fact that I actually wanted to finish the book rather than just DNF-ing it. ...more

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Mar 15, 2017 Charlie rated it liked it

First of all I have to say that I was contacted and given a copy of the book in return I was to give an honest review. All the opinions in this review are mine and I am going to try and avoid any sort of spoilers that I can and still try to give a good quality review.

Admittedly jumping in to this book was kind of like being thrown right into the deep end of a pool and barely being able to swim because this book is part of a larger series, and I mean a large series. Without reading any of the oth First of all I have to say that I was contacted and given a copy of the book in return I was to give an honest review. All the opinions in this review are mine and I am going to try and avoid any sort of spoilers that I can and still try to give a good quality review.

Admittedly jumping in to this book was kind of like being thrown right into the deep end of a pool and barely being able to swim because this book is part of a larger series, and I mean a large series. Without reading any of the other books I was pretty much drowning right away, all the characters flooded me and I was tying to keep them separate and it was beyond a struggle. I hadn't read any of the other instalments so everything was overwhelming and hard to process as I was reading and trying to establish a clear image.

I struggled and continue to struggle with identifying and analysing how I feel towards all of the characters involved in the plot. I mean Eric is our main character and he wants nothing more than to fulfil his dream of becoming a starship captain. He end sup kidnapped and then basically from there on out I'm pretty much rolling down a hill it was that hard to keep track of everything that was happening. As much as I really wanted to connect with Eric and the other characters, I feel as though that my lack of knowledge on them due to not reading any of the other books really effected that and the only link between me and them was the fact they were in the story, I was nowhere near feeling any emotion or connection between myself and them. I will hopefully be able to put time aside in the future to read the series from the start in hopes of gripping the larger picture and establishing some sort of understanding and connection with the book and characters.

For what I understood and managed to keep a hold on, I loved. The action really pleased me and the level of detail was really awesome. At points the amount of detail was annoying but for the most part its use really helped to get me immersed. At points the level of detail did end up actually pushing me from the book and I found myself unable to read the book for a few hours just because the detail felt overpowering, like the author had tried so hard to immerse the readers and create a believable setting that it just ended up being too much and became overwhelming, almost so detailed and needing to be gripping that you could tell it was a work of fiction, I'm trying to say that at points the level of detail it had stopped it being immersive, so detailed it was obviously nowhere near real.

I must keep it clear that this book is great for those who love Sci.fi action and have time to read all of the other books or have a great ability to follow stories that are really sort of in the middle of a series without reading the others. I can 100% see why people who have read the book and series love it and love Vanessa, I can 100% see why Inkitt published this book. I just really wished I had caught wind of the series a long time ago so I could have followed it all the way and gotten a real addiction to it. However it wasn't meant to be and I was drowning the moment I begun reading but I loved what I read for the most part and I wish Vanessa continued luck with the series. Its a 3.5 out of 5 and I hope that my opinion and view does in no way deter you from embarking on the journey through the series. ...more

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Nov 03, 2017 Lora Shouse rated it really liked it · review of another edition

There’s never a dull moment with Eric and the Olafson gang.

This is an earlier book in the Eric Olafson series, apparently coming right before the Eric Olafson: Captain Black Velvet book I reviewed earlier. This is another delightful romp through space – again mostly in and on the edges of Freespace. Could use better editing though.

In the beginning, Eric and his friends are still Midshipmen in the Union Navy, although they are nearing graduation. They are in a competition for something called the ...more

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Mar 15, 2017 Lilly Charysma rated it really liked it

I have wanted to read a book by Vanessa Ravencroft since some time now. So I was lucky enough to be considered as a reviewer for this great story. Imagine how happy I was when I saw her name 

The story is very very complex. It has a lot of characters, it has a very well developed universe. I absolutely loved how detailed it was, even in the most unimportant facts. I can easily state that the praise that our author has received is well deserved. I believe this is what actually makes this book fa ...more

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Mar 15, 2017 SerialReader rated it liked it

Eric Olafson, Space Pirate is not the kind of book you can finish in a day. It took me a while to get into the story and the myriad of characters but -to my pleasure and surprise- I have to admit that this is exactly what makes this book so fascinating. After the first few chapters (what it takes to get acclimated to the futuristic environment) you are literally teleported into a universe of mystery, adventure and non-stop action.

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Jul 28, 2017 Randall Mccoy rated it liked it · review of another edition

Sci-fantasy

I'm not a fan of fantasy sci-fi, but this story kept me interested. The editing was weak in places. I did enjoy the story telling style. I don't think the story ended. It just stopped.
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Sep 19, 2017 Stephen rated it it was amazing

This is my type of book. Good old fashioned sci-fi at its best. As Eric's adventures continue you just want more. The characters are well developed by this point and still there is more you want to know about them. I would say this is a great set of books to get into. They are hard to put down. ...more

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Feb 01, 2020 Mark rated it it was amazing

Awesome story wish there was more to the series. Thank you for an excellent read

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Mar 14, 2017 Charles Ray rated it really liked it · review of another edition

Eric Olafson, from the traditional Viking world of Nilfeheim, left his home world to fulfill his dream of becoming a space ship captain. He joined the space fleet of the United Stars of the Planets and began an adventure that took him to some of the farthest stars. When he’s kidnapped and taken to a lawless planet, he finds himself embroiled in an ancient conflict that will test him to his very limits.
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Nov 22, 2019 Nate Thern rated it liked it

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I tend to be obsessive about making sure I start at the beginning of a series - be it the internal chronology beginning or the publication order beginning. In this case I somehow chose to jump right into a middle-of-the-series book, skipping over "Eric Olafson: Earthbound Rebel" and "Eric Olafson: Atmospheric Mercenary".

I honestly don't know how this book found it's way to the top of my TBR list; the experience was somewhat like mistaking the name of one movie for something else and then realizi I tend to be obsessive about making sure I start at the beginning of a series - be it the internal chronology beginning or the publication order beginning. In this case I somehow chose to jump right into a middle-of-the-series book, skipping over "Eric Olafson: Earthbound Rebel" and "Eric Olafson: Atmospheric Mercenary".

I honestly don't know how this book found it's way to the top of my TBR list; the experience was somewhat like mistaking the name of one movie for something else and then realizing you're watching a low-budget cheesefest and then being fascinated by the onscreen chaos someone chose to call a film. The literary sins ranged from a continuously deus-ex-machina driven plot to having a main character who is supernaturally gifted in all talents known to mankind (and alien-kind). I was also constantly being introduced to yet another of "This is Eric's best friend who is the most powerful/rich/sexy being in the universe and whose life Eric saved in Eric Olafson: Low Earth Orbit Ass-Kicking Cadet".

And the prose! This book didn't need an editor, it needed a high-school English teacher. Every single sentence in the book needed a corrected verb tense or an arrow to move a prepositional phrase or a split into multiple sentences or a ... the list goes on and on. The book was almost certainly dictated and then read through only once to throw in some punctuation before publication.

The book also had this strange quality of overtly embracing a hardcore 1950's male chauvanism while at the same time being LGBTQ friendly. My perception of the target audience constantly swung back and forth between "sensitive and enlightened white male" and "misogynist pig white male".

On the plus side: a pell-mell action driven story that kept me reasonably engaged. The universe setting is also pretty interesting. Getting past the flaws was like listening to an audiobook narrator who has some annoying verbal tendencies - after about 1/2 hour you're used to it and can just get into the story. I've had my fill of Eric Olafson, though; I don't think I will read any of his backstory or move on to "Eric Olafson: Extradimensional Dictator" ...more

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Mar 16, 2017 Rob Colavito rated it it was ok · review of another edition

This book feels like the second or third book of a series. You are dropped into the action immediately and none of the characters are introduced. names are dropped and the reader is expected already know the character. I actually checked to see if the author had published something before this.

The pace is frantic, but there is no real direction. At the end I couldn't tell if the crew were any closer to stopping the bad guy, then at the beginning. ...more

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Mar 19, 2017 Charles W Zopfi Jr. rated it it was amazing · review of another edition

Awesome

Wonderful story, exciting combat, a Viking in space, and an epic tale that should be read by all. Truly a great read. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the series. ...more

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Jan 31, 2017 Benjamin added it

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***THIS BOOK WAS RECEIVED FROM THE PUBLISHER***
I'll admit that I'm sometimes a glutton for punishment, but even I have my limits. About a quarter of the way through this book, I had to give up. I couldn't suffer through reading it anymore. There were a number of factors for this decision. First, this was apparently a book in the midst of a larger series and it was even an entry of its own, sub-series. I had not read any books from either series, so I was quite lost when it came to the characters ***THIS BOOK WAS RECEIVED FROM THE PUBLISHER***
I'll admit that I'm sometimes a glutton for punishment, but even I have my limits. About a quarter of the way through this book, I had to give up. I couldn't suffer through reading it anymore. There were a number of factors for this decision. First, this was apparently a book in the midst of a larger series and it was even an entry of its own, sub-series. I had not read any books from either series, so I was quite lost when it came to the characters and other pieces of information that might be considered "common knowledge" by this point in their respective series.

Secondly, I could not stand the constant stream of proofreading errors. Every time they came up, I was immediately pulled out of the story. What strikes me as odd in this second aspect is the publisher of this work: Inkitt. On their website, they tout that they only publish the best works determined by popular demand and some computer algorithm. Once the stories are vetted, they are given a cover by a talented artist and a review by an editor. I was directly approached by the Publishing Manager of Inkitt to review this story, along with two others ( Esper Files , and Esper Files: The Sky Cult ). What really struck me with all three of these books is that they REALLY needed an editor. Clearly, this is a service that Inkitt does not provide.

While the concept behind Inkitt is intriguing to me as an aspiring author, I don't know if I want to be associated with these works that haven't really been given a good vetting by an editor. Perhaps an editor would have noticed that this story was often repetitive in its information and that it lacked a clear goal (I hadn't figured out what the eponymous main character was trying to do in a whole 1/4 of the book). Maybe I was only given advanced reader copies of these stories and their numerous errata were fixed before publishing, but having read at least one of these stories in paperback form, I doubt it.

An unpolished work that was probably rushed out the door by the publisher, I cannot give Eric Olafson, Space Pirate a rating.

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Feb 07, 2017 Arlene Arredondo rated it it was amazing

Action filled adventure with a diversity of characters that makes it entertaining and fun.
This is definitely a must read for any YA enthusiast.
Teenage approved, this story has some interesting settings and unforgettable characters.
It could be read as a Standalone without any problems.
Would love to see more work from this author in the future.

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Sep 06, 2017 H rated it it was amazing

Love the Olafson books, I simply could not put it down, from start to finish it really held my attention. Love the rich variety of races in the universe of the Union and how even though they mostly get a long there are still issues and racial tensions. I hope we survive long enough as a spices to find such a rich galaxy full of life.

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Jan 06, 2017 Joe Crowe rated it really liked it

This one's fun. It's an old-school story with an irascible Han Solo / Captain Tightpants-style hero and a motley crew on a spaceship, and they fight bad guys. There ain't a thing wrong with such a thing, and this one hits the right notes.

It's fun to write and read about that kind of thing and Ravencroft nails the feeling and the tone precisely. Give this one a shot. ...more

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Dec 28, 2016 Myron rated it it was amazing

Vanessa's writing is imaginative, thought provoking, very entertaining, and extremely hard to put down. I have read and reread the unedited versions and am excitedly waiting to read the finished ( hope it never ends) polished version. ...more

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