I have to admit that this was only slightly better than other books I've read in the genre, but once again I was not thrilled for a number of reasons.
First of all, I think that while the storyline does have a significant amount of potential and even the expression is a step above some of those interracial romances I read as a result of recommendations on Goodreads, everything is rushed, rushed, rushed... Yes, it did start off on an interesting note, but somewhere along the way I felt as if the author started scurrying to get to the meat of the story, and that is a colossal NO on my part. The funny thing about it too is there were some parts that I felt should have been elaborated on and were almost completely rushed over. On the other hand, there were parts that I felt were irrelevant and the author put too much focus on it. In my opinion, a storyline like this works best if it is built up slowly. Avid readers like myself do not shy away from slow buildups.
Secondly, I have to give the author kudos for the writing, even though I think it could have been a lot better. I personally think that it could have done with a lot more description. For example, I don't want to read that so and so was looking professional. I want you to tell me that he was wearing a fitted Armani suit, some leather brand name shoes and a gold wristwatch. This also takes me to the point that I felt the writing style didn't do the genre much justice. It's too casual and simple, when I think that romance with paranormal elements should be more complex, sensual and descriptive.
Third, I think that the female protagonist is a tad bit too unrealistic. It has absolutely nothing to do with her "ability" or any of the paranormal elements in the book. It's just how she reacts and interacts with different characters. She's not very rounded in my opinion and comes off as the cliche two dimensional and robotic tough female character. I understand that the author is trying to portray her ability, but it comes off as corny and badly written.
Anyway, there's so much more that could be said but I would rather not. It was a great try, especially with the attempt at fusing several different genres, but it still needs lots of work. I'm told that I can be a harsh critic, but it would be refreshing to see an interracial romance on Goodreads that actually blows me out of the water.