This was a reading-writing exercise for me. It isn't too difficult to write like this, I suppose.
The plot is okay, the action regularly skip-worthy. The first third, in Nicaragua, was strongest. The second third, in Australia, was stupid. And Land lost his grip in the finale. He is more comfortable in the middle, when his characters are on the run, when the elements of the equation are still not completely settled. Once the battle-lines are drawn, Land seems to lose interest himself.