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Jemma has spent her life scavenging tools and supplies for her tribe in the their small enclave outside what used to be a big city. Now she’s a teen, and old enough to become a Mama. Making babies is how her people survive—in Jemma’s world, life ends at age seventeen.

Survival has eclipsed love ever since the Parents died of a mysterious plague. But Jemma’s connection to a boy named Apple is stronger than her duty as a Mama. Forced to leave, Jemma and Apple are joined in exile by a mysterious boy who claims to know what is causing them to die. The world is crumbling around them, and their time is running out. Is this truly the End?

356 pages, Hardcover

First published May 8, 2018

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Jeff Sweat

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Jeff Sweat has made a living from words his entire career, as an award-winning tech journalist and as a pioneer of content marketing at Yahoo. He directed PR for some of the top advertising agencies in the country, and now runs his own PR and consulting firm, Sweat + Co.

He grew up in Idaho as the middle of eight children—seven boys and one girl—and attended Columbia University in New York. Jeff lives in a big blue house in Los Angeles with his wife Sunny and their three kids, two cats, and two racing greyhound, and 37 fish.

He loves to travel and writes everywhere he goes, even when there's not a desk. He likes karaoke and carpentry. He was once shot in the head with a nail gun, which was not a big of a deal as it sounds. But it still hurt like crazy.

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3,158 reviews1,517 followers
June 14, 2018
Set in a somewhat sexist sounding society Mayfly by Jeff Sweat is a young adult dystopian scifi thriller. At some point the world has mostly died off leaving children raising children to carry on the human race. Seventeen has become old age in this society so the kids need to grow up fast to begin having their babies before they go.

Jemma knows nothing other than trying to survive but now that she’s at the age to become a Mama she’s not sure that is what she wants. Generally in Jemma’s world the boys become the Muscle and the girls become Mamas with little other options. But Jemma and her best friend Apple have decided to set out away from Holy Wood, the place they’ve known as home, to find out what is causing them to die off before the chance to even live.

Now when it comes to the idea that society has pretty much ended and those left can’t live past seventeen you can definitely say I’m going to be curious as to why and pick up the book. The world that has been created in here is really somewhat offensive to today’s standards pretty much taking a step back to the caveman era with woman only good for making babies but truth be told that made my curiosity shoot up even more to the hows and whys. But I have to question at the back of my mind who thought it was such a good idea to spend an astonishing long amount of time in the book with the characters repeatedly discussing “rolling” around with one another? This is still YA and we all get how babies are made and whether it’s graphic or not it kind of got a bit irritating to keep dwelling even with their cutesy made up words.

So anyway, now that the “rolling” rant is over let’s get on with the rest of the review for this one. To me the pacing was rather slow for the first half of the book but to be honest a lot of that time was the establishing the baby making society to it could have just been my own irritation with not progressing beyond that part. Once you get going past that and the adventure to finding answers starts the story picked up for me and saved itself from an even lower rating. At this point I actually began enjoying the book and the action going on and anxiously awaited what drew me in to begin with which was the cause for society to crumble.

There are moments in here that remind me of something like The Maze Runner with the age of the characters and as I’ve mentioned some of the words and how they talk. Jemma’s idea of not conforming to what is expected of her could remind some of things like Divergent too where everyone is expected to fit into a certain box and not be different from others. So if if these types of books appeal I’d say you might want to give this one a go.

I received a copy from the publisher via NetGalley.

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992 reviews502 followers
June 17, 2018
Actual rating: 4.5/5

Mayfly has almost all the components that a good science fiction, dytopian needs. Right from the completely wrecked, no-hope-can-be-seen world to curious protagonists who want to find a solution, and an excellent writing, research, and plotting accompanying it, Mayfly impressed me.


Let’s start with what I admired the most--the immense world building. The dystopian cliche was torn away in this book when the future world didn’t consist of just one set of survivors; the world has survivors belonging to different areas or groups who stay away from one another’s boundaries in order to save themselves from any unwanted violence. You’ll find a particular group of people who believe in things that the other groups won’t. Basically, there are cultures and traditions incorporated into this dystopian world and the best surprise is: all these are inspired from this present world. For instance, the characters believe that there was once a time when men and women (known as the Parents in this book) dressed up “to meet with the gods, on the red carpets as long as the entire streets.” And the kids reached this conclusion from magazines they found in this destructed world.

Speaking of the destruction, the story is set in Los Angeles with vivid references to Hollywood and other landmarks. This gave a more realistic approach to this story. The main conflict of the story is the unknown reason why everyone dies at the age of seventeen, if not before. Due to this life limit, there are some rules that the Olders (the older kids) have set, like a girl needs to be a Mama at fifteen, “roll with a guy” for the same purpose, and supervise the society they’ve set up in all these years after the destruction.

Here, women are in-charge and men are not given all the rights--they’re primarily for producing babies and using strength to fight against other tribes (a reason why they’re also called Muscle). It’s like a completely opposite take on today’s world but an unfair world nonetheless. Not only this, the language spoken by the characters isn’t the most perfect and it’s a great take on what a dystopian struggle would be ; plus, those who can read are considered bruja or witches. Overall, the world built is stunning with the details, both new and old, that are incorporated into the dystopian Los Angeles.

The characters are really well created and developed. Jemma and Apple are curious about this world but smart too. Their romance is a swiftly constructed matter and I would agree I found myself attached to them both. The side characters are just as much precious and it would be fun if you found them out yourself because they all give something to the bigger picture.

The thrill in this ride is epic! The pacing, plot, and revelations are woven into a mixture of exhilaration. Something’s at stake every minute and the readers are hooked to the book because what’s going to happen next? The only thing that slightly affected me was the scientific explanations or the lack of them. When the ending was explained, it left a lot of vague ideas and while that excited me for the sequel, it also deflated me a little for I need closures sometimes.

Overall, it’s a read I definitely recommend if you’re a lover of young adult dystopias and a world building that would pull you right through.

Trigger Warnings: sexual assault, rape scene, infectious death, bullet shot, graphic violence, inequality, misogyny, misandry.

Disclaimer: I received a digital copy of this via Netgalley but that, in no way, influences my rating and/or opinions about it. Thank you Jeff Sweat and Fiewel & Friends!


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April 12, 2018
I stayed up way too late reading this thing. I received an advanced copy of this book and immediately found myself sucked in. The world of Mayfly is dangerous and exciting. One girl, Jemma, wants so badly to have a life—and she wants it with Apple, a boy she's known all her life. But time is running out for her love Apple, and Jemma knows that if they don't find answers fast she and Apple will lose everything—their lives, their friends, and worst of all each other.

I don't know what is the most memorable part about this book—the characters, the world that's like ours but not ours anymore, the fight scenes, or what. So much happens, and like the lead characters' lives, it happens fast!

You can read it on its surface, but if you dig, there's more. Read it if you like big stories of love, adventure, sci-fi and figuring out the meaning of life. Reminds me of The 100 series meets Battlestar Galactica.
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342 reviews15 followers
May 24, 2018
4.5 - Wonderfully Unique, Weirdly Fascinating, and Thrilling Edge of Your Seat Story

Mayfly by Jeff Sweat is a wonderfully unique, weirdly fascinating, and thrilling edge of your seat post apocalyptic adventure. It's fast-paced, well-written, and dangerously exciting from start to finish. 

This book's a masterpiece, but I did have some minor issues in the beginning. After  reading a few chapters, I actually wasn't sure I would like the story. I did think the concept was interesting, but there were a few scenes that just didn't sit well with me. Having said that, I surprisingy could not stop reading. There was something about the story that just pulled me in and I was so intrigued by the characters and their way of life. I'm definitely glad I pushed through with this because it was simply amazing.  

Jeff Sweat brilliantly created a terrifying, but utterly unique and fascinating dystopian world. I really enjoyed exploring Los Angeles in this reality and figuring out why no one ever made it into adulthood. The plot had action, mystery, romance, awesome friendships, a bit of humor and twists that kept me guessing until the end. The characters were realistic, engaging and full of surprises. I had a blast seeing the world through their eyes and ached when I witnessed them make difficult choices to survive. From one danger to the next, I was holding my breath and hoping for the best...for the characters and for the rest of the world.

This story was a phenomenally creative, positively insightful and incredibly compelling read. Jeff Sweat crafted a unique and addictive post apocalyptic adventure that will leave you wanting more. I do hope that ending is just the beginning because there are so many more questions I need to be answered.

If you loved Hunger Games, Maze Runner, or any other dystopian books, then I think you'd really enjoy this book.

I received an advanced reader copy of this book from the publisher via Netgalley in exchange for a fair and honest review. All thoughts and opinions are my own. 
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1 review1 follower
April 12, 2018
I was lucky enough to get an advanced copy of this book and WOW. Couldn't put it down. Loved the characters from the outset and was immediately captivated by their world and worried about what would happen to them. This is the kind of book that will keep you up reading past your bedtime.

Full of unexpected twists and an epic journey through the future post-apocalyptic wasteland that once was LA, you'll love these characters and be sad when you finally do come to the end of the book. Luckily, I hear there are a few sequels in the works, and I am anxiously looking forward to them!
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1 review9 followers
May 5, 2018
A dystopian LA where no one lives past age 17. It's a complex world set in the ruins of one of the world's most iconic cities. I read an early advance and was compelled from the get go. The characters are vivid, with complex social hierarchies that quickly draw you in. I am already anxiously waiting for the next installment. Sweat is a good writer, and has the makings of a masterful storyteller.
1 review1 follower
May 1, 2018
I wasn't sure if I really wanted to read this book, but I am so glad I did. In fact, I've read it three times! The characters are well written and defined; I could see the action taking place in my mind and I came to care about what happened.

Jeff Sweat really made it come to life. Now, as I go around the SoCal area, many landmarks from the book remind me of what the characters were doing.

It has stayed with me for a long time. I plan to give this to friends.
1 review
March 16, 2018
I read an advance copy of this book and it's just terrific. Well-paced, and delivers well on the premise. The Mad Max-meets-Hunger Games is a unique twist on the genre. Fans of dystopia fiction won't be disappointed.
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1,723 reviews79 followers
July 17, 2020
Disclaimer: I bought my own copy of this book! Support your authors!

Book: Mayfly

Author: Jeff Sweat

Book Series: Mayfly Book 1

Rating: 4/5

Recommended For...: dystopian, science fiction

Publication Date: May 8, 2018

Genre: YA Dystopian

Recommended Age: 16+ (pregnancy, sex, rape mentions TW, violence, death)

Publisher: Feiwel and Friends

Pages: 356

Synopsis: Jemma has spent her life scavenging tools and supplies for her tribe in the their small enclave outside what used to be a big city. Now she’s a teen, and old enough to become a Mama. Making babies is how her people survive—in Jemma’s world, life ends at age seventeen.

Survival has eclipsed love ever since the Parents died of a mysterious plague. But Jemma’s connection to a boy named Apple is stronger than her duty as a Mama. Forced to leave, Jemma and Apple are joined in exile by a mysterious boy who claims to know what is causing them to die. The world is crumbling around them, and their time is running out. Is this truly the End?

Review: I really liked this book! I loved the dystopian vibes and I thought the world building was well done, if a bit too graphic? The character development was also well done and I liked the world the author created. While I read dystopian novels, sometimes I think if this would be possible. This one seems a bit too far for our society, but it was still an interesting Children of the Corn vibe book.

However, I did think the pacing was a bit too slow for me in several spots, but it did pick up once the action did. The book also had a lot of tropes that are common in dystopians, so if you’re not into that then this might not be a good book for you. The book also had an opportunity to really talk about how in real life young women are not able to get sterilized by their own volition on their own until they give birth to a child or two and if their husband agrees, to relate the events of the book to real life birth control matters we have in this world. I wish we had some commentary about that, but I know a lot of authors do not like to do that in their books.

Verdict: A well done dystopian!
May 4, 2018
I received an advance copy of this book, which I thoroughly enjoyed.

What would happen if all of the adults suddenly died, and kids were left to fend for themselves before they also perish as they reach adulthood? Mayfly sets forth Jeff Sweat’s vision of how this scenario might play out. Young adult post-apocalyptic fiction has become a popular genre in recent years, but I found the this take refreshingly different. Mayfly is sort of like Lord of the Flies meets Divergent, although that doesn’t quite do it justice. When life becomes so short, the kids have to get down to the business of life, including the creation of the next generation, on a very compressed timeline. It’s a compelling account of how a few brave souls that confront this messy, chaotic situation and try to fix it.

It’s a great read in many ways, but what I enjoyed most was seeing the traces of the world we know in the one the author has created. Many of Southern California’s prominent landmarks are there, where they have found a new, ominous notoriety. Remnants of the culture are also present here, found in the Spanglish spoken by these abandoned kids, and in the institutions they have created as they try to ensure the survival of the human race. All in all, it’s a fascinating story, thoughtfully developed and skillfully brought to life.

My only gripe is that the ending seems a little abrupt. While you eventually discover why the calamity happened in general terms, there are still a lot of unanswered questions. Answers will come to light in the next installment in the series, but I would have liked a little more for now. But that’s a minor quibble, and the good news is that there is a lot more for us to discover in subsequent books. It's definitely worth picking up.
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5,160 reviews458 followers
June 1, 2018
*Source* Publisher
*Genre* Young Adult / Post-Apocalyptic
*Rating* 3.5

*Thoughts*

Mayfly, by debut author Jeff Sweat, is the first installment in what is believed to be the Mayfly series. The author has created a curious post-apocalyptic world where the Parents are gone thanks to an unknown plague which kills almost everyone once they become an adult. 15-year old Jemma lives in a place that the author is calling Holy Wood. In Holy Wood, when you turn 15, you are supposed to become a Mama until the End comes. Jemma has no desire to become a Mama. She wants to live her life the way she wants to live it. She also wants to enjoy her time with Apple, the boy she has known most of her life. She isn't the best gatherer, but she does her best. She could be a farmer, but she's too impatient. She could even be one of the Muscle which normally goes to boys only, but she can't handle the blood.

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1,230 reviews
August 14, 2020
This was a slow starter hence the three stars. Once Jemma, Lady, Apple, and Pico went searching for the cure, it became more fast-paced and interesting. In this dystopian world, death arrives at the age of 17 unless one has suffered a brain injury. Needless to say, any remnants of civilization are in the hands of children. This is a cruel and barbaric world. But Pico wonders why this has happened and convinces the others to help him discover the reason. I especially liked the idea that reading had such value. I am still chuckling over the golf cart of the apocalypse so I will investigate the sequel.
May 2, 2018
A Page-Turning Work of Brilliance!

Mayfly is an fast-paced dystopic thriller that begins perched atop the Hollywood Hills, and much like a roller coaster, descends rapidly into dizzying adventure.

Jeff Sweat, has masterfully chronicled the landscape of Los Angeles through the eyes of someone who has a deep knowledge and love for the City of Angels. His insight into human nature and its tendencies craft a palpably possible future where adolescents and teens struggle to survive, gather resources, propagate their existence and even to find and hold on to love.

The books protagonist, Jemma, courses across the interwoven streets of Southern California uncovering one dangerous scene after another, all in search of a cure to The End. Character and tribe after next, Mayfly continues to introduce new adventures, new threats and new hopes down to the last page.



1 review1 follower
April 13, 2018
I read an advance copy and this book is thoroughly enjoyable! Being in LA, I loved seeing the city through the eyes of these kids who are trying to fight for their survival. But the author’s descriptions are so fun and he’s created such an interesting world that I believe a y.a. reader from anywhere will like this story. I loved that it kept me guessing in trying to figure out why no one in this world survives into adulthood. Highly recommended for a new take on dystopia!
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1,312 reviews502 followers
June 11, 2019
Unfortunately, this book wasn't for me and I had to dnf it.

I really couldn't get into the story and to be honest, I'm not curious enough to find out more about this weird society. Only the children survived somehow and since the characters are young, I felt like they didn't know much about what happened and therefore, I was a little confused. In Mayfly, the boys and girls are not equals and girls have to be "mamas" at 15 even if they don't want to. It's probably what I'm going to remember from what I've read.

I have questions, sure, but I really don't care enough for this world and the characters to read more, I'm sorry!
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13 reviews3 followers
February 10, 2021
2/21: To fans of this book, FYI author Jeff Sweat is in the ICU with Covid, and his wife and children also have it. We're running a GoFundMe for them: https://www.gofundme.com/f/lets-help-...

Wowee, I loved this book. Sweat does a masterful job of imagining a world so similar to ours...yet after the total breakdown of society as we know it. The book is gripping, scary, adventure-filled, tremendously moving and even funny at times. A great read, whether or not you're a young adult yourself.


(I received an advance copy; this is an honest review.)
66 reviews2 followers
March 16, 2018
I read an advance copy. Talk about a great read!

In Mayfly, for some reason, nobody lives past age 17. In a tough but beautiful world, Jemma, the main character, and her group of friends are determined to survive. Mayfly's the kind of hero's journey that will keep you flipping pages, working along side them as they try to figure out this life-or-death mystery. These characters just want to grow up and see what will happen to them next—and you'll want to find out, too.
1 review
May 2, 2018

I was also extremely lucky enough to receive an advanced copy of this book and I LOVED IT.

***spoiler alert***

I really enjoyed this book. Following Jemma through this story is very intense. You start off with just life. The whole purpose of these children is to procreate, to keep the cycle of life going. They talk about the Parents dying and the end of the world as they knew it to be. As you age, you come to your End and no one ever really lives past puberty. These Last Lifers as they are called go crazy and basically become soulless animals. But why? The story unfolds around the Holy Wood where Jemma and her friends live. The story is not just about life but living life.

The theme of love in this book reminds me of a quote from The Infinite Sea, by Rick Yancey, "Love is irrational. It doesn’t follow rules. Not even it’s own rules. Love is the one thing in the universe that’s unpredictable." This is what makes love so dangerous, in that book and in Mayfly. Also, the main character, Cassie, is referred to as a mayfly throughout the 5th Wave trilogy – here for a day and gone the next…fleeting, and I think about it a lot. When I first heard about Mayfly, I kept circling back to Cassie and I knew I had to read Mayfly. It just really sticks with me because life is fleeting. Any day could be your last no matter how young or old you are.

Jemma just wants to live her life with Apple. She wants them to survive. Pico, the newest exile, is the answer to all of her questions. Honestly, reading this book freaked me out. Freaked me out in the way the Lord of the Flies did. Children with no authority end up psychotic in books like LotF. I mean they’re bloodthirsty little creeps. Where most adults (I can’t say all adults because there are some messed up crazies out there) learn how to manage their temper, right from wrong, manners, tact, etc., these children don’t have that. Every emotion or feeling is so strong and they act on it right away where most adults have learned to examine the situation from all angles, to calm themselves. These children aren’t level-headed. But then comes Pico, this kid who watches everything and listens and thinks out all scenarios and no one knows how to deal with that so he’s exiled. In the short run, it worked out for Jemma and Apple to have Pico in their lives, to help them run from all the things in the Holy Wood that kept them ignorant.

Throughout the book you see so much change in the characters. Jemma learns the power and stress and pain that comes with choosing between Apple and Pico. That while choosing one only benefits her and choosing the other could benefit the whole world. They learn about new groups of kids and how the dynamic of Ell Aye is changing, some kids in other groups are living longer, things are evolving, war is brewing. Jemma and Lady are learning to read. Lady learns that leaving the Holy Wood wasn’t really a bad thing: the only person she loved there was Jemma and without Jemma, the Holy Wood would no longer be home. They are learning to think like the Parents. And when Apple Ends…not going to lie, I totally cried. I thought for sure that somehow in the way he was hurt that maybe, just maybe, he would survive the End. Now they have to learn how to live with new grief and without Apple. I just feel like these kids are so strong. They have been through so much: exile, rape, animal attacks, last lifers, killing, etc. The list goes on and there’s no way to be sure they can end the End.

But someone is out there leaving clues about the End and ending the End. Pico, Jemma, and Lady just need to make it to this person. They find hints and meet new Kids. The journey continues through LA and Anaheim and as they make their way to San Diego, it’s fun to read about their impressions of a place. Funny descriptions of the 101, the Hollywood Bowl, Disneyland, the Crystal Cathedral…So many places are described as they’re seen for the first time. It’s actually really entertaining trying to figure out where they are. Some places are obvious or easy to guess, while others take a little more time to become clear.

I won’t spoil it all but the book took some turns I wasn’t expecting. In regards to the End and the way each character changed throughout the book. I really enjoyed reading this book. Following the story of a group of kids who think they know a lot but in the end, they realize they’ve only just touched the surface of something huge.
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696 reviews37 followers
May 31, 2018
MAYFLY is a spectacular debut that will have fans of post-apocalyptic dystopian fiction on the edge of their seats. Jeff Sweat has created a fantastic blend of edgy and smart with an extra helping of thrills added in for good measure.

We first meet Jemma, a scavenger living in the hills of Holy Wood in Ell Aye. She is one of the girls tasked with going into the abandoned streets to search and find any item that could be of use to their community. But as her fifteenth birthday approaches, she faces the reality that her time as scavenger is over. It’s time for her to become a Mama. It’s her duty as a member of her tribe, since no one lives over the age of 17.

Apple is a Muscle, strong and brave, his role in their enclave is to protect the scavengers from the enemies that surround them. Survival has become more important than love, but somehow Jemma and Apple find that they have a strong pull between them. And they don’t want the burden of becoming a Mama to get in their way.

Forced to leave, they find themselves along with a mysterious exiled boy on a search for answers. Claiming to know what is causing them to die, this strange boy leads them farther from the Holy Wood than they’ve ever been before. But every question leads to another, and they have to face the possibility that The End is nearer all of them than they ever imagined.

Outside of a brief introduction of terms at the very beginning, the reader is thrown into this new world in the future with little explanation. All we know is that the story takes place in Ell Aye, a future LA where things have gone very, very wrong. I live for smart dystopian and MAYFLY delivers spectacularly! Sweat gives enough hints to know what these Children are seeing, but narrates through their eyes. The effect is so clever, that while I was trying to figure out what happened in this world, I was constantly blown away by the creativity and attention to detail Sweat puts into the future world he’s built.

The consistency and execution is incredible. Sweat keeps the pacing tight, maintaining enough intensity to keep the reader glued to each page. Beyond that, the absolute thorough attention to detail in language and understanding of their world is impressive. This is a world where all adults simply ceased to live. Children don’t live past seventeen. It isn’t difficult to imagine the way nuances of our modern life would disappear.

Jemma is an amazing character. She is strong, yet doesn’t see herself that way. She doubts the world and fights against accepting things simply because she’s told. Yet, for all her stubbornness, she is willing to constantly make the difficult choices, even if that means putting what she wants last. I loved reading how she views herself versus how Apple views her. It gives this book the heart it needs to tackle such a brutal world.

MAYFLY is as much a thriller as a post-apocalyptic dystopian. There are so many twists and turns, and none are predictable. I felt out of breath the entire time I was reading. Jemma and Apple are navigating the world beyond their safe tribe, but the added mystery of the plague combined with the very real sense that time is ticking down for them gives this novel a fast-paced intensity that will appeal to fans of dystopians and thrillers in equal measure.

There are a few scenes with violent fights which readers should be aware of. This is a book about the unflinching need for survival, and it can be brutal. There is also an attempted rape, though it is brief and not graphic. The emotional response is portrayed very realistically, which could be difficult for readers sensitive to that topic.

MAYFLY is the first in a series with an end that is satisfying while also leaving readers desperately wanting more. Fans of dystopian, post-apocalyptic fiction and thrillers will be enthralled in this new world. I, for one, cannot wait to read what happens next!

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June 22, 2018
My review of Mayfly can also be found here: Review of Mayfly by Jeff Sweat

*I received this book from NetGalley and Feiwel & Friends in exchange for an honest review*

I thought this was a unique take on a YA dystopian book. In this world, all the adults are gone. You die at 17 and the only way to keep the population going is to have babies around 15. I thought it was interesting to see a book from a the view of a world run by kids pretty much. It's been over 100 years since the parents died we learn. Which means somewhere around 9 or 10 generations have now passed with the children ruling everything. And we really get to realistically see how that has affected things. We see a lot of language loss. You kinda have to get used to the language they use in this because its not completely what we use. A lot of words are simplified down or changed. Instead of Hollywood, it's been simplified to Holy Wood. Instead of LA (Los Angeles), it's now Ell Aye. Words we think are pretty normal and simple are hard to pronounce or just aren't used, such as scientist, or motorcycle (which is mocycle now). This is definitely in part because of the fact no one learns to read anymore. This breakdown of language is something that really could happen over a period of time like this.

There's also the fact that if your brain matures into adult thinking earlier than 17, it can kill you sooner. It's hard to live in a world that being smart or growing up kills you. The only people that seem to live longer are those that get brain damage and their brain stops maturing. Because of this, people seem bent on survival. Everything in the Holy Wood is about "rolling with boys" aka sex and making babies so people live on. Even if some of the girls don't want to, they are heavily persuaded into it for population reasons. This type of thinking has taken over so much that the girls are in charge and literally keep boys around mostly for being dads. If they try to do anything that seems like they are trying to get too much power, they are killed or exiled. What's even worse is that the girls in charge also will let some boys get away with rape if it means another baby. And in other groups in Ell Aye, some of the people have just let survival and the madness over dying take over that they no longer think straight. Things have just gone to hell and these kids don't know how to do anything but survive until they die.

I definitely grew attached to our characters. I really loved Jemma and Apple. I loved the relationship these two had. Love is pretty much a thing of the past since making babies is more important, but these two managed to find it in all the chaos. I also genuinely liked Lady. She annoyed me at first just constantly obsessing over "rolling" and wanting to be a mama. And even trying to go back to the Holy Wood after what happened to her there and knowing she didn't have people to turn to after it. But I started liking her more when she tried going back, leaving Jemma and Apple and then realizing she had nothing to go back to. She realized the people she cared about weren't in Holy Wood, they were right beside her getting out of that place and protecting her. She started acting a bit smarter, wanting to help get further away and wanting to find out more about "the end" and what caused it. She starts thinking more about if they can find a way to live past it and less about rolling and making babies. I also liked "Teek," the exile. He was willing to show and use his intelligence if it meant finding a way to try and live past the end. I love that even though he seemed shifty when we first met him, it was actually because of him hiding that he can read and is actually pretty smart. So he's only trying to hide what could get him killed or kicked out again. He's actually a cool guy.

What I didn't like is the fact the first almost half of the book is mainly about "rolling." We genuinely get that in order to keep the population going, people had to have babies. But it was just constantly talked about in almost every chapter up until our characters leave Holy Wood. It got really repetitive and old after reading it for so long. The other thing I didn't enjoy so much was the end. Our group finally makes it down near San Diego to try and find who caused everything and the entire scene with the scientist takes place in the last 5% of the book. It felt rushed just squeezing it in that small section and there could have been more explanation of things both about the end and how they could try to fix it had it not been squeezed in that small bit. We get pretty much a quick explanation that the end involved nano-tech gone wrong and that Jemma could be a part of fixing it with her connection to the haze. However, I'm hoping we'll get a sequel that will conquer this trying to stop the ending.
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Author 23 books27 followers
May 24, 2018
** Review originally published on teenreads.com **

MAYFLY is a spectacular debut that will have fans of post-apocalyptic dystopian on the edge of their seats. Jeff Sweat has created a fantastic blend of edgy and smart with an extra helping of thrills added in for good measure.

We first meet Jemma, a scavenger living in the hills of Holy Wood in Ell Aye. She is one of the girls tasked with going into the abandoned streets to search and find any item that could be of use to their community. But as her fifteenth birthday approaches, she faces the reality that her time as scavenger is over. It’s time for her to become a Mama. It’s her duty as a member of her tribe, since no one lives over the age of seventeen.

Apple is a Muscle, strong and brave, his role in their enclave is to protect the scavengers from the enemies that surround them. Survival has become more important than love, but somehow Jemma and Apple find that they have a strong pull between them. And they don’t want the burden of becoming a Mama to get in their way.

Forced to leave, they find themselves along with a mysterious exiled boy on a search for answers. Claiming to know what is causing them to die, this strange boy leads them farther from the Holy Wood than they’ve ever been before.

But every question leads to another, and they have to face the possibility that The End is nearer all of them than they ever imagined.

Outside of a brief introduction of terms at the very beginning, the reader is thrown into this new world in the future with little explanation. All we know is that the story takes place in Ell Aye, a future LA where things have gone very, very wrong. I live for smart dystopian and MAYFLY delivers spectacularly! Sweat gives enough hints to know what these Children are seeing, but narrates through their eyes. The effect is so clever, that while I was trying to figure out what happened in this world, I was constantly blown away by the creativity and attention to detail Sweat puts into the future world he’s built.

The consistency and execution is incredible. Sweat keeps the pacing tight, maintaining enough intensity to keep the reader glued to each page. Beyond that, the absolute thorough attention to detail in language and understanding of their world is impressive. This is a world where all adults simply ceased to live. Children don’t live past seventeen. It isn’t difficult to imagine the way nuances of our modern life would disappear.

Jemma is an amazing character. She is strong, yet doesn’t see herself that way. She doubts the world and fights against accepting things simply because she’s told. Yet, for all her stubbornness, she is willing to constantly make the difficult choices, even if that means putting what she wants last. I loved reading how she views herself versus how Apple views her. It gives this book the heart it needs to tackle such a brutal world.

MAYFLY is as much a thriller as a post-apocalyptic dystopian. There are so many twists and turns, and none are predictable. I felt out of breath the entire time I was reading. Jemma and Apple are navigating the world beyond their safe tribe, but the added mystery of the plague combined with the very real sense that time is ticking down for them gives this novel a fast-paced intensity that will appeal to fans of dystopians and thrillers in equal measure.

There are a few scenes with violent fights which readers should be aware of. This is a book about the unflinching need for survival, and it can be brutal. There is also an attempted rape, though it is brief and not graphic. The emotional response is portrayed very realistically, which could be difficult for readers sensitive to that topic.

MAYFLY is the first in a series with an end that is satisfying while also leaving readers desperately wanting more. Fans of dystopian, post-apocalyptic fiction and thrillers will be enthralled in this new world. I, for one, cannot wait to read what happens next!

Thank you Teenreads for sending me a review copy!
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9 reviews
May 1, 2018
I was fortunate enough to read an advanced copy of this amazing work by first-time novelist Jeff Sweat.
Teens run what's left of the world in Ell Aye, after an unknown devastation has wiped out anyone older than 17. Jemma is a powerhouse protagonist who I loved from the beginning of the book. She shows us around this brave new world and how it operates, and I loved every detail, from how the work is split up, to how easily generations forget how to read, to how Southern California has split into tribes. I love books about dystopian futures, but this story is so much more than that. It's also a story about wanting more than you're given, growing up too fast (insanely fast), and making tough choices for the greater good.
Teens will love this, but so will adults who love Hunger Games. I can't wait to read the sequel!
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May 3, 2018
I got ahold of an advanced copy of Mayfly, and boy am I glad I did.

This book has it all.

Violent kids ruling over a dystopian LA? Check.

Power grabs and gender fueds? Check.

So much more? Yup.

Mayfly keeps a quick pace while allowing the author's vivid descriptions of a world gone to waste, punctuated by biting dialogue that takes you to a time and place that doesn't actually exist, hearing the words of children who will never be.

My words don't do Mayfly any justice. Just read it.
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May 7, 2018
What happens when the oldest people in your tribe are 17 and on the brink of death? When the caregivers of the babies are babies themselves. When the army is an army of youth. This novel explores what happens when kids are the ones who run the world. The characters will stick with you and you will wonder what happens next.
I read an advanced copy.
1 review
May 1, 2018
This book was so much fun to read! I received an advance copy of this book, but wasn't sure I was going to like it. I don't normally enjoy this genre, but decided to give it a try anyway. I was so surprised by how much I liked it. The author really makes you feel like you're a part of the world he has created. The characters were engaging and interesting and I found myself trying to figure out what was going to happen next. It was so hard to put down this book! I highly recommend it to ANY reader. I can't wait for a sequel!
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70 reviews19 followers
June 18, 2018
Disclaimer: I was sent this book for a review by the author and publishers - but this has in no way affected my opinion.
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I struggled in the beginning to get into the story but once I got accustomed to the language the characters were using. Once I overcame that struggle, I got sucked into the story. This is a book I highly recommend for anyone who loved “Legend” by Marie Lu or “The 100” by Kass Morgen.
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I love the characters and the idea behind the whole story. It’s a Dystopian novel.





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WHY DID APPLE HAVE TO DIE? I CRIED MY EYES OUT!!! OMG!
And Tommy, I trusted you! Now I will never be able to trust anyone new in this book. I’m really excited about the continuation of this series. Wonder if they can fix this and maybe prevent it from happening and getting Apple back haha (wishful thinking!)
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229 reviews11 followers
May 21, 2018
Mayfly is stunning, gritty, and fast-paced, offering a fresh take on YA dystopian fiction!
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21 reviews5 followers
July 15, 2018
This beautiful novel is set in post-apocalyptic California. If I had to describe the novel in two words it would be "unapologetically honest." Think Lord of the Flies + The Giver + The Hunger Games. Jeff Sweat paints a beautiful picture of love, fear, heartache, and above all...hope.

The different points of view and the beautifully honest narration made for a compelling and fast read. Although I devoured it in a mere handful of days, the story and characters have remained with me. I anxiously await the next installment.
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168 reviews22 followers
July 11, 2018
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This book was AWESOME! I loved it!

It is set in a post apokoliptic world (yeah, I know that's not how you spell it. Read the book!), where there are no adults, and everyone dies when they turn 17. In Jemma's group, girls rule, boys are only kept around for necessities, and when a girl turns 15, she must become a Mama to help populate the next generation.

If you've read the Gone series by Michael Grant, which was also awesome, you might find a few similarities (minus all the talk about baby making). However, in Gone, the adults disappear in the first book, and the kids have to figure out how to live without them. In Mayfly, the adults have been gone for quite some time, and the kids have their own culture and systems set in place, with jobs for everyine, starting from a very young age. Also, everyone dies at 17, which is a total bummer! It also, as you might expect, leads to some interesting plot lines.

I ❤Jemma and Apple, but Pico is my favorite! Also even though this book touches on some pretty heavy topics (like rape), there is also humor sprinkled throughout the book.

This is Jeff Sweat's debut, and I can't wait to see what he does next. Hopefully, he writes a sequel, although there is no info on GoodReads about one, yet. 😞

I received a copy of this book from the publishers, via NetGalley, in exchange for an honest review.
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291 reviews
July 13, 2018
Book club book this month. Had a really hard time with it in the beginning but then reminded me of Lucifer’s Hammer and Maze Runner. Good ending 👍
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