Notice: I have made a review for every book of this series and they need to be read in order since they are supposed to feel like an on-going impression. So if you read the second without reading the first will feel rather off.
I am mostly focusing on the style of storytelling and a lot less on if it reads well or something sophisticated like that. For the same reason I tend to have lots of SPOILERS which means that if you read this text you will know THE OVERALL PLOT and how much I DIDN’T like it. So be warned that this is a mostly negative opinion for the whole trilogy which tends to reveal in detail why I didn’t like it. Better be read after you have read the books or if you want to avoid a not-so-smart series. YOU HAVE NOW BEEN WARNED and I can now initiate the slaughter.
--- The Fortress of the Pearl ---
So Erlic left his woman and his luxurious kingdom and is now dying in the middle of the desert… because he thinks this was a much better thing to do for some weird reason. He finds a city, where he befriends a little kid. He is invaded by one of the leaders of the city and as soon as he drinks from the cup he is offered, he gets poisoned. He has a month to bring the nefarious leader a magical pearl that somehow controls dreams and reality. As a reward he will be given the antidote and the little boy will not be harmed. And that is the main objective of this story.
Now, one will wonder several things at this point. Things like why didn’t Elric start pulverizing the ungrateful bastard until he tells him where the antidote is. Or why does he care about the little boy at all when in the previous book he nihilistically massacred thousands of innocents just because they were standing in his way . Or why doesn’t he summon a God to teleport him to the pearl. Or teleport the pearl to his palm. Or to heal him. Or WHATEVER!
Anyways, he is told the pearl is hidden in an oasis in the middle of the desert. He goes there and along the way he meets lots of adventurers who are also trying to get to the pearl unsuccessfully for centuries. Apparently, the defences around it are amazingly powerful. So these adventurers constantly try to threaten or bribe Elric into becoming their ally, since if he was sent by one of the leaders of the city, he must be one of the best Dream Thieves in the world. Elric on the other hand has no idea what a Dream Thief is, gets bored, and slays most of them in five lines of text just so he can go on with his mission. There is also an inconsistency here as it is mentioned he has already killed several people with the sword when in reality he never did it before. The reason is because the book was originally written after the main storyline was over as an extra chapter. Gotcha there Moorcock!
As he arrives to the oasis, he finds a simple nice village full of non-fighters. Weird how nobody could conquer such an unguarded place for centuries. Makes no sense. He finds out that the pearl is actually appearing only once every one century through the priestess of the oasis. And conveniently, the priestess was put in a sleep spell by an adventurer before he was killed. She did not awake and will normally stay asleep forever, unless someone enters her dreams and finds her. Because as we saw in the previous book, not even the Gods can undo a sleep spell in this world. Elric gets assistance from another priestess and together they enter the girl’s dreams. For some reason she trusts him although he admits he came to steal the pearl. Makes no sense.
The dreamworld is by far a very amazing place, as it is practically bubble worlds formed by the dreams of mortals and Gods. Everything is bizarre and continually changes shape. Also, every area represents a different psyche of the human subconscious thus there was a hidden message behind everything. Too bad the plot sucks monkey balls. All Elric does is asking the priestess what this is and what that does, slays anything that stands in the way in five lines of text and constantly tries to deny the fact he is not a Dream Thief, despite coming here to steal the pearl. That practically makes his female companion as a cheap way to have the author explain the world to the reader. Oh, she is also fan service as at one point out of nowhere they have sex for some reason.
So he finally reaches the girl, who is acting like a queen inside a fortress. As he enters it, he finds lots of those adventurers standing there, trying to court the queen into accepting them and thus giving them the pearl. How the hell did all those guys get there if only Elric and the fan service girl got in the dreamworld? How did they even pass all the monsters and the traps faster than him? Makes no sense.
Anyways, Elric doesn’t find a reason to antagonize these guys in seduction skills. He just slays them all in five lines of text. The queen then accepts him and they all wake up with the pearl in his hand. He then bids them farewell and leaves with the pearl and they don’t seem to care he is taking it away, despite he is not stealing it and they were guarding it for centuries. Makes no sense.
So he goes back to the city where he is given the antidote and the boy is set free… as if it mattered at all. The leader though double crosses Elric and sends his entire platoon to kill him. Elric slays them all in five lines of text. He then throws the pearl inside the bastard’s mouth and he chokes to death. Then the other leaders of the city appear and demand to take the pearl for themselves. Their diplomacy skills suck and thus they send ten times more soldiers against Elric, who slays them all in… six lines.
And then the story ends with him leaving the city and the fan service girl being impregnated with his baby.
What about the pearl? If it was THAT powerful, why didn’t he use it somehow? What about the boy? If it was THAT important, why did he just dump it? And after he single handily decimates half the armies in the desert in six lines of text, why does he decide to get the hell away from there instead of… I don’t know, stay and enjoy the glory of his feats? What about that chick getting pregnant by having sex in a dream? HOW IS THAT EVEN POSSIBLE?
Makes no sense. In fact, the entire book made no sense, besides the symbolisms in the dreamworld. And guess what, dreams are not even real! The only thing that was logical was something completely illogical. (Facepalm)