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Impulse & Initiative: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
What if Mr. Darcy had set out to win Elizabeth's heart?
What if ...
Instead of disappearing from Elizabeth Bennet's life after she refused his offer of marriage, Mr. Darcy had stayed and tried to change her mind?
What if ...
Lizzy, as she gets to know Darcy, finds him undeniably attractive and her impulses win out over her sense of propriety?
What if ...
Madly in love and mutually on fire, their passion anticipates their wedding? In Impulse & Initiative, instead of avoiding Elizabeth after his ill-fated marriage proposal, Mr. Darcy follows her back to her home in Hertfordshire, planning to prove to her he is a changed man and worthy of her love. And little by little, Elizabeth begins to find the man she despised becoming irresistible...
411 pages, Paperback
First published May 11, 2007
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Abigail Reynolds
69 books786 followersAbigail Reynolds may be a nationally bestselling author and a physician, but she can’t follow a straight line with a ruler. Originally from upstate New York, she studied Russian and theater at Bryn Mawr College and marine biology at the Marine Biological Laboratory in Woods Hole. After a stint in performing arts administration, she decided to attend medical school, and took up writing as a way to retain her sanity during her years as a physician in private practice.
A life-long lover of Jane Austen’s novels, Abigail began writing variations on Pride & Prejudice in 2001, then expanded her repertoire to include a series of novels set on her beloved Cape Cod.Her most recent releases are A Matter of Honor, Mr. Darcy's Enchantment, and Conceit & Concealment. Her books have been translated into six languages. A lifetime member of JASNA, she lives on Cape Cod with her husband, her son and a menagerie of animals. Her hobbies do not include sleeping or cleaning her house.
A life-long lover of Jane Austen’s novels, Abigail began writing variations on Pride & Prejudice in 2001, then expanded her repertoire to include a series of novels set on her beloved Cape Cod.Her most recent releases are A Matter of Honor, Mr. Darcy's Enchantment, and Conceit & Concealment. Her books have been translated into six languages. A lifetime member of JASNA, she lives on Cape Cod with her husband, her son and a menagerie of animals. Her hobbies do not include sleeping or cleaning her house.
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September 18, 2023
I debated just putting this book down and not finishing it many times while reading this. Why didn't I? Probably because nothing truly eye rolling popped up to make me say effe it. But it was close. And it all started around page 28 when I encountered this:
Honestly, I like the idea of the book and the writing style was nice and decently Austen-y. But I would have greatly preferred that this keep with the tone of the original P&P and everything stay G-rated. Not because I am a prude but, in my world, I read Jane Austen when I am in the mood for sweet and innocent love stories. Because not everything needs (lots of) sex to be enjoyable. I have other books when I'm in the mood for that.
She fiercely renewed her attention to her needlework, with the unsurprising result that her needle promptly found its way into her finger. With a muffled exclamation of pain and embarrassment, she raised the injured finger to her lips, completely unaware of the effect that this simple gesture would have on Darcy.My eyes roll each time I read this. Anyway, I chose to ignore the idiocy and continue reading though perhaps I should not have because this eventually devolved into a bodice ripper. (Seriously, he rips her dress off at one point. No joke.)
Honestly, I like the idea of the book and the writing style was nice and decently Austen-y. But I would have greatly preferred that this keep with the tone of the original P&P and everything stay G-rated. Not because I am a prude but, in my world, I read Jane Austen when I am in the mood for sweet and innocent love stories. Because not everything needs (lots of) sex to be enjoyable. I have other books when I'm in the mood for that.
May 30, 2019
I read this book first as Impulse and Initiative and did post a review of 5 stars. I have now re-read it under this title.
I went back and posted under the original title an addition to note that I found there to be scenes involving Caroline Bingley and her design to spread rumors concerning Elizabeth's behavior with Darcy are omitted in this edition. Then, of course, the matter of Darcy's discovery that it was Caroline who set in motion the rumors and his consultation with her brother, Charles, have to also be omitted.
The lack of that particular scenario does not change my opinion nor my enjoyment of this book which I downloaded under kindle Unlimited on a whim to re-read on that rather device rather than take up my paperback first edition. I am glad I re-read it as I truly enjoyed the way in which Darcy is persuaded to return to Hertfordshire and attempt to woo Elizabeth and win her heart. One of my favorite lines is when she asks him how long he and his sister plan to remain at Netherfield and he answers, "As long as it takes." And then I loved how he decides that the best way to win her is to let her set the pace as he finds little by little, she is persuaded to accept a touch to her hand, then a kiss on the hand, as slowly she realizes that against all her determination, she likes it and looks forward to such small gestures of admiration.
Abigail Reynolds is one of my favorite authors and this book is only one reason why. Yes, there are scenes of a mature nature but they are built up to so naturally, so in character for two passionate lovers that I found myself wanting to read it all and very happy with this manifestation of their love.
The book does go on to address the Wickham situation but this time Elizabeth is in on the details and it was part of reading of them working in support of each other, part truly satisfying that I liked in this variation. Indeed part of Elizabeth's forming a relationship with Darcy is in her demand that he consult with her on decisions, even if the action is not to be changed, she wants to be part of knowing what is going on in every aspect of their lives together. And she expects to have him seek her affirmation of what will be then done or to listen if she has another opinion.
Well worth reading again.
I went back and posted under the original title an addition to note that I found there to be scenes involving Caroline Bingley and her design to spread rumors concerning Elizabeth's behavior with Darcy are omitted in this edition. Then, of course, the matter of Darcy's discovery that it was Caroline who set in motion the rumors and his consultation with her brother, Charles, have to also be omitted.
The lack of that particular scenario does not change my opinion nor my enjoyment of this book which I downloaded under kindle Unlimited on a whim to re-read on that rather device rather than take up my paperback first edition. I am glad I re-read it as I truly enjoyed the way in which Darcy is persuaded to return to Hertfordshire and attempt to woo Elizabeth and win her heart. One of my favorite lines is when she asks him how long he and his sister plan to remain at Netherfield and he answers, "As long as it takes." And then I loved how he decides that the best way to win her is to let her set the pace as he finds little by little, she is persuaded to accept a touch to her hand, then a kiss on the hand, as slowly she realizes that against all her determination, she likes it and looks forward to such small gestures of admiration.
Abigail Reynolds is one of my favorite authors and this book is only one reason why. Yes, there are scenes of a mature nature but they are built up to so naturally, so in character for two passionate lovers that I found myself wanting to read it all and very happy with this manifestation of their love.
The book does go on to address the Wickham situation but this time Elizabeth is in on the details and it was part of reading of them working in support of each other, part truly satisfying that I liked in this variation. Indeed part of Elizabeth's forming a relationship with Darcy is in her demand that he consult with her on decisions, even if the action is not to be changed, she wants to be part of knowing what is going on in every aspect of their lives together. And she expects to have him seek her affirmation of what will be then done or to listen if she has another opinion.
Well worth reading again.
February 21, 2016
I bought this book as "Impulse & Initiative" on September 15, 2007 and over the years have read it many times. I own all of Abigail Reynolds' books and have not had a problem with discerning when it is being published under a new title. So I have not read "To Conquer Mr. Darcy" - seems to be the same according to reviews.
I absolutely love how Abigail takes us for a journey inside the minds of ODC. Darcy is persuaded to go to Hertfordshire to attempt to win Elizabeth's heart. "How long do you plan to stay at Netherfield?" "As long as necessary." The little hints that he is making progress are so tantalizing...the look in her eyes or on her face make him realize that she is not indifferent. And she tells him right out she will only work towards friendship. Then he comes to realize that he does best by not forcing the issue, as she does respond to a touch, a kiss, even if reluctantly. Caroline Bingley forces the issue to a head, which actually explodes in her face, by trying to taint Elizabeth's reputation when she spies on Darcy and sees him kiss Lizzy. But, here, too, we see growth in the relationship as Elizabeth confronts Darcy with the fact that he asked her father for Lizzy's hand without discussing the situation with her first.
I so enjoy all the angst and sexual tension Ms. Reynolds brings to her writings. The scene which leads to the anticipation of the marriage vows is so well handled. Elizabeth goes to look for a book late at night (after a long talk with Georgiana), thinking all in the house are asleep, and then meets Darcy in the library. She is in her night gown: she says, "Good night, William" when he sends her off to bed and sparks fly. AND contrary to how Lydia and Wickham act during their elopement, Darcy and Elizabeth feel guilt. Darcy faces his responsibility and goes to Mr. Gardiner to ask to set the wedding up a.s.a.p. and admits why he is asking to do so.
There are other issues which are handled but the ending is very sweet. Upon learning Elizabeth is pregnant and fearing what he witnessed his own mother go through with her pregnancies, Darcy, again has to open up and talk to Elizabeth about his experience.
Don't know which of Abigail's variations is my favorite but highly recommend them all...even the modern take-offs!
February 2016: In now re-reading this book under the title To Conquer Mr. Darcy and technically for the second time in entirety I want to note that there are certain scenes/episodes left out. In particular that whole matter of just who set in motion the rumors about Darcy's and Elizabeth's compromising behavior and then just how that person was addressed by Bingley. Although the omission does not change my rating of the novel I want to make a note of it for anyone who may read either or both editions.
I absolutely love how Abigail takes us for a journey inside the minds of ODC. Darcy is persuaded to go to Hertfordshire to attempt to win Elizabeth's heart. "How long do you plan to stay at Netherfield?" "As long as necessary." The little hints that he is making progress are so tantalizing...the look in her eyes or on her face make him realize that she is not indifferent. And she tells him right out she will only work towards friendship. Then he comes to realize that he does best by not forcing the issue, as she does respond to a touch, a kiss, even if reluctantly. Caroline Bingley forces the issue to a head, which actually explodes in her face, by trying to taint Elizabeth's reputation when she spies on Darcy and sees him kiss Lizzy. But, here, too, we see growth in the relationship as Elizabeth confronts Darcy with the fact that he asked her father for Lizzy's hand without discussing the situation with her first.
I so enjoy all the angst and sexual tension Ms. Reynolds brings to her writings. The scene which leads to the anticipation of the marriage vows is so well handled. Elizabeth goes to look for a book late at night (after a long talk with Georgiana), thinking all in the house are asleep, and then meets Darcy in the library. She is in her night gown: she says, "Good night, William" when he sends her off to bed and sparks fly. AND contrary to how Lydia and Wickham act during their elopement, Darcy and Elizabeth feel guilt. Darcy faces his responsibility and goes to Mr. Gardiner to ask to set the wedding up a.s.a.p. and admits why he is asking to do so.
There are other issues which are handled but the ending is very sweet. Upon learning Elizabeth is pregnant and fearing what he witnessed his own mother go through with her pregnancies, Darcy, again has to open up and talk to Elizabeth about his experience.
Don't know which of Abigail's variations is my favorite but highly recommend them all...even the modern take-offs!
February 2016: In now re-reading this book under the title To Conquer Mr. Darcy and technically for the second time in entirety I want to note that there are certain scenes/episodes left out. In particular that whole matter of just who set in motion the rumors about Darcy's and Elizabeth's compromising behavior and then just how that person was addressed by Bingley. Although the omission does not change my rating of the novel I want to make a note of it for anyone who may read either or both editions.
April 17, 2025
***SPOILER*** ****End Spoiler****
Revised 12-22-16
If you can stomach that, then by all means read it. You have been warned.
The time frame is after the disastrous proposal at Huntsford. Colonel Fitzwilliam visits Darcy and Georgina at their London townhouse. Georgiana tells the Colonel of her worries for her brother and the Colonel attempts to get him to tell him his troubles.
Darcy tells him about his proposal and the many reasons Elizabeth refused him [his interference with Jane and Bingley, the lies of Wickham, his attitude, etc.]. The Colonel convinces him to try again for her affection and to settle things with Bingley.
Darcy visits Bingley [we don’t see it], Bingley then comes to the townhouse and convinces Darcy to go back to Netherfield with him, and Georgiana decides she wants to go also. The next several chapters are related to the business of Darcy trying to win Elizabeth and Bingley reestablishing his relationship and ultimate engagement with Jane.
Caroline Bingley sees D&E passionately kissing in the Netherfield library and starts rumors questioning Elizabeth’s morals and suggesting that she was Darcy’s mistress. I resented that Caroline’s behavior was never dealt with. Bingley never reined in his sister and she seemingly got away with it. She, at least was canon and her character was the same as in P&P. I suppose Bingley, not dealing with her, was also canon.
The situation with Wickham was handled way too quickly and by Colonel Fitzwilliam. Lydia was Lydia and that was canon. In this rendition, Elizabeth talked with Lydia. We did not see the account. We were simply told what the end result was. The couple’s marriage and subsequent removal to the north was almost an afterthought. Reynolds actually spent more time giving voice to Lydia and her petulant behavior than she did to Wickham.
Revised 12-22-16
If you can stomach that, then by all means read it. You have been warned.
The time frame is after the disastrous proposal at Huntsford. Colonel Fitzwilliam visits Darcy and Georgina at their London townhouse. Georgiana tells the Colonel of her worries for her brother and the Colonel attempts to get him to tell him his troubles.
Darcy tells him about his proposal and the many reasons Elizabeth refused him [his interference with Jane and Bingley, the lies of Wickham, his attitude, etc.]. The Colonel convinces him to try again for her affection and to settle things with Bingley.
Darcy visits Bingley [we don’t see it], Bingley then comes to the townhouse and convinces Darcy to go back to Netherfield with him, and Georgiana decides she wants to go also. The next several chapters are related to the business of Darcy trying to win Elizabeth and Bingley reestablishing his relationship and ultimate engagement with Jane.
Caroline Bingley sees D&E passionately kissing in the Netherfield library and starts rumors questioning Elizabeth’s morals and suggesting that she was Darcy’s mistress. I resented that Caroline’s behavior was never dealt with. Bingley never reined in his sister and she seemingly got away with it. She, at least was canon and her character was the same as in P&P. I suppose Bingley, not dealing with her, was also canon.
The situation with Wickham was handled way too quickly and by Colonel Fitzwilliam. Lydia was Lydia and that was canon. In this rendition, Elizabeth talked with Lydia. We did not see the account. We were simply told what the end result was. The couple’s marriage and subsequent removal to the north was almost an afterthought. Reynolds actually spent more time giving voice to Lydia and her petulant behavior than she did to Wickham.
February 21, 2009
Gah. I realize that I shouldn't like this book as much as I do, but really it's pretty awesome. And it's almost possible to believe that it's not entirely out of character for Darcy and Elizabeth to behave the way they do in the book, right? Ok, maybe not, but it's a fun read anyway and who doesn't want to read about Darcy passionately wooing Elizabeth -- even if Jane Austen might not approve?
March 4, 2016
This is my 5th read-through of this wonderful book. It just hits all the right notes for me. The internal psychological/emotional demons that Darcy and Elizabeth fight are as compelling as the external events in the story.
From the time Darcy became the Master of Pemberley, he has always taken charge, been in control, and made things happen in whatever way he deems best for those he cares about. He does the same when he finally determines to properly court Elizabeth shortly after the events in Hunsford. He confesses to Bingley about Jane's affection for him and accompanies him back to Netherfield and Longbourn. When Elizabeth asks Darcy how long he will be staying in the area, his answer is, "As long as necessary."
As for Elizabeth, her Aunt Gardiner describes her best: "Lizzy, you have grown up to be self-reliant, which is hardly surprising since both of your parents, in their very different ways, cannot always be relied upon. It can be difficult to give up such self-reliance, even when it is no longer necessary... ."
Consequently, the conflict in this particular book between these two strong characters isn't pride or prejudice. Instead, it's Darcy's habit of making unilateral decisions and handling everything himself, and Elizabeth's fear of dependence upon anyone but herself. Once Bingley and Jane are reunited, Elizabeth and Darcy are already past the misunderstandings that kept her from recognizing his true worth. However, Elizabeth resists because she doesn't like feeling pushed, and Darcy is definitely pushing her to accept him. They have a strong physical attraction to each other and Darcy is not a very patient suitor. This leads to their engagement sooner rather than later in this story.
Gradually, Elizabeth's sense of humor allows her to recognize the inevitability of their partnership and how much she truly cares for Darcy, though she still holds out on telling him that she loves him for quite a long time. However, she is NOT shy about letting Darcy know that she expects him to include her in the decisions affecting their relationship. The banter between the two of them, in my opinion, is among the best in the JAFF world. They exchange famous quotes in their verbal skirmishes, demonstrating how perfectly matched they are in intellect.
The Lydia-and-Wickham storyline emerges after Darcy and Elizabeth are married. Colonel Fitzwilliam ends up meeting with Wickham instead of Darcy, and Elizabeth is also an active participant - much to Darcy's displeasure. He allows himself to be persuaded, though, proving how much Elizabeth's influence is changing him.
The book also continues to include Elizabeth's pregnancy and the birth of their first child. Darcy's panic is understandable with the history provided of his mother's illness and death. Obviously, childbirth is an area where Darcy will have no control at all. Elizabeth is able to confront the issue with him in a believable, sympathetic way and helps him work through those fears.
Overall, what appeals to me so much in this book is the balanced, healthy relationship portrayed between these two and how they positively influence each other.
WARNING: There are scenes of graphic intimacy, both pre- and post-marriage. They're beautifully written and fit within the context of the story, but some may find them offensive.
From the time Darcy became the Master of Pemberley, he has always taken charge, been in control, and made things happen in whatever way he deems best for those he cares about. He does the same when he finally determines to properly court Elizabeth shortly after the events in Hunsford. He confesses to Bingley about Jane's affection for him and accompanies him back to Netherfield and Longbourn. When Elizabeth asks Darcy how long he will be staying in the area, his answer is, "As long as necessary."
As for Elizabeth, her Aunt Gardiner describes her best: "Lizzy, you have grown up to be self-reliant, which is hardly surprising since both of your parents, in their very different ways, cannot always be relied upon. It can be difficult to give up such self-reliance, even when it is no longer necessary... ."
Consequently, the conflict in this particular book between these two strong characters isn't pride or prejudice. Instead, it's Darcy's habit of making unilateral decisions and handling everything himself, and Elizabeth's fear of dependence upon anyone but herself. Once Bingley and Jane are reunited, Elizabeth and Darcy are already past the misunderstandings that kept her from recognizing his true worth. However, Elizabeth resists because she doesn't like feeling pushed, and Darcy is definitely pushing her to accept him. They have a strong physical attraction to each other and Darcy is not a very patient suitor. This leads to their engagement sooner rather than later in this story.
Gradually, Elizabeth's sense of humor allows her to recognize the inevitability of their partnership and how much she truly cares for Darcy, though she still holds out on telling him that she loves him for quite a long time. However, she is NOT shy about letting Darcy know that she expects him to include her in the decisions affecting their relationship. The banter between the two of them, in my opinion, is among the best in the JAFF world. They exchange famous quotes in their verbal skirmishes, demonstrating how perfectly matched they are in intellect.
The Lydia-and-Wickham storyline emerges after Darcy and Elizabeth are married. Colonel Fitzwilliam ends up meeting with Wickham instead of Darcy, and Elizabeth is also an active participant - much to Darcy's displeasure. He allows himself to be persuaded, though, proving how much Elizabeth's influence is changing him.
The book also continues to include Elizabeth's pregnancy and the birth of their first child. Darcy's panic is understandable with the history provided of his mother's illness and death. Obviously, childbirth is an area where Darcy will have no control at all. Elizabeth is able to confront the issue with him in a believable, sympathetic way and helps him work through those fears.
Overall, what appeals to me so much in this book is the balanced, healthy relationship portrayed between these two and how they positively influence each other.
WARNING: There are scenes of graphic intimacy, both pre- and post-marriage. They're beautifully written and fit within the context of the story, but some may find them offensive.
July 8, 2017
An enjoyable story of Darcy returning to Hertfordshire to woo Elizabeth after Colonel Fitzwilliam gives him a swift kick in the pants, figuratively. Although I love this Darcy and Elizabeth couple, I did find Darcy's passionate nature to be a little over the top. Otherwise, I very much enjoyed this story and intend to read it over and over.
July 2, 2020
Wonderful story
Seems odd to be writing a review in 2018 for an old and relatively famous book in the P&P variation genre.
It’s pretty racy but in a way that seems natural.
The Lydia/Wickham scenario has the original’s outcome but with a much more interesting road to the outcome. Lizzie’s help is used and takes part in a wonderful interaction with Wickham. She is quite the actress.
Had to feel sorry for Mr. Bennet when he has multiple daughters taking part in pre-marital relations. Bad week for him. 😂
I recommend this book highly. I can’t imagine many people not loving it.
Seems odd to be writing a review in 2018 for an old and relatively famous book in the P&P variation genre.
It’s pretty racy but in a way that seems natural.
The Lydia/Wickham scenario has the original’s outcome but with a much more interesting road to the outcome. Lizzie’s help is used and takes part in a wonderful interaction with Wickham. She is quite the actress.
Had to feel sorry for Mr. Bennet when he has multiple daughters taking part in pre-marital relations. Bad week for him. 😂
I recommend this book highly. I can’t imagine many people not loving it.
February 7, 2021
Pride and Prejudice re-imagined?
In this retelling of Jane Austen’s novel Pride and Prejudice, author Abigail Reynolds re-imagines the famous plot and asks these burning questions. What if after Elizabeth Bennet’s refusal of Mr. Darcy’s first proposal at Hunsford, he does not disappear from her life, but arrives at her home at Longbourn determined to change her mind? What if Elizabeth seduced by his ardent attentions sets aside all propriety giving way to her base impulses? What if their mutual passion can not be abated, anticipating their wedding night? Ms. Reynolds then proceeds to creatively answer each of these questions with her spin on the retelling of Pride and Prejudice that might require some readers to suspend their disbelief and burning objections of altering one of the most cherished works in English literature, and just let go and let it happen.
The story opens with the arrival of Colonel Fitzwilliam at the Darcy townhouse in London. It is the summer of 1803 and two months have passed since he and his cousin Fitzwilliam Darcy had visited their aunt Lady Catherine de Bourgh at Rosings in Kent. He is immediately informed by concerned servants and Georgina Darcy that Mr. Darcy is not quite himself, sullen and short tempered to the point of alarm. Darcy shortly reveals to him the cause of his misery; - the rejection of his marriage proposal by the woman that he loves, Elizabeth Bennet, and the reasons why she so flatly refused him. Colonel Fitzwilliam is not surprised by his attraction to the lovely Miss Bennet, only that she would refuse such an advantageous offer and Darcy’s reasons for separating his friend Charles Bingley from Elizabeth’s sister Jane. Inspired by Colonel Fitzwilliam’s advice he convinces Charles Bingley to return to his estate at Netherfield Park to renew his attentions to Jane Bennet with the ulterior motive of seeing Elizabeth and winning her heart and hand.
Readers of Pride and Prejudice will remember that after Elizabeth refuses Mr. Darcy’s first proposal that she returns home to her family at Longbourn and Mr. Darcy disappears from her life only to be re-introduced by a chance meeting at his estate of Pemberley when she is touring Derbyshire on holiday with her aunt and uncle Gardiner. In this scenario, instead of leaving their meeting to chance, Mr. Darcy has become the aggressor, taking the initiative to reconnect with Elizabeth and pursue her affections by ingratiating himself to her family, her friends and herself, first by gentlemanly means with little results, then by the Wickham school of charm and seduction which eventually breaks Elizabeth’s resolve, giving way to her passionate desires.
Impulse & Initiative offers Pride and Prejudice fans the opportunity to explore yet another avenue of a story that we all just can not seem to get enough of as evidenced by the many prequels, sequels, retellings and pastiches available. It is creative and clever in theory, but do the ‘what if’ questions really need to be asked and answered? Possibly, but at times while reading Impulse & Initiative I felt like I was privy to a creative writing assignment where students were asked to take a story from classic literature and believably alter the plot and characters to the opposite intention of the original author. In this case, the results can at times be both believable and baffling, but unfortunately not at the same time leaving the reader in a bit of a quandary.
Abigail Reynolds has taken a huge risk in her choice of changing a classic story that is quite delightful to begin with, and whose hero and heroine Elizabeth Bennet and Mr. Darcy may be the most iconic romantic couple in popular culture short of Shakespeare’s Romeo and Juliet. She might have succeeded if she had allowed the characters integrity to continue from Austen’s original concept. Instead we are asked to suspend our disbelief beyond equal measure and accept well known characters acting in a manner that does not constitute their happiness or ours. Reynold’s Mr. Darcy has changed from the honorable Regency gentleman that many expect into George Wickham, a plotting seducer and the type of man that Austen’s Darcy despises, and Elizabeth Bennet into a caricature of her younger sister Lydia, willing to throw off propriety for the pleasures of passion.
I am reminded of one on my favorite quotes by Elizabeth Bennet from the original novel. “One may be continually abusive without saying anything just; but one cannot be always laughing at a man without now and then stumbling on something witty.” Ms. Reynolds is a talented writer who shows flashes of wit and charm in her style. She has creatively blended a classic love story with a saucy romance novel, and if knowing that Darcy and Elizabeth are quite passionate about their love for one another before the marriage does not set off any decorum alarms, then this one deserves a slot in the queue on your bedside table. If you wonder why the “what if” questions needed to be asked in the first place, then try stumbling upon something else more witty.
Laurel Ann, Austenprose
In this retelling of Jane Austen’s novel Pride and Prejudice, author Abigail Reynolds re-imagines the famous plot and asks these burning questions. What if after Elizabeth Bennet’s refusal of Mr. Darcy’s first proposal at Hunsford, he does not disappear from her life, but arrives at her home at Longbourn determined to change her mind? What if Elizabeth seduced by his ardent attentions sets aside all propriety giving way to her base impulses? What if their mutual passion can not be abated, anticipating their wedding night? Ms. Reynolds then proceeds to creatively answer each of these questions with her spin on the retelling of Pride and Prejudice that might require some readers to suspend their disbelief and burning objections of altering one of the most cherished works in English literature, and just let go and let it happen.
The story opens with the arrival of Colonel Fitzwilliam at the Darcy townhouse in London. It is the summer of 1803 and two months have passed since he and his cousin Fitzwilliam Darcy had visited their aunt Lady Catherine de Bourgh at Rosings in Kent. He is immediately informed by concerned servants and Georgina Darcy that Mr. Darcy is not quite himself, sullen and short tempered to the point of alarm. Darcy shortly reveals to him the cause of his misery; - the rejection of his marriage proposal by the woman that he loves, Elizabeth Bennet, and the reasons why she so flatly refused him. Colonel Fitzwilliam is not surprised by his attraction to the lovely Miss Bennet, only that she would refuse such an advantageous offer and Darcy’s reasons for separating his friend Charles Bingley from Elizabeth’s sister Jane. Inspired by Colonel Fitzwilliam’s advice he convinces Charles Bingley to return to his estate at Netherfield Park to renew his attentions to Jane Bennet with the ulterior motive of seeing Elizabeth and winning her heart and hand.
Readers of Pride and Prejudice will remember that after Elizabeth refuses Mr. Darcy’s first proposal that she returns home to her family at Longbourn and Mr. Darcy disappears from her life only to be re-introduced by a chance meeting at his estate of Pemberley when she is touring Derbyshire on holiday with her aunt and uncle Gardiner. In this scenario, instead of leaving their meeting to chance, Mr. Darcy has become the aggressor, taking the initiative to reconnect with Elizabeth and pursue her affections by ingratiating himself to her family, her friends and herself, first by gentlemanly means with little results, then by the Wickham school of charm and seduction which eventually breaks Elizabeth’s resolve, giving way to her passionate desires.
Impulse & Initiative offers Pride and Prejudice fans the opportunity to explore yet another avenue of a story that we all just can not seem to get enough of as evidenced by the many prequels, sequels, retellings and pastiches available. It is creative and clever in theory, but do the ‘what if’ questions really need to be asked and answered? Possibly, but at times while reading Impulse & Initiative I felt like I was privy to a creative writing assignment where students were asked to take a story from classic literature and believably alter the plot and characters to the opposite intention of the original author. In this case, the results can at times be both believable and baffling, but unfortunately not at the same time leaving the reader in a bit of a quandary.
Abigail Reynolds has taken a huge risk in her choice of changing a classic story that is quite delightful to begin with, and whose hero and heroine Elizabeth Bennet and Mr. Darcy may be the most iconic romantic couple in popular culture short of Shakespeare’s Romeo and Juliet. She might have succeeded if she had allowed the characters integrity to continue from Austen’s original concept. Instead we are asked to suspend our disbelief beyond equal measure and accept well known characters acting in a manner that does not constitute their happiness or ours. Reynold’s Mr. Darcy has changed from the honorable Regency gentleman that many expect into George Wickham, a plotting seducer and the type of man that Austen’s Darcy despises, and Elizabeth Bennet into a caricature of her younger sister Lydia, willing to throw off propriety for the pleasures of passion.
I am reminded of one on my favorite quotes by Elizabeth Bennet from the original novel. “One may be continually abusive without saying anything just; but one cannot be always laughing at a man without now and then stumbling on something witty.” Ms. Reynolds is a talented writer who shows flashes of wit and charm in her style. She has creatively blended a classic love story with a saucy romance novel, and if knowing that Darcy and Elizabeth are quite passionate about their love for one another before the marriage does not set off any decorum alarms, then this one deserves a slot in the queue on your bedside table. If you wonder why the “what if” questions needed to be asked in the first place, then try stumbling upon something else more witty.
Laurel Ann, Austenprose
February 26, 2016
One thing I'll say for Abigail Reynolds is that she excels at producing strong emotional reactions. Even when I was unsure how to feel about this story, the quality of the prose and how it made me feel was never in question.
I was hesitant to even attempt this story, because I knew that there was premarital sex. I'm not opposed to that in general, nor am I offended by sex in JAFF stories, but I do have a difficult time seeing Elizabeth and Darcy acting in that manner. There's a lot at stake for them, and their characters as established by the source material don't really allow for that sort of behavior. In this story, Elizabeth and Darcy are very liberal with their physical affection even before they finally do the deed. I did appreciate that there was significant buildup to that moment, and it did feel like a natural progression. However, I basically had to force myself to consider their physicality a specific point of the variation - i.e., that it was intentionally not supposed to be the Elizabeth and Darcy that I know. Once I did that, I was able to enjoy the story for what it was rather than what my preconceived notions expected it to be.
This is a very sexy story. I listened to the audio book, and that tends to make any emotional highs and lows that much more extreme, and this was no exception. I think it's partially because it keeps me from reading through it as fast and partially because a good narrator is worth her weight in gold. I do have to admit that while the sensuality of the private moments was appealing, there were times when I wanted it to ease up so Elizabeth and Darcy could just TALK. Their misunderstandings and disagreements didn't drag on forever, as is sometimes a problem in really angsty books, but I would have liked for them to have at least a couple of conversations where they kept their hands (and other parts) to themselves but weren't arguing.
There were times during their courtship that Elizabeth grated on my nerves and I felt really bad for Darcy. I know she was supposed to be conflicted about her feelings for him but she held the real power in the relationship--I honestly think one word from her could have stopped his attentions at any time--and poor Darcy just got strung along. I spent a good part of the first half wishing that I wasn't losing respect for her. It did get better, though. By the time they ended up at Pemberley, I no longer had issues with the story and quite happily finished listening.
The plot of this story was nothing revolutionary, but it did serve as a suitable backdrop for the real tale, which was the emotional journey they faced. I can't say this is my favorite P&P variation, nor even my favorite Abigail Reynolds, but it was enjoyable even with its faults (and my dislike of the circumstances), and I will probably read it again sometime.
I was hesitant to even attempt this story, because I knew that there was premarital sex. I'm not opposed to that in general, nor am I offended by sex in JAFF stories, but I do have a difficult time seeing Elizabeth and Darcy acting in that manner. There's a lot at stake for them, and their characters as established by the source material don't really allow for that sort of behavior. In this story, Elizabeth and Darcy are very liberal with their physical affection even before they finally do the deed. I did appreciate that there was significant buildup to that moment, and it did feel like a natural progression. However, I basically had to force myself to consider their physicality a specific point of the variation - i.e., that it was intentionally not supposed to be the Elizabeth and Darcy that I know. Once I did that, I was able to enjoy the story for what it was rather than what my preconceived notions expected it to be.
This is a very sexy story. I listened to the audio book, and that tends to make any emotional highs and lows that much more extreme, and this was no exception. I think it's partially because it keeps me from reading through it as fast and partially because a good narrator is worth her weight in gold. I do have to admit that while the sensuality of the private moments was appealing, there were times when I wanted it to ease up so Elizabeth and Darcy could just TALK. Their misunderstandings and disagreements didn't drag on forever, as is sometimes a problem in really angsty books, but I would have liked for them to have at least a couple of conversations where they kept their hands (and other parts) to themselves but weren't arguing.
There were times during their courtship that Elizabeth grated on my nerves and I felt really bad for Darcy. I know she was supposed to be conflicted about her feelings for him but she held the real power in the relationship--I honestly think one word from her could have stopped his attentions at any time--and poor Darcy just got strung along. I spent a good part of the first half wishing that I wasn't losing respect for her. It did get better, though. By the time they ended up at Pemberley, I no longer had issues with the story and quite happily finished listening.
The plot of this story was nothing revolutionary, but it did serve as a suitable backdrop for the real tale, which was the emotional journey they faced. I can't say this is my favorite P&P variation, nor even my favorite Abigail Reynolds, but it was enjoyable even with its faults (and my dislike of the circumstances), and I will probably read it again sometime.
August 1, 2010
To Conquer Mr. Darcy, originally published as Impulse and Initiative in 2008, is another brilliant and impassioned novel in Abigail Reynold's stellar Pemberley Variations series. The Pemberley Variations series is a collection of Pride and Prejudice re-tellings that asks the question “what if?” In these variations we see how one small change in the plot can alter the course of Pride and Prejudice.
To Conquer Mr. Darcy opens with Colonel Fitzwilliam visiting his cousin, Mr. Darcy, who has been in a withdrawn and in a black mood ever since he left Rosings...
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To Conquer Mr. Darcy opens with Colonel Fitzwilliam visiting his cousin, Mr. Darcy, who has been in a withdrawn and in a black mood ever since he left Rosings...
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November 4, 2017Check out my review on Diary of an Eccentric
April 5, 2025
I stopped reading when unmarried Elisabeth kissed Darcy because of his unhappy look and she still didn’t have any intentions of marrying him….
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 29, 2018
I've said a number of times that I love Abigail Reynolds stories, but I have a confession to make: it wasn't always so. Now, hear me out - I spent half a dozen+ years obsessively reading and rereading Austen's books before I knew there was such a thing as an adaptation or retelling. I stumbled upon them completely by accident when I was looking for more authors similar to Austen via a book recommender. To learn that people had actually taken Austen's worlds and characters and written new stories... well, needless to say, I was equal parts excited and dubious (and a little unsure of whether that was even legal? Haha). Of course, like any desperate Austenite, I checked out a stack of about 20 of these books from my local library, and decided I was going to have a "Summer of Jane"... This was 2008, pre-blog, and I needed a project. So I sat outside every day in the glorious weather and just read and read and read...and the more I read, the more disheartened I became. This wasn't my Austen. This wasn't my Darcy, my Lizzie. It wasn't the world and the manners I'd come to know... What was this? Every book I read made me more convinced that Austenesque fanfiction wasn't for me, and if I hated one, I hated them all. (It was too fresh, you see. I couldn't allow for such mucking about in my beloved stories.) One good traditional retelling and one good playful modern story would change that, and teach me to let go and have some fun with it (and, um... you've seen the result of that), but before those 2 stories convinced me to give it a chance, I couldn't seem to like the adaptations I'd read. And unfortunately, Impulse & Initiative was one of them.
Flash forward to 5 years later, when I have decidedly embraced the whooooooole genre - and still devote my summers to it - and I found myself kinda in love with these stories, these "Pemberely Variations," that Abigail Reynolds writes. And I was on the hunt for more, so while browsing on Better World Books, I came across one with a familiar title: Impulse & Initiative. I'd blocked out most of what I read That Summer, but Goodreads informed me that I'd read this one (or thought I had), and hadn't been too impressed. Figuring that it'd come at the height of my denial phase, when I wasn't willing to accept any sexytimes in my P&P, I thought I'd better buy it and give it another chance. And I'm certainly glad I did. (I probably need to track down all of the books I read that summer and give them another, less prejudiced* chance.)
Impulse & Initiative, which has since been republished as To Conquer Mr Darcy - and I have no idea if the story was changed at all for the repackaging - is a story that takes a more controversial (to my Regency sensibilities) variation, in that Darcy and Lizzie can't keep their flipping hands off each other before they're married. It's smexy. And though I like a fair dose of smexy on occasion now, it was too akin to a bodice-ripper then, and I was a book snob. I'll admit it. It probably is too much sexytimes for some readers, especially those who still hold Darcy and Lizzie - and the pace of Regency courtship - sacred, so reader, know thyself, and know that going in. But though it does take away some of the sweetness of the romance, and though it does replace it with a liberal smattering of lusty kisses and, you know, bodice ripping, it's really neat to see Reynolds attack the same story from yet another angle.
This time around, I appreciated the idea of Darcy not taking no for an answer - not in an aggressive, pushy Lord of the Manor way, but in an "I'm not going to let myself eff this up" way. I liked seeing him pursue Lizzie and actively try to win her over, and come out of his shell a bit. It's an interesting - and not entirely unbelievable - way to approach the story, and it's nice because it's active; we don't have to be told that Darcy goes away and changes offstage, we get to see the efforts and the fruits of those efforts, right there as they happen. It's fun to see Lizzie, too, won over despite herself. It's nice to see them both come a little undone, and frankly, there are times when it's hot as hell.
The key to enjoyment of Reynolds' Variations - the key to any retelling, really - is to allow yourself to go with it. I love exploring the "what-ifs" in any story, all the branching paths and possibilities and might-have-beens. And though sometimes those might-have-beens are probably best left as should-nots, in Reynolds' hands, there's always enough understanding of the characters and love of their stories and who they are, combined with a willingness to push that a bit and test those boundaries, that makes for really interesting, fresh, dependably enjoyable variations. And if you find things too far-fetched on occasion, too sexy or too straying-from-"reality," the fact is, Reynolds' writing is compulsively readable. She moves the reader along at a break-neck pace, making it near impossible not to devour her books in one sitting. And even if she changes things, and even if you can't be quite happy with every change that's made, she creates worlds and characters that, if you're anything like me, you can't help but love and find yourself craving rereads of.
So, all I can say is: Misty-of-5-years-ago, and Janeites out there who feel as she felt - lighten up. Let go, explore the possibilities, and if you can't bear to see your Darcy and your Lizzie do things you don't think they'd do, then pretend they're someone else. Because you're missing out on some good stories and some scenes that would set your Regency heart a-flutter. You're invited to the party, so come. You're missing all the fun.
*Told you I was a Lizzie... ;)
Flash forward to 5 years later, when I have decidedly embraced the whooooooole genre - and still devote my summers to it - and I found myself kinda in love with these stories, these "Pemberely Variations," that Abigail Reynolds writes. And I was on the hunt for more, so while browsing on Better World Books, I came across one with a familiar title: Impulse & Initiative. I'd blocked out most of what I read That Summer, but Goodreads informed me that I'd read this one (or thought I had), and hadn't been too impressed. Figuring that it'd come at the height of my denial phase, when I wasn't willing to accept any sexytimes in my P&P, I thought I'd better buy it and give it another chance. And I'm certainly glad I did. (I probably need to track down all of the books I read that summer and give them another, less prejudiced* chance.)
Impulse & Initiative, which has since been republished as To Conquer Mr Darcy - and I have no idea if the story was changed at all for the repackaging - is a story that takes a more controversial (to my Regency sensibilities) variation, in that Darcy and Lizzie can't keep their flipping hands off each other before they're married. It's smexy. And though I like a fair dose of smexy on occasion now, it was too akin to a bodice-ripper then, and I was a book snob. I'll admit it. It probably is too much sexytimes for some readers, especially those who still hold Darcy and Lizzie - and the pace of Regency courtship - sacred, so reader, know thyself, and know that going in. But though it does take away some of the sweetness of the romance, and though it does replace it with a liberal smattering of lusty kisses and, you know, bodice ripping, it's really neat to see Reynolds attack the same story from yet another angle.
This time around, I appreciated the idea of Darcy not taking no for an answer - not in an aggressive, pushy Lord of the Manor way, but in an "I'm not going to let myself eff this up" way. I liked seeing him pursue Lizzie and actively try to win her over, and come out of his shell a bit. It's an interesting - and not entirely unbelievable - way to approach the story, and it's nice because it's active; we don't have to be told that Darcy goes away and changes offstage, we get to see the efforts and the fruits of those efforts, right there as they happen. It's fun to see Lizzie, too, won over despite herself. It's nice to see them both come a little undone, and frankly, there are times when it's hot as hell.
The key to enjoyment of Reynolds' Variations - the key to any retelling, really - is to allow yourself to go with it. I love exploring the "what-ifs" in any story, all the branching paths and possibilities and might-have-beens. And though sometimes those might-have-beens are probably best left as should-nots, in Reynolds' hands, there's always enough understanding of the characters and love of their stories and who they are, combined with a willingness to push that a bit and test those boundaries, that makes for really interesting, fresh, dependably enjoyable variations. And if you find things too far-fetched on occasion, too sexy or too straying-from-"reality," the fact is, Reynolds' writing is compulsively readable. She moves the reader along at a break-neck pace, making it near impossible not to devour her books in one sitting. And even if she changes things, and even if you can't be quite happy with every change that's made, she creates worlds and characters that, if you're anything like me, you can't help but love and find yourself craving rereads of.
So, all I can say is: Misty-of-5-years-ago, and Janeites out there who feel as she felt - lighten up. Let go, explore the possibilities, and if you can't bear to see your Darcy and your Lizzie do things you don't think they'd do, then pretend they're someone else. Because you're missing out on some good stories and some scenes that would set your Regency heart a-flutter. You're invited to the party, so come. You're missing all the fun.
*Told you I was a Lizzie... ;)
August 21, 2021
I am intensely disappointed.
This is the third Abigail Reynolds book I’ve read in a matter of weeks, and despite being unimpressed by the first two, I read such a glowing review about her writing having improved in the 2 years between the last one and this, that I decided to give her one last chance.
Full disclosure, I couldn’t even finish this one. I’m barely more than 30% through and I’m already beyond my limit of eye rolling, face palming, and “what the hell?!”s.
It started off cringey, with servants stepping way out of line, the Colonel using a ridiculous amount of “sweetheart”s to placate Georgiana, and her pouting like a baby as she whinged about being treated like a baby.
But then it took a surprising and refreshing turn, and I was prepared to finally, FINALLY applaud Ms. Reynolds for a job well done. Once Mr Darcy pursued Elizabeth back to Longbourn with Mr Bingley in tow to court Jane anew, there was a lovely portion of book in which the conversations were delightfully stilted in realistic tension, and the internal struggles of both Lizzy and Darcy were done tastefully.
Apparently, having the characters continue at such a respectful and period-accurate pace was not to be. It began with stolen (ungloved) hand-holds initiated by Mr Darcy during rides in his curricle, which built up into secret passionate liaisons in the woods. All this time, Elizabeth allows the excess of physical contact, (he literally makes out with her twice in one outing) but loses her mind with his “forwardness” when he lets a verbal “my love,” slip from his lips and nearly proposes again. So sticking his tongue down your throat is fine, but a renewed proposal is rushing you?! Bingley rightfully chastises Darcy for acting dishonourably, and ends up being the one to apologise since Darcy *plans* to *eventually* propose. After very gentlemanly prompting from Mr Darcy, Georgiana sweetly manages to ask the Gardiners and Elizabeth if they’ll stay at Pemberley during their tour, and Elizabeth internally RAGES at Darcy for daring to manipulate things to “always be his way.” That’s where I had to stop.
A little liberty here and there with the time period is one thing, but I am so tired of these characters acting like modern teenagers who have no concept of reputation or moral dignity, and the buddy-buddy type servants who have more open communication with guests in the house than the main characters do in private. Non.sense.
This is the third Abigail Reynolds book I’ve read in a matter of weeks, and despite being unimpressed by the first two, I read such a glowing review about her writing having improved in the 2 years between the last one and this, that I decided to give her one last chance.
Full disclosure, I couldn’t even finish this one. I’m barely more than 30% through and I’m already beyond my limit of eye rolling, face palming, and “what the hell?!”s.
It started off cringey, with servants stepping way out of line, the Colonel using a ridiculous amount of “sweetheart”s to placate Georgiana, and her pouting like a baby as she whinged about being treated like a baby.
But then it took a surprising and refreshing turn, and I was prepared to finally, FINALLY applaud Ms. Reynolds for a job well done. Once Mr Darcy pursued Elizabeth back to Longbourn with Mr Bingley in tow to court Jane anew, there was a lovely portion of book in which the conversations were delightfully stilted in realistic tension, and the internal struggles of both Lizzy and Darcy were done tastefully.
Apparently, having the characters continue at such a respectful and period-accurate pace was not to be. It began with stolen (ungloved) hand-holds initiated by Mr Darcy during rides in his curricle, which built up into secret passionate liaisons in the woods. All this time, Elizabeth allows the excess of physical contact, (he literally makes out with her twice in one outing) but loses her mind with his “forwardness” when he lets a verbal “my love,” slip from his lips and nearly proposes again. So sticking his tongue down your throat is fine, but a renewed proposal is rushing you?! Bingley rightfully chastises Darcy for acting dishonourably, and ends up being the one to apologise since Darcy *plans* to *eventually* propose. After very gentlemanly prompting from Mr Darcy, Georgiana sweetly manages to ask the Gardiners and Elizabeth if they’ll stay at Pemberley during their tour, and Elizabeth internally RAGES at Darcy for daring to manipulate things to “always be his way.” That’s where I had to stop.
A little liberty here and there with the time period is one thing, but I am so tired of these characters acting like modern teenagers who have no concept of reputation or moral dignity, and the buddy-buddy type servants who have more open communication with guests in the house than the main characters do in private. Non.sense.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
May 12, 2013
So this is a Pride and Prejudice variation that I read under the title 'To Conquer Mr Darcy' but it has also been published as 'Impulse and Initiative'. Having read the book I think the I&I title is better, Mr Darcy is Conquered before the book even begins! It's more like To Capture Miss Bennet! The story picks up P&P after the rejected proposal at Hunsford. Darcy has gone back to London and is in the depths of despair; he believes that he has no hope of ever winning Lizzy over and doesn't expect to ever see her again. Colonel Fitzwilliam gives him a good talking to for giving up so easily and berates him for not telling Bingley the truth about Jane's feelings for him. Darcy takes the Colonel's advice, and he and Bingley set off for Hertfordshire.
At this point Lizzy knows how she's misjudged Darcy so she no longer actively dislikes him but she'd be quite happy never to see him again. She has to be polite to him to help further the match between Jane and Bingley though and he makes it clear that he'd like to start again with the final aim of winning Lizzy's hand in marriage. She is somewhat resentful of this disregarding of her feelings but she goes along with getting to know him better, finding to her confusion that her feelings begin to change towards him even against her will. Mr Darcy is very slightly manipulative in this version, realising that she responds to him physically, he takes more and more liberties with her which she responds to even though he's moving things along faster than she'd like. However, things do end happily.
At this point I must put in a warning, that this book has pre-marital sex and sex scenes (hot ones!) so if either of these is a big no-no for you then you should avoid. However, if you look on Ms Reynolds' website you will find reference to a story called 'Rule of Reason' which is similar to this in many ways except I think there aren't either anticipation of vows or sex scenes, but it's been a while since I've read it so not 100% sure.
At this point Lizzy knows how she's misjudged Darcy so she no longer actively dislikes him but she'd be quite happy never to see him again. She has to be polite to him to help further the match between Jane and Bingley though and he makes it clear that he'd like to start again with the final aim of winning Lizzy's hand in marriage. She is somewhat resentful of this disregarding of her feelings but she goes along with getting to know him better, finding to her confusion that her feelings begin to change towards him even against her will. Mr Darcy is very slightly manipulative in this version, realising that she responds to him physically, he takes more and more liberties with her which she responds to even though he's moving things along faster than she'd like. However, things do end happily.
At this point I must put in a warning, that this book has pre-marital sex and sex scenes (hot ones!) so if either of these is a big no-no for you then you should avoid. However, if you look on Ms Reynolds' website you will find reference to a story called 'Rule of Reason' which is similar to this in many ways except I think there aren't either anticipation of vows or sex scenes, but it's been a while since I've read it so not 100% sure.
March 4, 2014
In Impulse & Initiative, Darcy refuses to give up trying to win Elizabeth's love; after receiving the harsh dismissal of his proposal at Hunsford, he soon follows her back to Hertfordshire... He woos her in the most romantic manner: the looks he gives her, she can no longer misinterpret; the whispers of sweet confessions; the secret hand holding... Many lines made my heart skip a beat. Or two! For example, my favorite all time "Pemberley Variations" Darcy line is in Chapter 4: "Regardless of whether you choose to come to Pemberley or not, Pemberley already belongs to you, and has for many months now... Elizabeth Darcy has been gracing the halls and rooms of Pemberley since my first stay at Netherfield. While I have been passionately admiring Miss Elizabeth Bennett, every night in my dreams she has been walking by my side at Pemberley..." Big sigh... Abigail Reynolds builds incredible, yet delightful tension between the characters and masterfully tells her story of how Darcy captures Elizabeth's heart, body and soul. Like Elizabeth Berdoll's sequel "Mr. Darcy Takes A Wife", I anticipate many Jane Austen purist to decry this book as blasphemy on the original Pride&Prejudice. Yet, this reader however, loved, loved, loved it -- and totally enjoyed reading this "what if?" Not a careless word written; well worth your time and money. Mature eyes only.
October 3, 2015
This is such a sweet story that follows the efforts and lengths on Darcy's part to endear himself to a most reluctant and hesitant Elizabeth....We share their chemistry from their shared glances to lingering touches, from their wedded bliss to the birth of their first child.
Loved the relationships in this story-how human each character was-flaws and all.
I'd recommend this short,fast paced read to lovers of JAFF.
Loved the relationships in this story-how human each character was-flaws and all.
I'd recommend this short,fast paced read to lovers of JAFF.
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July 19, 2023Just marked this read because I keep clicking on this and then remembering it's the same book that I have read with another title. I hate it when authors do that... Just pick a title that you can live with the first time. Or suffer.
Great book though.
Great book though.
July 23, 2008
My goodness, this is a lusty variant. Blink blink.
July 14, 2020
Spoiler Alert: Mr. Darcy did not get conquered and I am upset with this lie.
Two stars because this author is braver and more confident than any human walking this earth.
Two stars because this author is braver and more confident than any human walking this earth.
September 5, 2022
This is definitely my favorite book from Abigail!
Now I understand why she has said this was one of her favorites. I loved the romantic tension between Elizabeth and Darcy.
This is one of the few P&P where I really see a whole progress through all the novel, the character development, the phrases from the original novel and the sexy scenes from the author.
I do hope that Sourcebooks will return the rights of this book (and her other books) to the author.
Now I understand why she has said this was one of her favorites. I loved the romantic tension between Elizabeth and Darcy.
This is one of the few P&P where I really see a whole progress through all the novel, the character development, the phrases from the original novel and the sexy scenes from the author.
I do hope that Sourcebooks will return the rights of this book (and her other books) to the author.
November 1, 2019
This is one of the best variations of Pride and Prejudice I’ve read! I really enjoyed reading it and recommend it to any Jane Austen fan!
July 13, 2020
First published under the title Impulse and Initiative and read in 2011, reread 2020.
July 8, 2017
This author can write a good story and this would have been so much better without all the sex scenes. It is out of character for Elizabeth and Darcy and even though I love more books on P&P, I am done with this author.
May 29, 2020
To Conquer Mr. Darcy is another of Abigail Reynolds’ famous Pride and Prejudice variations books. Reynolds truly is THE master of the Austen variation novel. In this particular novel she poses the following questions: What if Mr. Darcy did not give up after Elizabeth rejected him? What if he pursued her and she fell in love with him? What if their love and passion would not allow them to wait until their wedding night?
Colonel Fitzwilliam arrives at Darcy’s London townhouse a few short weeks following the disastrous “Rosings proposal.” Fitzwilliam has no idea what’s been bothering Darcy, but after getting him drunk enough to admit he’s in love with Elizabeth Bennet, he convinces Darcy not to give up. Colonel Fitzwilliam convinces him to insert himself back into her life and make her see the man he really is. Accompanied by Georgiana, Darcy returns back to Netherfield and back into Elizabeth’s life. Once back in Elizabeth’s presence he convinces her to come back to Netherfield to be introduced to his sister. She readily agrees and after meeting Georgiana quickly establishes a friendship with promises for more afternoon visits together. Seeing Elizabeth ready to leave, Darcy asks if he can drive her home. Elizabeth’s visits to Georgiana continue thrusting her into Darcy’s company often. She begins seeing a new side of Darcy and quickly realizes that he is not going to give up on his dreams of having her as his wife. As they spend more time together Darcy begins taking more liberties with her. He tells her how he feels about her in a subdued manner, holds her hand, takes private walks with her, and at one point the two make-out. Elizabeth begins having feelings for Darcy on a passionate level but cannot forget both the things he said to her during his proposal and what he did to Jane and Bingley. She struggles with her feelings knowing that Darcy is indeed a good man. Will Elizabeth ever be able to reconcile her feelings and return the love that Darcy feels for her? Where will their “passion” take them?
I had read this book for the first time last year and wasn’t the biggest fan of it. As a huge fan of Abigail Reynolds I decided to give it a second chance; I’m really glad I did. Upon my first reading of the book I was really disappointed in how Darcy’s character was changed. I thought that he would NEVER sleep with Elizabeth prior to their wedding or be as forward as he was. On the other hand I also didn’t think that Elizabeth would have slept with him prior to their wedding knowing how badly she reacted to Lydia’s situation with Wickham. With my second reading I could see the gradual changes that each of the characters made, making the end result not wholly unexpected. I thought it was hysterical that Lizzie and Darcy told Bingley and Jane that they slept together prior to their wedding. To see the change that the news brought to Bingley and Jane’s relationship was really humorous.
The most enjoyable part of the entire book was reading about the “new Darcy”. Darcy became a man who was bold and knew he had to risk everything if he wanted Elizabeth as his wife. He held some of his feelings and thoughts back at first but realized there was no point. If Elizabeth would have him he wanted her to know all of him. I was also glad that Georgiana got bought out of the woodwork. She plays a key role in bringing Elizabeth and Darcy together in the beginning of the book, as she is basically their “chaperone” on outings. It was touching to see how much she came to care for Elizabeth once she knew she was the one Darcy loved.
This book is definitely for more mature readers. There are many sexual scenes not meant for young eyes. For those who wished they could read more about the sexual romps of Elizabeth and Darcy, then this is a must-read for you.
Kimberly (Reflections of a Book Addict)
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Colonel Fitzwilliam arrives at Darcy’s London townhouse a few short weeks following the disastrous “Rosings proposal.” Fitzwilliam has no idea what’s been bothering Darcy, but after getting him drunk enough to admit he’s in love with Elizabeth Bennet, he convinces Darcy not to give up. Colonel Fitzwilliam convinces him to insert himself back into her life and make her see the man he really is. Accompanied by Georgiana, Darcy returns back to Netherfield and back into Elizabeth’s life. Once back in Elizabeth’s presence he convinces her to come back to Netherfield to be introduced to his sister. She readily agrees and after meeting Georgiana quickly establishes a friendship with promises for more afternoon visits together. Seeing Elizabeth ready to leave, Darcy asks if he can drive her home. Elizabeth’s visits to Georgiana continue thrusting her into Darcy’s company often. She begins seeing a new side of Darcy and quickly realizes that he is not going to give up on his dreams of having her as his wife. As they spend more time together Darcy begins taking more liberties with her. He tells her how he feels about her in a subdued manner, holds her hand, takes private walks with her, and at one point the two make-out. Elizabeth begins having feelings for Darcy on a passionate level but cannot forget both the things he said to her during his proposal and what he did to Jane and Bingley. She struggles with her feelings knowing that Darcy is indeed a good man. Will Elizabeth ever be able to reconcile her feelings and return the love that Darcy feels for her? Where will their “passion” take them?
I had read this book for the first time last year and wasn’t the biggest fan of it. As a huge fan of Abigail Reynolds I decided to give it a second chance; I’m really glad I did. Upon my first reading of the book I was really disappointed in how Darcy’s character was changed. I thought that he would NEVER sleep with Elizabeth prior to their wedding or be as forward as he was. On the other hand I also didn’t think that Elizabeth would have slept with him prior to their wedding knowing how badly she reacted to Lydia’s situation with Wickham. With my second reading I could see the gradual changes that each of the characters made, making the end result not wholly unexpected. I thought it was hysterical that Lizzie and Darcy told Bingley and Jane that they slept together prior to their wedding. To see the change that the news brought to Bingley and Jane’s relationship was really humorous.
The most enjoyable part of the entire book was reading about the “new Darcy”. Darcy became a man who was bold and knew he had to risk everything if he wanted Elizabeth as his wife. He held some of his feelings and thoughts back at first but realized there was no point. If Elizabeth would have him he wanted her to know all of him. I was also glad that Georgiana got bought out of the woodwork. She plays a key role in bringing Elizabeth and Darcy together in the beginning of the book, as she is basically their “chaperone” on outings. It was touching to see how much she came to care for Elizabeth once she knew she was the one Darcy loved.
This book is definitely for more mature readers. There are many sexual scenes not meant for young eyes. For those who wished they could read more about the sexual romps of Elizabeth and Darcy, then this is a must-read for you.
Kimberly (Reflections of a Book Addict)
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May 3, 2011
I started this book with some trepidation, hesitant to go into a book that interferes with Jane Austen's established canon. A sequel/companion is one thing, but taking the events and going in a completely different direction? Yeah, I was wary of such a thing. Nonetheless, I went ahead with it, and was left with mixed feelings.
On the one hand, I enjoyed the shift in canon events, having Elizabeth accompany Darcy and Mr. Gardiner to London to deal with Wickham and Lydia. Though Elizabeth was unable to do anything to alter Lydia's chosen course, I greatly enjoyed her confrontation with Wickham, and how she used her anger at Lydia to play the mother of all bluffs to get Wickham to cooperate with Colonel Fitzwilliam. Saying that she'd rather just hand a few thousand pounds over to Mary and Kitty for their dowries to sweeten the pot in regards to their marriage prospects than try to save Lydia was brilliant. Especially since even Elizabeth herself wasn't entirely sure if it was bluff or not.
I also appreciated that Elizabeth recognized that her actions with Darcy were not entirely different than what Lydia had done with Wickham. It may upset people, but it's true: Elizabeth slept with a man whom she was not married to. They may have been formally engaged, but even that doesn't entirely wipe away the fact that intercourse before marriage in this time period was a huge, huge no-no.
That very fact, and the fact that such a move seems to me to be entirely against Elizabeth's character, is probably my biggest qualm about the story. Yes, everyone imagines Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet to be passionate people, Jane Austen established as much in the original story. Still, that Darcy would completely throw aside propriety and behave in a manner more akin to Wickham's behavior doesn't sit right with me at all. Because even though he is wildly in love with Elizabeth, he still holds tight to upright behavior. That he'd set out to charm Elizabeth doesn't bother me all that much. I see that as part of his attempt to not offend everyone he meets with sullen, prideful silences. My problem is that he allowed his desires to overtake his true good sense and let it go as far as taking Elizabeth to bed before their wedding. It's like going one step further than what Wickham managed with Georgiana, and almost the same in what Wickham did with Lydia. The only difference is that Darcy is in love with Elizabeth, but that doesn't make it right.
Then, really, the only consequence that Darcy and Elizabeth suffer for their behavior is severe disapproval from Mr. Bennet. Even Mr. Gardiner, a man of morals and good sense, only says a few pat things about Darcy's behavior and then moves on. Practical, I suppose, but still...
A decent read, and something that certainly sparks a heated debate for any P&P fan who reads it.
On the one hand, I enjoyed the shift in canon events, having Elizabeth accompany Darcy and Mr. Gardiner to London to deal with Wickham and Lydia. Though Elizabeth was unable to do anything to alter Lydia's chosen course, I greatly enjoyed her confrontation with Wickham, and how she used her anger at Lydia to play the mother of all bluffs to get Wickham to cooperate with Colonel Fitzwilliam. Saying that she'd rather just hand a few thousand pounds over to Mary and Kitty for their dowries to sweeten the pot in regards to their marriage prospects than try to save Lydia was brilliant. Especially since even Elizabeth herself wasn't entirely sure if it was bluff or not.
I also appreciated that Elizabeth recognized that her actions with Darcy were not entirely different than what Lydia had done with Wickham. It may upset people, but it's true: Elizabeth slept with a man whom she was not married to. They may have been formally engaged, but even that doesn't entirely wipe away the fact that intercourse before marriage in this time period was a huge, huge no-no.
That very fact, and the fact that such a move seems to me to be entirely against Elizabeth's character, is probably my biggest qualm about the story. Yes, everyone imagines Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet to be passionate people, Jane Austen established as much in the original story. Still, that Darcy would completely throw aside propriety and behave in a manner more akin to Wickham's behavior doesn't sit right with me at all. Because even though he is wildly in love with Elizabeth, he still holds tight to upright behavior. That he'd set out to charm Elizabeth doesn't bother me all that much. I see that as part of his attempt to not offend everyone he meets with sullen, prideful silences. My problem is that he allowed his desires to overtake his true good sense and let it go as far as taking Elizabeth to bed before their wedding. It's like going one step further than what Wickham managed with Georgiana, and almost the same in what Wickham did with Lydia. The only difference is that Darcy is in love with Elizabeth, but that doesn't make it right.
Then, really, the only consequence that Darcy and Elizabeth suffer for their behavior is severe disapproval from Mr. Bennet. Even Mr. Gardiner, a man of morals and good sense, only says a few pat things about Darcy's behavior and then moves on. Practical, I suppose, but still...
A decent read, and something that certainly sparks a heated debate for any P&P fan who reads it.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
October 14, 2010
RATING: 2.5 stars
Here's another book I really wanted to love (since Pride & Prejudice is one of my favorite books ever), but for some reason, I just... didn't.
"To Conquer Mr Darcy" is an alternate re-telling of Darcy's and Elizabeth's story. In this book, instead of strategically retreating after Elizabeth refuses him at Hunsford, Mr Darcy returns to Netherfield to try again to woo Miss Bennet. He does it by seducing her, basically (well, they also get to talk a lot, but seducing is a big part of it).
Strangely enough it wasn't that part I had problems with. I enjoyed the first few chapters, with Darcy wooing Lizzie, showing her he was different from what she thought. And showing her, through kisses that he loved her. I also liked Elizabeth's doubts and confusion at first... but then it sort of became monotonous, as if I was reading the same scene over and over again... they met, they kissed, she was astonished at how that made her feel and had doubts. This went on and on for too many pages. From almost the very beginning, we see Elizabeth's feelings change, but this doesn't mean (in the book) that the situation is resolved quickly. No, the author fills pages and pages of these encounters to the point where the reader (in this case, me) says "just get married already and stop meeting in forests and random walks and carriage rides!"
Then, after they admit their mutual feelings (and get engaged, then married), I must confess I felt a little spooked at the intensity of their "love". It was portrayed a bit more like an unhealthy obsession than love. And yes, I know this is common fare in historical romances of the bodice-ripper type (and it's what this is, believe me); the protagonists must be madly in love. But I don't think the author pulled it of, because... well, it didn't sound romantic and healthy it just seemed disturbing.
Another thing I had problems with was the writing style. The author did try to give it a "period feel", but again, she didn't pull it of. It didn't 'sound' like Austen at all, it just 'sounded' like a poor imitation. It made the book all the more boring, since I don't think Ms Reynolds was able to combine 19th century writing techniques and (supposedly) hot intimate scenes successfully.
I struggled to finish this. Five days for a 400-page mass market paperback is a lot of time for me. I just felt like the author dragged everything a little too much and the writing style didn't help.
Still, I have to give Ms Reynolds points for her creative concept.
Here's another book I really wanted to love (since Pride & Prejudice is one of my favorite books ever), but for some reason, I just... didn't.
"To Conquer Mr Darcy" is an alternate re-telling of Darcy's and Elizabeth's story. In this book, instead of strategically retreating after Elizabeth refuses him at Hunsford, Mr Darcy returns to Netherfield to try again to woo Miss Bennet. He does it by seducing her, basically (well, they also get to talk a lot, but seducing is a big part of it).
Strangely enough it wasn't that part I had problems with. I enjoyed the first few chapters, with Darcy wooing Lizzie, showing her he was different from what she thought. And showing her, through kisses that he loved her. I also liked Elizabeth's doubts and confusion at first... but then it sort of became monotonous, as if I was reading the same scene over and over again... they met, they kissed, she was astonished at how that made her feel and had doubts. This went on and on for too many pages. From almost the very beginning, we see Elizabeth's feelings change, but this doesn't mean (in the book) that the situation is resolved quickly. No, the author fills pages and pages of these encounters to the point where the reader (in this case, me) says "just get married already and stop meeting in forests and random walks and carriage rides!"
Then, after they admit their mutual feelings (and get engaged, then married), I must confess I felt a little spooked at the intensity of their "love". It was portrayed a bit more like an unhealthy obsession than love. And yes, I know this is common fare in historical romances of the bodice-ripper type (and it's what this is, believe me); the protagonists must be madly in love. But I don't think the author pulled it of, because... well, it didn't sound romantic and healthy it just seemed disturbing.
Another thing I had problems with was the writing style. The author did try to give it a "period feel", but again, she didn't pull it of. It didn't 'sound' like Austen at all, it just 'sounded' like a poor imitation. It made the book all the more boring, since I don't think Ms Reynolds was able to combine 19th century writing techniques and (supposedly) hot intimate scenes successfully.
I struggled to finish this. Five days for a 400-page mass market paperback is a lot of time for me. I just felt like the author dragged everything a little too much and the writing style didn't help.
Still, I have to give Ms Reynolds points for her creative concept.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
January 17, 2015
I kind of like the idea of a "what-if variation" on Pride and Prejudice. After all, I read that kind of fanfiction all the time. That being said, I've read much better fanfiction.Yes, the idea of Mr. Darcy pursuing Lizzie and convincing her to say yes after the failed proposal is interesting, but doesn't work at all for the PRide & Prejudice story line.
THis book is just all kinds of ridiculous. It is little better than Pride & Prejudice porn. Yes, I know women all over have this obsession with Mr. Darcy. It's like the author of this book capitalized on that obsession by making a so-called sexy Darcy who just thinks about ravishing Elizabeth all the time and there's lots of kissing and sex and bodice-ripping.
Well let me tell you ladies and gentlemen, that was no Mr. Darcy. He was so ungentlemanly it drove me crazy. He had no control over his thoughts or actions and actually, I felt he was kind of rapey at times. I mean, Lizzie never said no, but I was way uncomfortable with him kissing her the first time, especially when her thought was she was disappointed because she wanted her first kiss to be with her husband and they weren't even engaged and she didn't want to be married to him. And I suppose the author thought it was ok because everyone knows Darcy and LIzzie will end up together, but I am not ok with that.
And I was definitely not ok with the implicit undertones that Lizzie only married Darcy bc he compromised her sexually, despite the happily ever after. And then the idea that Darcy loses control of his libido and has sex with Lizzie before they are married "accidentally." Dude! Keep it in your pants. (Not really a spoiler since it's in the description.)That was the scene I had to put the book down. It just got too porny and ridiculous. And I flipped through the rest of the book and it was just gooey fluffy lemony fluff.
I guess this book would be good for half-hearted Austen fans who want to read a bodice ripper with slightly familiar characters. I mean a good idea in theory, but quite poor execution.
THis book is just all kinds of ridiculous. It is little better than Pride & Prejudice porn. Yes, I know women all over have this obsession with Mr. Darcy. It's like the author of this book capitalized on that obsession by making a so-called sexy Darcy who just thinks about ravishing Elizabeth all the time and there's lots of kissing and sex and bodice-ripping.
Well let me tell you ladies and gentlemen, that was no Mr. Darcy. He was so ungentlemanly it drove me crazy. He had no control over his thoughts or actions and actually, I felt he was kind of rapey at times. I mean, Lizzie never said no, but I was way uncomfortable with him kissing her the first time, especially when her thought was she was disappointed because she wanted her first kiss to be with her husband and they weren't even engaged and she didn't want to be married to him. And I suppose the author thought it was ok because everyone knows Darcy and LIzzie will end up together, but I am not ok with that.
And I was definitely not ok with the implicit undertones that Lizzie only married Darcy bc he compromised her sexually, despite the happily ever after. And then the idea that Darcy loses control of his libido and has sex with Lizzie before they are married "accidentally." Dude! Keep it in your pants. (Not really a spoiler since it's in the description.)That was the scene I had to put the book down. It just got too porny and ridiculous. And I flipped through the rest of the book and it was just gooey fluffy lemony fluff.
I guess this book would be good for half-hearted Austen fans who want to read a bodice ripper with slightly familiar characters. I mean a good idea in theory, but quite poor execution.
March 3, 2013
Ok, Ok. I enjoyed it. As with my first encounter with Abigail Reynolds, I had mixed emotions throughout. At first I was upset at the liberties she took with the characters, then reconciled with some well placed original lines from Pride and Prejudice, then shocked at actions Jane Austen would have never approved of, and finally placated by just being able to read more about Lizzie and Darcy together both physically and emotionally.
I think one of the things I enjoyed about this book is the way it answered some of the questions Pride and Prejudice left me with. We know Darcy and Lizzie should and do end up together, but how would the day to day workings of a relationship be carried out with two such strong characters having to work together? I think this book did do well in explaining the characters' thoughts and little compromises to make their relationship work.
With that being said, this book is not as reverent to the characters as Mr.Darcy's Obsession, and if you are unwilling to read about sexual encounters between Lizzie and Darcy, especially premarital ones, just don't attempt to read this book. If that is a line you do not want crossed, there are other books for you. While the building passion between the two characters is well expressed, it is definitely a far stretch from what Austen would have ever imagined for her characters- I think even if she were writing for a modern audience. You can choose to have fun with it or resent it, and that will probably make or break the book for you.
I think one of the things I enjoyed about this book is the way it answered some of the questions Pride and Prejudice left me with. We know Darcy and Lizzie should and do end up together, but how would the day to day workings of a relationship be carried out with two such strong characters having to work together? I think this book did do well in explaining the characters' thoughts and little compromises to make their relationship work.
With that being said, this book is not as reverent to the characters as Mr.Darcy's Obsession, and if you are unwilling to read about sexual encounters between Lizzie and Darcy, especially premarital ones, just don't attempt to read this book. If that is a line you do not want crossed, there are other books for you. While the building passion between the two characters is well expressed, it is definitely a far stretch from what Austen would have ever imagined for her characters- I think even if she were writing for a modern audience. You can choose to have fun with it or resent it, and that will probably make or break the book for you.
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