I really liked this book and I was ready to give it encomiums until I read, "Sometimes it's hard to think about Jesus when you're away from church. After all, you've never really met him in real life. You don't know what he sounded like. You don't even know what he really looked like."
There are just so many things wrong with this paragraph that it's hard to give this book to a child.
Also, the author does not capitalize when he refers to Jesus Christ in the pronoun form such as He/Him.