Tangled Up in Princes
For Carrie MacCallum, sister of the bride, the answer is finding herself pressed against an impossibly handsome man in a curtained alcove inside said castle. His slow burn smile is enough to have Carrie thinking of more than moonlit walks beneath a canopy of stars. Shes thinking about a fling. Or she would...more
The concept for the story is cute, but oh. My. God. Does this woman not have any clue about who the Prince of Wales is? You know, the heir to the throne of England???
Instead Jameson has portrayed the Prince of Wales as second in line after his brother. Jameson lost me right there. Yeah, yeah, Im a glutton for punishment, so I did read the whole thing.
What a waste of time. Carrie kept moaning on about should she-shouldnt she? The prince had his own issues. Then there was Carries stupid lame-ass ...more
I liked the banter and the humor, but the writing could have used another edit. A solid 2 stars to pass your time. Low angst, low drama, and safe.
Cute story. Quick read, before I knew it was more than halfway through the book.
Really like the characters, esp the royal siblings. Can't wait to read more about them.
In some ways, Carrie seemed a bit unreal/perfect. Rarely losing temper, getting mad or frustrated. She was also very quick to forgive or help.
A few things didn't add up to me in the fic, why Edward lead the press down the secret passages, revealing such passages and why he and Carrie jumped into bed when they knew the press ...more
This book is what I like to refer to as light and fluffy. It has your typical boy meets girl, there is something to tear them apart, then they lived happily ever after.
I did not give it a higher rating because it could have used a good proof reader. There are too many instances of misused words except for accept as an example. In one place the heroine is even called by a different name than her character name. These things are very distracting to me.
Other issues such as the two characters being in a hidden passage and suddenly they are on the bed. They have dinner on the roof of a castle with Edwardss staff serving but it isnt his castle so how did his staff get there?
I had planned to read this series but due to the issues Ive encountered in this book, I dont plan to finish.
I will note, though, that the formatting of the book was all messed up. The indents at the beginning of paragraphs weren't there for a good chunk of the book, there were missing quotation marks on dialogue, extra line breaks... Could have used a good round of copy editing and formatting before being put through the Amazon Kindle black box.
So many errors! The story had promise, but the errors just brought it down, down, down. Characters were engaging and held the attention, they would have been better with more development. A good proofreader goes a long way.
I think my main problem was that there was a lot of telling instead of showing. I just felt like Edward and Carrie weren't together enough for the romance to really be believable. However, I ended up liking them both a lot & loved the secondary characters even more. Even though I had issues with this book I enjoyed it & look forward to reading the rest ...more
Good book really enjoyed it you need to read it it's that good started out with Carrie sister Amanda marrying a friend of two Princes Carrie falls for Edward the one who trays to keep JAmie the heir to the throne. Out of trouble then he get in a situation that him and Carrie have to take the for both of their siblings she goes back to the states you will have to read the book to find out all th e good parts it worth it enjoy Margie
Very quick read, and worth reading if you enjoy royal romances. I'll be reading the rest of the series!
I call this light reading. It's great sometimes when you finish one book that's a little intense and you need something to wind down. It was funny, romance, and an all around good read. Would recommend! Yep, I'm looking forward to the next one!