The Virgin Auction

by Jessa Fox

She’s the last virgin on earth, at least that’s what it feels like to Kyle. Now she’s auctioning her virginity online in order to pay for medical school and give money to charity. She has no idea what she’s getting herself into, but she’s committed, and now there’s no turning back.

Caspian has been secretly obsessed with Kyle since the day they met years ago. He’s kept tabs on her for all of these years, and when he sees she’s auctioning her virginity, he knows there’s no way he’s going to let anyone else touch her. Ever.

The rules state that he gets one night with her, but rules are made to be broken.

Genres: Contemporary

52 pages, Unknown Binding

Published January 15, 2016

About the author

Hi, my name is Jessa Fox. I’m a professional by day and an erotica writer by night. There’s nothing I love more than writing all of the smutty stories that are in my head and bringing them to life. I specialize in writing down all the taboo, sexy scenarios that we all wish we could experience, at least once.

But maybe that’s just me.

I’m also a wife and mom, and dutiful member of the Parent’s Association. Shh, don’t tell.

Jessa Fox is my pseudonym, because no one knows about all of the kinky stories and characters I love to create. They would never imagine all of the dirty thoughts running through my mind.

I hope you enjoy my stories as much as I love writing them. If you’re looking for a quick smutty treat, you came to the right place.

Reviews

[Cara · Rating 4 out of 5]

When the girl of your junior high school dreams suddenly puts her virginity up on an online auction, how can you not bid on it, well that's what Caspian thinks anyway, especially as he is a billionaire and she was the last person that was truly nice to him.

When Kyle younger sister died of brain cancer at 8 years old, Kyle made the decision that she would do anything to stop any other family from suffering the pain that her family went through. So she decided to sell her virginity (after some prodding from a friend) and donate some of the proceeds to 2 cancer charities and to pay for the off the student loans.
Her family is not thrilled with her decision and her father has stopped talking to her all together, but Kyle is determined, if not a little nervous

But what will happen when Caspian and Kyle meet? Will she remember him and will they be able to go on with their lives separately after the weekend is all over.

This book is a pleasing erotic tale, very on heavy on the erotic and not as much on the story line, but it was a very pleasant read anyway. I will say that the book is a little hurried in its pace and very short. But everything is there, so you are not missing out on much.

Neither of the main characters really stood out for me; though I did like Kyle friend Kristen, she jumped off the page at me, I really would I like to read her book.

I give The Virgin Auction 4 stars

[Amy Miller · Rating 5 out of 5]

This is my first book by this author. The story was amazing. I loved the plot and the main characters. I look forward to reading more!

[Ki · Rating 3 out of 5]

This is my first book by Jessa Fox and I believe it’s her debut book too, but I’m not sure so don’t take my word on it.

So Kyle is a virgin and inexperienced in sex, although she may have gotten close to it or had done some pretty naughty things, most likely oral, she’s still a virgin and has kept that part of her for that special someone. But that someone has never shown up. She has dreams of becoming a doctor and going to medical school but being tight on money and not having anyway to pay for tuition she decides to auction off her virginity to the highest bidder. She’s the good girl on the curvy side with a slim tummy and honey thick thighs and gorgeous as hell. She’s sweet, kind, thoughtful, and generous, and of course a percentage of the auction will go to charity. However, unbeknownst to her, the winner of her virginity is Caspian, who happened to have gone to middle school with her.

Demanding is what came to mind about Caspian. Well, in bed. He likes to be begged and in control… does that count as being demanding? He’s a couple of years older then Kyle and had this huge crush on her back then. I’ll say he still does even though it’s been 10 years. He has kept tabs on her, stalker like, and that’s how’s he found out about the auction. He wasn’t going to let her give it away to some horny stranger, so it’s going to be him. On the other note, he’s definitely a perfectionist, wanting everything to go as planned and follow a guideline and time frame, but he’s also very charming and a gentleman, wanting to please and make everything comfortable and relaxing as possible. He was once that chubby kid that every one picked on but also those kids who grew up to be the handsome devil you wish you never picked on. He definitely gets things his way one way or another and with all the money he has, it can be done easily. If things doesn’t go his way, he can be a sulking king. But then again, he knows what he likes and will have it no other way.

The story is told from a first person point of view, switching from Caspian to Kyle which was good. I liked knowing what was going on in their minds and how they saw each other. They had their reasons in being the auctionee and the buyer/bidder which I liked and would have liked to have seen more of, or at least those sides of them more. We didn’t really get to know either of them to feel attached, so it was just a fly by. Kyle has a friend name Kristen and she was more interesting to me than Kyle was. She had sass and attitude and says it like it is, so her character was definitely more interesting. The writing could have used some editing. It wasn’t bad but it wasn’t good either.

This being an erotic, there wasn’t much of a storyline or romance, just lots of sex scenes which I usually like but without a story to hold most of it up, it was just sex after sex scenes. It was eehhh to me. The breaks in between those scenes were good because we actually got to see them do something outside of the bedroom, even if for a bit. And it being a super short read, it was rushed at the end.

On the other hand, I had problems with this story. (Spoilers!!!)

Kyle was supposed to just have sex and get it over with. She also had a contract she wrote of what can and cannot happen during the sex. I’m not sure what’s on that contract but BDSM, kinky, erotic stuff mustn’t have been on there because Caspian tied her up, had a vibrator, and did anal. Also, isn’t she supposed to be in charge? He seemed to have taken control once they got into the bedroom, like a Dom, and she had taken the position as a sub responding in yeses and what not to him. First thing popped up, 50 Shades.

Anyways, she definitely didn’t think this through even though she was nervous about her safety, being asked to do strange sex things, etc…. These kinky stuff should be on the list of strange sex things for a beginner, right?

And the no feelings attach? Yeah, it just went right out the window. She started thinking about how he felt for her the very next morning after their night. He obviously has feelings for her because of their history but for her to all of a sudden change like that? I was like whoa~ hold on there, you don’t even know this guy. He’s like a total creep and stalker. He even told her he kept tabs on her for years and that didn’t even freak her out.

The biggest problem I had, and is maybe a pet peeve for many readers, was the first time they did it, there was NO Condom usage! But not just that, no, he released in her! Ejeculated! On Her first time!!! Like HELLO!! That should be the first thing on the contract! And then she still didn’t say anything about it afterwards or mentioned it at all, in fact never. I literally was punching myself.

Knowing this was her first time and then knowing that she didn’t say anything about it (despite having a list and contract on the condition of the auction being sex only) just didn’t back up all her safety precautions. That should have been the number one thing on her precautions and rule list, but no, she didn’t even blank; she actually liked it and wants it. For a 23 year old, she should know the consequences. She didn’t even take the after pill, nor did they ever thought about it afterwards, not a single word or worry. They just kept at it with no protection and he kept on cumming in her. That just didn’t play with me. *sighs* For Kyle to dream about being a doctor right?

She was just breaking all her rules. I just couldn’t.

So over all, it was okay if you like erotic tales with lots of sex and little storyline. I wasn’t really interested truth be told. The voice was just very bland and it was just a quick read. There wasn’t any real readership engagement so I wasn’t invested in their “relationship”. I do like them individually and with what they’re doing, aside from that huge pet peeve that I ranted about, they worked well with each other but they’re not a couple I’ll remember.

[Zoey Zane · Rating 4 out of 5]

This was my first Jessa Fox book. The sexy scenes were steamy!

While I did really enjoy the book, I found the characters were not too realistic. I mean, I love the concept of what Kyle did. Auctioning off her virginity to pay for medical school, and then donate a portion of the funds to a foundation? It is an interesting concept. However, I would have made more stipulations than an STD screening to ensure her future partner is clean. She could have met a psycho! But.. I'm so glad she didn't.

Now, Caspian, I found, was a little creepy. He fell in love with Kyle when he was 12. She saved him a couple times from being harassed by the "in-crowd". She never made fun of him, although, she didn't stop others from doing so. The 10th of every month, since middle school, he Googles her. The current month, he does, and finds out that she is auctioning off her virginity, and decides that he has to have her. Now, that is kinda cool. But. It's also creepy that he's been her cyber-stalker for so long. Like 10+ years. If you can overlook that, Caspian is a total swoon-worthy guy. He's rich, owns his own company, and he's handsome! Who wouldn't want that?!

Caspian wins the auction and flies Kyle out to see him, before they proceed. They hit it off instantly, and bam! It's steamy, sexy, and up-lifting. I adored the ending!

Anyway, Fox did an outstanding job of drawing me into the story. Her writing was superb and I found myself compelled to see what happened next. It is an extremely short read, took me less than an hour, but it was a great plot. I do wish it were longer though, I would have enjoyed reading more about their time together, all sex aside. However, I loved the details, and I look forward to reading more from Jessa Fox in the future!

[Mignon Mykel · Rating 4 out of 5]

For the erotica reader, this book is definitely well written. The scenes are sexy and scorching, and the book is certainly composed of mostly 'those scenes.' As a reader who picks up straight erotica once in a blue moon, this definitely fit the bill -- the last book I read that gave me the same feelings would have been COWBOY HEAVEN back in March. Like that book, this one definitely can be categorized as erotica in my opinion; and, also in my opinion, not many books labeled as such truly are.

So putting that aside, and going into the real meat of the story, the part that truly draws me in to a book -- the characterization and plot line. The idea? Fabulous. I loved it. Would I do something of the sort? Not likely, but I can understand the thought and heck, if auctioning off your virginity can get you a cool three-quarters K, then yeah, go for it if that's what you want to do. Kyle is also safe about it -- well, at least as safe as one can be with the internet and auctions.

Then there's Caspian. During the main scenes, he's an extremely confident male lead, and could be quite enjoyable -- however, leading up to those scenes? He honestly creeped me out. And because of that, I just couldn't really enjoy his character. He was the first to admit that some would call his behaviors stalking, but he didn't find it to be. Me personally? I found him to be a tad bit creepy.

These two have a previous history, so Caspian's desires were believable; Kyle's personality, too, jived well with the way she was written.

And finally, the end of the book... Definitely my type of ending. I only wish we could have seen a little bit more.

*received a copy of the title in exchange for an honest review.

[Alison · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is a very short story 50+ pages but it has surprisingly crammed quite a lot in.

Kyle, a young lady (I kept thinking male due to the name) has decided with some considerable encouragement from her friend to auction off her virginity! She has got to her twenties & needs to pay for her education, plus wants to donate some to a cancer charity in memory of her deceased sister .. so she puts herself out there online much to her father’s disgust.

Little known to her though a former school mate has been keeping an eye on her movements over the years & can’t believe his luck when his childhood sweetheart is suddenly available ‘for sale’. So Caspian is determined to bid until he wins .. he just conveniently happens to be a millionaire otherwise the story would have come to an abrupt end there!

Having won his desire he is determined to spoil her rotten & make the ‘act’ as pleasurable & memorable as possible. Once Kyle realises who he is they seem to click .. I think I would have been more concerned about him potentially stalking me but there you go .. so what should be one night of passion turns into a steamy rompfest.

For a quick read & the ability to lose yourself for a little while this is a great story .. it does contain some (a lot) of explicit scenes so go in prepared.

Thanks to Jessa & Tasty Book Tour’s for the opportunity to read this in exchange for my honest opinion.

[Sabrina · Rating 3 out of 5]

I read this book as an ARC by Jessa Fox from Tasty Book Tours. I could not find this book on Amazon or Goodreads, upon doing my own research, I found out this is Jessa Fox’s debut novella about a girl who plans to auction off her virginity in order to pay for medical school. The man who buys her virginity happens to be a childhood crush from the past who now is an alpha male billionaire. This book is a very fast read, and the storyline is ever faster. As the reader I felt I was not engaged into the story only because the scenes did not hold enough description in the steadfast dialogue. As far as heat goes, this story holds intense heat. Upon reading this story, you see the passion the author has for her intimate scenes. Some of her verbiage could be changed, in one scene she describes the female body part as the p**** hole. I gave this novella 3.5 stars due to the storyline being too expeditious to hold attention for the reader.

ARC provided by author in exchange for an honest review. Reviewed by Sabrina from Alpha Book Club

[Miriam · Rating 3 out of 5]

While Kyle probably isn't the last virgin on earth, I understand why she feels that way. I don't claim to know the virginity status of everyone I know, and I won't bother assuming most lost their virginity by their twenty-first birthday, but it was strange to read a contemporary novel with a very young virgin female lead. While this innocent status is a staple in historical romances, it isn't in contemporary. So while it was strange, it was also...refreshing.

The story itself isn't much. To be fair, it's mostly sex. Bad? Meh, depends on your preference and expectations, I think.

Caspian wasn't a bad male lead. Kyle wasn't a bad female lead. But they weren't as developed as I would have liked. However, this is a short story (finishes at Kindle Loc 800), and definitely more about reconnecting in the present than delving too deep into the characters' pasts.

I could take or leave this story. The sex is hot, the conversations are mostly superficial with momentary depth, and the ending not much of a surprise. I think my favorite part was Caspian's pledge to match Kyle's donation to two pediatric cancer charities. The story didn't have a lot of heart-to-heart moments for me but this was definitely one of them.

Received from Tasty Book Tours for an honest review

[Janna ♥ I'm A Sweet And Sassy Book Whore ♥ · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5 stars

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Since The Virgin Auction itself is a very short and quick read, this review will be short and sweet as well. I must admit I really liked this one. The whole idea of auctioning off your virginity to pay for medical school and to donate to a good cause is something I never would have ever thought of. Kyle isn’t being selfish or money hungry by doing this. She is doing what she needs to do to pay for school and she’s giving a portion to a worthy cause, she has my respect. Caspian has loved Kyle for years but he moved away and hasn’t seen her but has always checked up on her and when he sees what she is auctioning he is determined to win not just the auction but Kyle as well. The Virgin Auction is sexy, sweet, full of insta lust and insta love and it is the reconnection of two people who may never of had a chance of being together had it not been for the auction.

[J. Dorner · Rating 2 out of 5]

ADULT
Former nerd turned rich and handsome as an adult buys a sexual exchange for three-quarters of a million dollars from a woman he's had a crush on since they attended middle school.
Takes less than an hour to read. He's arrogant and controlling. Her character could use more development.
"I saw he lighted candles" - lighted is almost always an adjective, lit is the preferred verb. Items such as this, and the extreme lack of dialog tags, make it seem like the editor was inexperienced.
The erotic scenes are heavy with detailed order, but low on emotion. The actual devirginising is short and told from only his point of view.

[Jamie Leigh · Rating 3 out of 5]

a good read. well written...but a little to sort for my taste.

[Melissa Barnett · Rating 4 out of 5]

Book was ok. Kinda short but a good read.