Curfew

by Navi' Robins

Trick or Treat,Eternal sleep,If you make a promise to Mary you don't keep...One the eve of Halloween, four teenagers will discover just how deadly keeping Mary out past her curfew can be. If you can't keep your word to Mary, you'll lose your soul.

47 pages, Kindle Edition

Published October 28, 2015

Reviews

[Quirkyreader · Rating 5 out of 5]

This story was a thrill ride. Robins is here to pick up where Richard Laymon left off.

[Mya · Rating 4 out of 5]

If you're looking for a good scare with good pacing, a dash of suspense, an excellent use of slang and a sparkle of humor get ready to be entertained. Despite a few editing hiccups, I was thoroughly engaged with the scary short about what happens when a girl misses her curfew. The writer not only kept me engaged with the mystery of why it was so important that Mary make it home on time, but also with the pinning development of her young suitor. This could have been a New Adult or Young Adult read, the atmosphere of teens is so strong, but there is a spot of gore here and there that will chill even adults. This was a great bite-sized read and scare and I seriously recommend it :)

[shamone · Rating 5 out of 5]

Happy Halloween lol

Very good short story. Released just in time for Halloween. Lol it had me scared too. Knowing I'm a big chicken just couldn't pass it up.. Navi' Robins is a excellent writer who isn't afraid to step outside the box. He deliver with this. Me and Mary could never ever be friends again. Just ain't bout that demon life lol. She'd be in her own.

[Arkadiusz Borzecki · Rating 4 out of 5]

Great book the "hip" lingo killed me.

The book was great. I got sucked in and was definitely a little scared. The only thing I didn't like was the way the author tried to make the book "hip" by using "100" and "that" and "wooooorldstar" (give or take a couple o's.)

[Brandi · Rating 3 out of 5]

This was an interesting quick read. A girl gets asked out on a date on Halloween but she has to be home by midnight. Don't think she is Cinderella for a second because instead of turning into a maid a dark creature attacks. They have to get her home before they are doomed.

[Andrea Williams · Rating 5 out of 5]

Good short story!

I enjoy it! Not really scary but more like suspense thriller. It keep me in suspense and laughing at the same time. I would recommend this read!

[Renika Jacobs · Rating 1 out of 5]

Horrible book

This was some wanna be urban trash. Poorly written and easily forgotten. The plot was more shallow than a kiddie pool.

[marla cunningham · Rating 4 out of 5]

Pretty good

This is more for a teen but it was pretty good. Kept u interested, especially at the end. It was a surprising ending.

[Deedee Henson · Rating 4 out of 5]

A good lil short story