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422 pages, Hardcover
First published February 2, 2016
Buddy read with my fellow magicians Katerina & Vera. Girls, we survived!
Actual rating: 2.5
You know the feeling when you eat something that is not sour or sweet, but indistinguishable. You can't decide whether you like it or if it's just strange and confusing, and you never want to taste it again. That is how I feel about this book. Indecisive. I don't even have much to tell about it, because it was too average, too insipid. All I feel is a shattering relief that I finally finished reading it. Finally! The concept of mixing magic and criminal world of 1920s is amazing. I don't remember ever reading a book like that! I and my friends were intrigued beyond words. The execution, though... It all started vividly: MCs were complex with dubious morals, the magic was strange and even terrifying at times, heck, if you watched Peaky Blinders and felt the gangster world vibe from it, you can imagine what I felt at first.
So fucking close to perfection! But soon enough things got boring and distilled and nothing kept my attention any longer. Romance. What romance? We have two people with deep feelings for each other, but when did they have time to develop such feelings? According to the book, they spent enough time together, but to us, readers, it was a couple of clandestine meetings and insignificant conversations and, voilà, the romance is cooked!
Then there's magic. What magic? We have this thing called shine, which is a magical cocktail a person must drink. And that's it. All book is spinning around that drink and how rich and powerful it can make some gangsters. What greater purpose? What darker magic? No. No. No.
We are said that our heroine is a powerful sorcerer. She can do big magic. She can do dark magic. But all she does is cook moonshine - a magical one, yes, but still just a moonshine.
Let alone the pacing of the book which is slow and boring and couldn't keep my attention for long. There's something happening in the book, but nothing's really happening. The writing is not bad, it's good actually, but the way the events are presented to us is not engrossing. No 1920s vibe in the book. I felt the criminal world, but I didn't feel the era it was taken place in. A couple of words as dame and doll is all you gonna have from 20s.
I'd say that the ending was good and some action at last happened, but for me it was like watching a repeat of Peaky Blinders' last episode: some events were identical. It seems author took the idea of Peaky Blinders and inserted her world right into this tv-series, only she added magic and changed characters' roles: Cillian Murphy's character became a girl in the book and his love interest Grace became a man. That's it. I haven't read Night circus but I won't be surprised if some of the events of the book are identical (with little change) to this book's events.
Bottom line: I inclined to advice not to read this book, because I don't think it has anything to surprise or enchant you with, reader. It wasn't bad nor was it good and you can spend you time on something more engaging.
4.5 out of 10
"Run until you win, or until you fall."
“My fate is tied to this man’s fate. The fate of this sadistic, scheming enigma of a gangster.”
The nitty-gritty: A gritty and magical story with plenty of danger, romance and a very special drink called sorcerer's shine.
Magic can achieve a lot of things, but it can't undo the past. I've sworn off sorcery, buried my magic with earth, blood, and tears below the ground, but I'd gladly sell my soul to use it just once more, if sorcery could find a way to bring me back in time. If it could bring me right to the edge of where I once stood and shattered my world into tiny shards, and make me walk away instead.
The moment I saw the cover for this book, I knew I had to read it. This is going to be one of my favorite covers of the year, no doubt. And even better, the story inside is just as magical and exciting. Lee Kelly brings something new to the table in the urban fantasy genre, making her an author to keep an eye on. I loved the blend of magic, action and romance, and I was swept away by Kelly's irresistible world-building.
Set in an alternate history 1920s, A Criminal Magic takes place in a United States where the use of magic has become illegal. Just like speakeasies in the Prohibition era, sorcerers who still wish to perform magic must do so undercover, in underground establishments called “shine rooms.” There, they take to the stage and perform for small audiences, with the highlight of the performance being the creation of “sorcerer's shine,” a magical drink created from water that provides a drug-like euphoria and high. But there’s a catch to shine—in fact, there’s a big catch to all types of magic—true magic only lasts one day, after which it disappears or turns back into water, in the case of shine. Because of that unbendable law of magic, shine can only be consumed right after it’s made.
The story alternates between two characters’ points of view. Joan Kendrick is a young woman living in Virginia who’s nearly destitute. Her mother died six months before the story begins, killed in a magical mishap, and now Joan helps out in her Uncle Jed’s shine room, trying to stay afloat and keep her young sister Ruby safe. Because of her mother’s terrible accident, Joan has locked away her own powerful magic with a blood spell, and she’s determined never to use it again. But when notorious crime boss Harrison Gunn visits Uncle Jed, asking him to join the crew of elite sorcerers he’s putting together, Joan convinces him to take her instead, as Gunn’s promise of riches is too tempting to pass up.
Meanwhile, Alex Danfrey is a sorcerer in hot water of his own. His father has just gone to jail for stealing magic spells from his own company and selling them on the black market, and Alex was his right-hand man, using concealing spells and other magic to help his father’s illegal business. And now the Feds have made him a deal: join the Prohibition Unit to help bring down a dangerous crime family, and the Feds will keep Alex out of prison. It’s not much of a choice, and so Alex joins up, determined to do good in order to atone for his past.
But trouble lies ahead for both Joan and Alex, and eventually their stories converge in a blaze of illegal magic and dangerous alliances, as the secrets they are keeping threaten their growing attraction to each other.
I absolutely loved the world-building in A Criminal Magic. Kelly has created an alternate Roaring Twenties that incorporates all the best elements of classic noir—gangsters, guns, secrets and lies—and revamped it by substituting illegal magic for alcohol. Shine is an addictive and highly sought after potion that can only be made by a sorcerer, which makes those with the magic touch valuable assets. Kelly also gives her sorcerers the ability to do other kinds of magic, like conjuring illusions out of thin air, commanding the elements, and building walls that conceal and protect. If you’ve seen the movie Now You See Me, it reminded me a bit of the large-scale illusions in that film.
The structure of the story worked well, and I enjoyed spending time with Joan and Alex separately and getting to know them before they come together in the Red Den, Gunn’s performance venue in Washington, D.C. I think I was drawn to Alex a little more than Joan, simply because I didn’t always like her character. Joan has always been under the thumb of someone older and more powerful that she is, and I think it’s hard for her to stand up for herself. But although her motivations seemed pure—doing whatever it takes to keep her sister safe—I felt she gave in way too easily and made so many bad choices, that I wanted to grab her by the shoulders and shake some sense into her. She eventually wises up and embraces her power, but it takes a long time for her to get to that point.
And I think Joan is a good example of my one issue with the story, which is that this felt very much like a young adult novel. I’m not sure the characters ages are ever stated, but I believe they are supposed to be in their early 20s, or at least I got the impression they were “of age.” However, the first person present tense narrative really made this feel like YA to me, and while it did give the story an immediacy that added to the tension, it’s just not my favorite narrative style.
But when Joan and Alex finally meet, the story suddenly blossoms. Their on-page charisma was exciting, and it didn’t hurt that Kelly gives them a fierce attraction to each other. I loved reading about how strong magic can be when two or more sorcerers work together to create it, and there were some thrilling scenes in the bar where Joan and Alex are hired to not only put on spectacular shows, but to brew their magical shine for the bar patrons.
I was not expecting that ending, though! I know A Criminal Magic isn't the beginning of a series, but the author definitely leaves the door open a crack just in case. If you're looking for an exciting and fast-paced story and you have a taste for illegal magic (and you wish you could try shine yourself!), then I suggest you get a hold of a copy as soon as possible.
Big thanks to the publisher for supplying a review copy. Above quote was taken from an uncorrected proof, and may differ in the finally version of the book.
This review first appeared on The Speculative Herald.This review originally appeared on Books, Bones & Buffy