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293 pages, Hardcover
First published February 9, 2016
He was naked.This book is a retelling of Rapunzel, the difference being that the MC is TSTL (too stupid to live) and succumbs to insta-love despite the fact that she's blind. Truly an amazing feat.
I inhaled his scent and it was stronger, proof that not a stitch of clothing covered his body. The salt and musk of his skin hit me sharper than before—and something else. Another scent that was indecipherable to me. I felt it as much as I smelled it. It was raw and deep and visceral. My skin almost ached from the presence of it, pulling tight and breaking out into gooseflesh. My stomach knotted like a thousand butterflies were rioting inside me.
I wanted to hear more about him. I wanted him to talk about his life. I wanted to know about where he came from, what he’d seen, the people, including the girls who had or had not seen him naked.
My hearing had long adapted to the darkness.Like, what does that even mean? Unless there's some special sense in this fantasy world, light doesn't make an appreciable effect on one's ability to hear. That's just sloppy.
I reacted without thought. My hand snatched the knife that I used to cut the bread. My fingers circled the hilt unerringly, fitting it perfectly within my grip. It hissed as I swung it, stopping the serrated blade before his throat.She can walk through a forest perfectly and more competently than one with sight, which would have been perfectly acceptable considering this world is shrouded in darkness, but then there's the fact that she's barely been outside of a stone's throw from the tower where she lives.
She followed close behind me, moving noiselessly. “You walk like you’re part of the night.” The words escaped me like an accusation. It didn’t make sense to me. How could a sightless girl be so proficient at maneuvering this terrain?I don't mean to question the abilities of the blind. I know that they are capable of many things, but the way this blind character is portrayed in this book is completely unrealistic.
“And what of him?” I asked before good sense came over me. “What is he like? I already know he’s tall and strong of form—”No shit.
“Aye, his face is fine enough to draw the female eye. Not that there are too many your age left to admire him.”
At that sobering reminder, I pressed my mouth shut. How could I worry about such trivial things when the world was what it was?
My awareness of him burned a path through me. I brushed a stray strand of hair back from my cheek and tried to pretend I didn’t feel his stare. And yet, like an animal aware of something else in its orbit, I knew he was there, watching me, thinking about our last encounter and the truth of my existence.And it doesn't stop with Luna. Her love interest, Fowler, is yet another lineup in the list of FICTIONAL MALES WHOSE THOUGHT PROCESSES ARE OBVIOUSLY THAT OF A TEENAGED GIRL.
She reminded me of a flower that used to bloom in Relhok. The scarlet buds once dotted the hills outside Relhok City. They were wrapped up in my earliest recollections, tangled amid memories of sunshine on my skin. The flower had faded from existence a few years after the eclipse, like so many things since then.*rolls eyes* Pass on this book.
He was naked.
I inhaled his scent and it was stronger, proof that not a stitch of clothing covered his body. The salt and musk of his skin hit me sharper than before—and something else. Another scent that was indecipherable to me. I felt it as much as I smelled it. It was raw and deep and visceral. My skin almost ached from the presence of it, pulling tight and breaking out into gooseflesh. My stomach knotted like a thousand butterflies were rioting inside me.
From high in my perch, I listened. My hearing had long adapted to the darkness.
“It’s going to be fine, Madoc. We have Fowler. He’ll take care of you.” She patted her brother’s shoulder and lifted her gaze to me again. “Right?” She was bobbing her head again, willing me to promise her lies. “Right, Fowler?”
Still in a panic, Dagne wouldn’t release her grip on my sword arm. Cursing, I snatched the sword from my right hand with my left. The delay cost me. The dweller was on me before I could bring up my blade.
Was this supposed to be a full length novel?
“This tower isn’t my fate.”
This review is going to be controversial, because I really don't know whether to recommend this book or not. If you read any books by Sophie Jordan, you know her talent is hit or miss kind: you never know whether you will love or hate her book. She writes historical romance, new adult, young adult books, and some of them are really good. But if we separate other genres and leave only young adult for evaluation, we'll notice that it is not her strongest side (I know, because I read all of her ya books). Let's find out how my deduction tactics works on Reign of shadows.
We have a retelling of Rapunzel. Our MC Luna is blind (I don't consider it a spoiler, because we'll know she can't see just a few pages into the story). She was born on the day when complete darkness enveloped the kingdom of Relhok. Her parents were killed right away, and Luna - who is also a new queen - was taken away and hidden from enemies. She lives in a tower (just like Rapunzel) with her guardians Sivo and Perla. Of course, Luna dreams of adventures and far away lands, and, of course, her life will change when three strangers will show up on her doorstep.
World-building. It was incomplete and lacked some crucial detail, but I liked the atmosphere of darkness and desperation: cold shivers periodically ran down my spine; the creatures that roam the night are creepy. Imagine a world where something resembling a sun - a midlight - shows only for one hour per day. Rest of the time the world looks like this:
THE ECLIPSE SPANNED all my life. It invaded everything. A deep, seeping blackness that poured into every crack and fissure like pooling blood. The darkness was especially dense outside my tower, sliding like ink to where I stood on the lighted balcony, listening to the hum of hungry insects and animals.
Bats' average size now is four feet tall! And they are relevantly harmless (until you try to eat them and catch up bat fever and then die). The most terrible creatures that roam the world are dwellers. They are human size and bigger, insect-like with tentacles, and have venom that kills, oh, and they eat people. Creepy as hell. A creature materialized in the night, its body near my height. No hair sprouted anywhere on the gray, dimpled body. Even though its flesh resembled molding clay, I knew its body was dense, composed of sinewy tissue not nearly as yielding as the tender flesh of a human.<...>Its mouth gaped wide, long feelers rising out of its face to taste the air and detect the presence of prey. The eyes were small, dark orbs that saw very little—if anything. But they hunted us just fine without sight, relying on their hearing and those feelers that vibrated like a nest of snakes, seeking us.
The author created intriguing but scary world, and I would gladly enjoy it if not for some issues: how everything living survives without sun? We are told there's almost no green in the world left, vegetation is scarce, but they still exist after 17 years of almost total darkness? How? Why is it not cold everywhere? We are told that it is some kind of a mild cold but not freezing cold. We don't have a complete picture of how things are and most importantly why. It's not enough to create a believable picture. BUT, it is a fantasy book and supposedly author doesn't owe us explanation, though, I wish she did explain some things: it would've made this world more comfortable for my perception and likeness.
Characters. Luna is a blind girl; she can feel the world around:Sivo claimed that because I had grown up under the mantle of dark, my senses of hearing, touch, taste, and smell were keen. He claimed it was an advantage in this world without light.
She can survive just fine and her abilities partly resemble of a superhero (Daredevil maybe):“I can see just fine without seeing. Fine enough to cook. To cut anything. Don’t doubt that I can handle myself. Wasn’t it me who brought you here and saved you?”
Fowler. He is aloof, a loner. He already lost too much and doesn't trust people; he keeps his heart locked and does everything to survive in this cold lonely world.Didn’t she know yet? People you loved, the ones you cared about the most, they all died eventually. No one was spared. When you lost them, everything you had, all of your heart, was lost, too. It crippled you. Left you an empty shell, functioning on instinct alone.
Romance. It was insta-love(ish) but that didn't really bother me. Luna has never interacted with boys her age before Fowler, she is curious about him and, maybe, a little bit charmed by him in the beginning.I wanted to hear more about him. I wanted him to talk about his life. I wanted to know about where he came from, what he’d seen, the people, including the girls who had or had not seen him naked.
Yes, the naked part is oops, but the guy stood naked before her (it's a pity she couldn't see him), and he practically provoked the girl into thinking about his nakedness after that. Fowler, naughty boy! Then they are forced to travel together and there wasn't any love between them for a long time; gradually friendship was born and only then love.“So you’re saying that I matter to you?”
A shudder rolled through him that I felt to my very depths. “You matter to me.You’re the only thing that matters anymore.”
I honestly did not mind the romance being a major part of the book, because it was suiting the circumstances. I can imagine, in a world where you can die at any minute, love is a rare gift, and you must seize it if you can. Luna and Fowler did just that. Why to blame them for insta-love?The world was a merciless place. Hard and cruel. Except when you found someone to trust and love. Life, however fleeting, possessed meaning then.Knowing Fowler and loving him had given my life that meaning. I could always cling to that. I always would. Until the end.
Plot. Why did I leave it for last? Because I am going to rant a little about stupid decisions MCs did and there are going to be minor spoilers, so if you haven't read the book, do not read this part (if you mind miner spoilers). Luna ALWAYS knew that the mad king will look for her: she is an heir to the crown, of course he wants her dead. But her decision in the end to "sacrifice" herself was STUPID.I would die, but others—so many others—they would live. Is that not what a proper queen would do for her people?
“Absolutely not.”
Fowler, you are a common sense amongst delirium. The girl doesn't understand the usurper is mad. He will kill you, girl, but won't stop killing others, because - attention - HE IS MAD!!! But Luna is dura - which means fool in Russian and rhymes perfectly with her name.
Honestly, I had a bunch of minor claims regarding plot that gradually grew into one big ball: the plot is too rushed and abrupt. One moment we were getting comfortable with some aspects, and then we are plunged into different situation and have to adjust again, only we don't have time for that, because a few moments later we find ourselves in a new environment again. I'd say it was uncomfortable to skip from one place of the plot to another constantly. This book could've been better if it was longer - 300 pages for a fantasy book is not enough to fit all necessary information.
The ending. ONE BIG FAT CLIFFHANGER OF AN ENDING. I thought this book is a standalone; the abrupt ending was a shock for me. Agh, I thing I would've forgotten about this book in a few days if it was a standalone, but now I will wait a year to read the sequel.
All in all, an average fantasy story with pleasant characters but not enough world-building. If you are ok to overlook some flaws and don't mind an insta-love(ish) romance, this book is your next plat du jour.
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Tiefe Finsternis, die seit siebzehn Jahren über dem Reich Relhok liegt, und die dicken Mauern ihres Turms – etwas anderes kennt Luna nicht. Sie muss sich verstecken, damit die Welt sie für tot hält, nachdem ein Verräter ihre Eltern ermordete, um sich der Krone zu bemächtigen. Als sie fliehen muss, weil ihr Leben in Gefahr ist, hilft ihr der Waldläufer Fowler. Er erfüllt ihre dunkle Welt mit Licht, doch nicht einmal ihm darf sie sagen, dass sie die wahre Königin Relhoks ist. Denn der neue König sucht nach ihr, um sicherzustellen, dass sie niemals ihren Thron besteigen wird. (Quelle)
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Our lost princess, Luna, was a fierce, strong and tenacious character who refused to let her blindness get in the way of what she wanted. I respected and admired that about her very much. She was as capable of doing things as anyone with normal sight was and I loved that she had worked hard to actually get there. I also loved that Luna was a character who grew throughout the story. Sure she started off as an already strong character, but throughout Reign of Shadows she matured into an even more intelligent, caring and selfless young woman. Her character growth was undeniably amazing. Reign of Shadows was also told in the dual POV of Fowler, an archer who wound up having to aid Luna as her tower was attacked. I wasn't sure what to make of Fowler at the beginning. He was rough around the edges, reserved and came across as cold at times. But throughout the book, he slowly peeled the layers to his brusque exterior and allowed readers to see the truly golden heart he possessed. By the end, there was no doubt that I was madly in love with Fowler and his protectiveness and kindness.