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Alpha Queen

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Lexi Valentina Lyon knew she was different. Not only did she stand out for being the only blonde in a sea of black haired women in her clan, but because her grandmother had always told her she was special. What’s worse than being pointed out everywhere you go? Naturally, not knowing the real reason behind it.

Suddenly, everything changes after Lexi meets Prince Raven Langston. They share a connection so powerful, her grandmother has no choice but to reveal an entire millennia worth of secrets.

What Lexi learns about herself and her past can either make her the most powerful women in the world, or if those secrets fall in the hands of the wrong group, then she would become the world’s most valuable target.
In this book of the series you'll find lion, wolf and bear shifters.

37 pages, Kindle Edition

First published February 16, 2015

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Krystal White

25 books27 followers
My name is Krystal and I love reading and writing! I doubt I could be without my kindle as I take it everywhere with me as every moment I can spear I spend it reading.

I have always thought of myself as quite inventive and I figured it was time to put my creativity and imagination to work! That's when I decided to buy a smaller laptop that I could easily carry with me and furiously write whenever possible!

That's how on January 2015 I began writing and publishing my novellas. I love it and I hope you enjoy reading my stories almost as much as I enjoyed writing them!

If you don't know where to start I'd suggest you pick up Unforeseen, Fortuitous and Alpha Queen, which are all free.

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Profile Image for Mandy Saial.
1,154 reviews
December 10, 2015
Alpha Queen- Krystal White (5 Stars)

This was a short read , but it was packed full of Action, Emotion & Romance between unforgettable characters that will make you impatiently wait until the next book is released from this series.
Profile Image for Michelle Ferrari-Johnson.
1,558 reviews35 followers
February 18, 2016

I loved the start of this book! The story is flowing fabulously and then *poof* the story is over. I know it is a novella, but it feels as though the story line is just dropped. I am hoping the second book picks back up the action and adventure that the first one starts with.

I love that the story revolves around many kinds of shifter families. I also enjoyed how the Princess has a secret that seemingly no one knows but her grandmother.

Off to read the next in the series as my curiosity has been peaked.
1 review
June 28, 2016

Okay this was an interesting book but it's only like 20 pages and you don't even finish the story. Reading it..honesty it felt like a sample. Great read but unfinished
Profile Image for Rose Kvalsvig.
11 reviews
June 22, 2019
Riveting Read

For all u new shifter reader's this is a nice send off, with a bit of Romance and intrigue as well a mystery, it has good starting lines and friendship.
It pulls you into the story with ease that you won't want to put it down.
Well that is all I'm off to find book two, chow, And happy Reading.
30 reviews
October 21, 2018

Never be a shame of the color of your hair because difference are what will single you out. She never thought she will be love😭 but her knight with sparkling blue eyes promise to take her hand.
Profile Image for Victoria Duperron-Haynes .
43 reviews1 follower
April 22, 2019
Very well written but for a younger audience

It was a nice story, though I wish it was longer. It is definitely for a younger age group though with the exaggerated explanations and sentences.
Profile Image for Lanai Dameron.
151 reviews
January 7, 2020
I am intrigued!

Ok, so this is a novella introducing the series.
I didn’t know what to expect but, I laughed out loud! I thoroughly enjoyed this and I’m heading to get the next in the series now!
Profile Image for Lesa Divine.
966 reviews192 followers
June 17, 2017
Not interesting. I can't even relate to the main character Lexi. I don't see myself Reading part 2. For it to be so short I still had to force myself to get through it.
2 reviews1 follower
November 2, 2017
Interesting Premise. I think the length, made some of the relationships feel forced--not long enough to develop naturally.
Profile Image for Bert.
9 reviews
August 14, 2018
Good book

Though it was more a short story, I really did like it. What I liked best about it was it's steady flow.
Profile Image for Lissie Emm.
68 reviews
October 7, 2018
The writing and dialogue is awful but the storyline is interesting and has great potential.
231 reviews12 followers
November 14, 2018
Instead of reading a “book”, I feel like I’ve just read a “chapter”
Definitely wasn’t expecting it to end so soon
36 reviews
December 23, 2018

I'm not one for reading these types of stories. Very short story, at that. Since it didn't take long to read, and the storyline intrigued me, on to the next!!!!
Profile Image for Sarah.
401 reviews
January 11, 2019

There’s are grammar issues, the characters were a little off, and then some those stuff about the book seems weird too.
10 reviews
September 1, 2019
Not really my taste

Would recommend this for the 16-18 and group
Good story for the younger fantasy readers. Characters are likeable and well written
17 reviews3 followers
February 7, 2020
This was boring and not exciting and only good part of this is how short it was
47 reviews1 follower
December 19, 2020
Great book

Amazing very short but it’s going to be a great series can’t wait to read book 2. You cannot miss this series
May 4, 2021
Great read!

So ready for the next book! Has me wanting more. I need to know the next part of this romance.
Profile Image for Dawn Gehler.
261 reviews5 followers
May 6, 2021
LOve it

I really like this book with Raven and Valentina I can't wait to finish the series and find out how their Love story goes
Profile Image for Amanda Kimberley.
Author 80 books204 followers
November 27, 2018
Nice and quick read!

I enjoyed this nice and quick read. The characters are strong and the plot was great! I enjoyed Lexi and Raven.
Profile Image for Shyla.
543 reviews2 followers
March 9, 2017
Good short preview

The very short preview to what the whole series is about starts out well. I hope to be able to read the whole series soon
75 reviews
August 9, 2017

It's a great but a bit short but it keeps you fully submerged in the storyline the full-time give it a read if you're just looking for a throughout their book
Profile Image for Claire Ingram.
Author 1 book10 followers
March 10, 2016
Reviewed for SJ BOOK BLOG

Genre: paranormal romance (shifters)

What's it about: the story follows Lexi, a princess on the Lyon Island who's older sister Vanessa is about to participate in the coming of age celebration, the whole community is excited about the arrival of the swoon worthy Prince Raven, but when an unexpected chance encounter happens between Lexi and Raven it starts a chain of events that neither saw coming,

You will love this story if: you like paranormal shifter romances

The writing style of this author really draws you into the story, the story itself is original and a fantastic basis / foundation to a great story. This book is the first in a series and clearly sets up the characters and mythology.

The book however lacked details and was very short. It took me a few chapters to even realise Lexi was a princess living in a castle which drastically changes the images is built up in my head about how her home looked.

There is a lack of description of the settings and this is left mostly to the readers imagination. This can be seen as both a good thing and a bad thing.

The book seems to be more a novella but sets a great premise for the rest of the story. A fantastic interesting read I would highly recommend.
Profile Image for Amelia.
1,514 reviews119 followers
February 22, 2016
I would just like to say something to you Ms White. Speech, thoughts and first person narration should sound natural. When you write, think "Do I speak like this? Do I pepper my conversations with words like 'therefore' and 'furthermore'? Do I avoid contractions at all costs?" If telling your friends a story, do you really feel the need to explain the reasoning behind every last little detail, like a) it matters and b) your audience are morons? When your other half asks how your day was, do you detail every step in chronological order or just give the significant parts?

On a lesser note, random comma placement and question marks after phrases that are not questions are annoying, as are Special Snowflake heroines who fall in instalove and cite Twilight as an influence.

I'm not trying to be harsh. If you're determined to keep writing, then I sincerely hope thinking about this will help you.
Profile Image for Crystal Melloh.
82 reviews1 follower
June 28, 2015
Alpha Queen is the first book by Krystal White I have read. The book is not a standalone but a novella which does a great job in introducing and laying the ground work for each character. At the heart of the story is Lexi, a blonde shifter, who has always felt like an outcast with only two friends, Alaina and Michael. Having a mean sister, like Vanessa, doesn't help Lexi's social status either. But when Lexi meets Raven, everyone's world is turned upside down. Secrets are revealed but I think more are coming in subsequent installments. I've read a lot of shifter stories and this one has a different twist on the species. Something is off about Vanessa but the author doesn't say what exactly. The book isn't a cliffhanger but I was glad to have the second installment loaded on my Kindle ready to go.
Profile Image for J.N. Sheats.
Author 25 books274 followers
August 15, 2015
I received a copy from the author for an honest review.

I'm not a big fan of shifter books but I will say I enjoyed this one. It is well written and laid out, the characters are very interesting, and I love the take on a classic fairy tail romance.

Alpha Queen is the perfect set up for the next book in the series and it had me wanting more all around. Lexi is a brilliant character and I just couldn't get enough of Raven. The only problem I had with the book was I needed more.

I wish there was more world building because I want to know more. I NEED to know more about this place, and the characters.
Profile Image for Jane.
344 reviews8 followers
February 2, 2016
Weird throughout.

This is set in an alternate world on a remote island. You are thrust into this world with zero explanation of the world, or what the state of things are.
When the book starts it seems to be set back in time, but there is no clear definition and then randomly amidst remarks of knight training and blacksmith shops are remarks of super soakers and Twilight.
Toss is a ton of grammar errors and the fact it's only part of a story (where nothing really happens) and you have a flop.

It might get better in the second half, but this was so confusing and uninspiring I won't be purchasing the second book.
Profile Image for Heather Schrader.
199 reviews9 followers
July 11, 2015
was given a complimentary copy in exchange for an honest review.

Krystal has obviously proven she can write in any genre from dark edgy suspense to light hearted contemporary and now it clearly shows with paranormal.
This story is a nice build up to what's going to be a unique paranormal series.
Loved the character except for Victoria's sister who is a snot nosed brat who thinks she can always get her way.
Was so happy I already had the second part so I could dive right into it and continue with this fascinating series.
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