UnLove Me (Angels Warriors MC Trilogy #1-3) by Dawn Martens

Dec 04, 2015 Carlene Inspired marked it as did-not-finish

30% is as far as I can get into this. While UnLove Me has a great premise, and I usually love MC books, this one has far too many problems with timeline and alternating POV's. The writing itself is good, but I couldn't follow who all the characters were, within 30% you read from 6 or more characters, and weeks of time are skipped with no separation between one minute to the next. Unfortunately, I won't be finishing this book.

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Nov 11, 2015 Jeanny rated it really liked it

This eARC was kindly provided to me by the publisher via Netgalley.

This was an unexpected tale. The UnLove me trilogy was surprisingly interesting. I wasn't expecting such a convoluted & intertwining tale. It was reminiscent of the butterfly effect/ cause & effect. One life's situation/decisions can cause such a complex series of effects not just in that one person's life but for people all around them. It can be a devastating & life altering domino effect. I score this 4 stars

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Oct 17, 2015 Paige rated it liked it

Shelves: arcs, dark-and-dirty, cliffhanger, emotion-overload, marriage, new-adult, part-of-a-series, romance, second-chaces, suspense

2.5-3 "Undo" Stars

Whoa. This book left me kind of speechless. I read the blurbs for each book so I knew there was going to be one heavy content. I also knew from the descriptions that many parts of this trilogy wouldn't be safe since it states that some cheating occurs but holy moly. For as much as I didn't like some of the characters at times and for as much as I loathed many of the decisions made, I couldn't stop reading and was completely invested in the outcome of these characters.

UnLove Me 2.5-3 "Undo" Stars

Whoa. This book left me kind of speechless. I read the blurbs for each book so I knew there was going to be one heavy content. I also knew from the descriptions that many parts of this trilogy wouldn't be safe since it states that some cheating occurs but holy moly. For as much as I didn't like some of the characters at times and for as much as I loathed many of the decisions made, I couldn't stop reading and was completely invested in the outcome of these characters.

UnLove Me is a compilation of all three books in the series: UnKiss Me, UnTouch Me and UnBreak this Heart. This series follows 6 friends and goes from present to past and back to the present to tell the rise and downfall of the three relationships. In UnKiss Me, Eden and Jasper/Angel start out as high school sweethearts until Eden's sudden departure. She doesn't return again for 7 years. In that time both have drastically changed and life has been difficult. Eden is now the caretaker for her 4 year old sister and Jasper is the president of his MC the Angels Warriors. But even after all this time and lots of misunderstandings, Jasper still wants Eden back at least until she reveals the secrets she's kept all this time.

UnTouch Me focuses on Lilly and Vinny/Zippo. All through Eden's departure and her return, they've had an on again, off again relationship. But when Eden returns, it forces Lilly to admit she has been keeping secrets from Vinny for years. But not only that, Vinny has been acting strangely and has been keeping even more devastating secrets from Lilly.

UnBreak this Heart follows Hilary and Mason/Reaper. Married young, they built a life together until Mason's demons started changing him. Becoming withdrawn, abusive, and paranoid that Hilary was cheating on him, Mason cheats on her causing Hilary to leave him. For years Mason wonders where she went and it isn't until Eden returns that Hilary does too. But with so much between them and Hilary wanting divorce, Mason has to decide if he can change.

While I was drawn into this world of secrets and lies, I found it hard at times to follow the storyline. With so many different points of view, I had to back track occasionally to figure out who was speaking. While parts are labeled with point of view, within those sections the point of view would change without notice leaving me to place what was happening without any help. I also had to go back and figure out that the first book ended. I didn't realize I had finished book 1 so I was confused when the storyline became more about a different couple even though all three books were heavily influenced by all 6 characters.

But mostly I had a difficult time with the storyline itself. It was admittedly hard to read that each character was deceiving each other even if it was with good intentions. The most difficult to read times came when those who claimed to love the other person continued to make horrible, awful, heart shattering decisions over the course of years. It was hard to like the characters at times and if I'm being honest, if I would have read these books separately, I don't know that I would have been able to finish. But since they were all combined together, once I started reading, I couldn't stop.

Additionally, the way the side characters were wrapped up was way to easy. I mean each of the main characters had already made their decisions but to have such a tidy (if I can even use that word) of an ending seem wholly unrealistic. But. That ending. Total surprise. Total shocker. But in a twisted way it was probably the best way to end this series. It wrapped up everything. Not everything was hearts and sunshine as it really couldn't have been. And, with that, I was happy.

So yes. My rambling of both hating and loving this series is exactly what was happening in my head as I read and finished. Having read (and absolutely adored) Renegade Lady by Dawn Martens (totally different series), I knew to expect dark angst and heartbreak, I just don't think my poor heart was completely ready for the Angel's Warriors.

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Jan 13, 2018 Philomena Callan Cheekypee rated it it was amazing

Shelves: loved-it

Here is my review of each of the books-

Unkiss Me

Talk about starting a series off with a bang-this was a fantastic start to the series.

Eden calls on the Angels Warriors MC for protection for herself and her little sister from her father. The Angels Warriors are known for protecting women and children. Eden didn't realise that the president of the MC is Jasper who broke her heart years ago.

I really loved this story. As secrets unfold between Eden and Jasper I was gripped. Great romantic suspense ...more

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Oct 18, 2015 Nicole rated it liked it

Shelves: netgalley, arcs

*3* stars

ARC kindly provided via NetGalley in exchange of an honest review

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UnLove me is the full trilogy of Angels Warriors MC series. The first part UnKiss me the main characters are Eden and Jasper (aka Angel). Eden's past is full of abuse and violence by her father, Angel is her first (and only love), also is the President of the Angels Warriors and he'll do everything to save her from him and win her back once he learns all her secrets.
UnTouch Me is the second part is Lilly's and

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Nov 06, 2015 Arlena rated it it was amazing

Shelves: 5-stars, a-good-book, book-1, book-2, book3, my-review, romance, suspense, erotica

Title: UnLove Me
Author: Dawn Martens
Publisher: D. M.
Series: The Angels Warriors Complete Trilogy
Reviewed By: Arlena Dean
Rating: Five
Review:

"UnLove Me" by Dawn Martens

My Thoughts...

What a trilogy read 'The Angels Warriors MC' series. It was such a pleasure to get three reads all in one read. This novel was wonderfully well written. I did find that to get the complete story you will have to read it in order. Book one ...'UnKiss Me' was of Eden's and Jasper's story. Book two...'UnTouch Me,' was of ...more

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Oct 20, 2015 Penelope rated it did not like it

Honest review thanks to Netgalley...

I am horrified, I only made it halfway through the second book and skimmed through the third. I can't even put into words how much I absolutely hated this, everything about it, sorry, I should say, I hated the male leads. I wanted to through my phone through the wall over and over again, I didn't see any redeeming qualities in any of them. I don't think I will ever be able to pick up a book by this author again.

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Oct 18, 2015 NiCoLeTa E. marked it as to-read

Shelves: mc-s, arc

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Apr 06, 2015 Donna Sweeney rated it it was amazing

Kindly provided with an ARC via Netgalley in exchange for an honest review......

GOD ALMIGHTY WHERE DO I START ?.....

I am absolutely BLOWN away !!. This trilogy is PHENOMENAL. There is so much going on I don't even know where to begin.....

It focuses on 3 couples and there journey together from youth to adult hood. Their loves, losses and EVERYTHING IN BETWEEN.

It is exceptionally well written with duel POV throughout which for me is a MUST, as I can understand then the head space of our leading la ...more

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Aug 01, 2017 Rosa Sharon (iScream Books Blog) rated it really liked it · review of another edition

Shelves: 4-stars, badass-biker-alert, call-the-fire-dept-hot, copy-for-review, dark, female-badass, friends2lovers, tissues-required, funny, multiple-pov

"Sometimes real love means loving someone enough to let them go."

This 3-book boxset was my first and only time to read the work of Dawn Martens. Yes, it was my MC Romance addiction that led me to give her a try. I kinda had a love/hate relationship with this book. I think the story in the mind of the author is amazing, however; the actual manuscript was difficult and distracting to read. I struggled with the many POV's and the mixture of them within the same paragraph making it difficult to de "Sometimes real love means loving someone enough to let them go."

This 3-book boxset was my first and only time to read the work of Dawn Martens. Yes, it was my MC Romance addiction that led me to give her a try. I kinda had a love/hate relationship with this book. I think the story in the mind of the author is amazing, however; the actual manuscript was difficult and distracting to read. I struggled with the many POV's and the mixture of them within the same paragraph making it difficult to determine who's voice was speaking and forcing me to backtrack sometimes when it became clear and I had to reboot my brain and read it again. The formatting is beautiful, so I know that professionals were involved. Some of the chapter headings had POV designated, but that didn't keep it from switching to another in the middle. It strained my brain as I read all three books from beginning to end, back-to-back. If I had not done so, I'm sure that reading the same story from a different POV would have been helpful, reminding me what had been covered in the previous book, giving me another insight to the situation. But since I did, I sometimes felt I was just reading the same story three times. But each was focused on a different character, while still maintaining the multiple POV's. That being said, I have to confess that UnLove Me was an incredible story that will stay in my head for a while to come.

It's mind-bending how the author managed to keep so many details about so many characters and situations straight in her head. The imagination required to come up with the relationships and events is impressive and makes me wonder how she slept at night with so much on her mind. I even downloaded the song, UnLove Me by Maroon 5, knowing it would remind me of this story every time I hear it on my playlist.

The author definitely took me on an emotional journey and made me feel things. I had strong reactions to the characters and they moved in and out of the dog house in my affections. She didn't make them perfect, she revealed their flaws. She made me get upset with them, and she made me love them too. One minute I wanted to punch them, and the next I wanted to hug them. I laughed with them and cried with them. I was shocked and surprised as secrets were revealed, having been kept even from me even with so many POV's. I saw the pain the characters suffered and the reasons for the secrets being kept, and I questioned the outcome if they had been revealed earlier. So many questions, so much pain, so many bad choices... so much love.

I feel like I really got to know the characters who were colorful and multi-faceted. They kept growing on me the more I read and I became invested in their lives and their story. So, let me close by saying that though it was a rough ride, I'm glad to have taken it. The author's talent shined through and I see good things in her writing future. ...more

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Sep 05, 2017 Bibliophile Wonderland Reviews rated it really liked it

Shelves: arc

This trilogy is based on three complete different stories that intertwine in some at some point.
Jasper and Eden
Eden ahs suffered abused from her father the VP of the Notorious MC, Jasper has always had eyes for her and has always been watching her. They both have dark secrets that come to light.

Lilly and Vinnie
They grew up together but around that time he did not pay her any mind until his childhood sweetheart left him. He seems to have regained his vision and sees Lilly is not the girl he g ...more

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Oct 21, 2015 Romance Readers Retreat rated it it was amazing

5 Amazing stars!!!

I really loved the UnLove Me Trilogy boxset, which follows six friends on their rollercoaster of a journey through friendships and relationships. This is my first time reading anything in the MC genre and I can't wait to read more! I read this whole series in one weekend and was sad when it was over! This trilogy will definitely give you one hell of a book hangover and you might just need a few tissues throughout. You will want to throw your kindle or paperback across the room 5 Amazing stars!!!

I really loved the UnLove Me Trilogy boxset, which follows six friends on their rollercoaster of a journey through friendships and relationships. This is my first time reading anything in the MC genre and I can't wait to read more! I read this whole series in one weekend and was sad when it was over! This trilogy will definitely give you one hell of a book hangover and you might just need a few tissues throughout. You will want to throw your kindle or paperback across the room and yell at the characters to get their acts together. I went through so many emotions while reading and it was well worth it!

UnKiss Me
We meet Jasper and Eden, Vinny and Lilly, and Mason and Hilary in this debut novel of the Angel Warriors MC series. They have all been close knit friends since before high school and they have gone through most of life's struggles together. This first book is from Jasper and Eden's perspective. We learn that Jasper 'Angel' Hughes is apart of the Angel Warriors MC, formerly known as the Satan's Law MC. Him and the guys are trying to clean up his father's mess and turn the club around to where they actually have a good reputation, instead of being known for booze, drugs, guns, and girls. Eden on the other hand is trying to get out from underneath her father's abusive hands. A total misunderstanding and Eden seeing something she shouldn't have causes her to run away and stay gone for years without letting anyone know until she finds out she has a sister who she has to go back and protect. When her father goes to prison for trying to kill her, she is finally 'free'. But once he is set to be released, she hesitantly calls on the Angel Warriors MC for protection, not knowing that Jasper and the rest of the guys were the guys behind it. With Jasper back in her life, Eden suddenly has to answer for herself and why she ran away without a word, also try to keep the rest of her life changing secrets from him. Will her secrets tear them apart forever?
This was my favorite out of the series! I loved Jasper and Eden and their connection and relationship.

UnTouch Me
When Eden's secrets all come, Lilly has a lot to answer to from Vinny. She knew where Eden was and even kept in contact with her and she never told any of the guys. Jasper was Vinny 'Zippo' Torino's best friend and he feels betrayed by Lilly from keeping that from them, especially since they could have really protected and helped Eden against her father. But Zippo has secrets too, and they would absolutely destroy Lilly and make her leave him forever if she ever found out. Lilly and Zippo have an on and off again relationship with a lot of 'cheating' on Zippo's part. This was my least favorite book of the series. I could not stand Zippo and his way of thinking and personally don't think Lilly or any girl should have stayed with him.

UnBreak Me
The third and final book of the series is told from Mason and Hilary's POV. Mason is the bad boy of the group and the one who took Satan's Law which was under Jasper's father Vic's rule at the time seriously. He followed everything Vic told him to do, even murder and sleeping with hookers, even though he had Hilary. Although he changed his ways after the changeover to Angel's Warriors took place, I believe he still had a very heavy conscious of what he did in his past. This took a huge toll on his and Hilary's marriage and caused him to become abusive, both verbally and physically. He even accused her of cheating, even though he was the one stepping out on his wife. This caused Hilary to leave him and not return for nine years. She finally returned when Eden needed protection, but her and Mason's relationship was more of the same. This book will definitely break you and I highly recommend you bring tissues along for the ride! I hated Mason throughout this book and he was always the one I was really curious to know more about, but I think I understand him and his broody ways more after reading his story.

This series was amazing and you have to read all of them, and in order, for you to really understand and to get closure. Each one ends in a cliffhanger that will have you reeling and ready to dive headfirst in to the next book! The UnLove Me Trilogy is filled with secrets, danger, murder, suspense, raw passion, tears, anger, and everything that makes a book great! This was my first time reading anything by the author and I can't wait to read more of her work! ...more

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Oct 26, 2015 Lisa rated it it was amazing

Man, what a book! I'm guessing the author has a Son's on Anarchy obsession - no problem, I did too! This thing just kept going and going and I wanted so badly to skip several parts, but was afraid I would miss something crucial. I just didn't think it would ever end!!! I am glad, though, I didn't skip anything. This one was so busy!
Eden and Jasper (Angel), Lilly and Vinny (Zippo), & Hilary and Mason (Reaper) all grew up together and were high school sweethearts. Eden, dealing with an extreme Man, what a book! I'm guessing the author has a Son's on Anarchy obsession - no problem, I did too! This thing just kept going and going and I wanted so badly to skip several parts, but was afraid I would miss something crucial. I just didn't think it would ever end!!! I am glad, though, I didn't skip anything. This one was so busy!
Eden and Jasper (Angel), Lilly and Vinny (Zippo), & Hilary and Mason (Reaper) all grew up together and were high school sweethearts. Eden, dealing with an extremely abusive and psychotic father, ran away to save her life. Everyone else left behind was devastated without knowing what happened to make her leave without telling anyone. I'm not going to give many details in this review because there are so many to make the story complete, but Eden had a very good reason for leaving and not coming back until she did. Only the girls knew what happened and kept her secret, which caused them their own hell with their men in the long run.
Angel seemed like he was going to be amazing until he got a few surprises at a bbq. Then, he turned into a major dick. Kind of reminded me of Jax on SOA.
Zippo, well, he's just an all-around mess. I completely side with Lilly all the way through their story. I loved her character, I just wish she would have shut it all down in the beginning, but she stepped up and surprised me.
Reaper, jeez...he's a prick and a psycho. Too insecure, too possessive, and the first time he got physical with Hilary, I didn't like him. And Hilary was a Godsend to everyone!
These guys, I loved to hate them and couldn't help but feel sorry for them.
This story is pretty gruesome, but easy to skip over those paragraphs if it's too descriptive, and it's pretty awesome. This isn't my usual style of reading, which makes me want to pat myself of the back that much more for finishing it.
The ending isn't what I was hoping for, but again, it was a surprise.
I hardly ever comment on the editing on books I've read from Netgalley, in fact, I never have. But, I had to re-read several parts because there was zero separation from one character to the next and it really threw me off. And, about 3/4 of the way through, there was the Epilogue. Not even close to the end. Then, at the end, there was another Epilogue. All of this really bugged me, but doesn't affect my opinion on the story.
I'll definitely be reading more from this author in the future. She is full of surprises.
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Jan 17, 2016 Els rated it really liked it

Wow !!! Wat een trilogie! Het is zo mooi, zo rauw, zo gruwelijk, zo aangrijpend, zo ruw, ... echt een totale mix aan gevoelens. Het ene moment teder en liefdevol, het volgende het totaal tegengestelde.

Wow!!! How I enjoyed this trilogy! It was so beautiful, so raw, so horrible, so breathtaking, so rough ... a true cocktail of emotions. One moment there was love and tenderness, the next the complete opposite.

Een mooie cover en knap gevonden titels.

A nice cover and touching titles.

Elk boek vertelt Wow !!! Wat een trilogie! Het is zo mooi, zo rauw, zo gruwelijk, zo aangrijpend, zo ruw, ... echt een totale mix aan gevoelens. Het ene moment teder en liefdevol, het volgende het totaal tegengestelde.

Wow!!! How I enjoyed this trilogy! It was so beautiful, so raw, so horrible, so breathtaking, so rough ... a true cocktail of emotions. One moment there was love and tenderness, the next the complete opposite.

Een mooie cover en knap gevonden titels.

A nice cover and touching titles.

Elk boek vertelt het verhaal van een van de koppels. Sommige delen worden herhaald omdat ze vanuit een ander standpunt zijn geschreven. Telkens weer ontdek je een ander geheim en er zijn wendingen die je niet zag aankomen. Het is erg moeilijk om het boek weg te leggen maar jammer genoeg moet een mens nog andere dingen doen dan enkel lezen.

Each book tells the story of one of the couples but parts are repeated because they are told from different points of view. Each time you discover another secret and there are a lot of twists you didn't see coming. It was very difficult to put the book away. Unfortunately people need to do other things than read.

Wat ik soms wel een beetje te vond, was het gebruik van het f*** en het s*** woord. Ok, ze passen wel in de context maar het hoefde niet echt zo vaak, in mijn ogen. Ook was er een actie waar ik vond dat ze het anders hadden moeten aanpakken en waar de mannen veel te laks waren.

There were only two things that disturbed me. One was the very frequent use of the f¨¨¨and the s*** words. I admit the were needed in the story but there was, in my opinion, no need to use them so often. The second thing is about a lack of action by the men in a certain situation. I don't understand why they didn't act differently.

Conclusie

Voor mij een super goed boek. Het einde bracht me tot tranen, maar sommige situaties deden me bijna kotsen terwijl andere mijn hart deden smelten of bloeden. 4,5 sterren.

For me a very, very good book. It had me in tears at the end; it had me wanting to barf sometimes and it made my hart melt or bleed at other occasions. 4,5 stars. ...more

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Nov 16, 2015 Heather 123 rated it did not like it

I think there were major formatting issues with this book...or at least the copy I received. There was no transition from book 1 to book 2 to book 3. You were reading, turned the page and suddenly the next chapter was in another character's point of view.

Speaking of points of view, it changed too many times and several times without warning. You would be reading from one person's perspective and literally the next sentence is someone else's point of view yet there was nothing to warn you this tr ...more

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Nov 04, 2015 Kel (Faerie-bookworm) rated it really liked it · review of another edition

Shelves: read-2016, romance, suspense, mc-bikers, box-set, netgalley, reviewed, kindle

Title: Unlove Me - The Angels Warriors Complete Trilogy
Author: Dawn Martens
Genre: Romance/Suspense
Format: Ebook
Pages: 480
Rating: 4

Main Characters: Eden, Jasper, Hilary, Mason, Lilly, Vinny

Summary: Love is hard when there are secrets and lies. Eden, Hilary and Lilly are best friends from practically birth. Jasper, Mason and Vinny have the same relationship, best friends. As they all hang together as childern, playing and rough housing, crushes happen. Once high school starts and they start growin ...more

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Feb 23, 2016 AprilA rated it did not like it

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Aug 11, 2015 Davona rated it did not like it

Royally pissed off...what kind of ending was that?? If anything Mason shouldve died since he was the biggest prick!! && Hillary should have had Masons ending! He ends up being the best of the best...bleh

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Sep 21, 2018 Tina rated it it was amazing

Shelves: dawn-martens

UnLove Me is The Angel Warriors MC Trilogy box set that includes UnKiss Me, UnTouch Me and Unbreak This Heart. This MC series is full of drama, lies, deceits, anguish, torment, cheating, love and lust. It intertwines dark secrets that could potential destroy everything and everyone. The decisions to protect & lie evolved like a snowball and affected several lives. If you are looking for an MC romance that is gruesome and NOT filled with glitter, rainbows and happily ever-afters this book is ...more

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Apr 14, 2018 Nerissa rated it did not like it

Shelves: did-not-finish

so badly written. Such a bad story line. no realistic character development. Stilted conversations. Weird actions and behaviors - unrealistic... but, i'm only 5% or so in... i'll keep trying. 15% through and the story and feelings are just all over the place. The characters are all going on 5 years old with the way they are behaving and acting and feeling. The memory flashbacks are just weird. THe plot already has big holes... But for some reason.. i'm going to continue but have dropped my ratin ...more

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Sep 25, 2017 Jade rated it it was amazing

WOW! This book was all kinds of amazing! I was on the edge of my seat just wanting to know what was going to happen next and when I thought I had it all figured out... I was so wrong. The ending had me crying so much I had to stop reading before I could continue... I just loved it!

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Nov 01, 2015 Abbie rated it liked it

Shelves: z_2015-november, affair, alpha-male, baby, canada, childhood-friends, drugs, flashback, kidnapping, kindle-read

This is a tough one to read and then review. Possible spoilers and long windedness ahead...

**If you want to read a book for entertainment or an escape, I don't recommend this.
When it comes down to it, I didn't "enjoy" reading this. It was sad and upsetting for pretty much all 3 and the 3.5 novella that is a separate book from this trilogy. It was not a DNF for me and I barely skimmed through a page, but I also wanted to get it over with and end the sadness. It upset me personally (on to that re ...more

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Mar 02, 2016 Jen Wildner rated it really liked it

UnKiss Me

I'm not a huge fan of MC, I've only read a few but I liked this author's writing style in another book I read. And wow, I am so glad I did. I fell in love with Eden from the very beginning. She is one of the most selfless, strongest heroines I've ever read. Not many woman could do the things she does, give up the things she did, and still be able to love with all her heart. Jasper seems pretty swoon-worthing but he has his moments, just like any other guy. I loved reading the flashbacks UnKiss Me

I'm not a huge fan of MC, I've only read a few but I liked this author's writing style in another book I read. And wow, I am so glad I did. I fell in love with Eden from the very beginning. She is one of the most selfless, strongest heroines I've ever read. Not many woman could do the things she does, give up the things she did, and still be able to love with all her heart. Jasper seems pretty swoon-worthing but he has his moments, just like any other guy. I loved reading the flashbacks from their childhood and getting to know all the characters along the way. There are six of them total and they all are equally important. I laughed, I got very angry, and my heart broke but that's good, it means the author did her job. I felt so many emotions reading this book and I'm still thinking about how things played out, how things could've been different, and how far a person will go for love. Amazing job Dawn!

UnTouch Me

What the what?? Vinny, Vinny, Vinny!! I can't shake my head at him enough. A part of me loves him another part of me wants to rip his nuts off!! Okay now that is out of the way...wow, Dawn really knows how to destroy someone's life, she is an evil mastermind, I am convinced of this. Lilly and Vinny are never happy unless they are having sex. How long can a relationship last when you are broken up as much as you are together? Apparently Vinny doesn't understand what love is until it's too late. I feel for Lilly and their relationship only proves secrets always come out and when they do things are ten times worse than the truth ever would have been. Could Lilly and Vinny have had a strong, unbreakable foundation if Lilly hadn't kept Eden's secrets? Who knows but then we wouldn't have this awesome story and get to laugh, want to throw the kindle, and even think of ways to get Dawn back!! I loved how involved Dawn got my emotions into this story, I felt something until the very end. I loved reading more about all the characters in this book and getting a better insight to what they were thinking. Amazing job Dawn!

UnBreak This Heart

I am not quite sure how to start this review. I enjoyed getting to know these characters and was excited to find out how it all was going to end but at the same time I hated seeing it end because I wanted more! The next thing I have to say is all of the bad reviews and people complaining, shame on you! It takes a lot to write a book and sometimes the author can't control what happens, I will say one thing to you all, if you felt that strongly about this book then she did her job, she made you feel.

I was SHOCKED at a lot of things through this entire trilogy but nothing could have prepared me for Hilary and Mason's story. I liked Hilary and she knew what she wanted and exactly how to get that, to a point. She was a lot like Eden a very selfless person who loved harder than most. In the end it was her love that ruined her. Mason was a mystery to me the entire time and I only felt sick after reading all of his 'dealings' or whatever you want to call them. I wish we could have had more insight to his upbringing maybe that would have explained the way he just lost all emotion and let someone else take over his life. Hilary and Mason thought they could have forever but with all the secrets they harbored could that ever be a reality? I won't write spoilers just know that sometimes when life gets hard remember who you truly love. To say Dawn ended this with a bang would be an under statement, she KILLED the ending. I am still shaking days later and can't get this story out of my head. I loved it, I hated it, I want to do unimaginable things to Dawn. My heart is still lying on the floor somewhere and my head is shouting to get up and give her a standing ovation for evoking so many feelings and emotions from me. We get all the answers we've been searching since UnKiss Me, some answers aren't the ones we wanted but the characters decide what happens, not us. ...more

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Nov 17, 2015 Brigitte rated it it was amazing

Shelves: adult, netgalley, romance, angels

This trilogy is the story of three girls who grow up together and form a long lasting friendship. They befriend three boys who are best friends too and their journeys bring out some very palpable emotions. It's a very gripping story!

Book 1 - Unkiss Me - Eden and Jasper aka "Angel"

Eden and Jasper are very close to each other. They have some fun time and Jasper knows that they will end up together when they are older. They start a promising relationship as they become of age but then one day, ou This trilogy is the story of three girls who grow up together and form a long lasting friendship. They befriend three boys who are best friends too and their journeys bring out some very palpable emotions. It's a very gripping story!

Book 1 - Unkiss Me - Eden and Jasper aka "Angel"

Eden and Jasper are very close to each other. They have some fun time and Jasper knows that they will end up together when they are older. They start a promising relationship as they become of age but then one day, out of the blues, Eden disappears. Jasper doesn't have a clue of her whereabouts or why she left. She is running away from a dangerous home life but when she returns to see Jasper, she is devastated by what she sees. She leaves once more, taking her secrets with her. When she eventually returns, she seeks help and protection from the Angel Warriors. This MC is no longer what it was. It now revolves around helping the community. Eden is determined to avoid Jasper at all costs. When the Angel Warriors arrive on her door step. She is faced with Jasper aka Angel and now the President of the MC. From here on, it's a real emotional rollercoaster. They still love each other but the secrets they are both hiding could keep them apart forever. More to the point, are they brave enough to share these secrets with each other? What are the consequences if they do? This is one story which had me enthralled and I felt what they were both going through.

Book 2 - Untouch Me - Lilly and Vincent aka "Zippo"

Lilly and Vinni have this relationship where when things are good, they are really good but when things are bad, they get so much out of hand that they split up. They always end up together again though. Lilly is aware of Eden's secrets and has made a promise to keep it that way, difficult as it is. When Eden's secrets are revealed, Vinni loses it completely and threatens to walk away for good. The thing is that he himself is keeping secrets from Lilly. Their relationship is now at a point of no return. Lilly kept her friend's secrets out of loyalty. Now that Vinni is aware, instead of coming clean, he turns his back on her. Now is the time when she needs him the most but secrets have a way of finding their way out and when they do, Lilly is crushed. Will they be able to forgive and forget or live in misery?

Book 3 - Unbreak this Heart - Hilary and Mason aka "Reaper"

Hilary and Mason are childhood sweethearts who are now married. They have a comfortable and happy relationship until Mason becomes embroiled in some dark and dangerous activities. His personality changes with unreasonable behaviour and their relationship takes a turn for the worse. There are some misunderstandings which make matters worse. At this point, Mason's behaviour leaves a lot to be desired. Hilary ends up leaving and helping Eden. When she returns around the same time as Eden, nothing has changed between her and Mason. They remain hostile towards each other despite how they really feel. While all this is going on, someone is threatening to bring down the MC. All three girls are suddenly faced with mortal danger. Will the boys manage to save them? This part is heartwrenching.

This trilogy is about the one true love and the loss of loved ones. There is danger, betrayal, violence, vengeance, deceit, regrets and worse of all, the damage caused by the secrets. I would fully recommend to those who like hot romances with sexy bikers and foxy ladies.

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Jun 18, 2015 Sue rated it really liked it

It is very hard to un-kiss someone, un-love someone and un-care about someone especially when you have the history that these two share.
Angel and Eden have known each other since childhood and along with their group of friends and "frenemies", they have shared those unique experiences that kids have growing up that cement their relationships forever...no matter what.
But...what happens when there are too many secrets, lies, misunderstandings, backstabbing and evil doers who want nothing more than It is very hard to un-kiss someone, un-love someone and un-care about someone especially when you have the history that these two share.
Angel and Eden have known each other since childhood and along with their group of friends and "frenemies", they have shared those unique experiences that kids have growing up that cement their relationships forever...no matter what.
But...what happens when there are too many secrets, lies, misunderstandings, backstabbing and evil doers who want nothing more than to see Angel and Eden suffer and NEVER be together?
Eden and her little sister suffered more than any two little girls should ever have had to, and yet even after years away from the terrors in their lives, it is not over. Someone is after Angel and trying to ruin him and his club...and for all his good intentions (having an MC that serves and protects rather than rape and plunder), he just can't get a break...in life or love.
This is the first book in a new trilogy by Dawn Martens and it is fast paced, mysterious, sexy and at times downright vicious and mean. It explores a group of bikers who want to take care of innocent women and children who are victims of abuse and for the most part it is well written and engaging. It ends on a huge cliffhanger but thankfully I have the second book ready to go!
Book 2 is Lilly and Zippo/Vinny's story...plus we get a few more answers to questions and secrets that were not yet revealed in the first of the series.
UnTouch Me is like an emotional train wreck of a story...a cross between a biker book, murder mystery and angsty romance/melodrama all rolled into one...and again the ending leaves us with more questions and there were definitely a few WTH moments in there as the "bad guys" are slowly unveiled and what is surely the lead up to a big bang of a climax in the final book.
Babies, cheating, jealous rages, revenge and deep emotional connections made this one difficult to get through...I was hoping for some relief but my feelings were all over the place reading this book. I felt sorry for characters that I should have hated and I was disgusted with the behaviors of those who I should have felt empathy for! All I can say at this point, is bring on book three and hope my poor heart is made happy at the end!
The third book in this emotional and action packed trilogy will answer every and all questions about what happened, who did it and why.
This is Hilary and Mason's side of the story (each book features one of the couples and is told from their POV) and as with the first two books, it is so full of lies, revenge and dysfunctional family drama, that I was left drained by the time I finished reading.
The ending was slightly anti-climatic (you could sort of figure out that someone was not completely dealt with before the explosive finish) and all the ends were tied up neatly (with one very tragic and sad exception), but for the most part this was an interesting and very different saga of families living on the edge...girls who grow into women and having to learn that life can sometimes be very harsh if you are female... and boys who grow to be strong but sometimes dangerously volatile men.
If you loved Dawn Marten's other books, you will surely want to add this trilogy to your collection. Just be forwarned that is it brutally violent, very emotional and at times hard to read without getting upset. A glass of booze and some tissues would be handy.
I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.

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Mar 07, 2015 Renee Entress rated it it was amazing

Shelves: mc-book, read-2015, series, twists-turns, wtf, suspense

UnKiss Me (Angels Warriors MC Trilogy #1)

I was pulled right into this story. The story has laughs, secrets, betrayal, abuse, suspense and heartbreak.

Eden ran from town after dealing with the abuse of her father and the betrayal of her boyfriend. She returned later to save her little sister from abuse. Now she is back in town and her father is about to get out of jail. She needs protection. The only ones that can protect her are the Angel Warriors. The only problem is the President of the MC is UnKiss Me (Angels Warriors MC Trilogy #1)

I was pulled right into this story. The story has laughs, secrets, betrayal, abuse, suspense and heartbreak.

Eden ran from town after dealing with the abuse of her father and the betrayal of her boyfriend. She returned later to save her little sister from abuse. Now she is back in town and her father is about to get out of jail. She needs protection. The only ones that can protect her are the Angel Warriors. The only problem is the President of the MC is her old boyfriend who broke her heart. Can they set aside the past to work on protecting her in the future? What happens when all the secrets of the past come out will they fight for each other or will it all just be too much?

Lilly has been keeping everyone’s secrets. Her two best friends left town but kept in touch with her but she was not supposed to tell either of their secrets. She knows if Vinny her boyfriend ever finds out it will be the end of them. Lilly and Vinny have a crazy relationship that at times is very trying on them both. The break up and make up all the time. But when things get bad Vinny sees an old girlfriend and then his secret keeping starts. With each new break up a new secret is created and kept. What will happen when all the secrets come out? Will they ever be the same? What happens when the secret are just the tip of the crazy puzzle? Will all the players survive the aftermath of the craziness?

This story starts with Hilary and Mason’s history. All the good and bad times and what lead them to where they are today. You see a side of Mason you might not have expected. You see a side of Hilary that you will just love. She is such a great person that is treated badly and takes it until she is to broken to take any more. She will do anything to help her friends and steps up when they need her. You also see how everything started in the past and why things are the way they are today. It also moves on from the kidnapping. Who is involved and why. You get more background on each of the couples. Angel calls in people to help him get the woman back but will it be enough? Or will all the couples be broken in the end? Can they ever recover from not only the past but choices each of them made to get to where they are today? Who will come out as couples? Who will be broken forever?

I loved these characters. I have to say the ending was not at all what I was expecting. I was not happy with one of the couple’s outcome. When you read you will understand. There are some tear filled moments and some anger filled moments in this story. But all in all I felt I was able to connect with the characters and the story was a great read.

I highly recommend this book and can’t wait for the next story from this author.
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Oct 22, 2015 Doris rated it really liked it

Shelves: biker, net-gallery, arc

A MC book with a twist. There was a hard core dangerous MC that was run by some ruthless men. This book revolves around three different couples and the journey they take from childhood throughout their adult lives.

Jasper and Eden’s story was about the abuse that Eden had endured at the hands of her father who happened to be the VP of the notorious MC. Jasper always had eyes for Eden even as children. He loved her sassy attitude. Jasper’s father was also the MC President. There were many secrets A MC book with a twist. There was a hard core dangerous MC that was run by some ruthless men. This book revolves around three different couples and the journey they take from childhood throughout their adult lives.

Jasper and Eden’s story was about the abuse that Eden had endured at the hands of her father who happened to be the VP of the notorious MC. Jasper always had eyes for Eden even as children. He loved her sassy attitude. Jasper’s father was also the MC President. There were many secrets that these two have lived through which initially began because of her abuse that she endured from her father with the catalyst being the night that Eden saw her father kill her mother. It was Jasper who helped to turn the MC around once his father was out of the picture. He turned it into a MC that helped children. After many years apart it was because of this that Eden came back into Jasper’s life.

There was also Lilly and Vinnie who also grew up together the only difference being is that Vinnie did not really notice Lilly until his high school sweetheart went off to college. That’s when their romance grew. They too held many secrets from each other and from others within their group. It was because of some secrets that Lilly was keeping for Eden that she and Vinnie were having issues and it only grew from there. Their story brought about a lot of mixed feelings. There were times that Vinnie was my enemy number one and at other times that my heart hurt for him.

Then there was Hillary and Mason. Theirs was a volatile relationship that began in childhood also and had taken a nasty turn as Mason became more integrated within the old MC which was run by Jasper’s dad. There were so many lies and misunderstandings with these two that it was hard to keep track of. Their story also had to have moved me the most at the end. Yep, that’s when some tears came.

All six of these people lead some crazy lives both together and as individuals and they were always drawn to each other throughout their lifetimes. There were times that had you laughing and times that had you crying. They played hard and loved even harder. (wink, wink) There were definitely some pretty steamy times when it came to these people.

This book was provided as an ARC from NetGalley for an honest review.
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Nov 06, 2015 Gabbi rated it really liked it

I received an ARC through Netgalley.

This book went right into the action and it never stopped going. Eden is willingly living in a nightmare in order to protect her little sister and when she seeks help, she unexpectedly finds her past. Jasper finally finds the woman he has been seeking, but there are many misunderstandings that prevents them from moving forward.

I love reading all the flashbacks, it really demonstrates how much things have changed from the past in the group. It is especially tr I received an ARC through Netgalley.

This book went right into the action and it never stopped going. Eden is willingly living in a nightmare in order to protect her little sister and when she seeks help, she unexpectedly finds her past. Jasper finally finds the woman he has been seeking, but there are many misunderstandings that prevents them from moving forward.

I love reading all the flashbacks, it really demonstrates how much things have changed from the past in the group. It is especially true among the men: Jasper, Mason and Vinny. Even their names change. The club plus the changes in there relationships makes them all stray off path.

Although you see a little bit of everyone(the HS gang), the first book focuses on Eden and Jasper relationship, the second on Lilly and Vinny and the third on Mason and Hilary. All the couples keep on hiding secrets or avoiding their problems, but it all comes back to haunt them.

I have love for all the characters but I especially love G-baby and Mrs. Shepard. G-baby is an old soul and Mrs. Shepard is old and allows herself to act any way she wants to act. She acts like a big bad wolf dressed in grandma's cloth but you can still hear the care in her bark. She sure has the funniest stories or rather she makes the funniest stories.

Luckily I read Unlove Me, it contained all three books and I wasn't waiting too long to settle the cliffhangers. Although I did have to wait some time but that just motivated me into reading as fast as I could because I wanted to know what was going on.

The big reveal at the end surprised me and everything that happens afterwards surprises me. It was sad but I understand how everything worked out better this way than to the alternative.

My favorite book was UnKiss Me, Eden and Jasper's story. Although I rate Book Two and Three Four stars, Book One is five stars, it's the start of so much emotions and issues that all the couples have to face. It has a special place in my heart. That being said I definitely had to read Book Two or Three because the cliffhangers left me wanting more. Book Three nicely wraps up all the loose ends and resolves the relationships. In each book, you can see how all the characters mature and start learning from their mistakes but it takes a big event to get them to improve their situations. ...more

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Aug 14, 2016 LeinF rated it did not like it

Shelves: wasted-my-time

*WARNING* I'm probably gonna be pissed off and cussing somewhat with this book because I totally wasted my time reading this sorry excuse shit show of a book.

Skip this series if you hate stupid endings and cheaters.

First of all I totally forgot that I've already read the third book UnBreak This Heart before, and let me tell you it's still as horrible as the first time I read it. Actually the book isn't that bad, it's just that the ending horrible sucks and ruined the rest of the book for me. Th *WARNING* I'm probably gonna be pissed off and cussing somewhat with this book because I totally wasted my time reading this sorry excuse shit show of a book.

Skip this series if you hate stupid endings and cheaters.

First of all I totally forgot that I've already read the third book UnBreak This Heart before, and let me tell you it's still as horrible as the first time I read it. Actually the book isn't that bad, it's just that the ending horrible sucks and ruined the rest of the book for me. The same can be said for this book, that ending ruined this whole series. The first story UnKiss Me was pretty good. Learning about Angel and Eden and the history that the two had was sweet and the world building was good. Everything went downhill after the first story though. There was so many time I wanted to reach inside my tablet and strangle the characters for their stupidity or stab them with a rusty spoon just because reading about them were pissing me off.

Let me just say, everything comes down to the ending. If that ending didn't happen I would of had probably like this book better. Throughout the story the character that I felt the most sorry for was Hilary. (view spoiler)

Out of all the ending that she could come up with that's the one that she's gone with. No wonder the only books that I like from this author are the ones where she co-wrote with another author, seeing as the ones where she only writes are just horrible. ...more

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Oct 30, 2015 Kendra Needs rated it really liked it

WOW WOW WOW, what a great trilogy, that kept my heart pounding till the very end. UNLOVE ME by Dawn Martens is a box set of three books, UnKiss Me, UnTouch Me and Unbreak Me, that are set around the world of a motorcycle club that is based in Canada.

Each of these three books are fantastically written, the story line is very well developed and the plots are very fast paced and you cant help but fall in love with the characters/couples in this book. Books that are based around the motorcycle clubs WOW WOW WOW, what a great trilogy, that kept my heart pounding till the very end. UNLOVE ME by Dawn Martens is a box set of three books, UnKiss Me, UnTouch Me and Unbreak Me, that are set around the world of a motorcycle club that is based in Canada.

Each of these three books are fantastically written, the story line is very well developed and the plots are very fast paced and you cant help but fall in love with the characters/couples in this book. Books that are based around the motorcycle clubs, for some reason, have a hold on a piece of my heart, I just love how possessive the men are of their "old ladies", they may not always be loyal but they love their women with every beat of their hearts.

Book one is UnKiss Me, this is Jasper (aka Angel) and Eden's story, this book tore me too shreds. The love that Jasper has for Eden is of epic portions and you can see it with every word you read about them.

Book two is UnTouch Me, this is Lily and Vinny's (aka Zippo) story, this book was not as moving as the first one, only because Vinny is too stupid to see the love that Lily has for him when its right in front of his face.

Book three us UnBreak Me, this is Hilary and Mason (aka Reaper) story, this book has me torn about how to feel about them as a couple, apart Hilary is a strong confident women and could do better than Mason, and Mason well he is the strong, loud type and doesn't know how to keep his anger in check.

The start of each of these books overlaps with the first book in the series, and it is a must that you read each of these books in the correct order to understand what is going on each of the books. These books follow each couple as they deal with the secrets that have been kept and how each of them has handled and the changes the the motorcylce club goes through and how it all comes back to haunt them and destroy the lives that they all have. Will these couples end up together or are they destined to be forever torn apart????

Take the time and fall in love with UNLOVE ME by Dawn Martens, you will not be disappointed, and do take the time and read them in order. I would give UNLOVE ME 4/5 stars.

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