Alas! Mr. Bingley broke his leg just as he was about to travel to Netherfield to sign the lease papers; but surely his good friend Mr. Darcy would be willing to journey to Netherfield to take care of these tiresome legalities. Would he not? Reluctantly, Mr. Darcy agrees. Unfortunately, he is forced to travel without his trusted valet, Franklin, whose sick mother requires his presence in Derbyshire. Rather than accept a substitute valet, Mr. Darcy elects to travel alone and enjoy some rare moments of solitude.
A gentleman cannot get into fashionable clothing without assistance, so Mr. Darcy packs far simpler attire than is usual for a gentleman of his standing. As a result, Mr. Darcy is mistaken by Netherfield’s servants for Mr. Bingley’s man of business. Outraged, Mr. Darcy opens his mouth to explain who he really is, but then realises that this is a rare opportunity indeed, for as a simple man of business, he can spend some time in the country without being sought after by every female in the county.
Mr. Darcy enjoys his unexpected holiday in Meryton and his newly formed friendship with fellow bibliophile Mr. Bennet. He cannot remain on holiday for long, as Mr. Darcy has decided that this is the year he will wed one of the Season’s diamonds. A rational man, Mr. Darcy will choose a bride based on dowries and connections. No other merits are required, and affection is not a consideration; after all, children may be governed by emotion, but rational men have the ability to put such useless nonsense aside.
And then…Mr. Darcy meets Elizabeth Bennet. He is thrown into utter confusion; he is most powerfully attracted to her, but he knows full well that this is not rational. His entire lifetime has been a testament to his ability to remain rational, and he will not allow himself to succumb to this completely inappropriate attraction.
Poor confused Mr. Darcy! Will sensibility win out over sense? Can love triumph over such a deep commitment to reason? Read and find out!
Darcy is a rational man so he knows he can’t marry a pence less wife. He needs one with a large dowry to replace Georgiana’s dowry. This is the way of the aristocracy. Of course there is an HEA but one wonders if true love shall be a contributing factor to the end of the aristocracy. When a man in trade can be filthy rich and farms begin to not keep up with inflation, what is a rich man do?
This is not one of Ms Wallace’s better works. In trying to illustrate Darcy’s character, Ms Wallace must have pored over her Bartlett’s Quotations and inserted every quote she could find about rationality. The quotations do very little to make Darcy sound learned, but they do suggest that the author wanted to show off her access to philosophers’ works.
It had a great start, but after the first third it fizzled quickly. Lots of separation for ODC. Lacked focus as the plot seemed to wander aimlessly, such as when it started focusing on Richard’s brother.
This was more focused on Darcy. I liked how Caroline was handled. It was a situation where the new husband has to prove his new wife is his priority and not his birth family. And I love that because I think a new husband should make it clear his wife is his new priority and focus. Darcy was rational. Blah. Boo. I still like how this played out compared to canon. He doesn't lurk on the edge of rooms thinking Elizabeth secretly loves him. They actually have a friendship. Because he friendzones her. That's the Blah. Also Mr. Bennet is less indolent. He immediately tells Elizabeth that Darcy is not husband material for her.
I was surprised out of my tiny little mind that a modern P&P variation, with low/no angst could resonate so well.
It's not verbatim but it sticks very close to canon. This is the first drama-light variation that I've liked It's not boring, the characters truly interact, and there are plausible, well written and plotted alternatives to the original story's angsty plotlines.
The author did an excellent job with spelling, grammar, and period correctness. The only fault I found was with the slightly sloppy epilogue.
Entertaining story. I liked the different view on how darcy met Elizabeth without the presence of the bingley family and the pressure of everyone knowing he was rich. I also enjoyed the debates between E and D.
Another very well written quite different variation. Enjoyed Mr Darcy being incognito at first. His struggle and success. Poor Elizabeth. The sadness she endured. HEA.