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80 pages, Paperback
First published January 21, 1993
When shall we ever begin?See what I mean? Pretty much all of the poems feel like this, with varying degrees of obviousness regarding exactly what the topic is. (I'd probably place "Work" around the middle--easy to see but it doesn't hit you over the head with it) Their execution is really very good, smooth and readable with some clever and intriguing turns of phrase giving sparkle to each poem. This sort of domesticity polished to a mirror-hard philosophical reflectiveness just isn't my cup of tea. I did really like "Maltese Fireworks" which opens, "Every field a crop of stone / every post a birdtrap" and ends
Swept mercilessly clean
there's a billion billion stars
in the skylight, and our chairs
make their strict companionable arc
with the fire. We're ready for work,
it's the moment we've been waiting for.
After a day of trial and error,
triumph and tantrum,
our baby's down and milky calm.
Our Lady of Gunpowder"On the Shiants," and "The Weight of It" ("You come out into the floating garden / of early October, there's a mist on your cheek / and you say it's autumn, what have I done"). When we get down to it, I think this is a classic case of "it's not the book, it's me", a collection of perfectly fine, possibly even great, poems that just were not what I want to read.
blooms on the horizon,
a brief red oval
in a circlet of stars.