The Kingdom Lights by Steven V.S.

Dec 29, 2014 NReads rated it really liked it

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4.3 FLOATY STARS!

First of all,look at this awesome cover.I think it is so simple,yet so greatly done and it fits the content of the book.So great job on the cover!

The Kingdom Lights is a middle grade fantasy filled with magic and floaty cities and awesome creatures.I must say the plot is not very unique and to be honest very similar to Harry Potter.This is somehow the main reason that got me into reading this book.

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Oct 14, 2014 Amber rated it it was amazing

Shelves: ebooksiown, indiereads4review

I received a free copy of this ebook in exchange for an honest review.

Celes Vales lives an average life with his mother and sisters. That all changes on his twelvth birthday when he finds out he has magic within him and is sent to a magical school in the floating city of Gardarel to learn how to wield it properly. But several people don't want him around including his cousin Sam who treats him miserably. When he and his newly-obtained friends uncover a sinister plot to destroy Gardarel in the ki ...more

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Nov 07, 2014 Ludovica rated it liked it

Shelves: light-read, reviewed

I received a copy of this book in exchange for a review. I have done my best to review it honestly.

First of all, I would like to point out that I did like the book and, for the most part, enjoyed reading it. However, I found it to have just as many positive than negative aspects.

Some of the things that bothered me most were:
1. The story felt like I had read it a hundred times before. Literally, a synopsis for Harry Potter could fit just as well: regular boy finds out on his birthday that he is i I received a copy of this book in exchange for a review. I have done my best to review it honestly.

First of all, I would like to point out that I did like the book and, for the most part, enjoyed reading it. However, I found it to have just as many positive than negative aspects.

Some of the things that bothered me most were:
1. The story felt like I had read it a hundred times before. Literally, a synopsis for Harry Potter could fit just as well: regular boy finds out on his birthday that he is indeed a very special wizard. During the following year, he manages to catch up to a world of magic, make friends, get stuff done, and save the world from an evil psychopath.. all of it while pointlessly fighting a first-class bully and attending magic school. I mean, come on.

2. I feel like the world the author had created was the most interesting part of the story, but it was barely developed. I would have loved for the characters to maybe end up in a history lesson in school where we would learn more about the War of the Wardens, or why the magic world is all on some Floating Cities above the Ground World, or why there are specific types of magic associated with specific people, or more about the Caridan's Order, etc. I would have loved to know more about the Flare Crystals as well and how does it work to produce and maintain stones that trap magic. That sounds like fun to me!

3. On the same note, I thought all the way to the end of the book that characters maybe will still have time to get some depth.. but they didn't. They all appear to be so black and white that even those characters I could tell were meant to be grey, were going from black to white, to black, to white again, with no shading whatsoever.
Also, most of the characters basically disappear when they are not needed and have no further sense in existing than advancing Celes' plot -- Imogen, for example, but also Manon, Adam, Arthur, Patrick and Saunders.. and don't get me started on Celes' family!
(I seriously think that the character I enjoyed most was Caridan's statue. I am not kidding.)

While I do understand this is a middle grade book and therefore can't become a heavy reading, I don't think a couple more chapters of development, for both characters and world, would have wasted it away.

I don't want to drag this review too long, so I'll cut it short here. In substance: I liked the book, it was fun and short, and the story was good enough to read it during midterms' week. This is definitely a one-time read for me, but I would probably recommend it to children, young teenagers, and anybody who likes a good and easy fantasy read. ...more

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Nov 05, 2014 Salman Mehedy Titas rated it it was amazing

Recommends it for: Fantasy Lovers, Young-Adults, Children

Recommended to Salman by: Tta

Shelves: fantasy, children, steampunk

To start off, I know this has nothing to do with the story, but this is one pretty book. I mean right from the cover art to the font and all the chapters, especially the beginning of the chapters, is remarkable. Beautiful.

Now onto the story. The story takes place in the flying cities above Surface World (Earth, yes our one). Celes Vale is the son of a smith, who's overshadowed by his powerful uncle and talented cousin. He wishes to become an Invoker (magician) but that was just wishful thinking ...more

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Oct 10, 2014 Steven V.S. rated it it was amazing · (Review from the author)

A good read. get it? sorry, had to... :D

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Oct 23, 2014 Ronel van Tonder rated it it was amazing

Shelves: fantasy, reviewed

The Kingdom Lights is a YA Fantasy set in the realm of Gardarel. This mystical floating city is the home of Celes, a boy that discovers he’s an Invoker capable of powerful magic. Celes is sent to study magic at a school in the Kingdom Lights. Besides struggling with a new school and trying to make friends while avoiding making enemies, Celes finds himself in the middle of an insidious plot that threatens his entire world.

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Mar 22, 2015 gio rated it it was ok

Shelves: netgalley-edelweiss

*I received an ebook copy of this book through Netgalley in exchange for an honest review

~~"Yer a wizard Harry.~~

This book had a cute, interesting premise. However I had a big problem with how the plot and the concept were developed, because, well, I saw too many references to Harry Potter here.

1) 12-year-old boy discovers he is some kind of wizard, goes to a magical city to learn how to control his magic, makes some friends and enemies on the way and tries to stop someone from destroying his world ...more

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Oct 21, 2014 Dixie Conley rated it really liked it

Shelves: reviewed

I received an electronic copy of this book in exchange for a review.

Excellent world-building here. The complexity of this world is staggering, but it's revealed subtly, with references to greater mysteries yet to be told.

The story is of a boy who has magic power unlocked and who then becomes a student in a higher society. Both lauded for this extraordinary achievement and discriminated against for his lowly background, he manages to stay afloat in his new circumstances. But there's a larger plot ...more

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Dec 01, 2014 Mark rated it it was amazing

Shelves: mystery-thriller, fantasy, owned, young-adult, fiction, steven-vs, science-fiction

What a read! :)

Floating cities + unusual creatures and characters + magic = my perfect combination of elements for a good YA read. That sums it up why I enjoyed reading this novel. :)

This novel chronicles the story of 12-yr old Celes, a Midgard-born young lad who was sent to study magic in Gardarel, a place so different from where he grew. Due to some turn of events, Celes discovered that he is capable of doing powerful magic which in turn became useful in him saving the world where he grew.

The What a read! :)

Floating cities + unusual creatures and characters + magic = my perfect combination of elements for a good YA read. That sums it up why I enjoyed reading this novel. :)

This novel chronicles the story of 12-yr old Celes, a Midgard-born young lad who was sent to study magic in Gardarel, a place so different from where he grew. Due to some turn of events, Celes discovered that he is capable of doing powerful magic which in turn became useful in him saving the world where he grew.

The novel got me hooked immediately after I started reading it. I like how the storytelling was to the point and not dragging making it very easy to read. It flowed smoothly. I also how the storytelling made me feel like I was one of the students in Gardarel watching Celes' every move and becoming his shadow wherever he goes without him knowing and meeting his friends that he met and rooting for him on his fights.

The story is fast pace but the author made sure that all major details were not left out making it as concise as possible.

What is very commendable with the book is its character development and world building. The idea of having floating cities with unusual characters and creatures plus magic might seem to be a very complicated and complex thing to read considering all the things that needs to be explained. The author was able to pull it through. I like how the author was able to explain things in the world he created in a way that is easily understood that even non-fantasy readers will be able to get through. The terms used where not overwhelming making you not to back read while reading it. Loving the book, I just wish there were more back stories to some of the things mentioned in the book for some of the discussions lightly touched those areas. The discussions made though, were enough to understand the whole story.

The characters were portrayed in a very natural manner. I like the idea that the characters seem to not follow certain lines when they say something. The actions between characters are so natural making you feel, like I said previously, like a part of the book. I like how the main character, Celes, grew from being a timid boy to him finding his own strength. Unlike other books, all the other characters grew with the main character too. The novel was also able to emulate how a normal household and school atmosphere goes and the feelings that each character is displaying on those instances became so surreal and believable. I also like the different set of characters and creatures that were played out for the book for it made the storyline more intense. The characters were a mixture of funny and serious individuals of different backgrounds making the novel even more memorable.

Overall, the novel is a fresh coming of age story of a young boy coming to terms with his fate while at the same time trying to find himself. His road going through it rough but with the help of his friends and family he was able to get though it. There's that foundation of love and trust as the main thrust of the story. Being a children's/YA book I also like how the novel stayed away from all those too much violence and profanity that is slowly becoming a norm in that genre.

I can't help but remember myself watching Harry Potter, Narnia, City of Ember and the Japanese animated movie Laputa: Castle in the Sky while reading this book. And I like that feeling. Watch out for this book's ending for it is completely unexpected.

A book 2 maybe? ;)

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Dec 08, 2014 Heidi rated it liked it

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Celes Vales lives an average life with his family or so he though. That all changes on his twelfth birthday when he finds out he has magic within him and is sent to a magical school in the floating city of Gardarel to learn how to use it properly. But several people don't want him there and around including his cousin Sam who treats him miserably. When he and his new friends uncover a sinister plot to destroy Gardarel in the kingd Independent reviewer for Paranormal Romance and Authors That Rock.

Celes Vales lives an average life with his family or so he though. That all changes on his twelfth birthday when he finds out he has magic within him and is sent to a magical school in the floating city of Gardarel to learn how to use it properly. But several people don't want him there and around including his cousin Sam who treats him miserably. When he and his new friends uncover a sinister plot to destroy Gardarel in the kingdom lights, can Celes stop the ones behind it before it's too late

When i received this book i immediately though of Harry Potter it had the air the mystery and magic just like it then a few chapters in i got disappointed although this book is well written but it really fell short of something that could have been great,

I was bothered by the fact that this type of story has been done so many times now the young person finding out they have magic going to a magical school being "bullied" and there being a bad Guy/Girl, But the only one that has really succeed is i am sorry to say is Harry Potter,

The one thing that did interest me was the world the author had developed it had so much potential but even that had little there, and i really wanted to know more about the Flare Crystals and how does it work to produce and maintain stones that trap magic. also would have been interesting to no why there are specific types of magic associated with specific people?

I was really hoping towards the end of the book that the characters would have learned more and gained more depth. and what happened with all the characters well basically disappearing when there most needed Arthur, Patrick and Saunders, And please don't get me started on Celes family they were beyond!!!

I cant really say i had any favorite characters either.

Whilst this i understand is more of a teenagers book and therefore cant become to much of a heavy read, i would definitely rate this book at least one more star if there was more development with the characters and the city.

In closing its an ok read for younger generation and ones who like easy reads, but this book was not my cup of tea, i wish the author good luck and hopefully more depth in his characters in his future books

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Oct 29, 2014 Dallen rated it it was amazing

Recommends it for: Young Adults, Anyone who enjoys Fantasy or wants to escape to a new world.

5/5

Many authors nowadays have a tendency to drag out their work, sometimes not concluding a story arc in a single book. Steven VS is not one of them.

The pacing was excellent, neither too long nor too short. Characters didn't arbitrarily go places or endure events that didn't matter; all of them tied it neatly with the overall plot. The introduction to the story was brief, and readers can get a sense right away that something is going to happen. The plot clearly heads for the conclusion, but with ...more

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Oct 20, 2014 DJ rated it really liked it

Shelves: young-adult

Kingdom Lights is about a young boy and the adventure that had been thrust upon him. For what was once a recurring dream, humble Celes Vale finds that he can wield magic. Celes, through his adventure finds new friends, human and creature alike, and makes many enemies. Cannot forget to mention, the entire book takes place on floating cites. I will leave for you to discover.

I found that Kingdom Lights was a fast and easy read. Steven VS made some believable cast of characters, though I would have ...more

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Oct 24, 2014 Glenn Conley rated it liked it

Shelves: reviewed

My wife reviewed this book and told me, in no uncertain terms, that I definitely would not like this book. "Too much exposition for you," she said. So, CHALLENGE ACCEPTED!

I found this book interesting. It was a nice Young Adult story, about a young boy coming of age, and learning of the magic he possesses.

The problem with this book is that the story just wasn't interesting enough for me to care. Nobody was going to die. There wasn't any real fear in this story. No real dangerous conflict. I real ...more

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Oct 26, 2014 Jodi Woody rated it really liked it

I received a copy of "The Kingdom Lights" from the author, Steven VS, in exchange for an honest review. This book is intended for Middle grade to Young Adult. It is a good fantasy, with steampunk elements, including floating cities and magic. I really enjoyed this book. The characters are fleshed out and likable, quite a few interesting new "species" for me. If you are a parent that doesn't want your children to read anything with magic, then this one isn't for you. Absolutely no swearing, no se ...more

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Sep 23, 2014 Roberto Lovis rated it it was amazing

Contrary to many on this site, I paid good money for an E-book and am writing this review because I enjoyed the story.

Steven VS has woven a well paced and inventive tale certain to compel. The characters behave exactly how I imagine young people with magic would in the situations presented to them.

The setting is diverse and imaginative and I look forward to where the series is headed. Steven VS manages to build and reveal a world and its history whilst leaving plenty to expand on.

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Oct 17, 2014 Jade rated it really liked it

Shelves: 2014, first-reads

I received this book in the form of an ebook after entering a First Reads giveaway.

It's a wonderfully written story that almost has a similar feel to the world famous Harry Potter novels, only it's set on a city in the sky! This is a remarkably complex, yet short story with plentiful twists and turns that kept me interested all the way to the end. I loved this book, and although the ending was a slight anti-climax to the dramatic build up I would happily give it 4.5 stars and recommend it as a ...more

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Nov 26, 2014 Victor Kloss rated it really liked it

The Kingdom Lights is a fun middle-grade fantasy adventure perfectly suited to a younger audience. It is well written, with vivid descriptions of an unusual but absorbing world in the sky. There are a few parallels with Harry Potter, but this isn't necessarily a bad thing! I would definitely recommend it. ...more

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Oct 10, 2014 Daniel Patton rated it it was amazing

I was an amazing book, well written. The flow of it is what entertained me the most. The use of magic in here did not seem fantastical or out of place.

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Oct 17, 2014 Sam rated it it was amazing

Shelves: ya, steampunk

I LOVED this book! It was a great adventure from start to finish. I hope there is a sequel, I need more.

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Oct 25, 2014 Samuel Lee rated it it was amazing

Awesome book!
I would definitely recommend to my friends !

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Jan 21, 2021 BookLoversLife rated it really liked it · review of another edition

Shelves: my-tbr-pile, on-my-kindle, for-review, netgalley, netgalley-to-review

12 year old Celes is an ordinary boy, but on his birthday he finds out that he's an invoker. He is sent to Gardarel to study magic. He is ridiculed for his background by most of the students but he is so happy to be there. His talent quickly shows itself though and people son have to accept that he is special. He finds out about a plot to destroy Gardarel and has to figure out who he can trust to help him.

This took me by surprise. I'll admit that the first part of the book didn't grab me as I ne ...more

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Nov 07, 2014 Rebecca rated it really liked it · review of another edition

Shelves: fantasy, attached-to-the-book

I received this book in the form of an ebook after entering a First Reads giveaway.

World-building: 6 GLITTERING STARS OHMYGAWD I IMPLORE YOU TO WRITE MORE ABOUT THE KINGDOM LIGHTS' WORLD.

"Invoking is ancient magic where a person with a strong enough will can Invoke allies from the other worlds —from Avernus and even Solu— and bind them to himself."
-The Kingdom Lights, chapter 15

If only we get to read more about this! I want more of Celes' Invoking scenes, more about his Scripture and Kingdom c ...more

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Nov 14, 2014 June Pace rated it liked it

Shelves: ya-fantasy-reads

First I'd like to say that I've read quite a few times already on other reviews that most people find the parallel with Harry Potter to be a big mark against the story. That it's not original and too similar…? I have to tell you that I must be the only person who never ONCE picked up on Harry Potter in the least, nothing in this story takes me there or brings him to mind. Having said this, I can see where if you are picking things apart and comparing the idea that a 12 year old boy finds out he First I'd like to say that I've read quite a few times already on other reviews that most people find the parallel with Harry Potter to be a big mark against the story. That it's not original and too similar…? I have to tell you that I must be the only person who never ONCE picked up on Harry Potter in the least, nothing in this story takes me there or brings him to mind. Having said this, I can see where if you are picking things apart and comparing the idea that a 12 year old boy finds out he has magic, goes to a school for magic where he is bullied but has a couple misfit friends, and has to fend off the evil sorcerer, then I suppose the comparison could be drawn. However, for me, I just started reading and the "feeling" that comes from Harry Potter did not come up for me in the least, so the comparison, along with the apparent disappointment, never came in this regard.

The second thing that I'd like to point out is that this book is marketed as a steampunk fantasy….again, other than the floating cities, which is a hugely terrific idea, and the cover, there has been no steampunk edge to the story whatsoever, which for me, was very disappointing. I was looking for something magical in the floating city idea, and that's pretty much as far as it goes.

I also see people commenting on the current time of the story and the language. Again, I never picked up that it was anywhere near our current time. The story is written in the Victorian flavor of language, more proper English and words that suit a period piece, which is probably why it is labeled steampunk, as that would fit into that world. I took it as a fantastical, other worldly kind of tale…nothing to do with today. If anything, future maybe…but the beginning in particular reminded me of fantasy Renaissance feeling with the street markets and cobblestone…so there's that. I actually loved this style of writing.

I really enjoy the main character so much, Celes, which is the main reason I continued to read this story…..I truly wished to discover what would happen to him. For me, it wasn't as simple as "on his twelfth birthday he discovered he had magic and went to school to learn more"….this isn't actually what happened at all by the way.
The truth is that some kind of magical "myst" "fog", energy, enveloped the boy and gave him the choice to accept the gift of magic, at his own risk of course. This deal was made and the magical mysterious being that gave him this power doesn't come back into the story to explain anything ever again. Celes ventures off to this other city to learn his craft, yet the bulk of the story involves everything else BUT this. I kept thinking…when is he going to learn magic or cast a spell or something, what is the point of this whole story?

The friends are fun, the bad guys predictable and the hero…well, like I said, the hero is a very enjoyable character.
Some things are very elementary, as would be fitting of a middle grade tale, yet there is a very confusing thread running through the story that makes me believe a nine year old might get very lost…unless they are just in it for the fun and surface reading, they may be able to skim over these advancing story lines that never actually seem to develop into anything…it's like a dozen starts to an adventure. I would read and get to a conclusion or a twist or turn in the road, hope that there was magic already, there would be none, and it would just keep going….no pay off.

The ending story line gets a bit more explosive in action and anticipation of how it will turn out, so that was fun…but all in all, if it weren't for this really lovely main character and a couple of his side kicks, and the decent writing style, I wouldn't have finished.

And I must add, and this is really being picky…however, it bugged me so much I feel the need to comment. The author insisted on calling Celes Vale, "the young Vale", at every single possible time he is brought up…sometimes in several sentences in one paragraph…it REALLY stuck out and frustrated me.

In concluding, a decent story that could have been more detail delivered on some interesting ideas that never truly pan out. But the character driven action tale should totally appeal to an mg audience that can grab onto the storyline and have fun.
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Nov 13, 2015 J.B. Garner rated it liked it · review of another edition

From The Musings of a Starving Author:

It’s true. I’m a sucker for any kind of fantasy meal. The more imaginative the ingredients, the more I love it. So, when I opened up the pantry last week to find out my next meal, I was pleased as punch to find The Kingdom Lights, which promised an imaginative world, magic, adventure, and all of that good stuff. Would it live up to my expectations or join the buffet table of by-the-numbers, mediocre meals out there?

Before we cut into this particular pie, let From The Musings of a Starving Author:

It’s true. I’m a sucker for any kind of fantasy meal. The more imaginative the ingredients, the more I love it. So, when I opened up the pantry last week to find out my next meal, I was pleased as punch to find The Kingdom Lights, which promised an imaginative world, magic, adventure, and all of that good stuff. Would it live up to my expectations or join the buffet table of by-the-numbers, mediocre meals out there?

Before we cut into this particular pie, let us read the Starving Review creed, etched in the stones of the kitchen floor:

I attempt to rate every book from the perspective of a fan of the genre
I attempt to make every review as spoiler-free as possible

Lights is a sterling example of a particular problem I have run into multiple times stuffing myself at the book review table. It is a meal that hints at tremendous imagination, a deep and abiding world lore, and has a macro plot that should be gangbusters good. The issue is that there is a serious disconnect at the expository and descriptive level to actually make this imaginative world live and for the plot at the micro level to have any real pop.

I will eschew my first review instinct to compare the plot and characters strongly with a much larger, more popular fictional cuisine line and focus on the real meat and potatoes here. There’s nothing being done particularly wrong here, but there’s nothing being done particularly well here outside of the core imaginative concepts.

The world’s cultures, faiths, and institutions are hinted at but never explored at any level, despite having an excellent plot device in place to provide some proper exposition. The fantasy races introduced, even though they comprise most of the cast of characters, receive minimal description at best. The magic of the world, one of its key plot points, isn’t even explained at all until about two-thirds of the way through the book and, even then, there are two major forms of magic told to us multiple times that is never given a lick of explanation. We don’t know what’s possibly on the menu, we aren’t given any rules for dining, and we don’t even know what the other people at the table really look like. It turns a meal with hints of many exotic spices into a bland dining experience.

This lack of focus extends to the characters themselves. Outside of the main protagonist, who even then feels considerably generic, the rest of the characters, outside of one who steals the meal at the climax, feel more like tools in the plot. When they are needed, they are automatically in scene and moving the plot and, when they aren’t, they disappear once again. Again, though, there are maddening hints that if you sat the chef down for a talk and asked him about these characters, he would be able to tell you hours of information about these people, but not a drop of that permeates into the flavors of the meal itself.

It may seem I’m being very critical. Other than the fact that I am, it comes down to seeing something that could be so great, so imaginative, and has flashes of true brilliance (again, the twist in the climax was really great at times) fall so flat at the end. It’s not a bad book … it’s cleanly written if a little weak in some of its narrative and the core principles and ideas are very solid … it just comes so short of its potential and it is maddening!

In summation, The Kingdom Lights has the hint of exotic spices and imaginative ideas, but tumbles into being a mediocre, standard fantasy meal. If you are a devoted fantasy fan, you might consider picking this up eventually, when you have nothing more pressing to read. If you aren’t a fantasy fan, there’s nothing particularly worth your time here. I hope the chef takes this to heart and does a full revision on this tale, because I would love to see it reach its full greatness.

FINAL VERDICT: *** (A book with the hint of exotic spices and imaginative ideas, but tumbles into being a mediocre, standard fantasy meal.) ...more

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Nov 19, 2014 Online Eccentric Librarian rated it liked it

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The Kingdom Lights felt very much like a book in search of a more serious pedigree in a sea of fairly simplistic middle grade reads. But while not terribly written, characters were flat, the tone passive, and modern vernacular very anachronistic even for a book set in current times but with an alternate universe type of twist (read: magic). A lamentable amount of parallels to Harry Potter was also problematic.

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The Kingdom Lights felt very much like a book in search of a more serious pedigree in a sea of fairly simplistic middle grade reads. But while not terribly written, characters were flat, the tone passive, and modern vernacular very anachronistic even for a book set in current times but with an alternate universe type of twist (read: magic). A lamentable amount of parallels to Harry Potter was also problematic.

Story: Celes Vale lives on the ground with others who do not possess magic. When it is discovered that he has magic suddenly on his 12th birthday, he is sent up to Gardarel, a floating City of magic. There, while enrolled in a magicians school, he will make friends and enemies and uncover a plot by a great evil magician.

First and foremost, although this is a set in modern day but alternate universe (references are made to the our current world as ended), it read a lot like a fantasy. I am not sure the current world elements were even needed since nothing of current society remains in the book's world other than vernacular, oddly enough. It is all sketchily drawn, though, and I didn't get a feel of the setting at all. The twelve year olds talk like modern day teens, e.g., " You alright?" "That's cool!" but then summon creatures with magic and travel to floating cities. The milieu just didn't feel well thought through beyond a superficial outline.

The characters were very unemotional - reacting (if at all) on the most basic of emotions. There was no complexity whatsoever - watch ordinary 12 year olds play at a school and you soon understand that there is always a complex undercurrent going on even at that age. But not so here. The side characters were forgettable and the main character even duller. I read another review where the reviewer said that a statue was the most interesting character. I really had to agree, as sad as it sounds.

I found the worldbuilding even odder when it comes to naming. We have the unique named Celes - and he's surrounded by Sam, Adam, Jaime, Arthur, Tom, etc. The character was screaming 'special!' just a bit too obviously. And why is everyone still using fairly biblical names except one?

The plot: a mysterious old wizard, who only speaks in riddles, watches over a special boy as he grows up, who then goes to a magic school and makes friends with outcast girl and boy, and overturns a plot by an evil sorcerer while dealing with stupid adults. Sound familiar? felt just a bit too Harry Potter. There are other races/creatures that befriend our Harry here but still - up until the very end the overfamiliarity of the plot, weak characters, lack of impetus of the plot, and real world dialogue made this a hard read to really get into.

The one positive here is that the ending was completely unexpected and definitely NOT Harry Potter. I appreciated that ending but felt it was too late in coming to really redeem the book as a whole.

There was potential here and the author says that the current alternate universe setting will have a large impact in future volumes. I am hoping for better characterization next volume.

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Nov 19, 2014 Book Gannet rated it liked it

Shelves: children-s-fantasy, 3-5-stars-review, steampunk

3.5 stars. Airships and floating cities? How could I resist? I love a bit of steampunk with my fantasy, and things that fly are always a winner with me, so I had high hopes for this book. Sadly, while an entertaining enough read, it didn't quite live up to my (high) expectations.

Celes is an ordinary boy growing up on Midgard, the floating city of factories, well, until he stumbles through a window in the air, meets a strange spirit and has his magic woken. See, perfectly normal. He also makes f 3.5 stars. Airships and floating cities? How could I resist? I love a bit of steampunk with my fantasy, and things that fly are always a winner with me, so I had high hopes for this book. Sadly, while an entertaining enough read, it didn't quite live up to my (high) expectations.

Celes is an ordinary boy growing up on Midgard, the floating city of factories, well, until he stumbles through a window in the air, meets a strange spirit and has his magic woken. See, perfectly normal. He also makes friends pretty much anywhere he goes, because he's nice, and his friends come from different species too, because he's really nice. Unlike his cousin ~~Dudley~~ Sam, who's resentful and petty and friends with a bunch of bullies. Then there's the business with his magic, and the fact that he's the first Invoker from Midgard in generations, and a possible prophecy and... yeah.

This book is kind of fun with an intriguing setting, but it leans heavily on the stories that have been told before it without deviating much from the standard format. Celes isn't the brightest or sportiest, but he is special, while all the while telling everyone he isn't. He has a smart, brave female friend, a talented but timid best friend, and a sneering, well born nemesis. Then there's the building threat of the dangerous Wardens threatening to come back, and the sinister Lady Ban who seems to have it in for him. It's all nicely told and enjoyable, but it didn't grab me as much as I expected, and not just because of the strong hint of Harry Potter.

I blame the world building. There was so much potential here, so much imagination in the floating cities, but no real foundation to build them on. Why are there floating cities? Who are the Lunar people? Where did the Wisps come from? Most of this I could have accepted as just Another World stuff, except that Celes once mentions to Surface world and names the US and Europe. So if it's supposed to be our world, what changed?

Also, why wasn't Invoker magic explained earlier? It's not until Celes is finally trying to learn magic (about two-thirds the way through) that we learn that Invoking is about calling strange creatures from another realm to fight for you, like Pokémon with imps. I'd been wondering why he hadn't done anything to protect himself with little spells and the like, until I realised he couldn't.

The one thing about this book that I really hated, though, was the constant references to Celes in the narrative as the young Vale. There's something obnoxiously patronising about that phrasing that got to me. If his sisters had been around more, I might almost have accepted it, but they weren't so it was just annoying.

In all this is okay. A good enough story that starts fairly slow, but definitely builds in pace towards the end. Celes is likeable enough as a main character, if maybe a little too good, and the world holds a lot of potential. I'll be interested to see how things unfold in the next one, but I'm in no real rush to read it.

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Oct 16, 2014 V.K. Finnish rated it liked it

Shelves: middle-grade

I give 3 stars to books I enjoyed while reading, but I feel like it’s a one-time read. I’d say this one is a 3-1/2 star for me.

The Kingdom of Lights has that steampunk feel of Victorian-era-spun-into-the-future, which I don’t normally read, but as this was a middle-grade book, I gave it a try. This blends in more fantasy than normal steampunk does, and, I have to say, it works.

We follow 12-yr-old Celes as he travels to his new school, where he has to deal with the mean Marcus of the high family I give 3 stars to books I enjoyed while reading, but I feel like it’s a one-time read. I’d say this one is a 3-1/2 star for me.

The Kingdom of Lights has that steampunk feel of Victorian-era-spun-into-the-future, which I don’t normally read, but as this was a middle-grade book, I gave it a try. This blends in more fantasy than normal steampunk does, and, I have to say, it works.

We follow 12-yr-old Celes as he travels to his new school, where he has to deal with the mean Marcus of the high family Blackwood (whom Celes’s cousin seems determined to please), and where Celes and his new friends dangerously take it upon themselves to find out how to stop the evil Wardens’ plan to come to power.

The story starts with a great visual beginning that draws you immediately into the story. We meet newborn Celes Vale, nephew to the Lord Milton of the factory city Midgard, and the characters are all bursting with personality. Then things take a strongly Harry Potter turn, with a cat on a wall watching a strange old man, two people discussing the demise of a wicked “lord” and the specialness of a baby, and years passing by via photos on the mantle.

Much to his satisfaction, Celes is discovered to have inherited a magical ability and is sent off to the city of Gardarel where his uncle, the Lord Milton, lives and where he will attend the Anchor School and eventually the Lunar Academy to study magic.

After Celes arrives at school, the book loses some of its steampunk flavor, which I was actually disappointed in because I thought it was well crafted. But it stays fun with an ensemble of characters including Zephyr, a young Wisp; Imogen, a Lunar girl; and a hilarious creature duo who keep us constantly entertained. I love that the language gives a refreshing and very middle-grade slant on everyday images of things like wind and smoke. I found myself as excited as Celes at some of the amazing scenery he floats into, like flying on a barge among sky-bound city islands. The settings are definitely a strong point, an intriguing place something between Star Wars’ Cloud City and Dickens’ Oliver Twist.

My biggest issue with the book was that the story felt used. Some people won’t mind this, but it bothered me.

All in all, I wish there had been more steampunk play and more new creativity. But if you want an undemanding read, enjoyed Harry Potter, and love getting involved in a book’s setting, then The Kingdom of Lights will be a good grab! ...more

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Oct 30, 2014 Wendy C rated it it was amazing

The Kingdom Lights by Steven V.S.

The Kingdom Lights by Steven V.S. tells the story about a non-magical boy named Celes who lives with his mother and sister in the floating factory city of Midgard. After Celes turns twelve, he discovers that he does have magical abilities and is sent to Gardarel, in the Kingdom Lights, to live with his Aunt Cyra, Uncle Jaime, and cousin Sam. While there, he would attend school with his skilled cousin (who was an Invoker) and learn how to perform magic and become ...more

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Nov 25, 2014 Nancy Silk rated it it was amazing

"An Outstanding Young Adult Fantasy In The Floating City"

This remarkably written story is a fun read, in a classic British style. It's the story of a boy who receives magical powers at 12 years of age. Celes Vale lives with him Mum, Cyanna, and older sister, Marine. Their cottage is small and rustic on a floating city, Midgard, also called the Factory. Celes' cousin, Sam, already is 12 years and has magical powers, but he's not very nice since he and his family live in a higher class town, Garda "An Outstanding Young Adult Fantasy In The Floating City"

This remarkably written story is a fun read, in a classic British style. It's the story of a boy who receives magical powers at 12 years of age. Celes Vale lives with him Mum, Cyanna, and older sister, Marine. Their cottage is small and rustic on a floating city, Midgard, also called the Factory. Celes' cousin, Sam, already is 12 years and has magical powers, but he's not very nice since he and his family live in a higher class town, Gardarel, the realm of the Kingdom Lights, a long distance away. Celes' uncle and aunt, with children Sam and Alexia, are expected to arrive for a visit. Celes helps his Mum deliver her cooked meats she prepares at the local market square. It gives him an opportunity to explore around the floating city. It's crowded at the market with lots of shoppers, vendors selling goods from tightly packed stalls, and carts rattling on the uneven stone paths. There is an old stone wall around the outer city to help prevent wanderers from falling through the sky to the Surface World below. Celes makes his deliveries and then explores unknown areas, finally getting lost. The magician, Arthur, who selected Celes to have mystical powers (which no one else is gifted in his family), speaks to Celes and tells him it is time to receive his special gift before midnight when he turns 12 years old the next day. The mystic, Phoenix, will endow some of his powers into Celes. After this is done, Arthur appears again to him and tells Celes he must go to Gardarel to learn how to use his powers. He will be an Invoker, like his cousin Sam. When he arrives at Gardarel, he attracts much attention from people, some good, and some not. For a boy of 12 years, he has quite a mission and never shirks from doing the right thing, even when his life is threatened. This is a mesmerizing tale which will engross readers, even if not young. It reminds me of Willie Wonka and the Chocolate Factory as well as the spell-binding Harry Potter series. It sweeps one away to another world to travel with Celes and his friends on adventures. Extremely well written and easy to read. Highly recommend.
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Nov 05, 2014 Saritha rated it really liked it

Recommended to Saritha by: the author

I was given a free copy by the author in exchange for an honest review. I have done my best to do so.

The main character, Celes, is an ordinary boy who was born in Midgard & had resigned himself to living with factories & soot. He is a very curious child & his curiosity leads to him becoming the 1st ordinary child to develop magic. On reaching Gardarel to learn magic, he faces animosity from his cousin Sam & is sneered upon by some who want this upstart to go back. But he also makes some good fri I was given a free copy by the author in exchange for an honest review. I have done my best to do so.

The main character, Celes, is an ordinary boy who was born in Midgard & had resigned himself to living with factories & soot. He is a very curious child & his curiosity leads to him becoming the 1st ordinary child to develop magic. On reaching Gardarel to learn magic, he faces animosity from his cousin Sam & is sneered upon by some who want this upstart to go back. But he also makes some good friends who stand by him when he stumbles upon suspicious happenings. He is extremely curious & loyal to his friends. He is a likeable character & I liked him a lot.

Being an extremely curious person myself, I could easily put myself in Celes’s shoes & his need to explore & know more reminded me of my own childhood exploits, though none were as exciting as his! My favorite character would be Celes’s friend Zephyr. He is someone who stands strong & steps up to the task when needed & watches Celes’s back. I simply adored him & I could connect to him.

The story unfolded itself in a very intriguing way & it was fun to travel with Celes on his journey with magic, myths, wondrous creatures & friendship. I found the part when we’re introduced to Celes just before his 12th birthday to be extremely well written - the emotions, the want & the fear resonated within me perfectly & captured my attention completely.

Some of the parts made me laugh & some made me grit my teeth. The story flows well & makes to reader want to know what happens next & whether they would succeed. I was rooting for Celes & Zepher. I was transported to their world & I felt as though I was right beside them, experiencing the highs & lows with them!

The end is well written though I find myself curious as to what adventure will Celes find himself in next? I didn’t want the story to end & I really hope that there’s a sequel because I want more of Celes & Zepher!

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http://www.amazon.com/review/R3B8R0ZO... ...more

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