It was exhausting to read this book to say the least. It was all over the place. It's as if the author takes us on a journey inside her brain where an actual whirlwind is taking place.
You know all these teen movies where there is always this group of mean girls who treat men like hot commodity? Yeah well, Wren and her circle of best friends are just that. Wren is an obnoxious selfish manipulator. Kennedy comes off of men's misery, buys vibrators to all her female friends and Scarlett is the slut. The one who plows half of the campus.
In one word, Wren, the MFC, is an asshole. The difference between a broody MMC asshole and a plain MFC asshole is that this one is disrespectful, mean and selfish.
The book started well, really well to be honest. She is a very good author, her writing is very engaging and entertaining but the way she writes her MFCs is so bad.
Wren is so hot and cold with Miles that it's not even funny. If it were for Miles, I'd rate this book 5 well deserved stars. But Wren, man oh man, she's a bipolar with a side of schizophrenia.
This is literally her the whole book:
Mom hums, rubbing my knee. "You're a good boyfriend, Miles."
"Am I? I feel like I'm not doing enough. Every time I think we've reached a new point in our relationship, something else happens and I feel like she's pushing me away," I get out. "Every time I try to be there for her, she freaks out and runs away."
She is so mean that she keeps calling him stupid, idiot and a fucking toddler! To the extent that if she is nice, he literally freaks out thinking something is wrong. How sick is that!
I roll my eyes, dropping my hands from his face. "No, you idiot, I just mean it."
"Are you sure you're okay?" He narrows his eyes at me. "Does something have to be wrong for me to be nice to you?"
He shrugs. "No, but it's scary. It's our whole thing. You pretend to hate me; I pretend like I don't care. You bully me; I let you. It's our dynamic. When you're nice to me, I get worried."
"That's stupid," I mutter, and he just grins. I take in a deep breath.
See?! 👆🙄🙄🙄🙄
And the author doesn't know what to do with her inclusive list of CR cliché tropes which she feels the need to put in her book. With a medley of lesbians, gays, bisexuals and non-binary side characters and not to forget the "we never labeled what we are" BS thinking that she can broaden her readers diversity like that. 🙄
Things that shattered the good parts to smithereens are the following:
Her story with her ex was not elaborated. Why did her ex dump her? How did he dump her?
Why and how did his best friend Carter die? Miles was dealing with depression because of his best friend's death, wishing that it could've been him instead of his best friend. But again we don't know how he died? Why he died? And what transpired?
And again with another enigma. Her trip to Barcelona with her best friends which is not to be mentioned, and after which she stopped drinking. The author keeps dangling that carrot in front of our faces yet it is never divulged. What happened in Barcelona?
Who the hell is Gigi and why is she mentioned so much?
Last but not least, she admits she's been with 3 guys. She's been with her ex boyfriend for 4 years, she was barely 16. When the f*ck did she have the time to sleep with two more? How young was she when she did? 🤦♀️because she "claims" she's not the type to sleep around or hookup so b*tch you're telling me before you were 16 you somehow found the time to be in a relationship with two other guys when previously you said you barely had time for your best friends because all you did was train and study?! I don't get it! 🤷♀️
It's a shame because the book deals with depression and anxiety and the author is doing a great job addressing these issues. Instead of a snarky bitchy and obnoxious MFC, the author should have written a more compassionate girl who could've played a bigger and more important role in supporting him and be there for him. Instead the poor guy has been the punching bag of all her jabs, insults and disrespect calling him toddler, stupid, dumb and obnoxious. When in fact he has been one of the best college MMCs I've ever read.