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It's You, Then Breathing

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Carlos Herrera has been in love with his friend Burke Thornton for years, but as professional baseball players for the Boston Red Sox, he has never felt as if he could make his feelings known.

Plus there’s the little thing of Burke being straight.

But the Red Sox have just won the World Series, everyone’s celebrating, getting drunk, and Carlos notices that Burke keeps
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ebook, 54 pages
Published August 10th 2014 by M/M Romance Group @ Goodreads
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Gigi
I liked this, but I feel like I've read it before. And the ending left a lot of things up-in-the-air so I didn't feel very satisfied when I was finished. Double the size and add some polish and this could have been a really great read.
Brooklyn
Sep 02, 2014 rated it really liked it
Shelves: romance-mm, freebies
Too short. There is definitely more to this story than what we are given. We were teased with some issues that were never resolved. And I would have liked to see this as a full novel that shows how Carlos and Burke deal with the pressure to hide their relationship, the fallout with Carlos' parents, etc. There should have been more.
Jeanne 'Divinae'
I liked this story. I thought it was going to be an epic story. Then it ended. Oh, how I was disappointed by the end. I feel that it had great potential, it was flowing great. The story just ended so abruptly.

Will they come out their team? How will they all react? What will happen to their careers? How will Carlos’ family react? With the exception of his aunt, will they disown him? Will his brothers try to attack him?? And how about that text message Carlos received from some random friend at
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Jay Clark
I really loved the two strong, manly main characters: Carlos and Burke. Burke had parents who helped him when he first realized he was gay; Carlos had a family who reveled in his athletic fame but gave him grief for being gay. Both have to live in the closet as major league baseball pros and yet they secretly have it bad for one another. Vicktor Alexander keeps you on edge of every delicious moment of the story until Carlos confesses his love to Burke, while drunk after winning the World Series. ...more
Makhda
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3.75 stars.
This is a sweet story between two best friends that they didn't know they're in love with each other.
Thank you for sharing this with us, dear author. :)
vLadimiR
Aug 19, 2014 rated it liked it

A cute friends-to-lovers story within the realm of pro-baseball. Would love to have read about the MC's before they met though. It seems they had very different upbringings which makes for an interesting read.

The title very much reminds me of a line I heard from the movie Fever Pitch too.
Lori
Aug 16, 2014 rated it liked it
Thank you for this story...wow some super hot sexy times and friends to lovers.
Shaztwirl
Sep 02, 2014 rated it liked it
I liked it. I was prepared to love it...and then all of a sudden the story was over when i wanted, nay needed so much more!
Duck
Nothing bad about this. It was fun but felt even shorter than the 54 pages.
Julesmarie
Aug 15, 2014 rated it it was ok
Not bad for being free. The romance and the friendship both seemed to be setting up nicely, but then scheduling the rest of the day after the game got crazy and had me so confused I stopped even caring.

They've just won the world series, and in my head (tbh, I honestly know very, very little about baseball, so this really was just in my head--probably from movies...) the game happened at night. But then, as the team is trying to head to the locker room, they run into Carlos's parents, who insist
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Teresa
Sep 07, 2014 rated it it was ok
2.5 Stars - Did I miss something? Is this supposed to be part of a series? there were questions left unanswered at the end that made the whole thing feel unfinished and cut off (view spoiler). I liked the background ...more
Borderstar
A free short story from the Love's Landscape, Don't Read in the Closet 2014 event.

This was a nice little read - sweet and hot. Kind of meant to be friends-to-lovers, although considering they talked about being each others best friends, they didn't seem to know each other that well. The shower scene was pretty hot and I was enjoying the story, but then they went off to the after-party and it just kind of ended. Did I miss something? There was a text message which seemed to imply it was relevant
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Redshayne
Feb 01, 2015 rated it really liked it
Really enjoyed this story even though sports aren't usually my thing. It ended when I wasn't ready though. Hope the author decides to expand on Burke and Carlo's story it ended just as they were coming together. I wanted to know what Carlo's mother had planned too and if these guys stay in the closet! Either way I thought it was a good story with good characters. This was my first read from this author so I definitely plan to read more of his stories.
GlamLawyer
Aug 20, 2014 rated it liked it
Shelves: m-m-athletes
Good friends to lovers story with lot of tension, I like to read in those stories. Also two athletes, who live as closeted gay men. It is great but all of sudden it ends. And a lot of questions stay unanswered. That is why I can't rate it higher. Otherwise great writing and I might change my rating when there'd be a sequel. :)
Sandra
Just a smidge-a boner, NSFW (view spoiler)
Offered for FREE from the M/M Romance Group's Love's Landscapes event. Thank you too all the amazing authors who participated!
Serena
Jul 27, 2015 rated it liked it
Shelves: gr-dritc, romance-mm
Love's Landscapes Anthology Volume 9 by D.C. Williams

My Rating System:
* couldn't finish, ** wouldn't recommend, *** would recommend, **** would read again, ***** have read again.
Bergur Arnar
Mar 22, 2016 rated it liked it
I liked it, it was short and sweet. I would have liked it to be longer and I would have liked a HEA
All in all: good characters, sweet story, right amount of sex, a bit insta-love but it worked
2.6 stars
Regencyfan93
Sep 10, 2014 rated it liked it
I do love a baseball book.
Verity
Aug 27, 2014 rated it really liked it
Shelves: dritc-ll
Review to come
Kali
Aug 21, 2014 rated it really liked it
I cannot wait to read the rest of their story....some time in the very near future. *hint hint* ;-)
Sarah
Sep 13, 2014 rated it liked it
Meh. I feel like I've read a lot of this same story. In all fairness, I've read a lot in general.
melek
Nov 22, 2014 rated it really liked it
Carlos and Burke friends, both been in love with each other no. Then after Carlos wins the grand slam. Things happen, still a positive feeling they will make it but still wanted more
Chelsea
Aug 15, 2014 rated it it was ok
Shelves: mm-dritc
*2.5 stars.
cmbookdiva
Aug 16, 2014 rated it really liked it
Loved,Loved,Loved it!!
But where is the rest of it??? Vic I need the rest of it please.Boston girl needs more.
Heather
Sep 12, 2014 rated it really liked it
But, but! I wanted more! Lots and lots more!!
Maddox
Aug 27, 2014 rated it liked it
2.5 stars.
Melanie~~
Aug 10, 2014 marked it as event-stories-unread
[NOTE: I rate most writing event stories (free reads) 4 or 5 stars because of my appreciation of the author's participation and gift.]
Mackdeer
Aug 25, 2014 rated it it was amazing
I hope there is a sequel to this book.
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Vicktor Alexander “Vic” wrote his first story at the age of 10 about his youngest sister and her destruction of the world…with her breath. Much to his youngest sister’s dismay the story was a hit and became the first story of a series all dealing with the planets that were destroyed by his siblings and their strange quirks and body odors. Vic now enjoys writing about shifters, humanoids, cowboys, ...more