The writing quality of this book took a nosedive (and it wasn’t fantastic to begin with) and the plot was a snoozefest.
The inconsistencies/plot mistakes drive me nuts with these books!
- Ok so Rian didn’t know about his true parentage until grandma told him about it at which time he made a deal with Basten that he could have Sabine if he gave him his blood. Then Basten and Sabine run into the forest, have sex, and then Iyre is there to capture Sabine. And SUPPOSEDLY she knew Sabine’s location because Rian sent a messenger crow to King Rachillon? How fucking fast is this crow?? To fly to another kingdom in less than a day’s time? Not only that, but it would need a way to get through the wards, so it would need to find one of the breaches to go through, and Rian (so far as we know) only knows of one breach in the wall that took him and Basten four days’ ride to reach. It makes no sense.
- How is Basten able to talk to animals and they understand him? I thought that was Sabine’s godkiss??? And Torr is somehow literate and is able to write human letters/words with his hoof? Seems like a convenient loophole to move the plot along… reeeal convenient.
- Sabine is at a party and Artain gives her ale and she sniffs it and grimaces and pushes it back to him and asks for wine instead. Ok, now she has wine and she’s drinking it. {a few moments later} “I down the rest of my ale, then slam the flagon on a table” I thought she was drinking wine? {a few moments later} “I’ve had way too much wine” Okay so it WAS wine?
- “We’ve been caught before… you don’t remember… the altar at Lord Berolt’s funeral.” What?? Don’t you mean the altar at *Midtane*? Where Berolt was very much alive and present catching you two in the act?
- THE COIN TOSS. In the previous book, Rian says “that coin is weighted to always land on Scepter.” Well, in this book, Sabine picks Serpent, and even goes as far as questioning whether she remembered the correct side or not, and then somehow won because it landed on Serpent. Whaaaat?? When she picked Serpent I was like ha dumbass you picked wrong… but then she still won?
I hate the main characters. Hate them. Combined, they don’t have two brain cells to rub together, and they suck SO much (detailed below).
I hate Basten:
- He’s such a caveman. In a lot more ways than one. His “love” of Sabine is still just sexual only and that’s all he can freaking think about.
- “These bastards really expect [me] to comb my hair daily.” & “Fantastic. Exactly what I need right now, on top of… a fancy new title that means I have to bathe regularly.” — Heaven forbid you don’t look and smell like a sewer rat!!!
- “Whoever the former First Sword was, I hope he appreciated the luxuries bestowed upon him. Because I sure as hell don't. Give me a campfire and moss for a bed.” Ughhhh Basten is just soooo #NotLikeOtherBoys
I hate Sabine:
- Sabine at one point says, “I will never be able to take seriously a god who refuses to wear a shirt.” Honey, your boyfriend refuses to wash his ass. Sort out your priorities.
- The fae have a contest of who can clean up Vale’s Hall using their power in the coolest way(?) Which is weird in itself. And they ask Sabine to participate. She fills the hall with animals that eat all their food and make a huge mess (clearly NOT the goal of the game) yet she is declared the winner? And my favorite part - “…and then the crowd erupts.” Am I reading a Reddit post or a book?
- Sabine has no love for wildlife, it’s just a front. She will do heinous things to nature if she directly benefits from it. One, she starts a FOREST FIRE to mask her scent. Flora and fauna alike, decimated, because it gives her a slight edge in a silly competition. (And as far as I’m aware, no one makes any effort to put out the fire). Two, “I'm a monster. I got all of them except the buck killed. No. No—if anyone here is a monster, it's the man with the arrows.” Omg… the copium! It WAS definitely your fault. You forced deer to attack Artain (charge him and stab him with their antlers) and he defended himself. After the wildcat incident in the first book you swore you would never use an animal to attack someone else again because it ends up with them getting hurt or killed, yet you KEEP DOING IT. The tiger, the cloudfox, and now the deer.
- Then she uses the deer AGAIN (what, 30 minutes later?) to attack Basten. He’s trying to save her life and she has a buck stab him multiple times in the chest with his antlers, almost killing him. She cries “Why didn’t you stop? I didn’t want to do this to you!” Wow. Spoken like the abusive partner she is.
It’s probably a fool’s errand to be rooting for Rian at this point, but I am. He’s probably going to die because he’s the “antagonist” or whatever. As far as I’m concerned, this whole story is from the POV of the villains and Rian is actually the true protagonist.
Last but not least… Please, Evie, I’m begging you to say “ribs” or “stomach” or “belly” or “gut” or “abdomen” …ANYTHING besides “solar plexus” — it’s driving me insane.