Many thanks to Joffe Books for this eARC.
Didn’t live up to the hype or genre
From the book description and story premise, I expected a gripping read. Unfortunately, I got one which had me wanting to throw my tablet across the room on multiple occasions, especially in the latter 50%. Honestly, at points I found it so difficult to keep going.
This opening line had me eager for more: ‘Death is a permanent fixture in my life, but I’m not ready to shake hands with that Angel and be welcomed into its embrace.’ Sadly, the rest of the writing let me down badly. While I highlighted lots of sentences and paragraphs which stood out for me, the whole—when put together—failed.
The repetition on basic things is a huge red flag. I don’t need telling the same thing a gazillion times, let alone multiple things. Honestly, it got to the point of eye rolling and saying, ‘Give me a break!’ Then there came the twin link/psychic shares fixation, as though this happens with all twins. As an identical twin I can tell you, definitively, that is so not true. The author needs to rephrase this as ‘some twins’ or ‘between myself and Bryce’ … you get the picture.
The main character had me frustrated and was so inconsistent it was unreal. Why stay once the father died? Especially when things with her brother, who apparently couldn’t hide anything from her ever—due to the ridiculous repetition and focus on the twin link that isn’t a universal trait—managed to completely fool and gaslight her. If he took over controlling her money after dear daddy died, then Brynn had plenty of friends she could have gone to for help, even a police officer. Sad to say, this was yet another big plot point which never got a mention. None of her fluctuating responses made sense, not even when taking into account past suppressed memories.
The ending was a let down too with much left unfinished and open. Normally, I complete a read in a day or two, or sometimes three to four if life’s busy or I’m more unwell than usual. This one took me seven days of struggle. Had I not DNFd a couple of books with this publisher already, I would likely have notified them I couldn’t get through it. Had I known how poor the final 40% would prove to be I would have stopped regardless.
So why two stars and not one, I hear you ask …
I tried my best to give a bare 3 stars but my conscience wouldn’t allow me. This read has come close to destroying my love of books. Sigh. The two stars instead of one are for some of the lines/paragraphs, which deserve merit. However, the majority of the narrative left me in need of time to regroup afterward.
Despite the passive writing, which I ignored, along with the comma splices and split infinitives, as these seem to have become commonplace recently, here are some of the quotes I highlighted …
‘Sometimes, it was best not to hunt the monsters beneath the bed.’
And …
‘That part of my memory was scrubbed away, wiped clean with bleach.’
And …
‘If an eye roll could be heard, mine would have been louder than a cat in heat.’
I didn’t find this storyline full of twists at all, and everything that occurred I saw coming a mile away. It isn’t a thriller or a mystery. It doesn’t even give much information on the cult, which forms the bulk of the plot line.
When a read goes this badly, but also has some gems buried, it leaves me incredibly saddened. I so wanted to love this book and writer. The Twin gets a soft two stars. Believe me, I wish I could give it more, and I’m rooting for the author on any future books she writes. Her latent talent is obvious, and with a thorough revision this would make for a heart rending and gripping read.
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NOTE ON RATINGS: I consider a 3-star rating a positive review. Picky about which books I give 5 stars to, I reserve this highest rating for the stories I find stunning and which moved me.
5 STARS: IT WAS AMAZING! I COULD NOT PUT IT DOWN! — Highly Recommended.
4 STARS: I WOULD PULL AN ALL-NIGHTER — Go read this book.
3 STARS: IT WAS GOOD! — An okay read. Didn’t love it. Didn’t hate it.
2 STARS: I MAY HAVE LIKED A FEW THINGS —Lacking in some areas: writing, characterisation, and/or problematic plot lines.
1 STAR: NOT MY CUP OF TEA —Lots of issues with this book