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Breaking It Down

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In Breaking it Down, Rusty Barnes lays bare the lives of the vulnerable as they traverse the difficult paths of love. Short and punchy, these stories show the cumulative effects of heartbreak and simple dreams while keeping a reserve of hope in even the darkest of circumstances.
Paperback, 104 pages
Published November 8th 2007 by sunnyoutside
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Nov 27, 2007 rated it it was amazing
Shelves: books-by-friends
I had the pleasure of meeting author Rusty Barnes at the Boxcar Lounge in the East Village recently. This was the first of a new reading series hosted by Tuesday Shorts' Shelly Rich. He read three stories from his book Breaking it Down, an excellent collection of 18 flash fiction stories in a handy pocket-size paperback.

It's truly amazing what Barnes can accomplish with so few words. A story is considered flash fiction if it is not more than 1,000 words, and Barnes uses even less than that at ti
Daniel Clausen
Nov 07, 2010 rated it it was amazing
This slim volume of short stories punches way above its weight.

When I first saw the volume, tiny with multiple flash fiction entries, I thought I would finish the entire thing within an hour or so of reading. I was wrong, and it turned out to be a great thing.

Many of the stories are so lively and dense that it took two readings just to get caught up in the world. And each story, though small, is a different world. The stories don't interconnect, and you have the feeling that the author knows t
Katie Moore
Feb 25, 2008 rated it it was amazing
Recommends it for: anyone who can read
Rusty Barnes proves with this gritty collection two very important points. First, that the short story is most assuredly not a dead art form. People, you can stop spreading that lie. Second he firmly shows me, a very picky woman, that a man can write brilliantly in a female voice. Maybe, just maybe, this book has given me a little more hope for the souls of every man. It is vivid and raw, edgy yet classy. I recommend it to my tattoo artist as well as to my mother.
Jul 04, 2017 rated it it was amazing
A fantastic collection of flash, with one jewel of a story next to another. The one called "Beamer's Opera" is one of my favorite flashes of all time. Bravo, Rusty Barnes! ...more
Nov 17, 2007 rated it it was amazing
Recommends it for: everyone
Everything about this book will surprise you ~ from its slender, itty-bitty size to the way Rusty Barnes manages to craft 18 stay-with-you-forever stories in less than a hundred of those itty-bitty pages.

When the book arrived, I picked it up and thought I'd run through it quickly ~ in an evening, say. But as I read, I found myself wanting, NEEDING to slow down and wait before moving on. I read "What Needs to Be Done," for instance, and couldn't bring myself to just plunge ahead into the next sto
Jul 07, 2009 rated it really liked it
I was lucky to get a copy of this beautifully designed book. The stories don't disappoint, either. Barnes has his own voice, something hard to develop, and stories like "Beamer's Opera" and "Dance" stood out for me. Gritty, humanistic, with no pat endings. I look forward to the next book. ...more
Jan 06, 2008 rated it it was amazing
Breaking it Down is genius, sort of the drunken bastard child of Breece Pancake and Raymond Carver, and filled with drowned children, adultery, dead dogs and ultrasounds.
Greg Gerke
Aug 11, 2009 rated it it was amazing
Wonderful, gritty, and at times squimishly erotic.
Nov 26, 2019 rated it really liked it
I was so interested in reading this book I unknowingly bought it twice. These are great little slice of life stories that pack a punch.
Rusty Barnes' Breaking it Down is a book of flash fiction which explores the lives of rural working class/poor characters. Products of their environments, the characters often seem to be motivated by sex and violence. For example, the main character in the opening story titled "What Needs to Be Done" tolerates her loveless marriage by having an ongoing affair with her husband's youngest brother. In another story, "Thunder & Putsy" the main character loses his hunting dog in a violent "accident." ...more
Aug 04, 2008 rated it it was amazing
Shelves: booksoffriends
Rusty Barnes can slip into any skin. He inhabits God as He shakes some paternal passion into Pink--who's got a Harley parked outside the obstetrician's, a pregnant girlfriend in the stirrups, and an unwanted sonogram in his hand. "You are not moving, and I understand that, beause I'm finally getting through to you," says God, who could almost be leaning in the doorway with a beer, "the least little bit of knowledge has cracked your brainpan, and buddy…" Barnes inhabits a husband watching a woman ...more
Feb 08, 2008 rated it it was amazing

The grit of these stories stays with you for a long time, and better yet, these well written micro/flash stories are moving as well as unforgettable. Things are often not what they seem but in very creative ways. They can be opposite of where the reader thinks they are going or completely over the edge of the cliff the reader is balancing on.

The story "Beamer's Opera," is an amazing tapestry of work which can be viewed in more than one way. It, as all 18 of the stories in Breaking It Down, was
Xujun Eberlein
Jan 28, 2008 rated it it was amazing
Shelves: friend-s-book
Measuring in at 4 ½ by 5 ½ inches, Barnes' little book tells 18 stories that are both poignant and memorable. Barnes is a master of Flash Fiction, who says more in a paragraph than can usually be found in a page. (Read more on ...more
Sep 20, 2010 rated it it was amazing
Shelves: short-stories
Earthy, gritty, and real. These stories and the quality of the prose reminded me of Chris Offutt and Larry Brown.
Jai Clare
Dec 12, 2007 rated it it was amazing
Recommends it for: EVERYONE
wonderful characters, great prose, READ!
Jan 26, 2008 rated it it was amazing
Recommends it for: people who enjoy well-crafted, thought-provoking flash fiction
As I read—or more accurately, devoured—Rusty Barnes’ collection of flash fiction, I couldn’t help thinking of an exquisite Japanese Buddhist meal with its a tray of tiny dishes, each serving up a tidbit of austere, perfectly-crafted, and ultimately enlightening fare. Fresh images and elegant prose make a bracing contrast to the gritty and all-too-real characters who populate these brief tales. Often unable to inarticulate their desires and despair, they ultimately do find the strength to do “wha ...more
Feb 04, 2008 rated it it was amazing
Many thanks to sunnyoutside for publishing a book I can carry in my back pocket, and to Rusty Barnes for writing such a wonderful collection of stories. The characters in Breaking it Down--a collection of 18 very short stories--live on rural farms as well as behind the facade of well manicured lawns. The writing is sharp and clean, the situations often tragic, and the endings leave me touched by the humanity of characters driven to cheat on partners, ignore phone calls that may be from their chi ...more
Samuel Snoek-Brown
Mar 02, 2014 rated it really liked it
While these stories are all more vignettes than the fully developed short-shorts of Barnes's stunning Mostly Redneck, all the other Barnes hallmarks are here: the stark but poetic prose, the attention to character detail that feels quaint until it slaps you in the face, the quiet enormity of everyday lives.... It's a fast read, and sometimes it feels too fast, but only because Barnes's writing is addictive and you end each story craving the next fix. Thank goodness I now have Barnes's first nove ...more
Jan 11, 2008 added it
A terrific book of short fictions.
Feb 14, 2008 rated it it was amazing
A magnificent read. Barnes' characters are full of longing and hope, even as they stand in dark or bleak places. ...more
Dec 23, 2010 rated it it was amazing
A terse, and well-made collection of stories. It was my first Barnes book--and I'll be getting others! ...more
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Rusty Barnes is a 2018 Derringer finalist and author of the story collections Breaking it Down (Sunnyoutside Press 2007) , Mostly Redneck (Sunnyoutside Press 2011), and Kraj The Enforcer: Stories (Shotgun Honey 2019), as well as four novels, Reckoning (Sunnyoutside Press, 2014), Ridgerunner (Shotgun Honey/Down & Out Books, 2017), Knuckledragger (Shotgun Honey/Down & Out Books 2017) and The Last Da ...more

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