HOW DARE THE AUTHOR END THIS STORY WITHOUT AN EPILOGUE! After the TEARS I have cried through this entire story!! After having NO TRIGGER WARNINGS for the loss of a child AND child abuse!!! How dare she end it so quickly!
I slogged through the first two books in this series to get to this one. The first book had a cheating story that was just a mess and honestly never redeemed the MMC in my eyes, even if the main couple definitely needed to end up together. The second story was a lame stalker story that was too childish to have been such a dragged out plot like it was. But again the main couple were perfect for each other. Due to the first book mentioning Dylan, this books MMC, I definitely wanted to read how his dead gf was his HEA. So I was intrigued from book one for this book, part three’s storyline.
This book had so much pain in it. It was so decently done that I’m not mad that there was no warning. BUT THERE REALLY SHOULD HAVE BEEN A WARNING. I cried and cried. I definitely wanted this couple to end up together but other than the dead parent who abused the FMC before the book opens, it never really clarified why the MMC’s mother hated this one person so much that she was willing to overlook her own grandchild like that. I never liked the MMC’s parents from book one, because they were happy to abandon their nephews to an abusive neglectful alcoholic brother as they were growing up due to embarrassment alone. Not because there was a restriction to them helping them or they were not allowed in some way. Their image mattered more than their blood ties.
But for their image to be such a powerful motivator that they blocked their beloved sainted son from knowing or seeing his own child, and to still foster their denials that it wasn’t their blood all while accepting an adopted child makes ABSOLUTELY NO SENSE! This was so contrary that the author even had the MMC mention it to them but these atrocious characters never said anything to explain what was the difference to them. It left me boggled on what this bitter hatred was all about.
I honestly, kept waiting for the author to reveal that the MMC’s father was the one to have the affair with the FMC’s mother. That would have explained it all perfectly. Even if the story would have had to go a different direction until paternity could have been resolved but still. This was not the case and I was left not understanding all the pointless drama for supposedly caring people. If the author had written that the MMC had had other issues with how his parents had behaved in other areas of life NOT just in wanting him to be like his dad, then I could have been okay with it too. But the MMC was okay with his parents ignoring his cousins as they grew up even if he himself was good with them. He never fought for them in his youth. He just ran away.
I can’t really see him as that much of an alpha male because he really wasn’t. He turned a blind eye to his parents faults because he “thought”, they were good to him. Completely ignoring that they weren’t good people because it didn’t affect him directly, he thought. His whole life was still easy for him. He had money which allowed him tons of opportunities and it was never clarified if he was still getting it from them or if he had a payout when he reached a certain age, that gave him full independence from them.
Anyway, those are my gripes but I am TOTALLY invested in this author now because of this book and this series. I liked the other two well enough but this one blew the series out of the park with the pain and growth and maturity of the characters. I wished it was longer. I wish there were more McBride stories! I am definitely going to check out more of her books. But definitely beware this has HUGE TRIGGERS and should be read with tissues and in a safe space. I started this book on the bus and was struggling to not have people see my tears! Not cool author!!
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