Sterek Nine times out of ten, Stiles is the one being pushed back on the bed with his head tilted back to expose his neck. Nine times out of ten, Stiles's legs are the ones that are spread, his hands are the ones that grip the sheets. Nine times out of ten, Stiles gasps and moans and arches up into Derek's touch, Stiles's thighs grip at Derek's hips; Stiles’s feet lock together behind Derek's back. Nine times out of ten, Stiles takes and takes and takes and loves every single second of it.
Wow, we have a very verbose Derek in this sequel, so unlike the prequel Derek that can only pine after Stiles because he can't express his feelings. So verbose is he in demanding to be fucked: "I want to feel it. I want to feel you pushing inside me, want it to burn and ache and fuck. Stiles. I want you to use me, make me yours. Bite down on the back on my neck and shove my face into the pillows and pound into me as hard as you possibly can. Stretch me wide on your dick, fucking own me." I find myself in disbelief over the growth in character that Derek has achieved, when in the prequel he can't manage any in 10 years.
If this is a stand-alone one-shot, I'm inclined to give it a 3*. As a sequel though, 2* is quite generous. Yes, I believe in switching position, but the 'love' pouring out of Derek's mouth is too outlandish for his character in this verse. IMHO, the super dominant Stiles is also not very in-tune with this verse.