i was already annoyed and i had only gotten as far as page 2.
nora always has to have her guys have instant attraction-or lust, i should say-for the girl character. its so freakin annoying!
id honestly rather have it where they dont like eachother at 1st &then end up liking eachother l8r,cuz the way nora does it is just plain aggravating.
i also dont think guys rlly have thoughts like that.i think its all in noras head.like "eyes of laser blue whispered of sex.skin with a hint of warm rose beneath-just warm enuff that a man cud fantasize that heat was kindling only for him.the mouth was curved invitingly, appeared pillow soft,yet strong in shape.a bold red temptation that beckoned as clearly as a sirens call. it was too dang bad she was dead." who looks at a painting &thinks all of that?! in fact,who looks at anyone alive,and thinks that??
&of course,she has him have all those thoughts becuz the woman is act. alive. &wut wud it be like if the guy had seen a pic of her and dint have lusty instant attraction? oh,the horror!
"he turned away from the portrait,annoyed that his gaze and his mind kept drifting back to it." its a freakin painting! get over it!
"beautiful face first." "she'd lost her beauty in death,he thought,& that was a damn shame,2." who talks like that about a dead person?!
this guy is so cavaleir and boderline disrespectful about a dead person. "sum1 was goin2 have a tough time gettin the bloodstains out of the dove-gray upholstery of the sofa."
the guy is lusting after a dead girl in a painting.come on.could u get any more stupid and unrealistic if you tried?!
ugh.this character is just like margo from Daring to Dream.had an affair w/a married man.been w/ a million guys.the thing about noras characterss is they're usually totally unrelatable.like the "privileged,pampered heiress" & the "country-club darling."-(words from this book).
how many ppl can even halfway relate 2that? &wut guy wants to get w/sum1 like grace? its disgusting.
nora tends to do these types of characters a lot.the fast,forward women,who cuss,drink champagne and wine,smoke,throw themselves at men.
it doesnt send a good message that guys like girls like that.&it duznt say much about a person who's like that.
grace's cousin dies &she talks of how she always copied her.she even says "poor pathetic melissa." the character reminds me2 much of margo.&i hated margo! grace even surpasses her shallowness/ arrogance.
who wud like/relate 2a character like this? becuz we're all brats who jetset across the world.
its already confusing.how is any of these ppl linked to the jewles? wut do they even look like? 1second,its a triangle,the next its like a necklace or sumthin.i honestly dont even care enuff 2continue reading.
shes borderline flirting with her friends boyfriends,or w/e they r.&thats another thing.who r these ppl? i cant even tell that because nora duznt write in a clear,understanding way.is this the 1st book n the series? cuz i feel like ive ben thrown into the middle of the story.idk how she got the diamonds.or wut the deal is w/the freakin diamonds.its not makin any sense.
cant stand readin about ppl who r extremely rich&look down on every1.&have a ridiculous amount of expensive jewelry.&grace blinds ppl her smile.
"im much2 sophisticated 4sumthin as maudlin as a swoon." nora even insults ppl in her books. like if u swoon,ur maudlin.wth?
"if i had the energy-or the inclination-i cud make u sit up&beg." just who do u think u r? nora's characters r all these sophisticated-&ok,ill call it like it is-sluts,who wear these elegant clothes, the business women type,who wear suits for goodness sakes.&u no authors usually write like how they r.&since nora wears suits n her all her pics,u just no she has2 b like these characters.
u find out ur cuz died,&that very nite,ur smilin&acting like nothins wrong.&the next day,ur back2 ur slutty cheap-ploy using ways.im confused by this character.it sounds like she wants2 be charged w/murder.1second shes srry about melissa dying,the next she's sayin things like "she paid 4her trespassing,4her carelessness &her ignorance." as if u shud die 4sumthin like that.it duznt say much about the guy if he likes a woman like this.my opinion of him is almost as bad as my opinion of her.
"the way he controlled that lean&muscled body.very economical.no wasted movements.he wudnt waste them n bed,either." economical movements.wth?!
its painful &embarrassing2 read of a girl who throws herself@the guy wen he duznt like u.&then grace asks a question tryin2 find out if he's seein ne1 &is like "its not that i mind competition. i just like 2no if i have ne." if hes seein sum1,u dont look at it as competition.u look at it as "back off." who thinks like grace does? 4sum reasons,nora's girl characters,upon hearin the word "no",dont get embarrassed like most ppl wud,they look at it as competition.so they force themselves on the guy&basically force him2 like them by using every cheap ploy n the book. who just jumps sum1 u just met?! a slut,thats who.
"i suppose u dont like aggressive women."
"not particularly."
"well then.ur just goin2 hate this." &then she kisses him.
&it just grates on my nerves that hes gunna end up likin sum1 like this.
nora has her woman deliberately tease the guy by kissin him,just to "show him wut he cud have.if she chose." like wth?
&then grace is like "im every mans type."
im already sick of hearing about all this "recognition" crap between grace &seth wen they kiss or touch. "&he knew that if he dint pull back,he'd nvr be able2 survive w/o her." noras also sum1 who has the guy have feelings rlly soon.
bailey's all "u dont understand her.ppl r rarely clear-sighted wen it cums2 grace.they only c wut she lets them c-unless they care enuff2 look deeper.she has the most generous heart of any person ive ever known.can u conceive of wut shes goin thru rite now?her cuz was murdered-&n her stead." yea,& we all saw how she reacted from that.as i sed earlier,the words "poor pathetic melissa" were sed.wth is bailey even talkin about? melissa's death dint faze grace n the slightest.write about a humble person&then we'll have sum more sympathy4 the character.but i cant even dredge up an ounce of sympathy4 this shallow,vain slut.so her family blames her.big deal.ur gunna have2 do better than that 2get our sympathy.&wut more is there 2c n grace? shes acted like a slut@ every opportunity. who cud possibly c nething else? &i doubt theres nething more2 c neway.
&then shes like "ppl only c wut grace lets them c." which is a shallow slut becuz thats wut she is. so idk why shes mad@seth becuz all he sees is a shallow person wen bailey just sed "ppl c wut she wants them2 c."
heres a tip:write about likeable,relatable characters who arent sluts.
yea bailey,we can c how upset she is over her cause of melissas death-"grace was dressed in black, &had nvr felt less like grieving."
-"she'd given the press plenty2 report.wild parties,unwise affairs,unrestricted spending.wen that dint ease the hurt,she'd found sumthin else.sumthin that made her feel decent &whole.&she'd found grace." if u've found "sumthin else" then why r u still acting like a shallow slut?!
-how is it that no1 in an entire family is grieving for the dead girl?!
nora writes a terribly unlikeable character &then has sum1 like her aunt in here,trying2 make us feel srry for grace.but we cant becuz we already hate her. nora tries rlly hard 2get sympathy 4the character.i mean,how many ppl r like grace's aunt?
seth,who a while ago looked on w/disdain &was mad @her 4bein w/this guy,is now kissin her &feedin her a bunch of crap like "u dint deserve that." as if any of us agree.
after knowin him for all of a few days,shes like "take me home.make love w/me." &he's like "sex isnt the answer 4every1." &shes like "sex?she thought as she struggled2clear her dazzled. did he rlly believe she'd ben speakin about sumthin as simple as sex?"
wut else were u referring 2? wut else does "make love w/me" mean? u havent known him long enuff or well enuff 2 have sum deeper meaning behind it.
"4the 1st time n his life,a woman had reached n &clamped a hand on his heart." wth?! do authors have any idea how annoying it is wen characters have feelings like that after having known a person for a grand total of like 3 days?!
just becuz it turned out that the guy that was kissing her @the party-excuse me,i mean funeral-was her cousin-&can ne1 say ew?! nora dint even specify if it was on the cheek or mouth-we're supposed 2have a better opinion of her.2late 4 that. how cud ne1 have a good opinion of her?
as if ur family treating u bad gives u the excuse 2 becum a vain,money spending slut.
as if there's a good person lurking under grace.it just duznt add up@all. n fact, this book doesnt add up.1 min,sum1s sayin sumthin,&then doin sumthin else.
& m.j.'s lingo was ridiculous &stupid.she sounded like a man.who talks like that?! -"put the arm on her,then put the blame on her." um,we dk wth ur saying. i have 2 wonder if the author even knows wut shes sayin.talk like a regular person.
i just have2 stop readin.i cant continue with this terrible excuse of a book.having just finished a nora roberts book b4 this,i cant jump into another 1.i know i dont like her type of writing or characters,do i rlly dont know why i keep readin them.
i dont even care2 read the 2nd story n this book.
Irish rebel,the book i just finished by nora,has kind of the same storyline,like where the guy has an opinion of the girl that turns out2 be wrong.like in there,the guy thought the girl was a snob. wen n fact,she had her own riding class for unprivilaged children.how nice.
just like n here,it turns out the cheap ploy-using slut takes care of sick babies.like seriously? it just duznt work @all.&idc 2 read about her or seth for that matter.stupid ppl who have feelings so quickly it isnt even believable.the most unlikable characters u cud ever write about.&a terrible storyline.
im gunna save myself from more frustration.&i rlly hate not finishing a book, &i dont do it often, even wen im reading a crappy book.but this is just 2 much.i rlly dont c how ne1 cud like this.
idk if id ever pick this up again.