"I, Alpha Miller, hereby reject you, Isla Higgins, as my mate and Luna of the Pembroke pack," he said with a smirk as his beta pinned me against the wall. My heart shattered into a thousand pieces, and I felt a physical ache in my body as pain penetrated through me.
“There is no competition here.” Mora, the girl who had made my life hell since childhood, wrapped herself around my fated mate, and he pulled her into his chest, kissing her with passion and lust. I glared at her in frustration and wished I could punch her fake image.
Isla decides to leave the pack after the humiliating rejection and the betrayal. Five years later, she returns to her old pack after her mother falls ill. As she comes to terms with the past and becomes a respected warrior in the Eclipse Moon Pack, secrets and lies are revealed. Isla must decide whether to give her ex-mate a second chance or realize her worth without him. (This is book 1 of the series.)
If I could give this book a 0 I would. And the fact it even got 3 stars all y’all on cra***. There is a plot thag can be made into 3 books if used well but you are telling me all this happened in a BOMBOCLATTTT day???? Like do this people have bipolar disorder? Tf is wrong with Daniel and not keeping it in his pants??? Isla is sooooo lost ?! And Miller did they slip you when they were giving people common knowledge and don’t get me going on Mora that girl got issues. Like at this point Islas real mom is a fish I just can’t do this no mo this book is a joke and I don’t wanna insult no one but this was just horrid and brain damaging to read lord help us all!
An A-ok story is well written with some interesting character and plenty of twists and turns. However, it would have been better if it had been properly spell-checked. Also, some words were used that sounded the same but were incorrect, such as bear/bare; they're/their/there etc
The storyline was good, but there were so many typos and grammatical errors, especially the closer you got to the end. Definitely could have used more editing; it would have made it so much easier to read. Some errors made it difficult to follow.
The story started off good with potential to be a great book but it was rushed and jumbled. No real character or story development and the editing was not good either. It's an ok book that could have been good
There were too many inconsistencies and conflicting stories to the point that the plot was lost. Or rather the plot seemed the change multiple times throughout the story. There were also multiple typos and misspellings. I definitely regret this purchase.