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(Deceived #1)

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Deceived Part 1 - New York (120 pages)

When Chloe Swanson, an innocent mid-western college graduate, lands her dream job in New York City, she doesn't realize what kind of a ride she's in for.
It doesn't take long before her boss, the charming and sharp businessman Patrick Collins, deceives her into being part of his plan to land the biggest account of his life.

However, h
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Kindle Edition, 120 pages
Published November 24th 2012 by Carter Publishing House
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Samantha
Mar 19, 2013 rated it did not like it
Curiosity killed the reader.

Chloe Swanson … Chloe, Chloee, Chloeee,Chloooooeeeee.

This is a First Person POV, and I wouldn’t want to spend another 120 pages in Chloe’s head. I don’t know how old she is ‘supposed’ to be, but I think sixteen would be an accurate guess. I don’t care how many big words she knows. Her thoughts, and actions were a bewilderment. I thought this was a parody, the prose beyond purple into a language that was at times, beyond any color wheel.

Patrick Collins … Who? Mr. Coll
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Lili
Jan 23, 2013 rated it did not like it

These characters are awful, I couldn't stand Chloe, she has the mental age of..I'm guessing a 12-14 year-old. Her actions didn't make much sense and her inner dialogue was so stupid.
The guy... whatever his name is, was booooring.
The Baroness -aka the bitch- was an interesting character, until the restroom incident which I may add was a WTF moment for me, seriously... I think the Baroness might be a werewoman or something, she grabbed Chloe by the throat and lift her while doing some pretty weird
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Pam
Dec 09, 2012 rated it it was ok
2 stars

There really isn’t much to say, the story line was almost too easy, there was a “Baroness” who causes drama but other than that, Eh! Think I’ll pass on the rest of the series … The sex scenes could have been HOT but I got distracted, I was too busy crakin up:


” …spread me apart while palpitating the viscosity of my wetness with agile fingers.”

”Like a piston with a crank shaft, he pumped me hard….vibratory jolts cascading throughout my entire body, domino style.”

”Controlling my r
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Michelle
Jan 24, 2013 rated it did not like it
Someone needs to step away from the thesaurus. Some of the words and phrases she uses in this book are outrageous. Piston crank shaft? Diamond cutter? Really? And the exclamation points need to go. Way too many. And one last thing....here in New York, they are not called freeways, they are highways, expressways and parkways. The route to get to the hamptons from Manhattan made no sense either. And most people who live in NYC don't drive all over, they take a cab.
Thank god it was free.
Michelle Bowman  / We Love Kink .com
So this story captured my interest from the prologue. As soon as I read it I wanted to read the rest of the story & find out how Chloe got to the place that she was at.

Chloe is a sweet Midwestern girl who you can’t help but like immediately. She is sincere and funny and determined to make something of herself.

Patrick, what can I say about him? How many synonyms are there for HOT… I mean he has your panties melting when you read this book.

Gripping his massive manhood in one hand, he impaled m
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Tipani
Oct 25, 2013 rated it did not like it
This has to be the worst book I've ever read. There is literally no storyline? I was going to stop reading it but then I noticed something unusual. Something that had me laughing, when I don't think it was the authors intention? Not just bad editing, I've read many books with bad editing. This was an attempt to be descriptive but it just didn't hit the mark. What it did do was make sure I finished the book as I was ridiculously entertained by it all. Here are some of my favourites:
- seductively
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Crystal
Sep 09, 2013 rated it did not like it
Shelves: dnf, erotica
I've made a promise to myself not to waste time reading something if it brings me to full stop every few sentences for an editing error. It's too bad about this one, the plot promised to have a different twist. But when I read 'my mouth was as dry as a dessert storm' I pictured cupcakes and pieces of pie flying at me. A few paragraphs later 'seductively seduce' was the last straw. If you can overlook this, go ahead and read it. Let me know if the story was as good as it sounded. I'll be reading ...more
Anaïs
May 12, 2013 rated it it was ok
Shelves: wtf-is-this-bs
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The reason why I actually started reading Deceived is because my blog's Twitter account had been followed by author Eve Carter. And I thought, I could as well give it a go in order to return the favour! And I must say the cover and title where rather appealing. At first, I was disappointed that the book had only 120 pages, but in the end I guess it was better that way... If you are afraid of spoilers you might not want to read on, but the wh
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Becca Booksreview
Mar 15, 2013 rated it really liked it
Shelves: have-reviewed
Goodreads book discription:

When Chloe Swanson, an innocent mid-western college graduate, lands her dream job in New York City, she doesn't realize what kind of a ride she's in for.

It doesn't take long before her boss, the charming and sharp businessman Patrick Collins, deceives her into being part of his plan to land the biggest account of his life.

However, he never expected that he would fall for her. Suddenly, he finds himself trapped between a ruthless billionaire client, who has her own ey
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Amanda
Dec 13, 2012 rated it really liked it
I enjoyed this book. I have a harder time connecting with the characters when a book is this short, but I did enjoy the characters as individuals and as a couple. Some of the scenes read a tad wordy for me, but I did love the easy visual that I got from it.
I'm excited for book two, and am looking forward to finding out what happens with Patrick and Chloe. I love a good villain and the Baroness was just that. I knew she would cause a problem at some point, I just wish it wasn't so close to the en
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Michelle
Dec 26, 2012 rated it it was ok
I'm sorry, it's not that the book was poorly written, because it's written well. But, I'm tired of reading pathetic, weak women who cry over stupid things. I can't finish the book because I can't relate to the female character. Seriously, you're going to go all bat sh!t jealous after all he did was kiss you? I really do apologize, but I can't finish it. Unless someone tells me that she all of a sudden gets over her melodrama, I can't go on.
Natalie
Dec 10, 2012 rated it it was amazing
I love Eve's prose, she churned out a very steamy erotica. Her protagonist actually feels things emotionally and it's beautifully reflected on the pages.

This book is one of the better written ones that I have read in this genre.

The end, of course, is a cliffhanger! heheh... got to love those.
Absolutely looking forward to Eve's future works.
Tamara
Dec 02, 2012 rated it really liked it
As the book started with Chloe standing in the water, talking about her feelings and how this whole thing started a couple of weeks ago, you already knew from the beginning that something, at some point would go wrong, which automatically makes me want to find out what goes wrong.

Former Iowa MBA-student Chloe is an attractive young woman who has started her dreamjob as an assistent in an ad-agency in exciting New York.
Her boss, Patrick Collins is a handsome man, muscles cut in a v-shape on his
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Literary Jewels
Dec 03, 2013 rated it really liked it
f you were deceived into feeling some type way, would you retaliate? Would you be humiliated? Would you run with your tail tucked between your legs? Where would your emotions be?

Chloe is a young woman working for a powerful man, Patrick Collins. Chloe is in love or lust with her boss from afar. Patrick is feeling the same for Chloe. These two are dancing around each other leaving the air thick with lustful intentions and words unspoken. Chloe finally one day gets an amazing, smack you in the fac
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Sharon Xuereb
Jun 06, 2013 rated it did not like it
Shelves: ebooks
At first I was enjoying this story. However the further I got into this the more I started to dislike Chloe. As it is told from her point of view, this didn't help the story to improve for me.

Her behavior seems very immature. Even though, what is happening in her situation/relationship with Patrick is crystal clear, her behavior comes across as completely irrational. We never do find out how old she is exactly. But she refers to her college degree, and so I'm assuming early to mid 20's. I felt t
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Lucy Lit
Mar 04, 2013 rated it really liked it
What a sexy romp of a story! A typical tale of small town girl trying to make her way in the Big Apple, falling for her smokin’ hot boss, having really inappropriate contact and the somewhat predictable results from that contact/relationship. However, there are additional factors that come into play with this story that make it not another ‘wanna be’ book flavor of the month. I enjoyed (not really!) the introduction of the evil ‘other woman’. Sex was steamy but not over the top. Pacing, atmosphe ...more
Luna Reyes
Apr 25, 2013 rated it really liked it
Deceived Part 1 New York (Erotic Romance)
By Eve Carter

If you are into a fast read with steamy sex then this is the book for you!!

Chloe and Patrick (Chloe's boss) start fast, so there is not much waiting for the good stuff to start.
This book has a lot of turns, and a bitter ex. (which is something I love)

The Baroness, the woman in Patrick's life before Chloe, will stop at nothing to keep the two apart. She is down right despicable, a great character to hate.

Chloe seems to know what she wants, doe
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Rebecca
Deceived wasn't good, it wasn't bad - the best i can say is that it was ok. The story wasnt terrible, but I found myself annoyed by the excessive use of exclamation points. They were used all the time, and personally I didn't think Patrick would be expressing excitement... He seemed like he should be a lot more contained.
The romance aspect also unraveled too quickly in my opinion. It seemed unnaturally fast. In other books (50 Shades, Crossfire series, etc) the relationships developed at a very
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Pauline
May 30, 2013 rated it it was ok
Shelves: romance
"Deceived" did not impress. The dialogues were horrible. They pretty much sounded fake. The events, especially at the beginning, as well; like the game was fixed from the start. It didn't ring true at all.

Chloe is unsufferable. She lives in her own head and can be naive to a ridiculous extent.

The sex could have been very hot if the author didn't use a shit-ton of unremarkable analogies that will mess with your patience, big time!

Overall, I was slightly disappointed but the ending left me wanting
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Katie
Oct 29, 2013 rated it did not like it
This book was horrible. It had editing errors and read like the life of a teenager. And it was like the author tried to throw in big words to make the writing seem more mature. And all it did was leave a bitter taste in my mouth. And really just made me want to laugh with the immature writing technique. I couldn't even finish this story. Quit reading it right where Chloe interrupted the dinner between Patrick and the Baroness. Don't waste your time on this one and move on to something else.
B.J.
Jan 27, 2013 rated it liked it
3.5 Stars.

Enjoyable novella, first book in series. Chloe has been working in New York for 6 months when she discovers one day that her crush on her boss Patrick goes both ways. She then has to endure a business meeting with the firm's top client who blatantly flirts with Patrick and belittles her. This story is about love, letting go, discovery and deception. Looking forward to Book 2.
Athena
Oct 17, 2013 rated it liked it
This one was a quickie, no pun intended! For a short story it had it's drama, steamy sex scenes, and to be continued ending. It definitely kept me entertained for the night. I'll definitely read the rest of the series since I'm curious to see what is in store for Chloe!
Jamie  Leigh
Jan 05, 2013 rated it it was amazing
Shelves: contemporary
wow. I really loved this book but if you don't like cliff hangers, this might not be for you. Olivia was a mid west naive girl moving to NY and falling in love with her boss, Patrick. I really cant wait to read the neext book to see what happens.
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Weak, whiny and gutless characters. Ridiculous and completely boring story line. Dnf at 30%
Kim
Dec 12, 2012 rated it it was amazing


Loved it! Can't wait for part 2. Go Chloe!
Jacquie
Jan 31, 2013 rated it really liked it
Recommends it for: friends
A good sexy read will keep your interest can't wait to read Pt 2 to see what happens between Chloe and Patrick.
Lisa (Remarkablylisa)
Nov 28, 2015 rated it did not like it
SUCH A CLICHE AND NOT IN A GOOD WAY. The characters were so bland and lifeless.
Cem73
Dec 10, 2012 rated it did not like it
The beginning :what a childish thoughts you have girl!
The middle : WTF!!! o_O
The end : well girl, and you too boy, you are just TSTL!!!

Thanks god, it was a freebe!
Joy
Dec 11, 2012 rated it did not like it
Shelves: don-t-bother
So my Mom taught me "If you can't say anything nice don't say anything at all". So here goes. Thank God it was free ;)
Andrea Reid
Jan 30, 2013 rated it it was amazing
I loved the content, a bit short, the story could have had more time to build the relationship, hate the baroness !!! Biatch
Look forward to part two in Paris xxx
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“company? Damn right I could!! How dare he use me this way!  He had no right to play with my emotions, hurting me, like I was merely a chess piece in his slimy scheme to take over the Baroness’ account and further his career, at my heart’s expense.             Standing knee deep in the murky water of the Atlantic ocean, I felt completely numb. I was so desensitized that I couldn’t even feel Patrick’s hand on my shoulder.             “Chloe, please let me explain,” he said in a soft voice. His words compelled me to turn around, and I could see the desperation and pleading in his eyes. My brain was on fire; my heart, which had been fluttering faintly, gave a great leap, trying to force itself into my throat. My entire body was wracked and wrenched with hurt!             “Explain what, Patrick? That you used me and” 0 likes
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